cambridge writing task 2 band 9 sample Essay - do you agree or disagree

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@@LilieIELTS advertisement aimed at children should be banned. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

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[@mehedihasankhandakar6919]

You disagreed this statement. But in your second paragraph you showed that people will stop buying newspapers in future. That's mean you agreed with this statement. I am confused

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[@ellenzhu6419]

Although it is a good essay,however, when it comes to task response, it lacks to address “ to what extent agree or disagree….”

[@piusumoh2650]

It's kind of confusing, discussing both views. 🙄

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[@joyworiomor7042]

Thank you so much for the write up I am a bit confuse with your opinion agree and disagree Why not use the word partially agree or disagree

[@LilieIELTS]

Hi, this is because my opinion is not "partially agree". I *completely* agree that in the future nobody will buy printed books, but *completely* disagree that this is because they will be able to read everything they want online without paying.

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[@heattransfer8003]

Within the next years, all vehicles including cars, trucks and buses will be driven by itself and there will be no driver except passengers. This essay will demonstrate how driverless vehicles make people’ life easier but will also this can lead to such problem if people can be fully trusted to autonomous vehicles. In my opinion, in the near future benefits of driverless vehicles will outweigh the disadvantages. To commence, driveless or autonomous vehicles including every vehicle that you can see on road will make our life easier and more comfortable. Besides that, driverless cars will certainly diminish the ratio of traffic accidents compared to non-driverless vehicles. These vehicles can help us to reach the destinition point with ease. For instance, imagine you are in hurry and you do not have any time to check availability of roads from your phone but driverless car will make it for you. On the other hand, relying on to robots in other words, the system which take actions without any human motion or access can lead to some trust issues. Driverless cars are still developing and engineers still do not have clue if we can trust driverless vehicles fully. Moreover, artifical intellegence (AI) is not totally trustable. For example, the traffic accident I have seen before in Australia, the man who decided to sleep in the car, crashed into a tree because of the misconception of car’ vision cameras. To conclude, although we can count many advantages about driverless cars such things as making our life easier or relieve the workload that people take while they are driving, we need to be more careful than usual to any hardware crashes. In my opinion, eventually autonomous cars will replace with its brothers called fossil fuel vehicles with cutting-edge techonology.

[@jawedikbal674]

This is really confusing. In first passage you disagree with topic sentence but in the second paragraph you agree with merits of online book. Then what is your position here? Agree or disagree or middle???? Please explain

[@aartimanwar8693]

Read the introduction again then you get to know the reason

[@aminvanessa121]

Hi Lilie, it’s a great video. But in my opinion, I believe this particular question needs a contrast paragraph ( 1 reason for agreeing) which comes before the conclusion I.e immediately after the 2nd reason for disagreeing. Thanks. 😊😊

[@brijeshpatel20]

Same confusion please mem clear about it🙏

[@nehahussain2471]

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[@LilieIELTS]

Glad it helped!😊

[@nusratjahan99924]

so, when we have to write (to what extent do you agree or disagree), we can simply write completely agree or completely disagree(one sided arguement) like other opinion essays. we do not need to provide counterclaim paragraph, is it right mam?

[@mylyanhngu5947]

I'm really confused in paragraph 2. Maybe it's about advantages of reading online. And agreement with "nobody will buy physical books". I misunderstood???

[@souha3233]

1- they won't be able to read everything for free, because those who share them are lookin for money, global corporations will allow you to read them for a monthly subscribtion in order to thrive and be able to pay their workers. 2- some books won't be available online because some of them are either found in some countries or they are very limited so it is even more expensive and hard for companies to offfer them for the general public. are these relevant ideas?

[@LilieIELTS]

Yes, I think they're relevant.

[@mithracullen4297]

Why didn’t we try to paraphrase the phrase “In the future”, or few other parts of the sentence. Can u give a brief about that please

[@lauren9624]

I have a question, why didn’t you write a thesis statement or even a topic sentence? today, I studied with my Teacher, the type disagree and agree and he mentioned those.

[@majedahmedkhan]

thank you for kind information ❤

[@mohammadjhahidulislam9530]

hello would you please clear me one thing that agree and disagree are same like what extent do you agree or disagree? Or there is difference between these

[@LilieIELTS]

Hi, you can answer them the same way. But for "extent" questions, you can add a word like completely or totally: I completely/totally agree with this view.

[@mohammadjhahidulislam9530]

@@LilieIELTS thanks for prompt reply

[@rezairanpour9463]

very useful and easy to understand

[@Kdroplover]

Thanks, Is it ok to replace"in conclusion" with "to sum up everything that has been stated so far"???

[@LilieIELTS]

I don't recommend using that. It's unnecessarily wordy.

[@anhduong6545]

Valuable material for learning IELTS. Thanks

[@LilieIELTS]

Glad you enjoyed it.

[@dhanrajsingh7778]

Hi mam, you explained in one of your video on to what extent do you agree or disagree that we should completely agree or disagree. So is it correct if we use the same approach here? I can disagree with the whole argument.

[@LilieIELTS]

Yes of course you can disagree the whole statement.

[@alinafendembo6673]

Great work. Are you not teaching reading part too am struggling with matching headings

[@LilieIELTS]

Perhaps, in the future. I'm not sure how to make reading videos. Am I supposed to read long reading text or not?

[@sabazia8316]

Don't we have to write counter argument?

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[@ChamiJayVlogs]

hi Lilie in agree or disagree ,do we have to tell why we disagree in bp1 and why we agree in bp2???

[@LilieIELTS]

No.

So useful mrs!, tks u

[@LilieIELTS]

You are welcome 😊

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[@cryptomoonshots..482]

1:00 Why do you have to complicate everything...?

