"I taught creative writing and two stories stood out to me" Creepypasta

[@superwholock1485]

At about 12:25 the tension was high, right after the last word of Kate's story. right as I was at the height of anticipation....a Chili's commercial came on. I jumped and almost shit myself

[@Lamenters1stCompanyCpt]

HI! WELCOME TO CHILI'S!!!!

[@monkeyluvr]

Oh my god you made my dayXD

[@superwholock1485]

+Sequoia Ranger go on. laugh at my pain 😄

[@nyx9514]

I got a commercial about that time too, and might have said "what the actual fuck' rather loudly because creepy to happy music. and I love your comment

[@superwholock1485]

+Trista Evenson Haha, it didn't help that my closet was just ever so slightly open at the time. and thank you 😄

[@andreabrennan9719]

"What inspired you to write this" I automatically thought "The due date" 😂😂

[@sargentwill570]

Same

[@elizabethweigle6146]

Lmfaoooooooo

[@jesusarellanes8036]

@@elizabethweigle6146 I miss ycall pooping Umu mmmm our

[@justinleach1634]

"This coffee tastes like shit."

[@DavidGoli1400]

This is my theory. The original person Kate told about 89.1 was Abby. It worked and Abby disappeared. Kate was torn about. She wanted to know if it was truly her fault so she told Jake. This time, she watched. She saw the figure creeping out of the closet and made the boy stop. It was real. She was responsible for the REAL Abby's disappearance. She visited Abby's room for any sign at all that it wasn't her fault. She found none. It was her fault and she knew it.

[@aditidave9865]

dude! wow :D

[@morganc8666]

justin palmer oh shit

[@mznxjsk4955]

justin palmer gad dayum it's fucking hot in ma room now

[@olpdragon]

I am looking in the comments for comments just like this. Thank you! It fits pretty well. I am very glad the story itself was very open ended though.

[@TheCatloverCG]

why did she smile at the teacher all the time? I love how u told us ur theory that makes full sense im just curious if u could think of an answer please thanks

[@pocky595]

now let´s all agree to never be creative again

[@khasanbekmalzagov6240]

Nobi what's your favorite idea? Mine is being creative.

[@maxine9mp]

Oh god

[@elisamaowo7689]

DHMIS refrences anyone?

[@samguyer2787]

Smol Chiald ...That was the whole point.

[@elisamaowo7689]

I can see that.

[@CreepsMcPasta]

I've been wanting to do this story for months now, and finally had some inspiration for telling the story a bit with visuals. Hope you all love this story as much as I do!

[@UNBAN_LEAFY]

+CreepsMcPasta l luv u!!!!!

[@splatoonsniper]

hi

[@SilentKiller171]

I love your content, your stores are awesome.

[@titolino73]

isn't easy to get it!

[@journeytojesus]

+CreepsMcPasta an idea for another video is "Top Horrifying parasites and they're effects" or something like that :P Keep on Keepin' on creeps.

[@miguelsosa6107]

alternate title: two classmate work together to troll teacher

[@EditEmpowerment]

I thought of this too 😂

[@sunnyflower9011]

That's more likely 🤣

[@yolandaponkers1581]

Why is a scary story 1,000,000,000 times scarier when read by a British person? I don't know. It simply is.

[@tl566]

He's not British. He's Australian.

[@knollie199]

+SapphireDeathStrike in his about section it says ''KZbin Horror with a British twist''

[@TeenyTika]

+SapphireDeathStrike that accent is not Australian. (From an Aussie)

[@tl566]

+TeenyTika My bad

[@xavierparis2789]

+Matt C Britian is the scariest place on earth, Doncha Know?

[@ryandugan5332]

"I taught creative writing and two stories stood out to me" These names just get weirder and weirder. Like, the next one will probably be "I had to grade 100 kids' essays by tomorrow morning at 8am or my teaching license will be taken away"

[@hashbrown4599]

Ryan Dugan seems legit

[@William.Shakespeare]

did this dude just give up on his channel with that loop of nothing like other ytubers?

[@ErieRosewood]

The way you switched between tenses in that sentence was scary enough for me.

