CELPIP LIVE! - CELPIP Writing Practice: Writing an Email (Task 1) - S2 E14

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[@peggyorji1563]

Hiya!! I used your KZbin materials to prep for my CELPIP exams and I did so well! Listening-12, writing-12, Reading-11, Speaking- 11. Though I’ve been a native speaker but I do know it can still be a struggle to do well on the test just due to nervousness and other factors. I must say this page helped a ton!

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[@PrietoLilia]

I want to express my deepest gratitude to the CELPIP Test channel for sharing this fantastic video. A massive round of applause goes out to Brandi; she truly is an exceptional teacher. I followed her recommendations for both Writing Task 1 and Task 2, and the outcome was absolutely incredible-I scored a perfect 12 on my CELPIP test. It's worth mentioning that I came to realize there are multiple approaches one can take when tackling these tasks. However, I decided to wholeheartedly follow Brandi's advice, and it delivered outstanding results! I must say, her explanations were incredibly insightful and, without a doubt, the best ones out there. Brandi, you are simply the best!

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Hi Brandi, I watched your videos last few weeks and I got 8 for writing, listening and speaking and 7 for reading. Thank you so much for your amazing tips. It helped me a lot.

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I really appreciate all the effort you guys are doing to bring us such good sessions of English training. Thanks for all. Brandi is the best.

[@santoshpawar2270]

I'm very thankful Brandi for your previous guidance of 4 modules, and thankful to Ashwathi too.

[@_afeef]

Full email at 29:04 , if it helps

[@drtoca4034]

Great video! Thanks for the tips 🙏🏻

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Thanks for the video, it’s really knowledgable 👍🏻.

[@earth3190]

Thank you so much Brandi! You're amazing.

[@chynweobinnauche]

Thanks so much for simplifying the email writing task.

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It's a really helpful and informative video. Thanks.

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Hi Brandi, Thanks for these writing tips, I scored 10 in my Writing exam following your guidelines. Thanks so much guys, great work.

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[@sidonculous]

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[@farooqalikhan83]

Hi Sadat, Congrats your great score in Writing, have you used any templates or fancy words for a high score.. Please advise

[@mohammedsadat7852]

@@farooqalikhan83 thanks.. I followed Shayans celpip writing videos

[@alishaferriera9980]

Please make more videos on the Writing part. They are very helpful.

[@deepakjpaikada]

yukon also have one Carcross Desert, located outside Carcross, Yukon, Canada, is often considered the smallest desert in the world.

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Awesome clips, it really helps

[@kolaolugbenro9726]

Beautiful delivery

[@firasabuhamdan7920]

Great one!

[@thiago1983brandao]

Very helpful

[@vikasmehrotra8304]

While changing para in the original exam do I need to enter twice or just once for para change?

[@sabaaamir7870]

Very helpful, it will be great, if you leave some writing prompts for practise purposes. Thanks

[@punchboss4561]

Really helpful. Thanks

[@bjoygolingay868]

Hello I love all your video thanks so much.

[@aishaqazi9062]

I'm from India (bilingual with my first language as English) and to me an 'entree' has always been a starter or an appetizer . I was so surprised when I heard that line so I went to check it up... Apparently in Canada and the USA , unlike the rest of the world, an entree means the main course. This was good to know!

[@easypeasytrading]

As someone whose main and only spoken language is English also being a chef, not from Canada or USA. An entree', always mean main course.

[@aishaqazi9062]

@@easypeasytrading I googled it again to make sure...EVERYWHERE it says that it is the dish before the main course, including in the dictionary. Anyway , this was not supposed to start an unnecessary argument especially not this way... I'm not going to engage after this. Good day.

[@khushdeepkaur7847]

Thank you so much

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Really good

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Thank you so much for sharing the tips. It was useful. I am studying for the CELPIP test. I hope to get the score that I expect.

[@hassanyagoub4772]

lm studying for the Celpip test

[@hassanyagoub4772]

How do I start

[@anuvarghese8771]

Great job Brandi...

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Thank you so much. Your videos helped me get an outstanding result on my exam.

[@CELPIPOfficial]

Thank you for sharing. Congratulations on your outstanding result!

