CRITIQUING MY VIEWERS' ART! #7 🚫

[@Love2DrawManga]

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[@FrogSquad.]

Hiii big fan ❤

[@RoRoOreo]

I would but I don't have moneyy Anywayy I love your videos and art!

[@kingkuroneko7253]

LOVE THE VID

[@zaraiigacha]

rebekah, sakuraco, and tokyo treat are practically besties at this point

[@CleoKane]

lol don't forget bokksu!

[@Pookie_Material]

LOLL

[@zaraiigacha]

why does everyone like this comment😭

[@Pookie_Material]

@@zaraiigacha it’s so true!

[@zaraiigacha]

*it has been a whole week why are people liking😭😭😭*

[@ChantelleArts]

Rebekah is always so polite and helpful even when giving critiques and it’s so wholesome 🥹❤

[@kzcreationzmore]

13:30 Ironically, my favorite person to get feedback from is my mom and she’s not an artist. The reason I like her advice is because my mom has a tendency to be brutally honest (in a loving way), so I know she won’t lie or hold back to “spare my feelings”. She also has a real eye for detail and notices things I don’t. Also, since she’s not an artist, she describes things that the average person would notice is wrong. Sometimes that is oddly more helpful than asking my artist friends. After she’s critiqued me, I usually tweak my work and then show it to my artist friends, who can help give advice for the things my mom couldn’t.

[@Izzy.Doodles]

I agree! It's important to get feedback from both perspectives

[@isobelbroddrick1631]

That’s great I’m glad you have a good relationship with your mom unlike me but hey my mom lied to me for a long time but I’m glad you like art keep working hard I’m not good at online art but I can do art on paper due to the fact a pencil makes it easier I’m more used to the shading while I have lack In experience of coloring so I prefer sketching

[@Vaxedia]

My mother never compliments my art no matter how good it is

[@quit-rt4vz]

​@@Vaxedia she's probably just honest

[@Vaxedia]

@@quit-rt4vz I'm not expecting her to give fake compliments like for a kid making bad art. She's just never satisfied.

[@smhlol8472]

I absolutely LOVE how she gives ACTUAL FEEDBACK depending on the person's style and not just being like "ermm, this isnt MY style, so im just gonna "fix" it by making it my style instead"

[@Bunnykyuun]

kooleen should take notes

[@smhlol8472]

@@Bunnykyuun YOU'RE SO RIGHT OMG LOL

[@zaraiigacha]

"erm"✋️💀

[@failurenotsorry6600]

​@@Bunnykyuun?

[@12cat123]

Totally and when she changes proportions she says this could be a style some people do that... I just love it!

[@lenilovesmama7253]

6:57 I think i forgot to flip the canvas thats why the eyes looked weird😭the highlights are a very nice touch to my art so i am glad you added those^^ (i almost threw my phone away when i saw my drawing.. i am soo happy i got chosen🤧❤️❤️)

[@Love2DrawManga]

Thanks for submitting your art! It's really good and keep up the great work. =D

[@KIKURAsky]

ur art is so cool

[@kentuckyfriedcrispyarmin]

UR ART LITERALLY LOOKS SO SO COOL !! (I actually gasped when i saw it)/pos DO U HAVE ANY SOCIALS OTHER THAN YT?? I would love to see more of ur art jdnskx

[@Cinna.x]

bro ur art is literally so good i literally cannot draw men

[@lenilovesmama7253]

@@Cinna.x and i can only draw men😻🙏

[@sakurameowz]

SCREAMING SQUEALING KICKING I'M SO HAPPY TO BE FEATUREDAHHHBHBAAHA 15:43 (sorry ive just been a long time fan and eeeee) YOUR ADVICE HELPED SO MUCH TYSM!! I'll try to keep it in mind for my future pieces!!

