IELTS Writing Task 2 | TO WHAT EXTENT DO YOU AGREE OR DISAGREE? with Jay!

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[@anneenunwa6827]

I just got my IELTS result today. Listening- 9, Writing- 7.5, Reading- 8.5, Speaking- 8.0. Overall score- 8.5 Watching your lectures contributed immensely to my result. Thanks a lot Jay. So happy! And it's my first attempt.

[@okoliblessing4560]

Anne Enunwa congratulations

[@jagnandangill5640]

Can you give me some tips which you used in your exam time.if it is possible than i will appricate you from my heart.please reply it for me as soon as possible because i really need it

[@anneenunwa6827]

Jagnandan Gill To be honest I've only ever spoken English so I had a good foundation. You need to practice as much as you can. Listening, speaking, write letters and essays and practice reading. I did all the practice tests I could find.

[@anneenunwa6827]

Okoli Blessing Thanks

[@nabilaanish2902]

Those are so.good scores...need help in writing 😭

[@qasimkazmi5913]

I must say that you're undoubtedly the best teacher on youtube I've found so far. May you have more. I really love the fact of yours that you never get tired of teaching. Even after speaking and teaching us continuously for hours on live webinar, you are keen to answer questions regarding your lecture, this clearly indicates your love for your profession.

[@user-ey7io2si7h]

Jay, you are doing great job! One of the most useful tutorial on KZbin.

[@rajeshbhatia5596]

Your advises and suggestions helped me get an acceptable score in IELTS You both are amazing and I thank you from the bottom of my heart Keep it up!

[@serele019]

Hello Jay!! great job!! Your Videos is Absolutely necessary to be shared to everyone who will give the IELTS exam as well as to anyone that would need to practice his English skills!!!!!!!!!!Keep going!!Greetings from Greece!!!!!!

[@yemisiloveth6773]

I want to say a big thank you to this channel. I got my result today and I got my desired band score (7.5) at one sitting. Jay you are doing a great job😊👌

[@olatundunolayinka8643]

Am so much excited to watched few of your tutorials and i found them so amazing though my examination date is very close but gained some information's through your platform much appreciated Jay.

[@enamul1985]

I am writing a general statement here - "Simply no one won't love this video". Thank you Jay, thank you E2 IELTS! :)

[@t.omichelle6681]

Thank you so much Jay, I saw this video and the letter writing video a night before my exam. you helped me get a 7.5. I just saw my results.

[@preetijindal1]

No words of how how your sessions are.. Just cant believe teachers like you exist who can made IELTS so simpler for their students. After watching your videos, writing seems to be a cakewalk. Thanks a ton for helping us :)

[@joyceoniyire4539]

I got my IELTS result and made a 7.5 in writing. I simply followed your training on the structure you taught us Jay. You're a gem! Thank you.

[@tsionsin536]

hey i have some questons to ask u about this part can u reply pls

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[@experiencemathswithtaqi9010]

Hey, in this agree or disagree questions My tutor told if I am disagreeing or agreeing to prompt, I have to follow this basic pattern- Para 1- introduction Para2 - reason 1 of agree/disagree Para 3- reason 2 of agree /disagree Para 4- conclusion But according to Mr jay here- Para 1- Introduction Para 2-acknowledging one side Para 3- agree/disagree other side Para 4-conclusion I am Confused because no were I have seen Acknowledging other. Which method is correct ?

[@sahilk335]

55:19 for complete essay.

[@navdeepk639]

Your explanation about learning English language is excellent. You are the best teacher.

[@mehulshah7205]

Jay , tomorrow is my IETLS general exam. If i hadn't seen this video i would definitely panic. this video has helped me allot. And not just this one, all of your videos have been 95 percent of my learning...... thankyou so very much for this. you are amazing teacher.

[@mohammadmunawarali6676]

Thanks, Jay for your structured explanation. You reach the audience well.

[@farhanaamin-hk3td]

I think you are the most knowledgeable, experienced and supportive teacher who I have ever seen.

[@asifasif9934]

No doubt !! Fantastic way to take preparation for IELTS examination very specific and reliable.