[@mansichandarana2717]

Do we have to start with greeting likewise "Greeting of the day",? What greeting we should use in case of complain email?

[@mariviesagusip8409]

Very helpful to me🥰🙏

[@larrybergquist4259]

Keremeos in BC and Athabaska alberta deserts, and one small in Yukon

[@yousufbaig821]

PERFECT !!

[@barasaflorence345]

Hi Brandi thank you for good service I watched your video it's amazing it's really helpful I'm interested

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Hi appreciate you guys for the effort to update us on the text, we like to request for recent materials in 2023.

[@CELPIPOfficial]

Hello Edith! You can find new practice tests on our website at celpip.ca. If you’re referring to new episodes, please go through our playlist or stay tuned for our next one happening on the 30th!

[@manikantamaddipati1090]

Thanks 🙏

[@pravezbuyer9516]

Hi Brandi, How much score can be given to your this sample response? This query will surely give the idea of marking standard.

[@jackymwaiseghe1185]

thank you so much

[@janvilunagariya1612]

I really liked the way she explained

[@AnujKumar-ft4ps]

Hi Brandi , what level of score do we expect from this sample email ?

[@mariviesagusip8409]

Thank you for this clear video, i hope i can pass my exam this Thursday 27 of January 22.

[@farooqahmad8213]

IS there any book for the higher level words to get higher CLB level ?

[@larrybergquist4259]

On the test in writing, I says to write it in your own words, it is not based on the 4 section standard form of complaint and resolution, of dining in a restaurant, and penalized for it.

[@Desigangmusic-01]

Thats really very helpfull.

[@sheryagrover4707]

Dear Brandi, Can you please suggest a few closing statements for an informal email?

[@muhanedmusa]

Dear Brandy and Aswathy thanks for your efforts and like too much what you're doing. I always listen to you when I have time out of work. Aswathy how are you, you a little bit talking fast (sorry for inconvenience)

[@kwameadu-gyamfi6102]

very helpful

[@foreigndreamsimmigration4727]

Which software was used to make this presentation video ?

[@theparasmalhotra]

The desert is in Osoyoos, BC.

[@GaganSingh-cw4dg]

Can we use the question sentences in the email.

[@vedkhanna2423]

What clb score would you give to Brandi's attempt

[@kudamapfumo9316]

This was helpful

[@aliceotiende580]

Hello am Alice from Kenya am suppose to do my celplp test on 15th and i don't know where to get that test in Kenya

[@LifeOdysseyMotivation]

In word count, the spaces are included?

[@pannadarao5583]

This channel is very informative 👌

[@Aartisharma-cp1gd]

How many paragraphs is necessary for writing task for email.,? Can you please let me know.

[@josephatmabera1622]

my question is on the format and level of the questions ,they should be differentiated on academic status

[@indexrule2k]

can i finish the task 1 early to work more on task 2?

[@indirajetta5982]

It was great

[@rennypinto3689]

What has the Salutation in start of Email has to be?

[@darpansharma3543]

Hi there, do let us know if there are any ways where we can recheck our Email writings that whether they are good or we need to work on some areas, as this will be helpful for the test takers who practice celpip individually at home

[@CELPIPOfficial]

Hi Darpan! Please visit the 'Score Comparison Chart' section on our website where we provide sample responses for Writing & Speaking. Test-takers can choose the CELPIP Level they wish to study for and rotate through the score descriptor, sample question and response at that level, and an analysis of why that mark was given. This page should give you all the necessary information you need to be able to assess your writing at home. www.celpip.ca/prepare-for-celpip/score-comparison-chart/

[@LifeOdysseyMotivation]

*At **29:17**, Final Draft. Proofread. The very first sentence of the first paragraph has a huge mistake. Is that intentional or you just forgot to edit? Or you just want us really to proofread the email?*

[@manjiriramekar9991]

thanks Brandi..

[@jackymwaiseghe1185]

was great

[@merinaxavier4617]

Please share the complete format of all the test. Details about all the task in reading, writing, listing and speaking.