[@christopherjoseph6232]

"and it will drag you into the closet" my thinking; "no, no, no, spent years hiding in the closet and I'm not going back into it"

[@user-bh6yj7df9r]

Christopher Joseph ITS OKAY TO BE GAY LETS REJOICE WITH THE BOYS IN THE GAY WAYYYYYYY

[@alyssafourman9589]

-Everest- ;-; im trash whut. O_o

[@rat8186]

SCREEEEE R E L A T A B L E-

[@alligator5889]

Christopher Joseph *S A M E E E*

[@alligator5889]

Enemy Of The Norm Why do homophobes have to hate on EVERYTHING gay?

[@Yogaji]

>"I taught creative writing-" Wow, a creepypasta that's already too scary for me to listen to, and I haven't even started it yet!

[@reachfanatic1234]

the real horror is the paper work and scheduling

[@nimu-chan3888]

+No_One Important I had a good feeling this will be a good piece of fiction, and it was! I was really careful listening to it and it was really interesting and scary! xD

[@xskaterdudemusic4182]

+Joseph Camacho ikr

[@ethanfrasier7495]

Is green a creative colour?

[@rateme5650]

+Ethan Frasier yes

[@sarahangellis8291]

Am I the only one who feels CreepsMcPasta would make a perfect creative writing teacher irl?

[@drawindragons8172]

nope! i think it would be cool

[@sebi7118]

Lmao Mom: what are you doing Me: listening to creepy pastas Mom: why tho Me: because I’m boored Mom: *jump scares me 5 minutes later*

[@kailegordon6144]

Sounds like something I’d do

[@RealGotier]

Same, Just 5 minutes ago

[@aricm5973]

REAL LMAO

[@babbyslugger]

That’s why I listen with AirPods/headphones surprisingly it makes it a better experience

[@rileycoleman2468]

Mitzi * lol sameeee

[@kalt7990]

If you ask me Kate and Jake got screwed the teacher never even mentioned them getting an A+ for scaring him so badly that he went completely insane. Them poor chil'ren.

[@mariahganaway8739]

What?!! They made a story about a missing girl and the teacher screw them because he didn't say they got an A+.

[@babyblue704]

@@mariahganaway8739 correct

[@jackdurden466]

They simply did exactly what they were told to do. He asked them to scare him. Apparently they did. Deserves an A+ if you ask me. And even extra credit, for truly freaking him out.

[@smallworldsgurls]

as my chemical romance once said " teenagers scare the living shit out of me"

[@sunnymoon27]

22:45 "And everything changed."When the fire nation attacked...*dies of laughter*

[@___KIT__]

My name is Kate....and I dated a guy named Jake my sophomore year....we both loved horror and creative writing. We fell out fall of sophomore year because of a bad date/busyness. This story hit much too close to home for me, too too toooooo creepy.

[@hayliamberz6060]

my brothers name is Jake....

[@jmvt3]

That's the law of big numbers

[@someone9814]

0-0

[@m3dicvted]

oh my god lol

[@temporaltomato3021]

...Are you from the US Kate? If so, what state? I'm not "Jake" lol but I think I might know you. Tim from Cali sound familiar?

[@WarCollider]

Huh, the story's kind of ridiculous when you think about it. "I decided to have them come up with stories to try and scare me." "Oh crap these two kids wrote some unnerving stories! This is a big deal despite them doing exactly what I asked them to do in the first place!"

[@damianbouras]

Yeah the guy just had a psychotic break

[@MrFusion]

I mean that's kinda the point

[@undeadbychoice3096]

I tried this, bored. 89.1: Country Station. Yep, there is a presence. Bad music.

[@UnfitNinjuh]

Mine is a classical music station. I don't know whether to be scared or laugh hysterically

[@undeadbychoice3096]

+Unfit Ninja Do both. laugh then pass out.

[@mikelcook4028]

+Unfit Ninja It's the same for me, the other night my great grandma was picking me up, and as I was walking behind her car, I saw 89.1 on the radio and started freaking out

[@thepixelpyro6115]

Here, buy some music taste.

[@xHOTxCHOCOxFUDGEx]

+Undead By Choice ...I just hear static...and a faint female voice...oh...never mind...they're talking about Donald Trump... :3

[@SuperArcher2345]

i think this inspired me to write my own urban legend

[@RoroTheDeer]

I was only joking! It was just a prank, bro!

