Composition II: تـعـلـم كتابةA Narrative Essay--Part 02 مثال تطبيقي

Title : A Business Letter
Introduction:
I should have kept that letter in my pocket for a whole day before getting rid of it. The letter warned me that if I threw it, I would spend the worst 24 hours of bad luck in my life. I disbelieve in superstitious things that bring bad luck like whistling in an empty house, or looking in the mirror at night. I just wrinkled the letter with one hand and shot it in the waste basket. Before I slept that night, I felt that there was something suspicious about that letter.

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highly appreciated sir, this is my humble try of writing a narrative essay . TITLE [ A BAD HABIT ] I never thought that relying always on my phone could ruin my day . Whenever a big or a small problem happens i search on my phone , looking for its solution . it has been always a helpful tool until one day . When my mother asked me to bake a cake , preparing to welcome her family members who came from Spain. As usual , i stepped inside the kitchen searching on my phone of a ricipe to begin cooking . Abruptly, while i was looking for a bowel , my phone slide out of my hand and crashed on the floor into pieces . I was freezed on my place thinking of an alternative solution , but gloomely the phone was the only solution i relied on . Unfortunately , i am a bad cook . I had no idea about what ingredients should i put in the cake , nor how it must be cooked . My mom was chatting with the guests , so i could not ask her for help . They were all waiting for about half an hour and i did not even start cooking . After a while of thinking , i remembered that i hide some money above the refrigerator. I was so glad , but the a mount of money i had was not enough to buy a whole cake . However, i went to the nearest bakery and bought half of a cake . With a raced speed , i went back home and seved the half cake to the guests . I thought i solved the prolem , but unfortunately the cake was not enough to all the guests .I was so embaressed and i wanted to escape from my mom's furious glances . From then on, i decided not to rely compltely on my phone .

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GOOD JOB! i = always CAPITAL = I I never thought that relying always on my phone could ruin my day. Whenever a big or a small problem happens I search FOR ITS SOLUTION on my phone. It has been always a helpful tool until one day . When my mother asked me to bake a cake to welcome her family members who came from Spain. As usual , i stepped inside the kitchen and SEARHED FOR a ricipe ON MY PHONE to begin cooking. Abruptly, while i was looking for a bowel , my phone SLID out of my hand and crashed on the floor into pieces . I was freezed on my place thinking of an alternative solution , but gloomely the phone was the only solution i relied on . Unfortunately , i am a bad cook . I had no idea about what ingredients I should put in the cake , nor how it must be cooked . My mom was chatting with the guests , so i could not ask her for help . They were all waiting for about half an hour and i did not even start cooking . After SOME TIME of thinking , i remembered that i HID some money above the refrigerator. I was so glad , but the AMOUNT of money i had was not enough to buy a whole cake . However, i went to the nearest bakery and bought half of a cake . With a raced speed , i went back home and seved the half cake to the guests . I thought i solved the prolem , but unfortunately the cake was not enough FOR all the guests .I was so embarRAssed and i wanted to escape from my mom's furious glances . From then on, i decided not to rely compltely on my phone .

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- please correct this narrative essay for me. There is nothing more painful than losing a member of your family. Emotions and feelings can come out unexpectedly. You can even find yourself in a deep ocean of tears and suffering. I was on three months vacation in Paris with my friend. We were spending time in nature and enjoy the calm. even though those months ran away in the blink of an eye. That one day as we come back to our hotel, to relax, take a shower and change our clothes, a terrible thing had happened. Surinsingly, while I was lazing on the balcony writing stories, and gossiping with my friend. Suddenly, my dad had called me to tell me my uncle was dying. I was shaken and started crying. I dropped my phone and I was speechless. I couldn't control myself, and I even started to scream ' Uncle' in a high-pitched voice. I fainted even ended up in the hospital. While the doctors checked me, I woke up feeling horrible, hoping that it was a dream, but no, it was real. Then I went to the mosque praying and asking God to help him recover. After that, I flew to Morroco and went to the hospital when my uncle was lying. As I came into his room my eyes filled with tears. I was trying to talk to him, but there was no sign from him. I held his hands and reminded him of all the beautiful stories and memories that we had shared together. I remember my childhood when I went with my uncle to the forest, playing soccer, and enjoying life. I wondered if that really was a punishment or not, and I was hoping that he would get back to how he was before. An hour after that, He stopped breathing and his heart stopped beating. I was crying and crying without stopping. I was so mad and upset even I started to shake, my face was red, and I let out a high-pitched scream. Then I hit my face on the wall until I was bleeding, and I sat on the floor for a long time. And I was thinking that this is the last moment with my uncle. I didn't realize that someday I would have some moments like this.