[@afsanasharna742]

You are so amazing Jay. I've learned so many things from your videos. ❤

[@proggaparomita281]

Discipline is one of the crucial parts of raising a child, and there are various ways of going about it. Some people believe that corporal punishment, or smacking, is the ideal form of discipline. This essay will argue that smacking children is a completely unnecessary way to discipline children, despite any potential benefits to this method.

[@brownrover1827]

Thank you Jay and all the E2 tutors, I got 7778. Couldn’t happened without your guidance. Thanks alot again. God bless you all

[@yaweihuang4599]

very well-organized sample article. Thank you

[@russelaYT]

I took the Academic IELTS last September 9, 2017 and I've got a score of 7.5 in writing. Thanks E2 Language for the tips, it took me a week to understand your essay structure and it was worth it. Also, this was the type of opinion essay I received. :)

[@adnanalipersonal1321]

Sorry for the interruption but I need to express my thoughts on your a/m statement but first, congrats to you on that score. Second, about your 'it took me a week.....' it is indeed taking a week to understand this opinion essay. Nevertheless, what about other types of essays i.e. solution & problem, advantages/disadvantages, thesis statement etc..? I guess it will also take time to understand and realise the whole WT2 part in GT

[@Edibostik]

Hi Jay, I want to say a Big Thank you. I finally got a 7 in my writing. I only watched your KZbin videos and practiced like you advised.

[@shafiealwasifer1871]

thank you so much for all the videos you have made !!! All of them are incredibly beneficial.

[@hanaali2360]

Dear Jay, your videos are phenomenal, I'm a beginner and I feel that I'm making quick progress I'm really obliged

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Hi

[@libyancitz6108]

Thank you so much Jay. That was of a great help of you. My ielts exam after fifteen days and you guys make it much more comprehensive and clearer, thats why E2 is the only guide l am going to follow. ❤❤

[@floxyakene2104]

Good morning, I came across your writing tutorial a night to my ielts writing test and got a band 7 in my writing , I wish I saw your teachings on others earlier enough. Thanks so much. Take your flowers 🎉🎉

[@Psychobone1]

I can confirm that this strategy works well, I took Ielts in Dec 2020 and managed to get a 7.5. Thanks!

[@jashanbaidwan7383]

Really??

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[@Psychobone1]

@@jashanbaidwan7383 yeah, I just followed the exact formula and it worked

[@salonikilledar2050]

I got an agree/ disagree essay and scored 7 in writing. I followed your lessons. Thank you so much Jay. Your channel is incredibly helpful.

[@userscrolling]

hey are u still here ?? Are u able to help me write an essay for me cuz I have to submit it tmr and it’s a test .. ? If ur still here I don’t mind giving you the Qn ... please help me !! I’m so bad at essay writing and I don’t wish to fail

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[@susmijoy5438]

You are really an awesome teacher.. Thank you so much for the effort. 🙂

[@ayaanalifestyle4127]

Thanks Jay, I have an exam on 13th October 2018 I am watching your videos and following all instructions given by you... Hope I will get a good band...

[@rosalinantioquia2496]

Thank you so much for the knowledge you share . This really help me a lot to easily understand this part of the test . Newbie on learning Writing exam. 😊

[@nikitamaurya4518]

Loved this tutorial, thank you so much, I am going to rewatch it again and again. Here is my essay: Smacking is a common method used by parents to discipline children in various cultures. These parents believe that smacking is the most effective approach for managing children. This essay will argue why it is completely wrong and dangerous. Some parents resort to smacking as the sole method of controlling children’s behavior. Their motivation stems from two primary reasons: firstly, parents believe that smacking disciplines their children immediately, moreover when children are physically hurt, they are not likely to repeat the same mistake in the future. Research suggests that parents are naturally protective of their children, if slapping helps their child to grow into a better person, they may not hesitate to consider this option. This clarifies why some parents regard smacking as the best method for dealing with unruly children. Despite the immediate positive outcomes of physical abuse, the practice of smacking is a completely inappropriate and unhealthy way of managing children in the long run. Strict parenting style has only adversely affected children’s mental health. Due to physical abuse, children have been distancing themselves from their parents. Indeed, this is the reason why these days many children indulge themselves in drugs and build wrong relationships. Recent research has shown the increased suicide rate among young children due to wrong parenting style. Therefore, I stand completely against any form of physical abuse against children. In conclusion, this essay argued that parents who use smacking to discipline their children have a poor understanding of children’s psychology and underestimate the negative effects of physical abuse. In my opinion, no matter how badly a child behaves, parents should not hurt them physically and instead address the situation with thoughtful consideration. (260 words)