[@lub7013]

+NeedSkillNow fuck you dude

[@lub7013]

+NeedSkillNow IT'S JUST A PRANK

[@STkOfficeDucktape]

PRANK ON KZbin (GONE WRONG)

[@lub7013]

raping people social experiment (gone sexual)

[@STkOfficeDucktape]

(POLICE CALLED)

[@corruptingvirus3371]

this story was phenomenal, really makes me want to get back into writing

[@mscoraline1998]

Corrupting Virus Same.

[@BitterSweetSilence]

If only I was better at writing....

[@Abby-xoxo2005]

When you haven't heard a creepypasta in ages... Ahh feels good!

[@STUNTSTHEREALONE]

Lmao best comment

[@nkg___5172]

I took creative writing as an elective, I wrote stroies that creeped out my teacher and she told me to stop

[@moldy2285]

i love writing creepy stories but i dont have any ideas, can you give me some.

[@lethfuil]

r/thathappened ...

[@heartbust4624]

Probably just wrote really edgy garbage and she was sick of seeing it

[@James--Parker]

Funnily enough 89.1 is the only radio station I ever listen to....Though it isn't static for me, it's NPR.

[@starrynights527]

What's NPR?

[@echo3788]

StarGalaxy Fluff a radio station. Sorry lol

[@Jdoggdavis]

Sometimes fall asleep listening to these at night and KZbin has its whole autoplay thing and I woke up last night at 2 am to "Open your eyes!" scared the shit out of me haha

[@IndieHaj]

I fall asleep to these things too...the other night i woke up to "I WANNA GO HOME!!" Freaky. LOL.

[@danibernabei-grassi4020]

SMALL TOWN IN CENTRAL WISCONSIN?! I"M IN A SMALL TOWN IN CENTRAL WISCONSIN!!!!!!!! :D :D :D

[@teresascoutify]

I'm in a small town of Ohio lol surrounded by corn and farm animals

[@teresascoutify]

well shit haha

[@sarahglover1262]

You want real horror? Everything happens to my little town.

[@sarahglover1262]

+Adam ET more like a dystopia wasteland where not even the water is safe to drink

[@aliciarae173]

+Dani Bernabei-grassi I live in a small town in Wi... Near the Mary Booth estate. Did you know that WI has the most born and breed serial killers per capita than any other state?

[@nickh7776]

I would love a continuation to this.

[@sorrowfulsatchel679]

I read this on tumblr and loved it, and creep's voice is like dipping 14 karat gold in molten 24 karat gold.

[@jackt5879]

Gimme GOLD

[@Vile_Oreo]

Story within a story... Storyception...

[@astronart1295]

President Waldo *inserts Inception Theme Song*

[@GenreChowderStudios]

This story simultaneously set my imagination on fire and gave me chills. Just like a creepypasta should. However, even though the spooks were on point, I'm actually quite impressed by how well the author was able to give both of the papers such distinctly different styles. That is a lot harder than it seems.

[@antiweeb722]

I have a theory. Kate and Jake had somehow kidnapped Abby. 89.1 is a station that they broadcasted. Abby is chained to a wall (hence the chain sounds) and music playing on repeat. The screams are Abby's screams.

[@h.hholmes.492]

Dammn

[@evannotoven]

jake....from statefarm

[@jessicaconner1242]

Lol loved the comment funny

[@yourmomsgay-joe1825]

Evan_Min every-time I talk to a person named Jake I say that

[@jengraywj]

Shut up.

[@deadserpent8717]

Khakis???

[@YukkiYoru]

* doesn't have a closet or wardrobe * thank feck ☺️… Still paranoid though…

[@epicmemehaha]

Lol who has a radio anymore

[@Jubawub]

+Sirfluffybutt all smartphones can be used as radios, as they have FM capabilities. So basically everyone has one

[@xHOTxCHOCOxFUDGEx]

+Sirfluffybutt I actually do have a radio in my room... :3

[@xHOTxCHOCOxFUDGEx]

+Jubawub ...I don't have a smartphone... :(

[@mscoraline1998]

Felix Pernocta I have two closets...

[@ChannelGummyBear]

CREATIVE WRITING PRANK (GONE WRONG) (GONE SEXUAL)

[@sashatoao8421]

So wait, Creeps is into Steven Universe?!?!? That's the best thing I've heard today!

