"On a Hill" Creepypasta

[@ghastlytales]

Thank you so much for reading my story, Creeps. On a Hill is very long, so I really appreciate the time you must have had to put into this one. Your reading was fantastic, and thank you to all of those who've left kind comments about my writing, it makes it all worthwhile :) ~ Mike

[@GorpaDorpOrp]

Keep up the great work!!

[@CreepsMcPasta]

Thanks for writing such an amazing tale. Something both engaging to the audience and a challenge to narrators!

[@FriendlySpider1821]

This was truly another amazing tale. I loved reading the story so much when it came out. Then was even more pleased when I seen that Creeps took the time and effort to do a reading for this one with the length of it. Keep up the amazing work. Can't wait to read the next one you come up with.

[@mommatyler9763]

Thanks for writing the story

[@EmperorHoodieRai]

This was a amazing story! Thank you for writing it! :D

[@CreepsMcPasta]

Sorry this is a day late guys! But as you can see from the length you can probably understand why. XD If you make it to the end, treat yourself to a cookie and tell me what you thought of it!

[@ShivaElenaAnn]

I know I'm not the only who nearly died of happiness whenever I saw how long this was, because that would be impossible considering how many people we have on Earth but, Creeps, you have no idea how much I appreciate and love you for this ^_^!!!!!! I always feel like 5 minute pastas are too short but I'm always excited about long pastas

[@sadiestevenson3572]

I don't mind the length, as long as I still get to hear your amazing voice!

[@MrSniperAssassin1]

you earned yourself a like :)

[@EmixsalEmixii]

Gratz on 300 videos.

[@nightwatch5313]

Yeah, it's all right cause you still are doing good!

[@MrCreepyPasta]

Man this is a great tale

[@TheCringeinator2026]

What was your first creepypasta ever

[@lewiitoons4227]

Just go to the first video

[@MaZ2718]

O)_(O

[@cgtoche]

Lewis Hodgson What do you mean by "the first video"?

[@christianrosier5454]

I don't get it...I really want to get it...

[@rahulganesh468]

I love how John went to the hill to prove the villagers wrong, and the journalist went to the hill to prove John wrong lol

[@rahulganesh468]

@LN lmao fax

[@katelynthewhitewerewolf6376]

​@@rahulganesh468 The burning pinecones and woods fits the story perfectly.

[@stopmotiondaryl1767]

I remember listening to this in 7th grade in my creepypasta phase. This will ALWAYS stand out as the best creepypasta I'll ever read/listen to. Great story with an exceptional narrator!

[@maleexile9053]

Same here except 8th grade for me

[@ooobanana257]

Hold up This stuff is a phase I've been listening to this stuff for years, and I don't want it to end. (Yea, I know im 3 years late on this)

[@tonithetiger6226]

@@ooobanana257youll come back to it if you stop

[@ooobanana257]

@@tonithetiger6226 I still haven't stopped listening to it But thank you for the reminder :]

[@geniustennisacademy5182]

Saaaaame!!

[@shadowstar7388]

I don't often give this rating, but I'll go ahead and say 10/10. Articulate language, cultural accuracy, vivid imagination, perfect pacing, believable and sympathetic characters, always something to keep you interested, the scare factor, lack of clichés, original idea, deep and interesting lore, I could go on. It isn't my favourite pasta, but it's probably one of the highest quality. All in all a great story.

[@MadAnime963]

i feel like i should be paying for this story, its so good. Like I would buy this as a short book. it even feels like a movie. hell, it would probably make a fantastic movie. is this really a creepypasta? the quality is so high. With all the crap thats on there, its surreal to think this was on there as well. Fantastic story. And Creeps, fantastic reading of it. you always do well, and really know how to convey voices and speak clearly. But you dont oversaturate it. I usually cant listen to people tell stories, because they try too hard to get into it, be overdramatic, ect. But you're way of speaking is very natural, and its easy to get into the story and not distracted by your voice. 10/10 on story and presentation!

[@brecheese6532]

It’s the length of a movie...