[@bladeoctober]

You did an amazing job :]

[@SilverFox_san]

I immediately loved it when I saw it

[@Cinna.x]

SAKURAMEOWZ??? I THINK IM SUBSCRIBED TO U HIII

[@SaDSaF_]

Even though I didn't get picked , these critiques make me realize how much my art is off lol

[@NiniDoesntExist]

Same

[@ladygaga8781]

same(and i think i have a new art style now)

[@everlastingscribe]

What I love the most, is how you set each person up for success. You pick one area for them to work on, and include encouragement as well as the critique. I'm sure because of your help, these talented people are on their way to their next art break through!

[@EggoBeggo__]

Love how you worded this, so true!! She doesn’t bombard people with criticism and instead focuses on one thing they could improve on.

[@Love2DrawManga]

Thank you! I'm happy you noticed that, I try my best to not overwhelm people with too much feedback. ^u^

[@Mikalia_chan]

Very well done critiques. You are respectful to their style. I'm always afraid to submit mine, but I think it would be helpful to me, and I know you would do it respectfully. Maybe on the next one.

[@Tinacha_Art]

This series really helps me know what NOT to do like in the other critique video you explained about the the nose and how to have to match the direction of the face in a not weird way! Thank you for this series! Congrats on 831k subscribers!!!!🎉 ily and your vids, they help me so much!

[@Love2DrawManga]

Aw thank you! I'm happy it helps! ❤️

[@Void_Ace]

12:02 I struggle with angles still so makes sense the horns didn't line up. Even when I tried imagining them facing forward, I still couldn't get the horn placement right. Thank you for the critique, and I'll definitely try to keep the symmetry in my head, even if i struggle a bit in general Edit: I just realized with the change in horn placement, it feels like it actually gives them the more menacing-ish vibe I wanted. Reminds me of buffalos or bulls, and it fits. You unintentionally also just helped me make more lore for them Rebekah :D thank you!

[@Void_Ace]

Altho even while I like my OC, they're one I want to kinda always just do stupid stuff with. I love him alot but I also wanna just randomly throw em off a pile of snow lol.

[@Love2DrawManga]

Yay, happy I can help! ☺️

[@lileyzei6489]

It’s amazing how you make the already amazing drawings look so much better by doing just simple changes! I always learn a lot from these videos

[@pikapika7402]

7:41 i agree with you about the adjustments with the shirt, but I'm not so sure with where you changed the mouth. To me it doesn't look in line with the rest of the face. It's just something I noticed. You're a great artist and I agree with you on the rest of these ❤

[@stjarrne]

gotta agree- the shirt was a great change but i felt the eyes could've instead be tilted to the right a bit more to keep the flow of the piece 😅the nose didn't really need to be any larger & the change to the mouth made the expression end up feeling stiff

[@onyxestrela]

Yea idk it feels like it doesn’t quite line up

[@Zoolitsky]

At 8:20 I feel like the mouth looks a bit unnatural being moved so far to the left, nonetheless these critiques always help me improve my art so much!! Thank you Bekah :D

[@AnimeArtest1]

I mean like she said in previous videos its just critique its not redrawing so even if it doesn't look perfect she wants you to get a idea of what she means

[@kelvisaisawesome]

I really liked your piece actually and I agree with you about the mouth and I think the nose placement looked a bit off after alterations. At the end of the day you gotta remember its suggestions based on Rebecca’s style so it’s not the only correct choice. It’s just suggestions and opinions like how I’m doing right now

[@kelvisaisawesome]

My suggestion for the mouth is to even it out in a way. The way you have it now makes it feel like the classic anime smile. It is a cool style to have, but if you want my own suggestion, you could widen the upper lip and wrap it to the skull. It would give off more realistic vibes. But I think that the reason why both pictures look slightly off is because the direction that the eyes, nose and chin are facing is slightly different from one another. To me it looks like the character is facing a bit to the right judging from ear and nose but the char. left eye js too close to the ear.

[@achannel2916]

Yep I thought so too!! I feel like the original face looked a lot better than the “corrected” one but i guess this is just some critique based on her artstyle

[@Zoolitsky]

​@@kelvisaisawesome Oh it’s not my art! And I know, I was just sharing my perspective

[@loveshack_ems]

I think that it’s so nice that you offer to help younger artists develop their skills but you still treat them as nicely as possible. You also don’t make fun of their stylistic choices and don’t let your own preferences influence your criticism. Thank you for helping everyone, Rebekah❤

[@zoew099]

19:20 is the art I made, I can’t believe she actually saw my email! Eee! I’m so happy I got some feedback as my friends have not given me any, so it helps a lot! Thanks Rebekah

[@Doodle_Mice]

Is your character supposed to be a gem? Like a Spinel? She looks so cute!!