[@posneramiir2871]

I stayed and stayed for two weeks in darkness, depression, loneliness, with all the negative emotions that I didn't expect would come. After all of that, I recognized that I should take care of all of my family, and live every moment with them because there will come a day when I will lose them.

[@AhmedElrhazi]

There is nothing more painful than losing a member of your family. Emotions and feelings can come out unexpectedly. You can even find yourself in a deep ocean of tears and suffering. I was on three- month vacation in Paris with my friend. We were spending time in nature and enjoyING calmness. Those months ran away in A blink of an eye. That one day as we come back to our hotel to relax, take a shower and change our clothes, a terrible thing had happened. Surprisingly, while I was lazing on the balcony writing stories, and gossiping with my friend, my dad called TO SAY my uncle was dying. I was SHOCKET ? and started crying. I dropped my phone and GREW speechless. I couldn't control myself. I even started to scream ' Uncle' in a high-pitched voice. I fainted AND ended up in A hospital. While the doctors WERE checking ON me, I woke up feeling UNWELL, hoping that it was a dream, but no, it was real. Then I went to the mosque TO PRAY and ASK God to help him recover. After that, I flew to MOROCCO and went to the hospital WHERE my uncle was SLEEPING. As I came into his room, my eyes filled with tears. I was trying to talk to him, but there was no sign OF LIFE IN him. I held his hands and reminded him of all the beautiful stories and memories that we had shared together. I remember my childhood when I went with my uncle to the forest, playing soccer, and enjoying life. I wondered if that really was a punishment or not, and I was hoping that he would get back to how he was before. An hour after that, he stopped breathing and his heart stopped beating. I was crying and crying without A STOP. I was so mad and upset THAT I even started to shake. My face was red, and I let out a high-pitched scream. Then I hit my face on the wall until I was bleeding, and I sat on the floor for a long time. And I was thinking that this is the last moment with my uncle. I didn't realize that someday I would have some moments like this.

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Excellent Narrative Essay👏

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Thank you for the encouragement Yasmine ^^

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Thank you so much teacher 🤍 This is my introduction : When I was a kid i used to spend most of my time in front of the TV watching my favorite cartoon shows. Stories of adventures and discoveries were my cup of tea. I had always wished to live the adventure of my dream, so I insisted on my father to take us on a trip to the forest ,and that is what actually happened. I was so excited. However, the experience turned out to be quite strange.Never to be forgotten. I feel like I didn't Hook the readers well , so can you please correct it to me

[@AhmedElrhazi]

When I was a kid, I used to spend most of my time in front of the TV watching my favorite cartoons. Stories of adventures and discoveries were my cup of tea. I had always wished to live the adventure of my dream, so I insisted on my father to take ME on a trip to the forest ,and that is what actually happened. I was so excited. However, the experience turned out to be quite strange.Never to be forgotten. ----Very nice. I like it!

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"Well, i gave the first copy to the taxi driver as i paid him . With a smile on my face , i wished him Good luck . Few minutes later . I heard a crash in the streets I opened up the window and found that taxi who picked me up had an accident after taking that copy . It looks like the bad luck is still chasing