[@Arya-su3jv]

I think it should be a movie

[@Arya-su3jv]

@OOF ur memes It would make a better movie than some of the rubbish that's in horror movies now. Where the stories are so predictable and they aren't original with way to much gore and no interesting storyline

[@mrzabloo]

@OOF ur memes dude this person right here. That im replying to. Is a man or woman after my own heart. Also butcherface, the borrascas even tho there books. Super underated.

[@katelynthewhitewerewolf6376]

@OOF ur memes We totally need Creepypasta Characters getting their own movies but animated especially 2D Animated live action wouldn't do The Creepypasta Characters Jeff Smile Jane Laughing Jack Ben Sally and their friends justice.

[@ravenvix8326]

Absolutely one of the best creepypastas in existence. It's refreshing to both listen to a story that is well written, and also isn't a spinoff or stupid cliche plot, but a brilliant original concept. I highly recommend you dedicate a full two hour chunk to just getting this story over with. I've been dragging my feet for a couple of months on whether I really wanted to dedicate the time to it (as once I start listening, I can't stop until I'm done), but now that I've listened to it, I can absolutely say that this is one of the only 1+ hour creepypastas worth your time, with Penpal and 1999 being the only others that come to mind. Listen to it. Trust me. You won't regret it.

[@shockshplock3480]

RavenVix agreed.

[@johnnyleechapman2010]

Borrasca is also good

[@NickWright]

THIS IS LONG - BUT - VERY WELL WORTH IF YOU GET A CHANCE TO LISTEN.... There are plenty of average-boring creepypastas out there and a handful of great ones.. THIS is a GREAT one.. Listen to it at night, in bed lol.. It's long but designate it to one of those insomnia stricken nights we all run into once in a while! You'll love it.

[@sethwallace7666]

Yep, I've had to break it into 20 minute segments over a period of a few days.... I just don't have time to sit down and listen to a story for 2 hours, lol...

[@zuella4682]

Nick Wright right now it's 2 am and I can't sleep, couldn't hurt to have a listen.

[@dumbfoundedkiryu9468]

Seth Wallace its called using it as background noise you dolt

[@patcast8506]

love you man

[@loganlehman8508]

Woah Nick Wright likes creepypasta?

[@MKfan888]

Why didn't someone use Google Earth to see what was over the hill?

[@grandheresiarchdave3262]

Lel

[@adelecatstorm207]

Does he know the exact postcode and where to go from the posedode, I can't say I wasn't thinking the same thing though XD

[@FacaltyRevolutionStudios]

MKfan888 xD

[@juderiverolhughes7900]

Why didn't they just throw a child on a string over the hill and then pull them back?

[@adelecatstorm207]

Janine Hosë because they were stoopid

[@sonicrulez0830]

Just, JUST finished Penpal, now I'm doing this!

[@ManMythLegend123]

Precisely

[@coreybeavers8762]

+Undeniably Matt lol same. Have your feels recovered from Penpal yet?

[@hythsmskater]

+Undeniably Matt I am doin it the other way around

[@hythsmskater]

+SkATAN well penpal fucking sucked compared to this o.O

[@jamesmol3634]

+SkATAN pen pal is freaking amazing

[@erikill100]

My problem with these long ones is that i start sleeping while listening them...

[@bettymitchell2347]

ive had that happen to me my teacher mde me wach a 3 hour video and i kep falling asleep so he took my chair away but i still fell aslep

[@stvltiloqvent]

Betty Mitchell that's funny 'cause i know a person who does that as well, falling asleep standing, but that person's actually my teacher.

[@bettymitchell2347]

huggingcacti lol

[@dumbfoundedkiryu9468]

THEN USE THEM AS BACKGROUND NOISE WHEN DOING OTHER THINGS. jfc you 14yr olds arent that bright.

[@0404chrisjz]

Billy The Anti-Bully nope you just dont have a life or friends

[@pandap.]

This would be a really nice movie btw

[@valkrieknights]

It's been ages since I've heard this one. I don't remember when I started listening to you, but it's been a great time so far. Thank you for all the wonderful stories and all the help falling asleep. It's wild to think that a man I've never met and may never meet has had such a profound impact on my life. It's so much harder to fall asleep without one of your narrations.