[@TCS_School]

Introduction: Sentence 1: Write a 'general statement' based on prompt: 9:18 Sentence 2: Rewrite the question prompt in your own words: 12:50 Sentence 3: This essay will argue that/why ...: 16:44 Paragraph 1: [the one that you don't agree with] Sentence 1: Restate Side 1: 22:23 Sentence 2: Give reason/s: Sentence 3: Give example/s: Sentence 4: Conclude Side 1: Paragraph 2: [the one that you do agree with] 43:57 Sentence 1: Restate Side 2: Sentence 2: Give reason/s: Sentence 3: Give example/s: Sentence 4: Conclude Side 2: Conclusion: Sentence 1: This essay argued that/why ...: Sentence 2: Give your opinion (extent):

[@dolapobello2998]

Hello good afternoon. What if am agreeing with the questions how do I arrange my paragraph, will BODY PARAGRAPH 1 start with what I don't agree with

[@vishnupriyasivaprasath5350]

Thank you so much Jay... Without your lessons it would not have been possible for me to get the required score in the my first attempt. Thanks a lot!!

[@farshahsavarhaghighi8736]

Hi jay Just wanted to say thank you , Your tutorials are the most effective way to learn English

[@karokbivokti267]

I received my IELTS (General) result today. Listening- 8.5, Writing- 7.5, Reading- 9.0, Speaking- 7.0. Overall score- 8.0. Your lectures are outstanding and helped me immensely! Thanks a ton, Jay! I am so happy today! It's my first try.

[@MrMuumin]

I have an IELTS Exam tomorrow morning 03/02/2018 ,and I'm watching this now ,Thanks man Appreciate it .

[@sukhmanpreet3813]

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[@gamzguns]

you're awesome. i was scared to write an essay yesterday. now i enjoy writing. you gave me a sense of excitement to take the exam. i love you man... i love you

[@gr5744]

Hey Jay, This is the coolest video have seen for IELTS. How good and properly organised is this.TYSM for this!

[@TaliyaHafiz]

Dear Jay, you are one of the best teachers I've met in my life! Feel blessed.... I would be grateful if someone here can review the beginning of my essay which I did following the instructions from the video. I thank you in advance.... Discipline in relation to children has been a controversial topic for discussion since time immemorial. Some people believe that physical punishment is a wise choice when it comes to children's discipline. This essay will argue why smacking is completely inappropriate way to treat children when they misbehave. Some parents think that applying physical power is a very effective way to control children. They find it necessary to use when children do not understand commands expressed orally or behave in a very violent manner. Moreover, adults may consider smacking as a means to inhibiting deeper understanding of appropriate behaviour into their children's minds. For instance, when a child misbehaves and initiates bullying, it seems wise to apply smacking in order to show him how unpleasant and painful the exercise of physical power towards others can be. Although smacking may seem beneficial to some parents, disadvantages of such form of discipline greatly outweigh the advantages. Smacking children may lead to serious repercussions such as deterioration of their psychological state. It has been reported that 30% out of all children smacked suffer from severe mental diseases lately. Parents who have beaten their children for the sake of better code of conduct condemn that they need to manage serious health problems their children face afterwards. Moreover, applying physical power to children is highly likely to cause unfriendly home environment, deteriorate family relationships, and negatively influence children who become more aggressive and violent in a response to such form of punishment as smacking. Therefore, parents should avoid smacking and regard it as very dangerous and cruel method to shape children's behaviour. This essay argued that physical punishment of children is inappropriate way of controlling their behaviour. It seems reasonable that parents who smack their children must consider the drawbacks such practice implies, and need to change their methods accordingly. In my opinion, ceasing to use smacking is an absolute imperative and, definitely, a wrong way to treat misbehaving children.

[@sahilsaharan5597]

❤

[@azadestroyer]

Undoubtedly 10 out of 9

[@mansadevi8821]

these video is really useful. thank you sir

[@norisanis9288]

Thanks a lot Jay! the way you teach is amazing, you really explained it very well for us to understand easily.

