Comparing My Best And Worst Essays #1: Introductions // What Makes A Good Essay Introduction?

S O C I A L M E D I A
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F A Q s
✽ How old are you? 21
✽ What did you study at Oxford? Archaeology and Anthropology
✽ Which Oxford college were you at? St Peter's College
✽ Where will your Master's be? Cranfield University
✽ What is your Master's in? Forensic Archaeology and Anthropology
✽ Where are you from? Greater Manchester
✽ What do you use to film? Canon EOS 200d & Samsung S7 Edge

[@amyukulele]

honestly can we just take a minute to appreciate the dedication rosie has to helping us?? i genuinely appreciate it so so much

[@RosieCrawford]

Too lovely aaah😭😭😭❤

[@ImogenWhite]

The dedication is REAL when you're prepared to rewrite an ENTIRE essay for a video 😲💗

[@RosieCrawford]

Or am I just stupid? 👀

[@ImogenWhite]

Rosie Crawford nooo you’re not stupid just dedicated 😂😂

[@RosieCrawford]

❤❤❤

[@jadelauren2269]

Omg yes please do the re-writing your worst essay idea! Loving your jumper btw 💗

[@joshc5867]

It would be fantastic if you could rewrite one of your essays if you have the time. I'm heading towards my final year and still stumbling when it comes to assignments like these so it would be really helpful! Look forward to seeing P2 on Friday! :)

[@aleshalou8163]

The dedication 🥺

[@RosieCrawford]

I try 😂😭

[@denibezdrob421]

Ohh...I would actually LOVE to read your essays. The themes look so interesting and amusing. Thank you for this video, you are amazing❤️

[@aallison7183]

Thank you soooo much for making these :) They help me make it through my essays.

[@sciencewithsoph3620]

What do you wish you’d known before going to Oxford?

[@Harry-lq2jz]

Rosie!! Can you do a video on how to write an academic essay quickly? I'm also writing loads of essays but I'm SOOOOOOOOOOOO SLOOOOOOW!! It's doing my head in and so would be grateful if you could give us few tips on that! Thanks! :DD

[@RosieCrawford]

I've made a video where I write one in 3 days??? It's here: kzbin.info/www/bejne/jGS8eqGmlMR9kMU

[@Harry-lq2jz]

@@RosieCrawford Hehe, so there is! How can I missed that! Silly me! :D So, it's all about questions, questions, questions! Fantastic! You made it feel everything's sooo easy and doable which is a mark of a truly amazing teacher from my experience! ;-) Thanks again! :DDD

[@emmaletham6514]

This is so useful, thank you!

[@nickthestick324]

I only just watched this but you like Horrible Histories?!?! It’s my favourite show!!!

[@RosieCrawford]

YES

[@andrewbarnes4368]

This. Is. Good.

[@thestudytubeproject5210]

Heeeey 🙈

[@vickybisova1704]

You didn’t get deducted for going over the word count! Wow, jealous haha. At Manchester we get deducted 20 marks (out of 100 overall) for every page we go over the page limit! Even if we have just one word on the 4th page of a 3 page essay (~1500words) boom -20 marks 😂😂😂 I actually despise page limits / word counts! Hahhaa

[@RosieCrawford]

We would if our essays counted towards our great but none of them did. We just had to write 2 a week - honestly unsure why to this day???? But i guess i can really write an essay now 😂

[@vickybisova1704]

@@RosieCrawford Jesus 🙈 It takes me two weeks minimum to write just the one 🤣🤣 I do have a toddler at home though, hahaha. X

[@caitlinwhiteman8801]

omg don’t put yourself through re writing an essay 🤣🤣

[@RosieCrawford]

Hahahahahahaha *you did this for what* whyy nott