[@CELPIPOfficial]

Hi Merina. You can find all those details and more on our website! Please do check it out- www.celpip.ca

[@LatifaLatifahhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhh]

Brandi is great ❤️

[@amritveerboparai2417]

Hello, Can we use phrases like icing on the cake, killing two birds with one stone while writing an email?

[@hassanyagoub4772]

How are study materials obtained?

[@ricardopaetjr.6574]

What if I exceeded 200words?

[@surbhisbw6237]

Hi please make helpful video for reading section too..

[@isaactoyin118]

Hi, I am not sure; your letter said "Yesterday evening" is not supposed to be "yesterday's evening"?

[@brianbohrson]

I would be very interested in seeing this type of video for Writing Task 2.

[@CELPIPOfficial]

Hi Brian! You can find the video here: kzbin.info/www/bejne/e5aad4CPdruUm9U

[@brianbohrson]

@@CELPIPOfficial Thanks! It was great

[@christaherlemann6806]

Is it possible to have a large type size during the test?

[@lindachen1965]

yes you have choice

[@archanaravi1]

Where can I see previous test papers of CELPIP??

[@CELPIPOfficial]

Hi Vivaan. While we cannot share test papers, our practice tests reflect the complexity and type of questions we ask during the CELPIP Test. www.celpip.ca/prepare-for-celpip/study-materials/study-materials-celpip-g/

[@Nittin111]

Hi, ma'am, Can I get the different versions of answers to this task according to different CLB levels?

[@CELPIPOfficial]

Hi Nittin! Absolutely! We already have that available for both the Speaking and Writing sections. You can find it on our website here: www.celpip.ca/prepare-for-celpip/score-comparison-chart/

[@komalmand8040]

Great job :)

[@chantallmarietychingcoluzo3038]

I wonder if I ca use words like "umami" or "al dente" for food

[@anshulagarg5661]

It would be great if you make more videos on these writing tasks; I mean cover two or more different topics

[@CELPIPOfficial]

Hi Anshula, thank you for your suggestion! We will share it with our CELPIP Live team.

[@samirvahora4034]

@@CELPIPOfficial can you give me the videos with different topics of writing ?

[@CELPIPOfficial]

@@samirvahora4034 please watch our Writing section playlist on this channel. You should be able to find all the Writing videos we've created so far. kzbin.info/www/bejne/pIW5o6yAi6aVmac

[@mirfaisal2534]

I have written my version of email. Can you evaluate? Appreciate it.

[@LifeOdysseyMotivation]

I would love to see and evaluate your work. Can I see it?

[@kundanchaurasia]

How we can ask the Question during the session as i am not able to find such options.

[@CELPIPOfficial]

Hello Kundan. These episodes were live-streamed on KZbin at 9:30 am PST every other Tuesday. If you join us live, you are able to ask us questions through the live chat feature. We will be resuming CELPIP Live Season 3 soon, do join us live then!

[@user-qt5gr8ic9i]

If due to less time, if someone did not complete finish conclusion. Is it count in marking.

[@CELPIPOfficial]

Yes, if you are unable to finish your response in the given time, you may lose points.

[@aishanitripathi4458]

Can we write dear sir or madam instead of dear restaurant manager.??

[@shashijayant4424]

Hi brandi, can I use idioms in both writing, please reply as soon as possible because my exam is scheduled on coming 17 Oct.

[@CELPIPOfficial]

Hi Shashi. Idioms can be used in writing for more informal settings. If you were writing to a friend or family member, for example, you would likely use more casual language, so suitable idioms could make sense. If you were writing to your boss, or to a stranger, however, a more formal approach would be suitable, so you would likely not use idioms in this case. (The words you choose to include in your writing always depend on your purpose, and your audience). - Brandi

[@shashijayant4424]

@@CELPIPOfficial thank you 😊

[@mohammadkhavandgar4521]

Hi there, Please check the final draft. I think something wrong.

[@jenniferanazor-ugwu]

I didn't see an introductory paragraph stating the reason for the email. Why's that?

[@CELPIPOfficial]

The purpose statement for this email is in the final sentence of the introductory paragraph (providing details of the visit and requesting a resolution for the disappointing food and service). Note that the purpose for writing in Writing Task 1 will be clearly identified in the test instructions.