[@oren1305]

I love this story; excellently crafted, and well narrated. The music was quite fitting, particularly the piece in the end. Well done Creeps, and thank you Mike W.

[@oren1305]

***** Definitely.

[@noelienoelie8425]

***** the CP community? What an unfortunate name...:D

[@labourgeoiscamaraderie5354]

noelie noelie Oo, takes one to know one eh? ;D Nudge nudge wink wink. Super secret annunaki, illuminati planet x revealing handshake.

[@TheOneRebornElyrize]

I like the longer ones.. Gives more depth to the whole story and lets your imagination run more rampant. ^^

[@cgtoche]

Exactly, I very much agree. I usually look for 20 min + vids, and this one was a nice surprise :)

[@chasehunter4435]

So do I! Guess a lot of us Creepypasta fans love long ones better than short ones.

[@budosguzu3753]

@@chasehunter4435 and not only creepypasta fans...if you know what i mean

[@johnnyleechapman9076]

No pun intended

[@epion660]

1:09:36 (not entirely sure of the time) My first thought was the creature yelling "YOU TALKIN SHIT 'BOUT MY HILL!?"

[@nisem7963]

Oh my god. 😂😂😂

[@kellymelton5750]

*shakes fist* got-damnit. get off my lawn!!!!! lmao

[@pistolpete667]

"you couldn't let a man sit for five minutes on your precious piece of shit hill, fine!" Michael Douglas, Falling Down

[@bomberboomify]

As I have matured as a CreepyPasta listener and writer (I am now at the point where I can fall asleep not only listening to Jeff the Killer, but while looking at his face). I have found myself becoming more and more disappointed with not only the new style of Pastas and their horror-story-esque feeling that ironically removes all suspension of disbelief and thus makes them lose their scare value, but also with the quality of Pastas that I once found entertaining based either on writing errors or flaws in content. As such, I am always pleased when I find one that both is well written and has the feel of a classic pasta that is just believable yet vague enough to seem plausible (and thus terrifying). This Pasta accomplished both of those and blew me away. I applaud the author for their creativity and skill, and you for having the tenacity to read this entire thing. It's stories like this and No End House that got me hooked on Creepyasta years ago, and keep me coming back for more, so thank you.

[@maureenjossick429]

Same here! As a person who LOVES to listen to stories, or read them, I’ve written a lot when I was younger, but haven’t tried recently. But you’re right, the “new” content, is all how should I put this?? “Fake” in away? You’ve got new channels, with AI voices that sound horrible and can’t pronounce many words correctly, no emotion, no nothing within the reading of the story, they seem like they are all A.I stories, no one put any thought into them. There’s this one channel, that literally every single story follows the same exact “structure”, always “I’m so n so,(add whatever name) and I’ve been living in a cabin in the woods…blah blah the man always has a dog or something, there’s always some big monster to battle, but by the stroke of luck every single time-the bad guy killed, good guy leaves the cabin, goes and lives back in the city. Literally, that’s the story outline for every. Single. One. It might have been channel 13 bodies, or gore creatures, but I’m pretty sure that it’s 13 bodies. No details that make the stories interesting, they’re lack luster and predictable at best. We need to keep creepy pasta narrations OUT of A.I’s hands, it’s ruining a great genre. The art and thumbnail nails, or sound design/effects are great- but not storytelling. If you’d like to listen to another great narrator who loves his fans, creates his own music for his channel/stories, works with other creepy pasta voicers- the channel name is Dark Somnium. He’s got a mixture of horror, gore, unexplained, call from the void stories, he’s great with his skills, and very humble dude. Been with that channel since its followers were in the 100’s. Now, he’s getting the recognition he deserves, just like this man!! Love Mr. Creepy pasta!!

[@Recreationaltrespasser]

Two. Fucking. Hours. Long. I'm going in. Get the tortilla chips.

[@Recreationaltrespasser]

Made it to 59:14. Fuck it!