[@randomgrmlin]

Your character is pretty!! I love the colors! So cute!! ❤

[@zoew099]

@@randomgrmlin aww thank you so much! :3

[@zoew099]

@@Doodle_Mice thank you! But yes she’s meant to be a gem, though no a spinel but a diamond, though I do see the confusion! I thought a heart shaped gem fit her heart theme I was going for ^^

[@Visperine]

​@@zoew099 The heart buns are sooo cuteee!!! 💞

[@YellowJayzz]

I don't think that 19:18 is supposed to have ears because the character has a gem and might be a Steven Universe OC. I personally feel like there should be a little bit more going on at the top part of her design, maybe a small sweater of some sort or bigger sleeves

[@littledreamer2492]

Came here to say this! The character does look like a gemsona of some sort. I think the hair critique was accurate, but gems don't have ears 😅 I agree that the design could use some more interesting elements, like maybe some jewelry or a headpiece?

[@mimthyss]

Agreed! To follow on the jewellery thought, a little heart or diamond shaped necklace or choker type of thing could be cute to break up the solid white of the shirt maybe. Or another little ribbon or bow, which could be around the neck or in the hair, to carry through the wraps on the legs to the top half of the design! I think any or all of those could really fit her vibe ^^

[@zoew099]

Yes she’s a Steven universe character! She is not meant to have ears, I created her purposefully like that ^^ But thanks for the extra information about it!

[@zoew099]

@@mimthyssoooh! Alrighty! :o

[@Sparklebunart]

I just want to say it's so nice to see how respectful you go about critiquing art. I understand that the 'roasting art' is currently a trend but the way you do it is much more helpful in my opinion.

[@zmotionandvideos5407]

I love watching these! They are so helpful! You aren't rude like other people in critiques!God blessed you Rebekah!!

[@mangoshaky]

video aside can we appreciate how rebekah replies to all the comments she can just to cheer us up? ❤❤❤

[@Love2DrawManga]

I love replying to comments, it's my favorite part of the video process. ☺️

[@mangoshaky]

@@Love2DrawManga it makes me feel special that you're replying to my comments, thank you! ☺☺

[@Argie_02]

NO WAY!! The draw of the minute 4:50 is mine, and I didn't expected the fact that I could be in your video, so I was supriced! Thank you so much for the opinion and the comment, ilysm ❤️

[@randomgrmlin]

Your drawing is gorgeous!! The lighting you did is so nice!

[@Burn_fire]

You are literally the kindest and sweetest artist I had ever encountered

[@Love2DrawManga]

Aw, thank you! ^u^

[@Burn_fire]

@@Love2DrawManga :D

[@ITSujuice]

OMG SHE DID MY ART! IM LITERALLY SHAKING 3:13

[@AnimeArtest1]

It looks so pretty btw!

[@SeilaniiKaorii]

These critiques are very helpful but I feel like 8:21 the mouth being shifted made the face off since it didn’t look like it was directly under the nose

[@ReiTheAlpha_01]

I like how she made suggestions and showed what was wrong rather then criticize it

[@wattlebu]

You always do an amazing job at critiquing exactly what feels off in a drawing or art style without being rude, thank you for these videos!

[@Drink_waater]

Look forward to watching the video! I'm sure it will be great! 😁

[@jennameyers0909]

I always appreciate how polite and gracious you are while giving critiques in these kinds of videos, Bekah❤️

[@kzcreationzmore]

I always miss when you’re doing these 😭 I would love to submit my own art because I know I have a lot to improve on

[@s0me_Weirdo]

I love how you politely critique the art since it encourages beginners and other people on their passions rather than pushing them away from art just because they’re not so good

[@Izzy.Doodles]

12:39 yoo thats my art :0 Thank you for the critique!!

