C1 Writing Tips (aiming for C2) | How to Write Better Essays: Part 2

[@juan7836]

Thanks, Stephen, I enjoyed the authenticity of your step-by-step approach. Drafting and editing, and further proofreading, are key to success. Congrats on the good work! Two thumbs up! 👏👏👏

[@ermelindalombardo1477]

Finally a teacher that explains us how to write better in English. 🎉🎉🎉. Thank you so much for your enlightening videos.I've become addicted to them 🎉🎉❤❤ Wether you have to take an English exam or not,your lessons will aid in improving our knowledge of the language.🎉🎉

[@englishlearningexpert3595]

It’s comments like this that make it worthwhile - thanks so much and I love that I can share my knowledge with students all over the world. I’m recording more videos this weekend. Have a brilliant weekend 😀

[@rubens181]

Exactly!

[@manuelmendoncaaraujo6538]

As an EFL teacher, I am very excited to share these videos to my students. A million thanks to you sir. Please make more videos on using the advanced synonyms and antonyms in writing. God bless you.

[@englishlearningexpert3595]

Thanks so much for your encouragement. The videos are a lot of work so it’s nice to get some feedback and know that somewhere in the world I’m making a difference! May I ask what country you’re in? 😀

[@leandrocimarolli3885]

These videos are just amazing! These comparisons and all the synonyms you use to avoid repetition or just to sound more formal... that's exactly what I needed. I can't thank you enough! I "shadow" the texts and then I take my own notes. Sometimes I use other advanced vocabulary to practice my own writing skills on the same sentences that you're already replacing things.

[@englishlearningexpert3595]

Awesome, thank you! I'm a language learner myself so I'm thrilled to be helping in this way! Thanks for the motivational comment.

[@shebnemhuseynli8461]

I started to watch several KZbin videos to improve my writing skills. I pick and will work on your videos because this is the video I want exactly. You just don’t say mistakes as other teachers, you explain how this sentence can be better. Thanks❤❤❤

[@niginaabdullayeva-tg3cc]

im gonna take my ielts soon, thank you for your videos sir, they helped me a lot while preparing for my test, I absolutely love all of them, the best channel ever.thank you!!🎀

[@englishlearningexpert3595]

That is the best comment ever - thank you and good luck! You’ll smash it! 😀

[@tomibru6]

I'm preparing for the Cambridge C2 Proficiency Exam and your writing tips are invaluable! Thank you!

[@englishlearningexpert3595]

You’re very welcome 😊 Good luck - I have the Spanish C1 but C2 is another level entirely! Best wishes.

[@rubens181]

To say that these videos are a treasure is an understatement. Great content, simple, instructive, and engaging! Keep at it!

[@englishlearningexpert3595]

Glad you like them! Thanks so much for your support.

[@semihaksoy8182]

I like your format. I always wondered how to convert/enhance even an A1 sentence into C1-C2 level. I even used Chat-GPT to get help for that. Thanks for your videos

[@englishlearningexpert3595]

Thanks so much - I’ve spent 18 years doing these writing ‘up-levelling’ demonstrations almost every day in my teaching job and it’s something I really enjoy. It’s kind of you to take the time to comment. 😀

[@semihaksoy8182]

@@englishlearningexpert3595 With these kind of videos, it becomes easier to select the correct word to form the sentence according to the target level, whatever the target level is.

[@A-ANIMATION12]

Please make more videos in this part especially...❤😊

[@Taoufiqqaba]

This is a very good English channel to learn from. I think you deserve more subs. and I am sure that you will reach the objective if you continue uploading such as amazing content. Good Luck!

[@englishlearningexpert3595]

What a lovely thing to say! I really appreciate you taking the time to leave a comment and I’ll try my best to create more content to help you in your English learning journey. 😀

[@Taoufiqqaba]

I learned a lot from this video, I am an S3 university student in the English department, and I really want to level up my writing skills because all the exams are in the form of essays.@@englishlearningexpert3595

[@Learnfromtheworst.-gr3zi]

Thanks for the video! Learning a lot of stuff.

[@englishlearningexpert3595]

You’re very welcome. 😊

[@victorsaman3190]

Fortunately I got you sir, I started today Hope to meet you with my result❤

[@englishlearningexpert3595]

Thank you for your kind words! 😀

[@asimwebaguma8433]

It's fantastic

[@englishlearningexpert3595]

Thank you 🤩

[@User133-us]

Just noticed new lessons ❤thank you!! 🤓👍🏻

[@englishlearningexpert3595]

You’re very welcome 😊

[@aradia1651]

Thank you so much!!! I really love your videos!

[@englishlearningexpert3595]

You’re very welcome - thanks for commenting! I’m so happy you like them. Please share with any English-learning friends 😀

[@Kendrod]

Great video, thank you so much!🥇

[@englishlearningexpert3595]

My pleasure 😀

[@floras4]

This is absolutely awe some! THANKS

[@englishlearningexpert3595]

Thank you 🙏😀

[@navyblueskiess]

Thank you so much for these videos.

[@englishlearningexpert3595]

Glad you like them! They’re a lot of work but worth it when I receive comments like yours 😀

[@babydquynh]

pretty useful

[@englishlearningexpert3595]

Thanks 😀

[@uranguajambaldagva5415]

thanks anyway. it is soou helpful.

[@englishlearningexpert3595]

Thanks! 😀

[@MyDuckGlow]

hello, can you please make more videos like this one ? peace and greetings from Romania!🎆

[@englishlearningexpert3595]

Thank you - yes of course - I have another one planned 😀

[@dreamandmakeit6221]

Hi, do you take English classes online? Now attained a B1 - B2 level. I want to improve my level into C1.

[@englishlearningexpert3595]

No - not at the moment but I have thought about it. I’ll share it in my community tab if I decide to. Congrats on your English achievement 😀

[@SantiagoDeSimone]

Here's the final version: How We Can Protect Our Planet: a Three-Pronged Approach Undoubtedly, human civilization has contributed to increased pollution thorught the last century, leading to a global rise in concerns regarding environmental degradation. Let us examine three ways we can tackle this worrying trend. Firstly, petrol and diesel powered cars emit CO2 when they burn fuel, which in turn causes global warming. Therefore, if we reduce usage of these vehicles, e.g. by cycling and walking more frequently, we could mitigate such harmful effects. Secondly, the rampant consumerism of our modern age can be tamed by an increase in recycling. For example, purchasing second-hand clothing, books and furniture, in addition to recycling household waste, is an effective way to reduce unwanted items in landfills. Finally, overfishing is a grave problem, which is negatively impacting marine ecosystems. We can play our part by selecting sustainable seafood produce or avoiding it altogether. As a consequence, marine life would be better protected. In summary, it is my firmly held belief that every human being can aid in protecting our planet. Although I have only touched upon three areas, there are numerous others.

[@englishlearningexpert3595]

That is awesome - I'm so pleased you have used the video to study English in such a detailed way! Best wishes!

[@aminaomar7956]

Do you do online classes I really need to improve my writing

[@englishlearningexpert3595]

I don’t at the moment. I actually have a full time job. But maybe in the future 😀

[@elahesoheili8776]

Can you please add the pdf file of your writing?

[@englishlearningexpert3595]

Let me see how to do it ❤️

[@uranguajambaldagva5415]

will i lose point if i write my ielts task 2 this way. or is it also admitted to the structural inclusions?

[@englishlearningexpert3595]

I wouldn’t want to give advice like that at the moment. I can tell you how to write great English but, for advice on points, you need to speak to an official IELTs person or check their guidance. 😀