[@jessypannu2749]

Hello Jay..! Im so excited to share with you that finally after 5-6 attempts I got 7 in writing. I was stuck at 6.5. You are a blessing..! Guys please religiously follow e2language. 👍👍👍

[@AnaGarcia-de7do]

I really enjoy how clearly u explain everything in detail plus i love watching you. Your handsome😍

[@sinnitibo]

I wanted to say thank you, Jay, for these free video lessons. I took IELTS for the first time in my life last week and got a band 8 for writing, all thanks to your SUPER structures! I'm very grateful for your hard work; you helped many people improve, including me. I will recommend E2 to all my friends who will take IELTS in the future.

[@gouravsalgotra2196]

many congratulations for scoring such a good score. can u please help me with some of the issues in ielts writing?

[@maryameghbaljou7888]

You are the best Jay, thank you for sharing these videos

[@divyakamboj2583]

You are really a brilliant teacher... Saying thanks to u in not enough... May u live long

[@peachsmoochies]

Thank you for this. I completely appreciate it! :)

[@farhadalam6974]

Sir, u r a legend in IELTS. Really impressed!!

[@MiguelMGraziottin]

Thank for this amazing lesson!

[@ukwuomachika9503]

Mr Jay, your videos helped me to get my desired band score. I got my result yesterday It was great. Thanks so much. Keep the good work. I encouraged everyone preparing to write IELTS, stick to his videos your results will amaze you.

[@prasanthsreekumar216]

You are the best guide on youtube You are merely teaching what is needed to score 9 Saying thanks is not enough!!

[@veronicadumashie549]

You are the best

[@anthonymkandhla7265]

Thanx so much Jay and the whole E2 team 🤝 . Got an overall band 8 on my 1st attempt 😀 (L8.5, R8, S8, W7). your step by step guides to approaching, structuring and writing were absolutely helpful. Keep up the good work 🤝

[@dr.mariahelan6629]

Wow congrats n ur score. 👏 Can i ask u help me with the following questions What question promt did u get? Did u get agree or disagree? Did u write both sides even when u agreed or disagreed to one side completely

[@isratjahan3904]

Wounderful narratives of how it should be, very good way of illustration of the structure,. Awesome 👍.

[@sikanderbeersingh3326]

Thanks sir a lot u have almost cleared my all doubts related to ielts essays which i found totally an impossible task prior watching to ur videos . Hope ill hit good bands in my test . Thats all just because of u . Keep doing this job greatfully . May god bless u .

[@sunilsai9328]

Hello Jay I followed your you tube tutorials and joined E2 language. I must say you have helped me a lot , all your classes are well structured You take all efforts to help your students....i am indebted I thank you for helping me. with your help my total band score is 8.

[@ancy70]

You really helped me a lot in my preparation for ielts essay writing. Thank you!

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Thanks Jay, your videos are outstanding.

[@ridaallauddin5364]

Ur a great teacher i must say. Thankyou so much jay! Ur lessons r worth watching to clear the exam with flying colors.

[@mazdie7]

thanks jay... you're making it easy :-)

[@maisarah7197]

Discipline is something that should be taught to someone ever since they were young. Many people believe that physical punishment is the best way to instil discipline into children, such as smacking them. This essay will argue that smacking children is not the best way to enforce discipline upon them and there are other options available. Raising children is a difficult task, and parents opt to using physical punishment, such as smacking, to control them when they are misbehaving or having tantrums. For generations, parents have been using physical punishment as a form of discipline, and some parents are only familiar with that one method as they were raised with those type of consequences in their household. Some parents also believe that by using corporal punishments is the best way to educate children. For example, parents can easily stop their child’s uncontrollable behaviour such as saying a bad word in just a few seconds. This quick and brief way of portraying consequences to children make parents believe that physical punishment is the best choice discipline them. I believe that this traditional way of discipline is unnecessary in our modern time. Studies show that children who were raised with the normalisation of physical punishment will grow up and develop serious mental illness such as depression. Children should be raised in an environment where making mistakes is not a bad thing, instead it is a learning process. For example, parents can opt using other methods such as time out, talking with their child or taking away something they enjoy doing such as their video games. Using violence to discipline children is dangerous in itself and could lead to far worse outcome for society. In conclusion, there are many methods parents can use to discipline their child. I definitely believe that a softer approach in disciplining children will positively affect the child’s development. Children are also human and we should be respectful of their feelings. 322 words. Is that too much?