[@BestChesskid14]

Noah Person this one is a good one and im only 49 mins in

[@sethwilson7993]

Noah Person I got the doritos

[@ixcatls]

Noah Person I've listened through the entire thing. Three times. It's pretty good overall!

[@FAMOUS4EVER3000]

Noah Person I'm at 1:38:31 (:

[@michaelsonlinediary2525]

writing for a less than reputable company? you mean BuzzFeed?

[@johnnybensonitis7853]

Damn buses always running late... You just can't trust them to ever be on time! Oh well, I'm sure his bus arrived just after he finished recounting this blood-curdling tale. If he thinks that nonsense about being unable to leave then I guess I'll just have to go and take some pictures on that hill to prove there's nothing to worry over!

[@truthdealer9]

last time online, four years ago🤣

[@xyerzen3024]

Legend never seen again lmao

[@jackthesmack2657]

Dont do it man, for there's an old saying around here "best leave alone". You'd be wise to listen it...

[@M0oranshi]

I love long stories. I had a bunch of stuff to do today, but I simply paused when I needed to leave, the story in the back of my head, returned to eagerly listen more, left again, and so on. People don't read a book in one go usually either, you put it down sometimes only to pick it back up later after you processed it a bit. I loved it!

[@zaclovesschool2273]

i litterally cant whatch any creepy pastas in anyone elses voice!

[@MediocreSix]

Me neither.

[@Brando12345100]

Not even the other creepy pasta dude that always comments on here and has tons of subs

[@MutatedPizzaBoi]

So true.

[@MrNoerah]

brandon roussain mrcreepypasta?

[@carifoo2001]

***** mrcreepypasta is awesome. I pretty much only listen to him and this guy. They're both awesome :3

[@evictionnotice1313]

Is it just me or does anyone else think that when you hear stuff like this you'd be like,"Haunted hill where multiple people go missing? You got it locals won't go anywhere near there because I'm not stupid or suicidal. Let's get out of here, Scoob."

[@pistolpete667]

evictionnotice1313 zoiks yo

[@realAlphaa]

Top 5 CreepyPastas 1. Penpal 2.This 3. 1999 4. Russian sleep experiment 5. The Strangest security Tape i've ever seen

[@feelsgoodmanlol]

I agree, those are some of my favourites too :)

[@Borderlands2iscool]

The spookiest one is the supermarket monster like it gave me nightmares for days.

[@drakestephens1126]

Penpal is so sad though not even scary

[@realAlphaa]

Drake Stephens it may not be scary all the way trough but it has its moments, and its really well written

[@SecretMilkshake]

The scarecrow corpse is amazing

[@CrozoeTriLegacy]

Michael Whitehouse. He is fantastic.

[@ghastlytales]

Aww, thanks :) ~ Mike

[@CrozoeTriLegacy]

O_O You are welcome, fellow writer (Although Creepypastas are not my forte).

[@StormSnakeMG]

Here's a simple solution to the "OH MY GOD IT'S TOO LONG" problem, since some people just love to complain. Listen to the video for 20, 30 minutes, then pull up Microsoft Word and write down the time you stopped at (or, if you're smart, you could just remember it). Then when you have time, listen to more of the story, then rinse and repeat. Seriously, there are so many simple solutions to any minor issue, yet people just feel the need to complain about everything. Get over it, Creeps worked hard on this video.

[@AirsoftCommissar]

Couldn't agree more.

[@StormSnakeMG]

Sombomombo Bop Good point. Even less reason to whine now.

[@bibbobella]

and did one hell of a job :D wow it was good!

[@Immolator772]

you know this one is interesting but i lost an interest in it beclause is too long.I must say that mostly the short creepypasta are better beclause the are short and give you good scare here is one for example ''Sleep" and ''Where is my child"(or something like that)

[@bibbobella]

i could not disagree more. this story is so cathing and well written it is scary. this is one of the best creepypastaes i have ever heard and one of the only ones that was actually able to make me a bit scared

[@xorec1942]

2 hours!? And written by Mike W!? I can already tell this going to be great story.