[@pinkley_9144]

Sasha Toao I legit though you were going to say Steven Tyler.

[@AshzieWasTaken]

Wait he is?! How do you know?

[@Ojo10]

For some reason I imagined Jake and Kate as being in 7th grade. Idk it's creepier for me that way I guess.

[@zinck2245]

Ojo Momoko same

[@T33444]

Ojo Momoko same here.

[@gabbytouchstone8604]

I pictured them as people who would be my best friends

[@tristanwynne6397]

,•-•, ummm is it weird that I'm in 7th grade and imagined the same thing

[@omarkhan838]

I imagined them as sophomore university students until creeps said they were 15

[@honeydew6980]

How do i fall asleep to your stories? 😂 i guess its your beautiful voice. 😊

[@paradoxoracle9685]

My lights flickered while he was reading the part about getting dragged away. I almost cried.

[@AnaxErik4ever]

As an English major, I took a creative writing class, but we were never given prompts like this. Something tells me that Jake and Kate may have been involved more deeply than their stories let on.

[@natem1579]

I started watching this video with my lights off... it only took me 5 minutes to run to my switch and turn it back off lol

[@natem1579]

on* woops

[@elitegamer2564]

same xD

[@georgekal9726]

+Nathan McNelis so what did the room get darker?

[@natem1579]

+george kal I corrected it. check my replies

[@georgekal9726]

+Nathan McNelis i know its just a joke bro calm down dont kill me

[@varence7007]

im trying to abstain from masturbating. this is a good alternative

[@bangchansbabygay4447]

Coriolis Effect that's....that's nice....

[@kolo5836]

i always end up accidently masturbating when watching anything by myself to do with horror.

[@bangchansbabygay4447]

ok then literally no one needed to know that....

[@kolo5836]

Ok whatever you say +Sophia Biersack by the way you sound very young

[@bangchansbabygay4447]

ok then wow, I never new 17 was fucking young. That is not "very young", You need to re-check the definition of "very young".

[@genericname6817]

good story, but nobody named Jake is ever quiet.

[@TheVolcanicShadow]

This thing need a sequel

[@alexandriav3956]

I love going back and listening his older content. This video was uploaded 8 years ago at the time I’m writing this and you can tell just how much he’s improved as a narrator! His voice is hauntingly lovely.

[@nicholasmorgan7609]

I didn't feel it with Kate's story. I think the teacher is giving her a bit too much credit

[@zjlz1347]

+Kate M It was shit

[@gerardmourits8709]

+Professional Fish and Herps well as long and stupid as your comment was… at least it had a point or rather period

[@tzaharasykes]

+Nicholas Morgan Yeah Kate's story didn't get to me at all the way Jake's did. Kate's story was kind of boring for me.

[@xTwilightWolvesx]

+Professional Fish and Herps Well, my dick is longer than your comment ( ͡° ͜ʖ ͡°)

[@user-bh6yj7df9r]

Nicholas Morgan ARE YOU FEELING IT NOW MR KRABS

[@samscratch4867]

I love the way you read these storys. Its like it was you who went through all these stories.

[@gabbamgabbam6852]

he has a great storytelling voice and I love it overall

[@melissawhite1560]

just starting watching these a couple of weeks ago and I've loved all the stories

[@Frogbear]

This story was great on so many levels.

[@geeidunno6592]

This was great! Loved the added visuals. Been listening to all your narrations while I'm driving or sitting in my car

[@HeyKevinYT]

89.1 k-love?

[@senkimone2018]

the back round music scares the shit out of me. well made keep up the good work dude

[@MrScaryPasta]

MCP is getting married!! Hooray!! Hope you go to his wedding!

[@reachfanatic1234]

this for real cause I'm genuinely excited for that shit cause weddings are awesome...they always have the best cupcakes

[@MrScaryPasta]

+Joseph Camacho Yes. It's real. MCP is marrying CreepyPastaRainbow!!

[@sethchristian4002]

+Mr.ScaryPasta 0_0

[@MrScaryPasta]

+Seth Christian You ok dude?

[@sethchristian4002]

Mr.ScaryPasta Is he really?