[@sailorpanda]

I really like how you draw hair and eyes!!!

[@Izzy.Doodles]

@@sailorpanda thank you!

[@Deltic_and_Eme]

IZZY!!! HI!!! It’s so cool your art was in the video!!!

[@Izzy.Doodles]

@@Deltic_and_Eme hiii thank you!!!

[@Drink_waater]

8:35 I don't think that the mouth is placed anatomically correct? Shouldn't it be under the nose?

[@cabbageman2184]

That’s what I thought

[@3starsburningbright]

6:52 tbh i like the unedited version better. The art is absolutely stunning btw for whoever drew it

[@Daniell-.]

5:48 thanks for your recomends! I will listen to them and try to make it more better 💙

[@cheesecheddar13]

Saturdays are the best day ever. You cannot tell me otherwise. Edit: Just finished the video, and all the illustrations were really good and the critiques were helpful as well. I don’t do some of the habits in this video, but it is basically just a reminder not to. But anyways, thanks again 😊

[@zaraiigacha]

coincedentally the same day beka uploads👀

[@bladeoctober]

I love how polite and modest you are when critiquing people's art. I don't like the "roasting" videos because they don't rlly critique but bring others down so this is a refresher. Also I love ur art never give up

[@Tiskoncommand]

I love how she calls everyone an artist no matter what their art looks like❤

[@thatgal1509]

Rebekah is always so kind in the critique videos! ✨ I swear my mental library gets bigger after watching these videos! Great advice, Rebekah!

[@vwoomy]

i like that you gave good critiques focusing on proportions or background elements rather than changing the artist's style to fit your own. I've seen other art youtubers critique people's art by completely changing it to something more their style, but you did it right 👍

[@RedStarBoi416]

Those were some nice critiques you did, and the tips were really helpful!

[@emily._edits]

She's so polite!

[@got_some_screws_loose]

I love seeing everybody's art😍 They're all so unique and each different feels. ❤

[@Calyaer]

In regards to shading, something that I learned from the artist Temi Danso is that a lot of issues with shading looking flat or unfinished can just be solved by adding a little more TLC to the artwork. Adding deeper and darker shading, and making more prominent highlights, actually helps a lot, even if it takes a long time to actually finish. (And its actually possible to make highlights for a moody piece without taking away from the mood, it's mostly just choosing the right colours. Something something colour theory. Detailed shading is super finnicky in my experience but it is *worth it* in the end.)

[@Nejdetärbratack]

Shes always so kind its very refreshing

[@Sarahthesalmon99]

20:14 I know what you mean about no ears and I noticed this was a gem from Steven universe and gems don’t have ears. Most the time hair covers them like amethyst garnet and even pearl but even characters like spinel who have no hair covering up where the ear would go don’t have ears

[@chickieslurp]

To the double eyelid person!! I would suggest looking at Drag makeup for reference. It can help seeing different versions and ways to stylize

[@mountainflowers107]

I love watching your critiquing videos! They're always so helpful, even if it's someone else's artwork. Keep up the great job! :D

[@SpottyLotti]

20:00 One quick thing that’s not too important but I believe that’s a spinel from Steven Universe and the Gems don’t have ears. The solution would probably be to style the hair a bit differently if it looks too weird though. That’s all! Have an nice day!

[@zoew099]

She’s meant to be a diamond, though I do agree I made her look like spinel- ah well she is getting a re design too!

[@SOFIANICOLEMIRAMONTES]

I love how Rebekah says “critique” instead of “ROAST”

[@timewanderer0]

I almost let out a scream when the first drawing you were critiquing was a drawing of Lu Guang, Link Click is so good istg

[@magiklo59]

Link click is so underrated!!

[@stenchella]

What's that?

[@magiklo59]

@@stenchella a donghua :3

[@timewanderer0]

it's a very good donghua (chinese animation) about time travel!! I totally recommend giving it a shot ((:

[@blanca4101]

Oh wow the change in the link click art was well needed after seeing the before and after

[@catboy496]

8:19 in my opinion, i feel like the original mouth lined up with the perspective of the face better

[@Brot-Watching]

That was very helpful! Love your vids Beka!