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Yes

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[@ayukayuk7585]

Thanks Jay. Your lesson is helpful. God bless you

[@JagjitSingh-yf7ch]

You are genius! The way you explain, it embosed in students mind.

[@uroojfatima1682]

Hello Jay, I’ve been watching your videos for quite sometime now and I find them really helpful. Unfortunately, I end up with a 6 band in writing while my other components are 8. I need specific practice for writing, pls. Suggest.

[@jjen]

I want to thank E2 Ielts for my ielts preparation! It was insane I had less than 2 weeks to prepare for my test. I got a 7.5 for writing and overall band of 8 :) Thank you thank you Jay and Alex!

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Hi how are you

[@Sunshine-tz9bf]

Can you help me?

[@wonderlandofnishreen8103]

Thank you very much dear teacher for your valuable help.🙏🙏stay blessed always 🤗.

[@kaykay6261]

Praise Lord Jesus!! Received my IELTS result and got L-8.5,R-9.W-7,S-7. This was my first attempt and I thank God for the results. My preparation was thru the videos and instructions of E2 by Jay, Alex and Mark. I wasn't much prepared for speaking. but the last minute saw the ppf method by Jay and it helped in the test. the one min is really short in the test time, also my instructor took back the paper i put notes on, so it really helped. Thanks to E2 IELTS instructors.

[@kaarsmi7]

Thanks Jay...I got my result today..Followed your tips for all 4 modules...my result is 8 7.5 7.5 8.5 (L R W S) overall band 8 in my first attempt..you are such a wonderful teacher..am glad i found your tips very effective for my preparation..thanks again and god bless..

[@jagnandangill5640]

Congrations, can you share your tips with me plzz

[@monayagirl7772]

Heyyy Jay, I just received my IELTS test score. Listening- 7.5 Reading - 7.0 Writing - 7.5 Speaking - 7.5 Over all band - 7.5 Your videos were incredibly helpful. I owe u big time! I simply watched ur tutorials for writing and I’m glad I got my desired score.

[@gulibaxtiyorova9047]

Congratulations! That's so amazing Can you give some tips pls? How did you prepare and how long?

[@gulibaxtiyorova9047]

I took 6.0 overall in October this year And recently i started to self study to retake the exam untill February can i take 8.0 untill that ? Can you give some advice pls no one is answering i am really struggling how to prepare i mean i am doing practice tests but there is no change

[@shwetanraj5281]

it is really helpful. thank you jay for giving a brief information on opinion essay

[@mehreenmalik6536]

Hi jay...how r u..i took my academic exam on the 27th of April..watched a lot of ur videos..hav subscribed..and forwarded ur videos to a lot of my colleagues who took the exam with me..v hav collectively watched loads of ur videos..wish us all luck

[@alirazakhakwani4472]

Hi Jay, Could you give some tips on how to come up with a background statement before paraphrasing the topic sentence? struggling to give a good start to the essays. Your prompt reply would be highly appreciated. regards, Ark

[@ShivaniSharma-bt2fg]

Took exam on 10 feb 2018 got 7 bands in writing ... thankyuu jay sir 🙏🏻

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Nice!

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Pathankot

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Wow that’s great 👍 O wow I am from jammu 🙂 What abt other sections score ..? I am also preparing for GT-Ielts Please help /guide/ suggestions I am worried abt speaking and writing sections

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@@ShivaniSharma-bt2fg hi shivani mam can u help me plllz-zzzzzzz

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This is my first task 2 video on this channel, and I Have subscribed. Great video, I have to say.

[@upendragupta9523]

Thanks jay! this is fruitful for writing task 2.

