Closure || Dream SMP [ANIMATIC]

[@lex_cat11]

The way you emphasized Wilbur dancing around an apology to Tommy was incredible. Like it was obvious in the stream but you made it hit even harder. I love how much character you’re able to portray in them too based on body language, expression and such :D

[@alyiamcool]

The bit where Tommy says never mind with his sticks made me laugh so hard!

[@kaydoesgaming_1947]

Same!

[@lovelyinnit7930]

True same here!!

[@ducky9202]

To be honest, Wilbur knows deep down the person he owes the biggest apology to is Tommy. From the start tommy always stuck with him, no matter the consequences. Even when Tommy realized wilbur was losing it he still cared about him. Wilbur is avoiding the apology to tommy because be knows that it will be the hardest one to do, and he’s scared Tommy won’t stay by his side. I think that Tommy is going to start realizing more and more that Wilbur is avoiding that apology that tommy wants so bad, and when he does i think or at least i hope tommy will finally snap. EDIT: I PREDICTED IT PFFTTT

[@moonlitaura_]

YOU GET IT

[@demigirlwithoutaturtle3556]

@@moonlitaura_ Fr fr

[@jenniferchaulam]

/back in some of the vods chat there were people say it was just for manipulation but i think its not mainly because how much cWil just sorta danced around the apology remember when cWilbur just got revive he apologize to cTubbo and like the whole thing was quick, snappy, and cWilbur sounded so sure that he WILL be forgiven. this however, felt awkward and cWilbur wasnt looking for any forgiveness at all. The man picked techno as the first one to go to! From what i notice, cTechno is LEAST affected by cWilbur's action. our man wanted to f-ck the government and cWilbur didnt really directly hurt him in any big way. ig he sorta made more government but cTechno wasnt scarred by it. unlike cTubbo, or the elephant in the room cTommy who, from cWilbur's action traumatized them in many ways

[@WhatIsMyLif3]

YOU PREDICTED IT.

[@ducky9202]

@@WhatIsMyLif3 LMAO I DID

[@emiliamatlock8566]

Tommy obviously wanting an apology and expecting it at multiple times but forced to keep up his persona (canon wise) is really sad and telling for him. He wants to ask people to do things or treat him better but when they don't do it on their own he wants people to believe he wasn't expecting anything. so sad :( it also really shows how much he admires wilbur even though hes done so much and wants to seem strong around him and like he doesnt need anything (at the end)

[@noax.drawings]

I think that Wilbur doesn't want to apologize to Tommy because he thinks he wiuld have to leave Tommy be, but since Tommy is, like, the only person to stay by Wilburs side all this time, they went through so much together... Maybe Wilburs afraid of losing the only close friend of his that have stayed by his side since the beggining until now. Wilbur knows he did lots of bads to Tommy, but since Tommy haven't snapped at him or left him yet, he may thinks it's better to hold Tommy close to him. Idk, it's just my theory.(Also, sorry if I wrote something wrong. You can say and correct me.)

[@Mr.Overrated]

I feel that Tommy does not want to appear weak, since that way he seems an easier target, although it is difficult for him to admit it, we know that Tommy only wants everything to stop.

[@Mr.Overrated]

@@noax.drawings understandable.

[@jellynear-tears3775]

@@noax.drawings I think I get what you're saying. Wilbur never admitted doing anything wrong to Tommy- so if he apologizes, it's like hes admitting that hes been treating Tommy poorly. I guess he thinks if he admits he was wrong, Tommy will stop looking up to him, or will leave him because the apology made him realize how shitty Wil has been. Wilbur doesn't realize that Tommy has already stopped thinking he was perfect, and won't leave because he knows Wilbur wont leave him. And maybe that's why Tommy is trying to be like the old Tommy. He doesn't want Wilbur to leave either. I love this duo, the dynamic is so heartbreaking. Sorry for rambling lol

[@noax.drawings]

@@jellynear-tears3775 I agree I agree. fu€king love this duo

[@alexihavenoidea]

noooooo the way tommy was listening and then the expectation and then the disappointment- amazing animatic, as always

[@mermelada.]

