Your style of reviewing and presenting everything is impressive. The atmosphere and mood seems natural and sincere. The only thing that bothers me is when you call food " this menu". It will sound better if you refer to it as " this dish" or " this recipe. The reason is menu comprises of many dishes. In other word, menu is a list of many dishes of food and beverages that can or will be served as a meal. I only want to put in my 2 cents. If you disagree, just ignore it. Finally, I really admire your mom. She is very pretty and sweet.