[@alhanoufa5339]

$Introduction/ 45 words These days people smack their children as a way to raise them. They claim that physical punishment is the best way to correct their path. This essay will argue why smacking children is unnecessary, and that there is more than one way to discipline children. $Paragraph1/ 82 words On the one hand, some parents have been hitting their children believing that is a way to improve their behaviors. nowadays children became harder to deal with so using physical punishment can correct the situation. Moreover, children will remember the pain and not repeat their mistake repeatedly. Indeed, some children act rude and bad so, a good way to correct and teach them is smacking. In spite of how it will affect them in the future, smacking children is the best form of discipline. $paragraph2/ 102 wors On the other hand, regardless of how smacking can teach the child, this idea is totally unnecessary. Children are smarter than to correct them by hitting. Studies show that 67% of children who have been smacked by their parents are more likely to depression and addictions. Therefore, courses are made in each town to teach parents how to deal with their children in other ways such as talking, prizes and to punish by taking their games. Overall, the idea of smacking children is the best form of discipline is dangerous in itself and could lead to a far worse outcome for society. $Conclussion/ 49 words This essay argued why smacking children is unacceptable including that who use physical punishment are totally teaching their children wrong, and how there are other ways to teach children other than hitting. In my opinion, Smacking a child is absolutely unnecessary that can cause bad complications in the future. total: 278 words

[@nwosaelobike7169]

I got my result today - W 7 L 7.5 R 7.5 L 9 and 8 overall. Did all my practice here especially writing task 2. Thanks Jay

[@bridgettechitengu6217]

Hie congratulations which tutor did you use on your speaking......thank in advance

[@NoorJahan-mb6kx]

Hi Jay, you classes are very helpful. I have been following your classes some 1 week now and it has already improved my skills a lot. I am a free student at e2Language and am mostly following your youtube videos. I have a confusion about the Difference Between "Agree or Disagree" and "Extent of Agreement or Disagreement" in IELTS Writing Task 2. Please make a video on this topic... Thanks in Advance...

[@rajsidhu6990]

Jay.... you are great ....Your videos will definitely help me scoring high band score in my ielts exam.Thank u so muchh for ur tips.

[@E2IELTS]

Feel free to write your sentence-by-sentence ESSAY into the comments! (Feel free to click like as well!)

[@amrikbhucho2534]

can same pattren be written if you are simply asked whether you are agree or disagree with statement i mean without mentioning that how far you agree or disagree

[@simonmbaekwe2027]

jay thank you so much. you have been extremely helpful. I really need some clarification on the 'extent' essay type. For the 'smacking of children as the best disciplinary measure', i decide to somewhat agree and include in my thesis statement that 'other measures would be better'. is that proper? and how would i go about it. simon

[@jagjeetkaur198]

E2 IELTS great help

[@saira3191]

E2 IELTS what if i agree with the statement ? What em i going to write in both paragraphs ?

[@AbdulRehman-ot7lg]

best teacher ever

[@abdullahalmahruqi1976]

I am having my test tomorrow and I really wish if I could have watched all these tutorials earlier because I have just found this beautiful channel just this afternoon! Thanks mr Jay, you are great!

[@hend6540]

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[@estherayanlere9056]

Thanks Jay. These videos are really helpful

[@deepthisiromani2007]

Jay. Jay. Jay.. You are a guru! 💯..I followed your strategies for writing task-2 and got a 7.5 in Writing... Thank you🙏

[@monicamtei473]

I used this vaccination essay structure by acknowledging one side and writing opinion in another has made me got a band 8 in writing! Using a mixture of complex sentences, passive and even question sentences is the real deal. Thanks a lot Jay

[@dr.mariahelan6629]

Wow congrats n ur score. 👏 Can i ask u help me with the following questions What question promt did u get? Did u get agree or disagree? Did u write both sides even when u agreed or disagreed to one side completely?

[@vivianmachie4757]

@@dr.mariahelan6629 I would also like to know the answer to your last question.