[@comedyman4896]

Villagers: Multiple people have gone to this hill and they all have died John: I went to this hill and something almost killed me Narrator: dOn'T bE sO sUPersTItioS

[@lawnakate2814]

I was already pissed about John going (I know it’s how stories work but yeah lmao ) but when the guy went right after John finished his story? I just about screamed.

[@KehnoK]

Finally.. FINALLY a really good creepypasta. Not overfilled with body parts being cut off or to much gore.. This piece is wonderful.. Thank you Michael Whitehouse for writing it and to you, CreepsMcPasta, for reading it soo well ^^ really great ^^

[@dathblaze]

2 hours...? *runs downstairs grabbing 2 bags of twizzlers and a mtn dew before pressing play* Fuck the hell yes!

[@viktornorbert1359]

Who needs twizzlers when you have unlimited chicken wings, lol :)

[@viktornorbert1359]

Thanks xD. Unfortunately my chicken wings didnt last me so I had to retreat to hobnobs lol

[@dathblaze]

Viktor Norbert See? Twizzlers lasted me the whole thing, ten points to Gryffindor!

[@viktornorbert1359]

Minus ten to hufflepuff. Hobnobs weren't that bad though and they were in a double pack :)

[@greenlandic4595]

Deikhan I'd ether play far cry 4 or dishonored while listening

[@CreepsMcPasta]

Previous video- "McDonald's" Creepypasta

[@austinsosebee366]

CreepsMcPasta I was

[@Tetsacry]

It captivated me enough that I heard the full 2 hours in one sitting. I didn't expect it to be so interesting, but this is one of the more professional and interesting pastas out there.

[@sarcastian]

Note to self, don't hike up strange hills with lots of weird trees, or a demonic church. Especially when an entire village of people tells you not to. DUH!

[@LussieMagnusson]

I first read this story 2015 and after I searched for it on KZbin- that is how I first found CreepsMcPasta. Long time fan, I really love this channel! *and this story is my absolute favorite creepypasta ever*

[@allisonschempf2230]

The story is very intriguing and compelling. It's somewhat reminiscent of "The Shadow Over Innsmouth" yet manages to avoid becoming derivative. Thank you for your brilliant narration of such a long story.

[@foxfire_rec4036]

I love that story!

[@mtywilli6217]

1:32:47 why do people do that it's not like it's gonna pop out and be like "oh yeah hey fam what's up" I never really get it🤔

[@dannybright1688]

menty williams he was yelling to see if homeless people or hermits were down there my dude

[@vincentshadetree]

😂😂😂😂

[@acrazysheepdog1555]

It’s sad to know that John died, after all of the shit he went through, only to be killed unceremoniously. It’s sad to know, but man was this such a good story!

[@lizzieisbaked]

A great story. I wish they were all this long!

[@vlork666]

S'wrong with you, woman

[@MrArsalan11]

hi❤

[@luckystar9279]

I agree. I like to listen to creepy pasta while I play minecraft, so it's nice when they're as long as possible.

[@MrArsalan11]

***** watch my face

[@hogiman454]

Listen to Borasca narrated by MrCreepyPasta it's great

[@kingkisames9]

I feel as though the names of new creepypastas dont beat the older ones. On top of this being a great story and narration. The simple "on a hill" makes this such a great story without revealing any plots

[@Caleb_Universe]

By far my favorite creepypasta, I've listened to it about 30 times! An amazing story, & amazingly narrated, the music in the background sets the atmosphere wonderfully too! Keep up the good work! X

[@cherrydonner5298]

This was the first story that introduced me to you over 5 years ago. I enjoy the long stories so I came back for a refresher

[@XXavierSin-XXs]

I'm an hour in and i am honestly terrified. 59:59

[@Drifter.Dreams]

You and MrCreepypasta are two of the most significant figureheads of my early twenties. These stories are so nostalgic to me. Your voices, the musical scores, the memories that accompany that time of my life, everything. Thank you for what you do.