(1:16) Tommy eavesdropping on them is quite cute and funny. Then the "NEVERMIND!" after the awkwardness of the situation totally got me. (1:59) Tommy being a little impatient in (2:11) (2:37) Finally him acting as his usual self looks like a way to hide how dissapointed he probably ended up and it broke my heart. Those little details are awesome!

[@jenniferchaulam]

/omg there was that one frame that tommy was eavesdropping. that's my headcannon now lmaoooo, there's no way tommy was convieniently RIGHT THERE

[@yusraabdul1445]

this stream pissed me off so much. like all the subliminal hints of will needing to apologise to tommy the most and then not realising it killed me!!! this was an amazing animatic, beautifully done.

[@ohaayo4277]

saame like i was so mad at c!wilbur it's unbelievable

[@tova1412]

i think he definitely knows he needs to apologize, he's just putting off doing so. I'd imagine he wants to maintain the little normalcy he has left, what with having Tommy at his side just like he used to and stuff

[@jamsiies]

oh he definitely knows he needs to apologize, but he’s putting it off probably because he doesn’t want to “let c!tommy go” for a lack of a better word. he knows c!tommy will forgive him but c!wilbur doesn’t think he deserves it so he’s putting it off. anyway that’s my analysis at least

[@Bo_1715]

And I liked it just for that, it makes the story more intriguing

[@cloudyr.]

Do know what the streams called?

[@wynderr]

DUDE THE WAY TOMMYD EXPECTANT SMILE IMMEDIATELY FADED WHEN WILBUR WENT STRAIGHT PAST HIM TO GO SPEAK TO TECHNO INSTEAD- OH IT HURTS-

[@genevieve1923]

You guys gotta read deeper into this stream. The entire thing was foreshadowing for the next few people who c!Wilbur is going to apologize to. He's going to apologize to c!Tommy eventually, he's just putting it off because to him, the apologies are more or less a final good-bye. And the last thing he wants to do is say goodbye to the only person who has stayed by his side through all his bs. He's clingy ™

[@rhennsacara]

He might think Tommy won't forgive him. The fear of giving someone the opportunity to say no, to say that they don't forgive what you did is big. It's terrifying to even think about the truth being said out loud that it stops you from even giving them the chance to maybe say the opposite. H Or maybe he might not think he deserves Tommy's forgiveness, so he won't give the window for Tommy to say he does.

[@genevieve1923]

@@rhennsacara Very true yeah. I feel that on a personal level lmao. In all seriousness though you're probably right. He's already having to come to terms with the fact that everyone who he apologizes to might not be ready or willing to forgive him. And for that to even be in the realm of possibility with Tommy is what's stopping him right now.

[@lunearr]

well... 😭

[@sprinkles06]

AAAAAAAA THE STREAM WASNT EVEN 30 MINUTES AND HE DID IT _TWICE._ T W I C E. AHSGAHHS Also oh my god, the way you drew Tommy's facial expressions basically showing that he was listening the entire time implying that he is very aware of the conversation, instead of being oblivious, but still doesn't say anything, and just acts as if everythings fine- just wow. It makes it hurt more than it already iS.

[@keltzy]

Ahh, that little "one apology later" transition was great!

[@opaltoralien4015]

Absolutely A-Tier representation of the events, the way you animated it all perfectly fit the mood and illustrated each little *hint* so clearly yet naturally. The reading between the lines to have Tommy listening in, then later dejected but trying not to care and focusing on the silver lining of Wilbur even being there... Wow

[@Futileonline]

DUDEEEEE!!!! Tommy's constant disappointment and expectation to be apologized to but staying with Wilbur is perfect in this. I love this, so simple yet so many emotions

[@Dawnlotus]

I love these designs, and how you do their emotions, this is so good!!!!!

[@amalczak]

I love this so much, you really just never miss man. It’s so good, so good!! Your art style is freaking remarkable, your designs, the way you portray emotions and movements - everything is so smooth and just straight up marvelous. You’re very talented dude, thank you for this!!

[@ToKtopus]

thank you so much!