[@Woomertron]

I didn't get to see this when it launched (I'm currently sick with covid L) but im the artist for the art at 17:48 and the one who got into the thumbnail ("please stop" yes I will /j) thanks for the advice on the whole double eyelid shenanigans I do (even though honestly that's NOT the thing that felt off about it to me probably cuz I've done it for so long but yeah) I probably should've worded it better by saying that it was meant to be more like the creases of the eyes (??) just like really high up, like you can see that my art does actually have normal eyelids but then it has the whole thingamajig crease long eyelid shenanigans going on on the forehead thanks for the advice though that was appreciated :) probably gonna take time getting used to but yar

[@KawaiiHoshi997]

I have seen double eye lid drawings like this and they just have it shorter.

[@lilli4222]

Would you mind if I could point out just a few more things before I go? 1. NOSE-CHAN!!! Ik that drawing noses is hard but you didn't have to give them a stickman nose! Maybe just draw the holes and then add a bunch of blush lines till you can't almost see em anymore lol. Or add a sticker ontop of it lol. 2. God dammit you could cut paper with that chin Yea just round your edges a bit. 3. She be breathing real good with that neck eh? The neck looks a bit too thick. 4. A personal preference but please remove the double eyelid. It makes her look like allmight!!! Praise: You can draw hands. Omg you don't know what my drawings would do for a proper pair of hands. -a mysterious wizard (⁠｡⁠•̀⁠ᴗ⁠-⁠)⁠✧

[@ThatArtsyGirl_249]

I love your videos! The ones in this series help me a lot! ❤ Also I have a request: remember that comic about Kristen that you made a long time ago? I am so curious so can you make a video where you read the whole thing to us?? ❤❤ I would love to see it!

[@paris.998]

17:19 what is this style of painting/ rendering called? It's so pretty, I want to learn it and incorporate it in my art

[@EAMONODEA]

Yay! A new video, love your vids becca! ✨

[@amnesiacsandwich66]

Learning from the best ones is always a good feeling! Yeah your art may not be "perfect" but is still good as long as put love to it! Have a great weekend everyone! How are you doing today Rebekah?

[@Silent_Artist.]

Who knew small changes can make a big difference-

[@MockiN6j4y]

Dang, everyone's art looks so good!

[@Miss_KimPie]

I'm early???😮😮 Goodness it's the first time 😁 and yea as always love your video ❤❤

[@soulsofpure3405]

I love the idea of the last character with the heart! The hair does need some work but, it's definitely on the right path. The colors are close in color hues, I kept looking at the shirt. Maybe make the white a tab more blue or something. The pink probably should be a little dark but, I love color choices overall! ❤

[@OriginalBlizzerd]

seeing other peoples art style is so interesting, and i love how kind you are when you are critiquing!! though i didnt get picked, i do beleive this helped, even if it is only a little bit. Thank you!

[@kai_hax]

I’m scared of the thumbnail 💀

[@Not_Kaitlyn]

😂

[@LUNA_4art]

no cause like why is it that... disproportionate

[@Lgashi.bean.s]

Yea… y-yeah

[@lybasily]

no need to be rude?? 😭😭😭

[@Not_Kaitlyn]

@@lybasily the eyelids are so long she looks like an alien 😭

[@nodinnerdinner]

i saw some of the critiques that apply to my own art, so thank you for helping not just the people in the video, but also me!! :D ❤❤

[@AkanoAnimations]

Video idea! (For drawing whatever the heck I want or TikTok art/ art challenges videos maybe) draw one of your characters in the “hairstyles meme” art template! It’s kind of similar to the 6 art styles template (or however many it was) but in this one you draw ur oc in different hairstyles! ✨

[@mangosday]

at 8:32 the straightened mouth doesn't look quite right. Considering the position of the eyes and nose, the mouth is now too perfectly centered from the viewer's POV, and not following the angle of the other features which are in 3/4 view

[@chickenanddoodles]

omg i literally just finished watching Link Click today how fitting :0

[@sakurasketches]

Great video!! Also I'm glad you're still getting better, I hope you heal completely soon!