[@itswisty]

I started this one, shovelled my driveway, took my dog for a walk and finished it at home. I love these long ones, and I’m going to try and take on “Penpal” next. Great job Creeps!

[@CreepyPastaJr]

2 Hours!?! Pretty much the reason I stayed away from it haha XD

[@frankilarson1261]

awwww shiz man i just realized that. *SKIPS TO "TURNS OUT I'M NOT ALLERGIC TO MILK" BY MCP*

[@xxRyanxxxxxxxxxxxxxx]

franki larson eww.

[@frankilarson1261]

haha but it was so funny X3

[@partmemjustin]

I like the long ones. No pun intended! xD

[@frankilarson1261]

Ha that's dirty ;) I like both :3

[@CaptainDijango]

Ain't nothing better than a cup of coffee, this channel and a good story

[@prestonduke1371]

So true!

[@lolniceinreal]

I just play unturned with this in steram overlay l

[@CaptainDijango]

loghatv pfft unturned

[@lolniceinreal]

CaptainShadowGaming you don't? dude, I pwn all the haxers with my noob tube.

[@LordSaracon]

And yet another masterpiece from Mike W.

[@SmegmaOnCommand1776]

Fuck you

[@LordSaracon]

alex poop Well, that was random. Why the hate?

[@pieter5867]

alex poop dude, why?

[@DavidGarcia-zi9ku]

Pieter Knepper Why not

[@jAdoreMoi615]

10 years later and this story STILL gives me the creeps ❤

[@jellosapiens7261]

I love the cello playing at around the 1:30:00 mark. The music is such a crucial part of all these creepypasta videos.

[@Arya-su3jv]

I love this story. It's so well written and we'll told I keep coming back to it .

[@TheHikachu]

The scariest things in these stories are the commercials suddently screaming in your ear

[@SlyCrunchy]

dude twenty minutes would have bean bet- nah I'm just kiding I personaly love when a video this long shows up in my subscription page. I play random games and listen to youtube videos most of the time and this helped get through part of skate 3's boringly mundane story, thanks Creeps.

[@non1263]

The first thing I though when I saw the title was: I'm on a hill! I'm on a hill! Everybody look at me I'm on a motherfucking hill!

[@greenlandic4595]

Psycho Zebra i recall it was from the lonely highlands

[@slimjimdumplings]

I'm on a hill to!

[@terrarohde7811]

Psycho Zebra so am I

[@Lexedin]

Thought??

[@LibertéAnaïs]

I've listened to this almost every night for 6 years. It's so soothing to listen to to wind down before bed. 10/10

[@CreepsMcPasta]

Next video- "Hi son" Feelspasta

[@jesusv1992doctorwhofan]

hey can you do anime creepsmcpasta

[@TheStooges556]

you probably have the best creepy pasta videos

[@lukefuller7956]

Jesus Valdivia have you read the Hetalia one :3

[@jesusv1992doctorwhofan]

no

[@pezthebrony9633]

***** pegasister!

[@HexPLAYSPlus]

This is the longest Creepypasta ever. Your endurance is admirable, Creeps.

[@Scruffytuba]

That last line was the cherry on top of the delicious sundae that was this story! Well done

[@NickWright]

This was amazing

[@WhoCares-zk3il]

Sure was

[@JustCyril1]

This has to be one of my favourite stories of all time. Bravo to the writer!

[@brendannasveld6266]

This video is a great mix of Creeps' narration and Michael's legendary Creepypastas

[@baconsayshi]

2 minutes after i finish "Penpal" i put this on. I don't know what to expect

[@jimijinx7029]

your a very blessed person I did the same thing

[@knut5748]

me2

[@absoxoxo4447]

me2

[@jimijinx7029]

Yassss

[@solidliquid8295]

Same Blibba

[@nicky550-p3c]

This felt like listening to a Lovecraft story! Thank you so much ❤️

[@themadmanisreal2022]

I agree

[@runlarryrun77]

This was great. I love longer stories. This one had some genuinely creepy moments, top effort :D

[@MrEvan312]

Dear Mr. Whitehouse and Creeps I cannot tell you how often this narration has lulled me comfortably to sleep. Such a wonderful story, perhaps my favorite of the OP's work yet, I immensely envy his poetic and thoughtful way of writing (my own is rather simplistic and to the point, although I think the concepts of my stories are often good) and Creep's voice is the cherry on the top. This is a massive project too, and a long story is the best to fall asleep to. Thank you both!

