C1 Writing Tips (aiming for C2) - How to Write Better Essays.

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[@englishlearningexpert3595]

That’s very kind of you to say! Thanks for taking the time to comment 😀

[@gabrielbaieel8073]

I think you intended to write "the positives outweigh the negatives" in the last paragraph.

[@englishlearningexpert3595]

I did! I didn’t plan this first video, which seems crazy now! All the others in the series are planned and correct. This teacher learned his lesson! 😀

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[@englishlearningexpert3595]

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[@englishlearningexpert3595]

Yes - I’m back and made a new one this week.

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[@englishlearningexpert3595]

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[@englishlearningexpert3595]

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[@englishlearningexpert3595]

Ah thanks very much. Yes I will keep at it. Thanks for your encouragement 😀

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[@englishlearningexpert3595]

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[@englishlearningexpert3595]

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[@englishconnect6286]

excellent video. Great idea showing how to upgrade a B2 writing.

[@englishlearningexpert3595]

Glad you enjoyed it!

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[@englishlearningexpert3595]

You’re very welcome and thanks for commenting. I just recorded part 8 today!

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[@englishlearningexpert3595]

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[@englishlearningexpert3595]

You're welcome. I just uploaded part 16 of the playlist!

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I'm working on one right this very moment. Should be out today. :)

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[@englishlearningexpert3595]

You’re very welcome and thanks for taking the time to say thanks - it’s good to get feedback. I have more videos like this planned and will add them to this playlist. Please share it with any friends who might like it - that would be a bug help to me! 😀

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[@englishlearningexpert3595]

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[@englishlearningexpert3595]

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Glad you found my channel. I just published part 16 of this video series so there’s lots to choose from. 😀

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[@englishlearningexpert3595]

Welcome aboard! Thanks for commenting 😀

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[@englishlearningexpert3595]

I will try my best

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[@englishlearningexpert3595]

Glad you enjoyed it

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Thank you for your hard work. ❤

[@englishlearningexpert3595]

That’s very kind of you to say thanks 😊

[@Travelgirly]

Do the negatives outweigh the positives or positive outweigh the negatives? I got confused a bit. Would you be able to correct me if I am wrong?

[@englishlearningexpert3595]

This was a mistake! Sorry - it was my first video and I just recorded without planning. In my others, there are no mistakes like that! 😀

[@Travelgirly]

Hi. Thanks a lot for your prompt response. Appreciate and comprehend your effort. As a learner I learned a lot from this video. I don’t want to point out your mistake. I just wanted check that my understanding. Thanks for the confirmation. Keep your good work up 🎉🎉🎉

[@englishlearningexpert3595]

@@Travelgirly Thanks and you’re super welcome 🤗

[@romgliev]

I don't really get why in the first text we talk that the positives outweigh the negatives, whilst in the second text we talk that the negatives outweigh the positives?

[@englishconnect6286]

I concur, it is an error that he didn´t catch while reading it through the second time.

[@englishlearningexpert3595]

You’re right! I’ve made a better video now and have a system to spot issues. I just rewrote it live without any planning in the first one!

[@englishlearningexpert3595]

See my comment below 😀

[@Venaber]

thank you

[@englishlearningexpert3595]

You’re welcome.

[@krysiaf3665]

I've just found your channel, and i already love that content. However, you showing that upgraded version of an essay made me question, isn't it too long? I always struggle staying within the word limit, and making more cohesive sentences

[@englishlearningexpert3595]

It could be but the language e.g. sentence structure, vocal etc is spot on. It's up to you to practise word counts when preparing for the text. Good luck.

[@thaibui5531]

14:03 I suppose it should have been "inequality", based on the context

[@englishlearningexpert3595]

Probably 😀

[@CasonHuangvonTaiwan]

Thank you, Teacher Stephen! This video is really helpful!

[@englishlearningexpert3595]

You are so welcome 🤗

[@StanWarren]

Hi, very informative and useful. But I'm not sure about using a phrasal verb "shed light on" (neutral style) in this type of writing. Is it acceptable or is it better to avoid it and stick to formal style?

[@englishlearningexpert3595]

It's definitely okay. 'To shed light on something' is quite formal - we wouldn't use it in informal speech.

[@thaihiennguyenle6876]

Can someone let me know where I could find question bank for writing ESSAY CAE? Thanks a lot mates

[@donnysinaga6312]

CAE Advanced trainer 1&2 ,and official CAE practice test 1-4

[@LearnEnglishwithNetflix]

Nice video! Some questions: How do you know it's C2? Where do you find objective word ranks? English Profile?

[@englishlearningexpert3595]

Thanks! There’s a descriptor of C2 but in a nutshell it’s basically native level. I was a school teacher for many years so I know all about sentence structure, vocab, subordination etc and can put all that together to write a high level, educated piece. Finally, I passed the C1 exam in Spanish so I have experience of writing at a level below in another language - long answer but that’s how! 😀

[@vy_primo]

Thanks for a very informative video. I have a doubt if we should use question in an essay?

[@englishlearningexpert3595]

I would use one as a native speaker. However, check with your English teacher if it's for a specific exam.

[@Art3misiaFall]

Hi! Thank you so much for this video. It is truly precious. I have a question, though: in the hypothetical sentence, why after "were university free..." you use the present simple "it is more probable" and not something like "it would be more probable"? Is it because it is a certain fact?

[@englishlearningexpert3595]

Hmm I don't know. I just know that as a native speaker, that sounded more natural but I think you could use both.