[@elliotgandersen]

I love how expressive Tommy is in his chaotic personality

[@lemonzesty3997]

Bruh,,, everything about this is so good!! One thing I noticed that I don’t think I saw anyone talking about is that even Phil is like, glancing at Tommy when Wil talks about who he wants to apologize to next,,, it’s so good!!!

[@littlelove1918]

ABSOLUTELY AMAZING AS ALWAYS 👏🏻👏🏻👏🏻👏🏻👏🏻👏🏻👏🏻👏🏻 Edit: Tommy 'nevermIIIIIIInd!!' 😂🤣

[@boatem-hole]

god all of your animatics are so good!!! tommy's expressions killed me in the best way possible omg

[@crusty_alyssa8661]

I loved the way you put so much emotion into tommy! Especially when his shoulders would sink when he realized he wasn’t getting an apology, honestly just amazing

[@artificialoutput]

Ah! The little changes of emotion in the facial expression are so good!!! :D It really brings the characters to life!

[@ataucei]

Your animatics always look amazing! Your style really inspires me :D

[@ToKtopus]

aw thank you!!

[@arahfren3688]

I love how you showed Wilbur’s facial expressions and body language. It really captures his struggle with trying to tie up every loose end. Also love how you included the silly moments too. Thank you for the wonderful animatic TK! :)

[@rexmin203]

oh my god i absolutely love this, you captured all the emotions they gave in acting PERFECTLY (on top of your stuff always being awesome) and AAA as a big c!Tommy enjoyer, the way you showed he wants an apology but keeps acting like its fine, im just aaaaaaaaaaaaa

[@leethenoodle7690]

The delivery of the “Tommy…” is the BIGGEST jabait, and it STILL got me the second time he said it

[@Zephirite.]

THANK YOU for including Tommy’s awkward staring at the walls. He did that in the stream!

[@nox12566]

sobbing i LOVE how ur art just captures the essence of these characters and brings them to life sosos well. especially tommy with all his little mannerisms he seems so childish and i love it. ur art is amazing

[@forestgranted]

oh my god i can't express how much i love this. your style is so adorable and simple and charming and your framing is perfect

[@grovitemultiverse]

Great job on showing how Tommy and even Phil hinted Wilbur to apologize to Tommy but Wilbur never did. Tommy's expressions of disappointment at 1:33 was a wonderful touch. Love the compositions and posing as well, really feels like an animatic for a cartoon.

[@HJPaige]

Absolutely amazing!! Also I loved the "one apology later" lol, it's amazing how a font can make you read it in a certain accent (french in this case)

[@dinosaursarecoolinnit5642]

i love their actions that you’ve put in so much, tommy side glances of expectations that then met with disappointment. you’ve drawn them so well omg and i love your style

[@amandamartin5141]

Here after the end of c!Wilbur this animatic makes a larger impact now 😭😭

[@DaBookNerd]

This is beside the point but I love it when animators are drawing Phil and are just like Sane person: yeah we recognize Phil by wings or his green coat or the hardcore heart symbol Animator: …….but what if I made his bucket hat SO big

[@ottertoons]

i haven’t been caught up with any dsmp lore but this is SO GOOD. Absolutely incredible!

[@Hoshi_Hoshi_21]

Every frame that featured both Tommy and the word “Apology” put a bullet in my chest every single hod damn time.

[@Oosjhteuikmm]

I'm am stunned. This is such an incredible work, it's remarkable and done so fast... I'm speechless

[@alittlebitofme07]

I love the vertions where Tommy was actually spying on them, it makes the scene hit harder, and it's just a very Tommy thing to do

[@recoveringqueer]

this better become unreasonably popular - it's so perfect and funny !!

[@CabbageDynamite_Lucy]

I really feel the only reason Wilbur doesn’t apologise to Tommy is that it will mean that Tommy can move on and doesn’t need to be with Wilbur anymore, that is what Wilbur believes, so Tommy will be the last person Wilbur apologises to. I don’t know about the whole friend business tho, that part was sus to me, but it may be another way to keep Tommy talking to Wilbur for the time being. Wilbur needs Tommy, but Tommy doesn’t actually need Wilbur, Tommy doesn’t fully understand that yet.