[@KaitoILoveIceScream]

2 hours long huh? Welp. Time to get some popcorn and get comfortable.

[@batman88891]

This is more like a novel; considering you can BUY it on Amazon, and the fact that it takes TWO HOURS to read. I always like the long pastas though. Also, whoever actually watches the screen the entire time deserves another cookie CreepsMcPasta

[@thepeanutgallery9980]

Ah, yes, the classic horror mindset of: "Oh, this place is haunted and evil, and anyone who goes there receives a terrible curse. GUESS I WON'T EVER GIVE ANYONE ANY DETAILS ABOUT IT EVER AND JUST BE REALLY CAGEY. THAT COULDN'T POSSIBLY BACKFIRE."

[@seanhall4250]

this is my favorite creepypasta of all time, it's so perfect in every aspect and your narrating makes it perfect. thank you

[@nezavida4248]

OMG this should be a movie. 😄 With the right director and actors, it would be AMAZING.😏

[@ThePigasaurus]

Idk maybe maybe not

[@esbensloth]

Watch The Borderlands

[@gabebargeron232]

neza vida exactly what I was thinking

[@sebat55xd46]

neza vida definatly

[@paradiso123]

Nevada Jarett I have friends, but we're writing our own horror movie.

[@kellymelton5750]

Alright. im listening for the first time to this story. Im torn between being creeped out and mesmerized by your voice lmao

[@LibertéAnaïs]

Completely agree.

[@mychannelofawesome]

HOLY SHIT! THIS IS AWESOME! MAKE IT A MOVIE!

[@greenlandic4595]

Blitz McShitz wouldn't be done, the horror genre is seen as a way of getting easy money

[@Jeanette_B_Andersen]

Do you make audiobooks?? You are so talented reading this, you create the right spirit of the story.

[@RallyTheTally]

I USED TO LISTEN TO THIS SO MUCH AS A KID! I once tried to make a comic about it.

[@Packsuperbowl]

John: Dont go up the hill Bartender/pub owner: Dont go up the hill Dale: Dont go up the hill Every villager: Dont go up the hill Narrator: uP tHe hIlL i gO

[@generaltor2619]

Quite an effective creepypasta, but I wonder whether the creature was supposed the wrathful spirit of the priest, or if they really meant it when they said it was older than humanity. It felt, at least to me anyway, that perhaps the wrathful spirit had possesed the priest, and that had been what had caused him to try and build on the hill in the first place, and drove him to madness.

[@Alvenfrom94]

I love long pastas. I like to hear them in a single run, that's why I don't normally listen to parts,

[@christophervalenzuela]

The only thing that was on my mind this whole time was... HOW LONG DID THIS TAKE TO UPLOAD?!??!

[@OverL00k707]

Probably not that long believe it or not

[@tannermartin7729]

Christian PTV SAME LOL

[@crypticraps]

7.2 seconds.

[@deadindividual4847]

It's just a couple images and audio. Probably not too long.

[@lukedodge97]

are you transgender?

[@YOitzDK]

That... was... a... FANTASTIC use of two hours of my night! Had my doubts concerning the length at first but that story really delivered! Loved it.

[@LKaufman9050]

WOW!! How did I miss thus story for so long?? This is the best I've heard anywhere. The writing, the narration, and the background music -- all perfect! Thank you for all your hard work.