[@Art3misiaFall]

@@englishlearningexpert3595 thanks!

[@pinesVDLK-pt5qy]

video bom.

[@sjtkumar978]

thanks

[@englishlearningexpert3595]

You’re welcome - the rest of this series is much better. This was my first video and I’ve improved my system a lot. 😀

[@gabrielkhunri783]

“The negatives outweigh the positives”? A mistake there.

[@englishlearningexpert3595]

I'll rewatch it :)

[@hamkaboo543]

i like this type of teaching style, is there any similar channel that teaches German?

[@englishlearningexpert3595]

I don’t know but thanks 😊

[@zoraimerosario7055]

I need exercises from A2 to B1🎉🎉🎉 Pleasee

[@englishlearningexpert3595]

Maybe one day but my channel is focused on B2 to C1 or C2.

[@QuỳnhChâuHồ-q6i]

hi, can you recommend some writing books for c1/c2 level? Thank you!

[@englishlearningexpert3595]

No - I don’t know any well enough to recommend. However, I’m bringing out a PDF ebook of all my C1/C2 essays and I know have several videos - about 10 - where I show you how to write at this level. 😀

[@cyo_o5911]

I would like to learn subjunctive more

[@englishlearningexpert3595]

Thanks for the feedback - I’ll see what I can do 😃

[@fatimahalshehri3761]

hello, i hope my comment meets your eyes. I am in a state of frustration due to the way you up level the structure, I have no idea how i presents my thoughts, however I need to deliver how is this not logical to absorb, does it make sense to transfer the sentence to another level, all my life, i thought those whom could write idealistic structure are clever, sophisticated and eloquent, which in fact am not one of them. I guess I need some pep-talk and help , unfortunately, i have been studying English for a quite long, yet i did not even reach a significant point. looking to the process , i think the main reason of these struggles is not being practical in my studies. i feel down thus keeping forward without contemplate the mistakes that caused to see what you did is impossible to applied. i have issues with every aspect of the language. for those who once said learning English is easy, i will not forgive you.

[@englishlearningexpert3595]

I think you’re overthinking it! Just read good books and listen to educated podcasts like Ted Talks. It will come. If you stress about it, it won’t help. Good luck 🤞

[@gotpedra4274]

Shall I use these advices to prepare myself for the B2 Essay?

[@englishlearningexpert3595]

Yes, absolutely

[@gotpedra4274]

@@englishlearningexpert3595 Thanks for answering. I use it and I pass the test and now I have the B2. Next year I would like to apply for C2. Therefore, I will be studying and learning English everyday so as to achieve this goal. This video will be so useful to set up a progressive schedule.

[@englishlearningexpert3595]

@@gotpedra4274 congratulations - that’s amazing!

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@@gotpedra4274 Thank you - what a kind thing to say!

[@GET_RIGHT571]

how many words you used a letter

[@englishlearningexpert3595]

Sorry - I don’t understand.

[@dreamandmakeit6221]

Please, i need your help in English language journey. I am an ielts aspirant and i wrote my exam once. I have got L8R7S6W6 overall 7. How can i improve my speaking and writing score into 7 or 7+ ?

[@englishlearningexpert3595]

If you email me a piece of writing, I could do a video where I make suggestions. My email is in the ABOUT section of the channel. If that’s something you’d like to do, please also include the task that inspired the writing. 😀

[@ΜΑΡΙΑΚΑΡΑΓΙΑΝΝΗ-κ1γ]

In the conclusion, arent the positives those who outweigh the negatives? I'm confused

[@englishlearningexpert3595]

Yes! This was my first video and I made a mistake... I didn't plan anything, I just wrote it straight from my head. However, the video is very popular and I don't want to take it down. My new videos are MUCH better and I plan everything I'm going to write beforehand. Well spotted! You obviously have a great level of English! :)

[@kevinluna5786]

the problem is that I can't even write that well in my native language

[@englishlearningexpert3595]

That is so interesting… I was thinking about this the other day - what people in your situation should do. I spoke Spanish for 18 years but didn’t write it, until I decided to sit the C1 exam. However, I’m a very good writer in English so I was able to transfer those skills over to Spanish and I have an excellent online teacher. My recommendation to you: learn to write short essays in your native language. I recommend using the B2 FCE essay questions, as they are only 180 words texts. Then, see if you can find a teacher or someone who is a good writer and go through it with them - this is all in your native language. Once you’ve done that several times, like ten times, you could start trying it in English. You need to be able to write a 5 part essay - introduction, three main paragraphs and a summary. I have some B2 essay videos you could look at. You need to learn to walk before you run (and then fly).

[@EMMAuk45]

Are you a native speaker?

[@englishlearningexpert3595]

Yes 😀

[@Learnfromtheworst.-gr3zi]

Honestly i find writing firstly ect unprofessional

[@englishlearningexpert3595]

It should be: Honestly, I find writing ‘firstly’ etc. unprofessional. 😀

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Hi, great explanation!!!! I haven't hesitate to subscribe to your channel, I have found it very useful and helpful since I am studying to take the C1 By the way, do you have videos on B2 writings? Thanks a bunch💯💯💯💯💯💯💯💯💯💯💯💯💯💯💯💯💯💯💯💯💯💯💯💯💯💯💯💯💯💯💯💯💯💯

[@englishlearningexpert3595]

You're welcome. This was the first video and my others are much better. I've just uploaded number 16 in the playlist.

[@Anna-pc6lx]

It is immensly helpful! Thank you

[@englishlearningexpert3595]

You're welcome!