[@VixeyFrost]

Tommy turning around with the sticks and his little smile was awesome lmao

[@smugbowkid9919]

Wilbur was basically rubbing it into Tommy, cmon.

[@pigeon_stab]

You can see the disappointment from tommy everytime he thought he would get one :(

[@A_Bagel]

The stream was just pain, but the way you transitioned the expressions (Tommy's expectant to disappointed face especially) was 👌

[@en4254]

absolutely LOVE your art style And the MOVEMENT

[@sillyguy444]

YOU CAPTURED THIS SO PERFECTLY, THE FACIAL EXPRESSIONS, EVERYTHING

[@phari4820]

This is one of my new favorite c!Phil moments, he's just so wise

[@samiranazari4126]

THE CHARACTER DESIGN Chef’s kiss

[@dragonz9794]

Ok I actually really love this, this is really cool!

[@thecatladytm7172]

_ETERNAL SUFFERING_ ...this was really well made tho, love it

[@SoggycereaI]

Amazing, the designs and poses/movement and the way you've portrayed it all... Absolutely loved it.

[@AKA_Kady]

Your artstyle is so good!! I love how your draw phil the most he has perfect chill dad vibes lol

[@KrinnyKrinosa]

Holy crap I can't get over how incredible the acting is in your animatics!!

[@Seven-fl4ic]

HOLY SMOKES, the emotion and the body movements are so well matched! your animation never fails to look lively

[@homerroofing1]

i want phil as a therapist

[@amysparkle6193]

The head turns THE HEAD TURNS ¡¡¡YOU ADDED THE HEAD TURNS!!!💜💜

[@megsterbbb]

I love how you can literally see Tommy's hopes rising and falling. You're really good at facial expressions and body language

[@starryblue9921]

you're so good at depicting the character's emotions and thoughts.....I really love this but I'm crying.............;-;

[@kikianimatz]

everyone’s designs are AMAZING!

[@imaymellow]

Personally i think Phil's advice was good but wasn't for the right people

[@imaymellow]

@@ShadowSailor He basically just told Will that most times people need to let go of eachother instead of wanting to apologize a lot But Wilbur NEEDS to apologize to Tommy and he knows that he is just so scared he hurt the person who mattered the most when he went insane scared he won't be forgiven They need to open up to eachother to find happiness in their brotherly relationship, that's how the story should progress I'm sure they'll dig a little deeper into that

[@helainanatasha7496]

i think phil knows wilbur has to apologize to a lot of people including/especially tommy but he's trying let will figure it out on his own without pushing him too much

[@imaymellow]

@@helainanatasha7496 It could be that ig

[@livetheender]

WAKE UP NEW POST

[@archivist_13]

Ok but Tommy deciding to help Wilbur despite being disappointed he didn't get an apology was such a bro move

[@silvie4280]

I am SCREAMING. I love this so much!! The way you showed Tommy’s disappointment at Wilbur was amazing! And how you showed his tendency to cover the disappointment with humor!! I also love how you had him listening at the door! It adds even more depth to the scene because he knows exactly what was going on

[@teba2150]

you managed to make me giggle and cry at the same time and that just shows how talented you are

[@fantasma3038]

The design is fantastic. Wonderful animation.

[@Bo_1715]

I just love this style, it's so cartoony and cool!!

[@karamii9147]

every animatic you post fills me with joy!! i really really enjoyed your drawings and expressions for this one

[@nerd3101]

it hurts seeing wilbur avoid tommy, but hopefully they eventually gain closure and understnading someday :'), also VERYY GOOD ANIMATIC!! :D

[@MinholvsJisung]

1:25 Tommy being scared in here makes mee want to cry

[@MinholvsJisung]

HURTS MEEE

[@dundonjon]

Oh damn your style is incredibly good, in all aspects. No bad frames whatsoever

[@absentson]

YOUR PHIL LOOKS SO KIND I'M IN SHAMBLES /POS

[@juanaolg]

this is insanely good toktopus never misses

[@stellarzekia674]

I LOVE YOUR ART STYLE! I love how you were able to capture everything here ajfjdkkslfkd I love your art!