[@Bluesit32]

If I was John, I'd have punched him. "Psychosamatic?! I've a hole in my side! I didn't think it there! And I was told fuck all about what was on that hill! Your idea that the villagers implanted the notions in my head doesn't work when all they do is say not to go on it!" Seriously, what a jackass this guy is. After hearing that story, he decides to go up the hill and somehow "save" the guy? You know what else would have worked? Waiting for the bus and leaving with him! John's fate was the result of normal skeptisism combined with professional interest and a sort of desire to insure that what happened to Dale's son never happened again. The narrartor, on the other hand, is just a know-it-all prat. To a skeptic, John was in no danger. Best thing for him was to go on home after his little streak of misfortune was over and see a shrink. There was NO reason to risk his own life. Even a skeptic, after hearing that story, would see that there was danger up there. Supernatural danger, no, but danger nonetheless. I'm not saying this hampers the story in any way, mind you. It's not like someone being this confident in their "rationalizations" is unheard of in either fiction or reality. I just...REALLY wanted to punch him when he started spouting about it all being in his head. THREE MONTHS!?

[@aaron5508]

TheBlues32 it could have been worse. He could have said it was just teenagers playing pranks!

[@KittyDoodleArts]

Thank you for your hard work

[@REFWAG]

I listened to this two years ago, but didn’t finish it. This is truly a masterpiece

[@REFWAG]

Back again 5 years later

[@juandalgo3250]

this is fantastic. so well written and imaginative

[@_Fiinch]

I love this guy so much, the way he tells the stories, he makes mistakes occasionally but it makes it sound like someone's actually reading it to me, great job I thoroughly enjoyed this one! Keep making them!

[@bennnnnnnnsauls]

This entire story is a cryptic message meaning Jonah Hill

[@Starlillydoll]

I loved hearing moonlight sonata!

[@WEIRDGLASSESSHOWisawessome]

what's the song at the start?

[@davidmorningway6025]

starlily doll have you heard it in reverse?? Sounds crazy, but its actually pretty nice. I first heard it in shadowman when you find Jack the Ripper in The Dark Tower in Deadside, In life he always listened to moonlight sonata and i guess in death he hears it backwards or something, but its not the reckless cluster of sound you would imagine it to be. It is melodic with almost rhythmic purpose.

[@davidmorningway6025]

😇😎😈

[@madsclausen4028]

It's mostly "Moonlight Menschen" By Myuu. He makes royalty free horror music, and wrote this song inspired by moonlight sonata.

[@darkball31]

This pasta was long but I loved it

[@Dollprins]

it was a long piece of spaghetti =3... But really it is a very good creepypasta.

[@ianmarsh6123]

First comment I've left on KZbin, just to thank everyone involved, you are an inspiration, giving unknown writers a platform to show off their talent. More importantly you help me get to kip at night.

[@slippy1809]

that was 2 hours well spent! this was a great story and this actually creeped me out at times unlike most other creepy pastas!

[@varntokodus9650]

"This was like that drug trip I had that one time " - Jacksepticeye (I'm sure he's said it today)

[@MrStarguy]

A 2hr creepy pasta?? Yes!!

[@karkatvantas6328]

2 Hour creepypasta... I am in for a treat :P

[@destinyscorridor170]

Hi, Karkat!

[@beachsurf]

karkat i didn't know you were into creepypastas.

[@potatobling3879]

This is amazing, beautifully spoken and the background sound is perfect. Keep up the great work!

[@keekeehawke2920]

On the hill is the best story you have narrated yet, and i have read all that you have done on youtube. You are the best and your narrations are superb. Too bad the authors are not as good as you but we can always hope. Outstanding as always Creeps.

[@MarkOfKhorne]

It has taken me nearly a week on and off to watch this.

[@xiAGC123]

2 hours? challenge accepted ;)

[@xiAGC123]

challenge completed!

[@craftingeffects7817]

xiAGC123 Challenge in progress

[@decayingpsycho]

Challenge also completed

[@ablynlee8803]

Awsome

[@sapientfury6781]

Challenge now completed.

[@CherryPawCreations]

58:49 ( leaving a place marker for myself for when i come back to listen to this ) also great story!

[@JeremyMcCandlish]

Learned a lot from this, and probably wouldn't've without your voice. Thank you.

[@ALkillu777]

This was such an amazing story and the narrator set the tone so perfectly one of the best stories i've heard in a while my hats off to you.