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We were locked during quarantine as prisoners with some extra privileges. I have not seen my friends throughout that period. So, I had been waiting for our first gathering impatiently. Therefore, I made sure to make that day unforgettable. First, I asked my best friend Oussama if we can spend a weekend at his family's house in the countryside. Once he had permission he ran breathlessly to me. As soon as I heard the good news, I leaped in the air with a whoop of joy. Later, I informed the others. Second, Youness and Alaa were extremely happy as much as I was. Thus, they had started getting ready immediately. As a first step, we set the amount of money we need. Next, we bought the equipment such as the grill and the grill fork, etc.... Last but not least, we set a date for the desired day. Third, the days passed very fast, time to meet has come. I was so excited. I bumped into Youness and Alaa on my way to the place we have set. Youness said:" long time no see, isn't it?" without even thinking I hugged them both at once. In addition, we kept talking some guys talk and waiting for Oussama to pick us in his car. Fourth, later that day we arrived to the country house. it was amazing. In a particular moment, I felt like I was all alone, and leaves rustled in the trees; the trees swayed slightly, making groaning heavy sounds. The twigs crackled, snapped, and sputtered. Frankly speaking, it was the best moment of my life. Due to that, I really appreciated the freedom that its been taken from us in the last few months. Finally, The most satisfactory conclusion that we can come to is that the quarantine made us appreciate the advantages we have. I personly believe that this hard time made me a better person.

[@AhmedElrhazi]

---Good writing bro ! We were locked during quarantine as prisoners with some extra privileges. I have not seen my friends throughout that period. So, I had been waiting for our first gathering impatiently. Therefore, I made sure to make that day unforgettable. First, I asked my best friend Oussama if we COULD spend a weekend at his family house in the countryside. Once he had permission he ran breathlessly to me. As soon as I heard the good news, I leaped in the air with a whoop of joy. Later, I informed other FRIENDS. Second, Youness and Alaa were extremely happy as much as I was. Thus, they started getting ready immediately. As a first step, we set the amount of money we needED. Next, we bought the equipmentS such as the grill and the grill fork, etc.... Last but not least, we set a date for the desired day. The days passed very fast. Time to meet CAME. I was so excited. I bumped into Youness and Alaa on my way to the place we HAD set. Youness said:" long time no see, isn't it?" without even thinking I hugged them both at once. In addition, we kept talking some guys talk and waiting for Oussama to pick us in his car. Later that day we arrived to the country house. It was amazing. In a particular moment, I felt like I was all alone, and leaves rustled in the trees; the trees swayed slightly, making groaning heavy sounds. The twigs crackled, snapped, and sputtered. Frankly speaking, it was the best moment of my life. Due to that, I really appreciated the freedom that WAS taken from us in the last few months. The most satisfactory conclusion that we can come to is that the quarantine made us appreciate the advantages we have. I personally believe that this hard time made me a better person.

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Merhba Marwa// CORRECTION // --Life is very short. Yesterday, I was playing and my little mind did not think of anything but pleasure. Now I have become mature. My dreams are many and this is the time of their realisation.

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Should the conclusion be like that? I mean in the conclusion, you continued the story. My question is, can I finish the story in the Paraggraph 3 insteand of the conclusion. And then in the conclusion, I will write a lesson that I learned or anything else!

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Your suggestion is also acceptable. Go ahead (y)

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بليييز أستاذ صحح ليا شنو كتبت There is nothing more wonderful to see your dream before your eyes.Emotions and feelings can come out unexpectedly.You can even find yourself in a dreep ocean of joy and hapiness.I was sitting with mu sister in home. That one hoor as watching tv, a fabulous thing happened. Surinsingly,while i was watching my favorite serie on tv.Suddenly,my best friend had called me to tell me my super star and my favorite singer is present in the city.I was shoket and started crying with joy. I dropped my phone and grew speechless.I couldn't control myself. After my friend was giving me water to relax.I calm down then I ran fast to wear my clothes.I comb my hair to meet him.I was very joyful and happy as I walk the road to meet my favorite singer. when I got to the place it is. I saw him.I found out it is through his style of dress.and his majestic pause.I call to him head towards to me.my hands are shaking. After I ran to him.I hugged him hard,and so did he. I expressed all my love to him.he thanked me and gave me somthing of his accesoires that he wore, so that I could always remember him.