[@insanecreeper91]

only tok could get me to watch something from the smp anymore

[@mizzalovespizza]

BRUH! you're animations are always SO HIGH QUALITY! it's amazing! you really inspired me to try and make high quality animations of my own keep up the absolute AMAZING job! you're doing GREAT!!👏👏👏😌 Also the expressions are SO good! Wilbur apologize to Tommy now u bastard!!!!

[@superrobloxer2587]

I've never felt so bad for Tommy. "As long as we're going on an adventure together."

[@snip2100]

THIS I SO UPSETTING IM CRYING RN

[@appelflap420]

tommy really does have the best character and always had

[@lepokebloc4198]

Really cool we love to see it

[@usernametomato6514]

This animatic shits hard! 100% goated with the sauce

[@dinerrossW]

Every time that I think no one can hurt c!Tommy any more than he've already got, I'm proven wrong. Poor child, my heart literally hurts every time he gets more unfair treatment

[@SaoGlix]

Your animatics are so cool! I would love to see an DSMP animated series with your style haha Thanks for the amazing work! ✨

[@Aquarica]

Dadza spouting words of wisdom

[@evakazoo]

4/4 sbi content it’s been so long ;-; Gorgeous work I couldn’t stop smiling throughout it

[@quill1596]

Your Art Style Is So Good. Like, I’d Take Your Artstyle To Dinner And It Would Tell Me “I Think I’d Rather Be Friends” And I’d Accept It Because I Value Them And Respect Them So Much. /Pos. It’s So Distinctive And Oddly Nostalgic And So Like,,, Friend Shaped.

[@goldenrod6845]

I’ve seen this clip so many times, I don’t need to watch this. NEVERMIND HAHAHAHA (deploy sticks)

[@queenlightfury8964]

Wilbur wants to say sorry to Tommy but he doesn't know how to go about it.

[@dogeater7]

SUCH A COOL JOB

[@solpetals]

this came up on my feed today and i am in crocodile tears

[@nutmehhg]

i love the way you draw eyes!!!! AMAZINGG

[@katterwaul6317]

this is SO GOOD i am in awe

[@silver_jordann7482]

Amazing animatic!! Both the expressions and artstyle is really nice :>

[@jumpinthecadillac9507]

tommy's disappointed face will haunt me.

[@niki4578]

Your animatics are so underrated! I love these ❤

[@lawIight]

Omgg Closure!!!! Like the Way Dream Closes his Heart to Gnf!!! Dnf 4 Lifeee

[@oddball7888]

Ahhh omg your so talented!! I love all of your animatics and the way you do facials is so perfect! This moment is so amazing! I especially love the way you draw Tommy! It’s just- ahh this is amazing!!! Thank you for another stupendous animatic my friend!

[@auroradtomas7311]

i don't think c!Wilbur could be anymore clueless, I mentally facepalmed myself so many time in that video 😭😭

[@pearlyp9898]

I don't think he's clueless, just not ready to let go of Tommy yet. Because that's what Phil told him - if he majorly fucked up, he might need to leave that person. And Wilbur knows he fucked up with Tommy most of all.

[@auroradtomas7311]

@@pearlyp9898 that is a good point :]

[@SwizzleDrizzl]

i dunno why everyone's angry about wilbur avoiding apologizing, i thought it was the funniest bit

[@1Sariat5]

I love your style so much, this was PERFECT!!!

[@clovercalloway]

Wasn't expecting something like this so soon. I'll confess I said "oh no" out loud when I saw this because of the flashback of emotions this stream brought me. You put together the scenes that stood out the most in my eyes. Clearly the cliffhanger is an acknowledgement that, hopefully, the narrative is leading to closure for cWilbur's arc and ccWilbur is conscious about it. And the fact that Tommy is clearly expecting an apology, something that you represented well with your illustrations. Your drawings, as always, are on point. I love your expressions too, they're exactly the ones I was imagining during that scene. Thanks for always delivering quality. [Ps: Thanks for the drawings Tommy with the sticks, he was in such a silly mood and you captured it perfectly.] ☘︎

[@vixxen3583]

Philza therapist arc was in this moment.