[@dylanisrayne]

I love listening to you read the creepy pastas, I read a lot myself and now that I've seen so many of your videos it's almost always in your voice when I read them. I listen to them mostly at night, they don't really scare me but they're awesome to listen to =)

[@CrackWizard]

this is not a bad story at all

[@LunaPrincessNinjato]

amazing! I was expecting a creepy build up and end but this became a new thype of story, I did not see this outcome coming, Love it!

[@bigman4644]

"my names jake...." "My names abby" no one gives a shit those are common names

[@gingersnap4922]

My name is Adia that's not a common name. I put the "A" in "Kaykay but most but mostly A"

[@blood2730]

Kaykay,but mostly A XD what

[@blood2730]

i didnt put that gay ass face

[@jacobsy9287]

blood

[@dextresen]

my name jeff

[@gamzeemakara9712]

I love the imagery and the fact that the author put in a little legend in there. it makes this story 10x better

[@sereneillusions5812]

These thumbnails keep me up at night ;-;

[@defaultuserjayx6304]

When Lipton interrupts the story and I think for some reason that the story became cheerful... Story of my life.

[@burner2670]

"they were only sophomores" wym, I remember kids in elementary school who could write a damn good story.

[@Ben_Bourrie]

This story is amazing! One of the best non-gaming creepypastas I heard in a while, the old lore, the characters, even the aftermath, it's all there and it's all amazing, thanks a ton for doing this story!

[@averagejojolionenjoyer4250]

"I wanted to know more, so I decided to try the game myself." Byakuya Togami II

[@naftaliten7989]

Is it good to watch?

[@palesmoke2179]

Super Awesome Amazing Spectacular Dude DANGANRONPA

[@paigecoressel8585]

ahhhh I keep listening to stories without any kind of closure and its killing me!

[@madokatbh]

how it feels to chew five gum

[@Matt-hm2lt]

Love this one. So underated.

[@whippersnapper1803]

Laying in my bed listening to this in the dark, with the door closed. Abby started explaining the legend of the radio station and as soon as I heard "...with the closet slightly open..." I used the light of my phone and looked at the closet across my room, to find it slightly cracked open. I paused the video, sat up and said, "uhh uh". Getting up, turning on the light, and closing the closet door before I turned back off the light and laying back down to return to listing to the story.

[@kailegordon6144]

I don’t risk watching any of these vids in the dark to scared something will steal my soul

[@takumifujiwara1961]

I've listened to creepypasta for years and never been scared once. I turned my light on and opened my closet after this one.

[@pazuzu810]

"it seemed real, dipped in reality like it was something that really happened to him" really driving the point home, bucko

[@Jkeb19]

Getting closer and closer to that 1 million, keep up the good work I've been here since 250k

[@arifaith8588]

The radio station for 89.1 where I live is a Christian station.

[@xTwilightWolvesx]

+Ari Logsdon How ironic, lol.

[@mscoraline1998]

Ari Faith That is horrifying

[@mollyhunkus9310]

AWESOME! AWESOME AWESOME AWESOME! It gave me chills! My gosh His voice makes these stories so much better! :D

[@keddakedda7939]

I've only one question to ask why did they kick the poor teacher out for just being worried over a missing girl he had the rights he wasn't doing anything evil

[@MatimoreAgain]

Kedda kedda They didn't kick him out per say. They shunned him and he ended up looking like the loony so he just left.

[@lethfuil]

DV 8 True. But still, I too think, that it's a bit questionable. Just think about, how people react, if a teacher ignores some possible warning signs, and something bad happens. They shun him. And if he doesn't ignore it, but nothing bad turnes up, they shun him. Well, that's great....

[@KingDennisJensen]

I love your voice and I love your channel. Every time I go to sleep, I listen to one of your broadcasts...thank you.

[@bunnybtv]

when he said with a closet slighty open MINE WAS SLIGHTY OPEN SO I JUMPED UP TO CLOSE IT XD

[@deeeeekun]

Colleague acting as a friend but was secretly annoyed that a newbie teacher got the post he had always wanted. He saw an opportunity to make the newbie teacher look bad to the administration and planted a seed of paranoia. He never imagined it would work this perfectly.

[@frobo2501]

"Grandma Rosie"... "I'M GRANNY NORMA I'M OLD AND I'VE GOT GRAY HAIR"

[@deathbyme1695]

Frobo bless

[@Azzaroth]

Loving it so far, as usual your voice is perfect Creeps.