[@dr.mariahelan6629]

@@vivianmachie4757 👋 hi, i got opinion based essay. I scored 7 in my writing. In agree or disagree, I either agreed or disagreed to one point of view. In what extent do you agree or disagree, is another type of question, where you can 1 agree completely 2 disagree completely 3 agree to some extent and disagree to some extent, If 3 is your case, then you have to write the body paragraphs very carefully Bp1- state why u partially disagree Bp-2- state why u partially agree Hope it was useful. All the best to you 😀

[@kasumimisty8354]

A lot of thanks to Jay, Mark and Alex! I watched all the videos of Jay & Mark and Alex's videos of R & L. Don't miss any video, i watched at 2x speed to save time😅 The structure of essays given by Jay is very helpful. I got L9, R8.5, W7, S7 (exam date 5 & 10 June). I had some 18-19 days for preparation and there were days in which i could not study at all. But the week before exam i was practicing 5-6 hours daily. The only regret i have is that i couldn't manage my time to revise my essay & letter. Keep practicing!

[@rikeshmaharjan7833]

Great could you please tell me if this is a discussion essay or a opinion essay ?

[@kasumimisty8354]

@@rikeshmaharjan7833 what do you mean? They have 3 types of essay structures.

[@amaardoc8148]

This is absoluately perfect lecture , well done ❤

[@tarunasain2713]

Excellent Jay. Wonderful way of teaching👍

[@Yashikaagarwal]

Thanks Jay for teaching essay writing in such a great way. In this particular essay, being a medical professional, I would like to suggest that "Preventable Diseases " and "Spreadable Disease " are not synonym. We can definitely use it as a synonym for "Communicable or Contagious diseases/infections" but not for Preventable. Vaccine preventable diseases are a group of special illnesses and not all spreadable disease are vaccine preventable.. sorry for being too technical but thought to mention it here. Thanks.

[@julianaredzuan3154]

Thank you so much e2 Language for the amazing tips. I use most of the tips during IELTS exam. I just got my IELTS result today. I got 7. I quite surprised because I thought I at 5 or 6 😅😅 Thank you so much Jay and friends.

[@mervearc4478]

how did you. i got 6

[@ksideth]

An amazing explanation. Thanks you Jay.

[@prabhatratnala6589]

Hi Jay, Thank you for the wonderful video. Quick question, How should I write agree or disagree (instead of to what extent do you agree or disagree) type of essays? Should I also acknowledge the other side of the argument?

[@jellyfish4311]

Jay thanks! I’ve got 9 9 7 7.5 (L R W S)

[@drshabbir3894]

helo reply me if possible

[@jellyfish4311]

shabbir usmani hi

[@liyamin]

@@jellyfish4311 omg do u have some advices for reading And which topics you have on the speaking and writing

[@jellyfish4311]

Liya Min tbh I nearly ran out of time when I was doing reading. There’s not much that you can do for reading except read more lol but when you’re doing the exam try just to find the answer (your aim is to find the answer not understanding the passage!!!) For speaking my topic was “a boring experience” We talked about when do I usually get bored and why. There’s also something about robots? (Forgive me. It’s a distant memory lol) Do you think that people will be replaced by robots? Writing I had bar chart for task 1. For task 2, the pros and cons of travelling a long distance between home and workplace. I hope it helps! Good Luck!

[@amritrandhawa709]

@jelly Fish

[@joannatonga4235]

Jay! i had this type of question during my ielts test..isnt this structure more of discuss both views? i got confused 😣

[@surbhijain3375]

Thankyou sir, your videos were amazing and helpful for me.

[@noufalhassan1945]

Thanks for all what you have done.. and still doing. I like your lessons and think they are the best.. I have a question though.. how this essay differs than do you agree or disagree? where can I find the answer..

[@SahilKumar-fo8gh]

01:28 question prompt 03:19 level of extent 06:01 essay structure 06:14 essay structure 2 07:07 sentence by sentence structure 07:36 how to write the introduction 07:45 sentence 1

[@MukeshSingh-cc8gn]

Thanks a lot Jay! Got a score of 7.5 in writing for my test on 16th December '2017. Sincerely applied your essay structure in my writing section & got the results.

[@ashimarai6872]

What type of essay it was, discussion or agree / disagree?

[@anandlivingstone3206]

mukesh thakur congratulations

[@shilpityagi3821]

Mukesh Singh are these for academic or general Ielts.

[@MukeshSingh-cc8gn]

@@shilpityagi3821 General

[@udyangupta2868]

Hi Jay. Thanks for the amazing videos. I do need help in writing down the dates and time in the reading section. Could you please help?

[@bakhodirjonkakhkharov344]

Thank you sir, your lessons are really helpful