[@AhmedElrhazi]

There is nothing more wonderful to see THAN your dream before your eyes.Emotions and feelings can come out unexpectedly.You can even find yourself in a dreep ocean of joy and hapiness.I was sitting with mY sister AT home. WHILE WE WERE watching TV, a fabulous thing happened. While I was watching TV, my best friend called to tell me my super star and my favorite singer is present in the city.I was SHOCKET and started crying with joy. I dropped my phone and grew speechless.I couldn't control myself. After my friend HAD GIVEN me water to relax, I CALMED down then I ran fast to wear my clothes.I combED my hair to meet him.I was very joyful and happy as I walkED the road to meet my favorite singer. I got to the place WHERE THE SIGNER WAS. I saw him.I found out it WAS through his style of dress , and his majestic PRESENCE.I callED him. My hands WERE shaking. After I ran to him.I hugged him hard,and so did he. I expressed all my love to him.he thanked me and gave me A STUFF of his accesoires that he wore, so that I could always remember him.

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Guys I swear by God that I have just finished write down this essay while watching this video ,and I didn't found the paper wchih I wrote on it. Omg I feel scary now. I'm gonna keep looking for it. It was on the table I can't found it. Maybe something supernatural is happening. Or maybe just a coincidence. But I start feel that tha bad luck is coming to me😵 starting from now

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Asmae Rajawiya hhh don't worry Asmae بسم الله عليك ههه Don't make us afraid lol let us know when you have found it

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@@AhmedElrhazi it's okey I found it under the desk 😒 khrjatha mni khl3a hhh but it's a wonderful story thank u for sharing it with us.

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But the first sentencs in tge conclusion should be in the body . Why w you put it in the end Thanks sir 💙 Hope you reply

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Which part Khadija? explain more please. (you re most welcome)

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Hi sir, please in the narrative essay did we need to add phrasal verbs, or it will be informal??

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You can use phrasal verbs without any worryig ;)

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شرح ليناl Noun clauses

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Mohamed Ouboulahcene السلام عليكم...راه كاينين دروس clauses F Playlist :university grammar

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Yasmine, I did not really get your point !

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All people passed from situations which can make them fell nervous and stressed, I will never forget my first day when my mother asked me to cooked. I was very nervous and happy in the same time because I had never cooked before هادي مقدمة على تجربة وقعات لينا عفاك واش مزيانة ؟

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----Good All people passed from situations THAT can make them FEEL nervous and stressed. I will never forget my first day when my mother asked me to COOK. I was very nervous and happy AT the same time because I had never cooked before.

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No I am just a student ^^

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واش فكل paragraph كاتنقز السطر و تخلي فراغ جوج مربعات ، ف ال intro و body paragraphs و الconclusion

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تماااما لي ماشي ضروري هو تنقز سطر (إلى فتي السطر كتسهل على الأستاذ التصحيح وتيقرا ورقتك كاملة)

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Types of Noun clauses حيث تيبان قاسح شويااا

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life is strong Welcome man ! Hhh wish you good grades

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Are business communication and oral communication the same ?? And please clear up our confusion about the final exam of oral communication , I've got no intention to attend my class because my professor is so cruel, insisting ,and arrogant . please I rely on you to be my professor ❤️

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No brother, they are not the same. I will clear the confusion soon . I will ask a friend who had Business Com exam last year, then I will return to answer you about the nature of these exams. DON't WORRY. BUUUT you have to attend your class at least until you understand what your professor will want from you on the exam's day

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Ok sir , but I have oral communication , not business .... , Could you make some videos about it

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أستاذ عفاك صحح ليا هاد الايساي وقوليا واش حترمت الشروط المطلوبة باش نكتب ناراتيف إيساي وشكرا I though it was impossible.you alwsays see that is something difficult to reach.after you convince yourself that is just a dream,and it is impossible for you and this person to meet togther.that day,destiny said his words and every thing changed. Surinsingly,while I was walking on the road.Suddenly, my best friend called me and says me to meet.I went to meet him.we were sitting in cafe to drink something.Until I saw the person that I always dreamed of meeting,I shocket.Idon't knwe what am going to do. After my best friend had calmed me down,I leaved him.I got up and ran quickly to the person.I stood for a few seconds, saying nothing,realized what was going on.I looked into his eyes and so is he. After a short chat between me and him.I expressed my love for him,he says nothing.I said that he will go and I will not see him again,but he turned to me with glances filled with admiration.he said :"we can meet again to talk to you about an issue". I agreed,after a while including calls and letters,we met and he expressed his love at first sight.we ended up meeting in one house.someone who always see to dream to me that I meet him.Now I'm with him under one roof.

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