[@brycegeorge8114]

dang it i want to know which is the case now. I WANT ANOTHER PART!!!!!!!

[@chrism6605]

This is such a great idea for a story and leaves so many unanswered questions... I love it 👏🏻👏🏻

[@kirby4041994]

have my babies Creeps

[@salemvgaming9167]

this was a good one, there's always some creepypastas that stick out from the rest. thoroughly enjoyable. Thank you as always Creeps.

[@mattinho5612]

Creeps, how do you sleep ar night?

[@villenilsson7182]

Sleep is for the week

[@MatTheSoundless]

Sleeping is overrated, staying up hoping that spirits, demons, and killers don't come and kill you is much more pleasing.

[@weepingwillowtree8103]

Pure talent.

[@thedarkmannequinajmh9712]

He stays up drinking baby tears and his fans tears SLEEP IS FOR THE WEAk

[@asad9414]

+Ville Nilson got that right bra, I'm watching at three am with lights turned off #Swag

[@IAmNessie]

hello I just wanted to say you are my favorite youtuber because you scare me so much but I love it if you need any scary stories I have some that I can tell that happened to me in real life and I would like you to show it 😄👍 keep posting and stay awesome!

[@gaybrahamlinkedin7923]

"It kept me awake at night." You ship it, don't you Mr. P?

[@oliverthecat486]

woo i actually got the chills listening to this story.. good job narrating 👏🏻

[@kovacsreka8715]

me: what are you doing? friend: listening to the woices in the static me: *freaks out, sends this video* friend: I have never seen it before The creepiest is that she never jokes with such things and that she's the creepy girl in class who lives between two abandened cemeterys

[@goblinchunks7585]

GOSH YOU ARE SO GOOD AT NARRATING STORIES!!!!!!

[@iniguezleo707]

why the long titles?

[@CreepsMcPasta]

+Leonardo Iniguez I actually had to shorten it! It's common on Reddit Nosleep to put a descriptive title, but I totally understand it doesn't sometimes translate well on KZbin. :)

[@GirlySmile7]

+CreepsMcPasta I like all of your narrations, I have been listening to someone of your friends narrations as well but they do not satisfy me as you do. You're the best one for me! :3 I go to sleep reviewing the old videos you've done.

[@angei7899]

Because, Brendon Urie writes them.

[@lhaegreenleaf]

+AmazingKilljoyisnotonfire ButSepticAndSupernatural did Patrick stump write your username?

[@angei7899]

Lhaeweth Greenleaf ...... Possibly. Touché.

[@Albeit_Jordan]

0:24 You can tell this story is fake because no sophomore writing assignment would have a minimum of a hundred words.

[@maddie-td2bp]

yeah but why wasn't it just called Channel 89.1 instead of that long ass title

[@coffee9172]

o.o I wasn't expecting Much from this CP. My mind was blown.

[@flip2shoot567]

Your thumbnails are so disturbing

[@vibekiller3024]

Your profile pic is majestic.

[@flip2shoot567]

Owen Scattergood :)

[@nicolecalderon6267]

+Owen Scattergood so is yours.

[@flip2shoot567]

Nicole Calderon :3

[@annabellefrost9264]

booty :3

[@SkywardSister]

The word choice is perfect. Saying after finding out the story was complete fiction when talking to the authorities, the teacher says he felt "sorry for *dragging the kids into this mess*." I find it so ironic when compared to what would happen with 89.1 in their stories.

[@14guitarlover]

22:47 “ when the fire nation attacked”

[@thedonald011]

BRO that sound at 3:14 scared the crap out of me!!! I swear I checked under my bed thinking someone was hiding under there (after debating if I should for a good 2 minutes :))

[@szechuansauce6799]

I was working on my art when i looked up at the screen, JESUS CHRIST ALASKA

[@justinholt7059]

Love to hear a new idea lately I've been able to predict an outcome of every creepy pasta I've listened too or read. This one kept me on my seat thank you for introducing me too it :D

[@ethana2774]

"I don't like we're this Is going" *STAHP*

[@SillymewCraft]

Ah. beautiful ~ I love all the stories you tell :3 and I love your channel! every creepypasta you've told always catches my interest... and it's always worth listening!