[@Rk-ut8kp]

I have a question, so I mentioned my opinion in the introduction right. Can I state both point of views in the body paragraphs while stating examples then showing my opinion again and conclude everything. I hope u got me, because I remember we used to do something similar to what I said in my school so rather than saying I slightly or completely agree/disagree I state both point of views and my opinion on which I prefer.

[@LilieIELTS]

I'm sorry I don't follow you.

[@Rk-ut8kp]

@@LilieIELTS so you’re saying I should not do that at all?

[@LilieIELTS]

I mean I didn't get you. Can you post an essay here? I'll see what you mean.

[@Naresh_Chaudhary44]

Should I write agree in body paragraph 1 and disagree in body paragraph 2

[@LilieIELTS]

Please read the agree-or disagree section of this blog post: www.ieltsessaybank.com/printed-newspapers/

[@LolSixFour]

I'm still in confusion. because you have agreed with the 1st statement but disagree with the second statement which is obviously interconnected. is it good to do so?

[@LilieIELTS]

Yes, it's fine. As long as your opinion is clear throughout the essay, then it's fine.

[@rujinaakther-j6o]

Thanks Lilie❤❤❤❤

[@nirajkhawas8403]

Hey lillie .. in extend question ... the answer you have wrote is a partial agreee or not because u have discussed about why people will not buy e books in the future and in another body paragarph u have writtten that why people will stop buying paper books ..and mentoned advantage of e bokk plz make me understand m

[@LilieIELTS]

Hi, this is my opinion: I COMPLETELY agree that in the future nobody will buy printed books, but COMPLETELY disagree that this is because they will be able to read everything they want online without paying. I made my opinion clearer here: www.ieltsessaybank.com/printed-newspapers/

[@nirajkhawas8403]

So we have to wrote I m partially agree in the notion in intro... am I right or wrong.

[@LilieIELTS]

@@nirajkhawas8403 I don't recommend 'partially agree'. Have you seen that I used the word 'completely'?

[@nirajkhawas8403]

Soory illie can I be partially agree and ca wrote both agree and disagree here

[@hozoborolo360]

Thank you Lilie👍

[@LilieIELTS]

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[@kqt4972]

Is this essay for general? or academic?

[@LilieIELTS]

academic

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[@sandeshadhikari6744]

this means we can devlop by partially agree and disagree

[@sevvalbilgin1787]

Thank you for the video! ❤ Can I ask you if it is okay for us not to talk about why we agree that nobody will buy printed newspapers or books in body paragraph 1?

[@LilieIELTS]

you need to address that part. It doesn't matter whether you agree or disagree.

[@sevvalbilgin1787]

@@LilieIELTSbut we only mentioned it in the introduction, don’t we have an explanation for why we agree with this statement?

[@ЯЧеловек-ю8ы]

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[@janineyasovant6025]

Thank you Lilie King

[@mahimaislam3311]

can I have any help from anyone, I am not clear about this topic? after reading the hole writing still I am confused is this supporting agree or disagree, please tell me someone.

[@LilieIELTS]

Normally, I would completely either agree or disagree. But for this particular essay question, I agree that nobody will buy printed newspapers or books but disagree that this is because they will be able to read anything they want online for free. Hope this helps.

[@abdullahalnayeem5509]

Is it ok to both agree and disagree in these types of essays? Cause some experts say I need to clear my point of view by either fully agree or disagree with the idea.

[@chaoslee2471]

@@abdullahalnayeem5509I have the same question with you

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[@kulsomabegum4195]

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[@souha3233]

wyhy didn't you give two reasons how do you agree and disagree at the same time ?

[@LilieIELTS]

Please check out the "Agree or Disagree?" section of this blog post: www.ieltsessaybank.com/printed-newspapers/

[@510patelkrunal8]

So we can partially agree and partially disagree?

[@LilieIELTS]

Hi, this is not "partially agree/disagree". I *completely* agree that In the future nobody will buy printed newspapers but *completely* disagree that this is because they will be able to read everything they want online without paying.

[@510patelkrunal8]

@@LilieIELTS oh understood thankyou 👍

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[@LilieIELTS]

More to come. The next video will be about speaking part 3 though.

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Lilie, I would like to ask you if know any free page or resource that provides Ielts writing samples, particularly 7+ essays. Thanks for your attention.

[@LilieIELTS]

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[@key-o2u]

Don't have to write the reason why you agree?

[@mehdibachari2537]

Body paragraph 2 u agree with statement not disagree. But u mentioned second reason why u disagree 🤔??!!!

[@LilieIELTS]

I agree that in the future nobody will buy printed books but disagree that this is because they will be able to read everything they want online without paying. If you’re comfortable writing about printed books, you can totally agree with the question statement. In your first body paragraph, you can still explain why not all ebooks will be free. Then, in your second body paragraph, you can talk about one of the benefits of reading paper books. But I think it's really hard to write a fully developed paragraph about paper books.

[@mehdibachari2537]

So this mean in body 1 you mentioned why u disagree because it will not be free and in second body u are agree with the part to purchase online because it is faster to delivery. Right?

[@LilieIELTS]

@@mehdibachari2537 Yes, except that in Body Paragraph 1, I talked about why I disagree with the part "people will be able to read everything they want online without paying". I did not disagree with the entire question statement.

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[@well_done_07]

i am a bit confused. In all of your writing lessons, you recomend us to write body paragraphs first. But in this one, you are just writing introduction first. i am really upset.

[@basicgrammarbeforeielts5668]

R u agree or disagree, I'm confused with the reasons, 1st reason is for disagree but 2nd one is not like that ..

[@LilieIELTS]

I think my opinion is very clear. Please read my introduction paragraph again.

[@basicgrammarbeforeielts5668]

@@LilieIELTS please just say , its agree or disagree?

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