Frist: Thanks for the introduction of the characters in the description! Second: The reading is worse than what I am used from other stories - just listen yourself, if you ever did! The pauses in the middle of the sentences don't make any sense and are a drag to the listener.
@UnspokenAffairs13 күн бұрын
Thanks for the tips!
@hellmouthisnogod195213 күн бұрын
@@UnspokenAffairs you are welcome!
@hellmouthisnogod195213 күн бұрын
@@UnspokenAffairs You are welcome! - and just one small note in the end: Why did Daniel tell Mark to stay away from his family after there was no more family? Divorce pending it would rather be helpful to watch the affair now go on.