[@ShelbyLikesStuff]

I was gonna send in an art piece but I didn’t get it finished in time :’D

[@MachiRollGamer]

By the way Rebekah the last edit, is about steven universe and its about gems as characters, but they don't have ears and they are aliens so their feet can be any shape! I love your videos too!

[@Fr34ky.lynn1e]

yeeeeeeyyy Rebekah has posted!!!am glad that u sound fine now! i love ur way of correcting peoples mistakes wile biying nce

[@AkanoAnimations]

YAYYY A NEW VIDEO :D I have a question, to enter do I need to add a hashtag to any post of my art? Also would I be able to send it privately in dms? If so do I also need to add a hashtag in said dm? Thank u so much

[@_GoldenBow_]

*EARLY YAYA!! I’VE BEEN WAITING ALL WEEK FOR SATURDAY TO WATCH UR VID :3* *I only just started to watch the vid and IK ITS GONNA BE GREAT ^v^*

[@Lgashi.bean.s]

Bekah, please for the love of Samson, will you please make another Drawing Your OCs vid *PLEASE*

[@mimthyss]

Love these critique vids. Always delivered in a helpful but non judgemental or rude way! You'd make a great teacher haha. :) also these vids always make me want to see you try drawing in other styles, maybe you could do one of those 'drawing in 10 different styles!" Type of challenges? Like of other artists or such. Idk it could be fun to see I think! ^^

[@Frosty_McFrost05]

My dream is for my art to one day make it into one of Rebeka’s videos. I love you Rebeka. You are a sweetheart! ❤

[@RoroTali]

Thank you so much, you are so humble...I really liked that. It's really nice to see all those points, It really helps. I hope you are doing fine! Keep it up

[@Neonamvvv]

Your videos always give me great tips on how to improve my drawing skill!💕Thank you so much for that!

[@imalwaysbored950]

OMG SAKURA MEOWZ- LOVE THE VID

[@paolaalan560]

absolutly ♥♥♥LOVE✨✨your vids!! keep up the good work!!

[@Love2DrawManga]

Thank you so much!!

[@Cinna.x]

8:34 is it just me or does the character look better with the smaller nose and the original mouth placement ?

[@Truth_chan_studio]

I used to watch your video since 2018! I learn so much that I'll be able to improve myself from 0 to current level I am at now! always so happy to learn new things from you ❤❤❤

[@bumblebeepalooza9087]

taking feedback from nonartists is more useful because art is created to appeal to a full audience, not just for other artists to look at

[@beardeddragon3665]

Of you wanna flip the canvas traditionally once i did line art and then at the back of the page it was outlined with the pen but it was flipped so maybe u could do that (I was drawing in my notebook tho so the paper was thinner.)

[@pearlea]

I got so excited when I saw my art pop up! Thank you so much for the tips! 💕✨

[@blanca4101]

All the changes were so good

[@BlossomGM-DDTankMobile]

17:39 Ai Hoshino

[@tangocash84]

I always look forward to these art critique videos🎉 i learn so much everytime

[@Ohnoitspoppy]

These were really helpful! I wish more applied to me because of my art style though

[@BoredBubblez]

Wow!! This helped me a lot even if my art didn’t get in! I’ll try again

[@Sarah-wq3rc]

Thank you to: @mimithyss for replying to my comment and opening my eyes! You’re very nice! (Beka If you saw the comment I’m sorry if you found it rude, I tried to be as polite as possible)

[@avasniffen1809]

You should do the challenge where you ask Pinterest what to draw

[@Marinette-dm8fe]

I love the video and even though I didn’t submit my art the critiques will help me realize and improve my art

[@Iya_Sparkle]

19:12 is it just me or dies this look like a fanmade gem from Steven Universe?? 😂❤

[@zoew099]

It is a fan gem design for Steven universe, though my Pink doesn’t exist in the same universe as the actual show takes place

[@user-tc8mn1qk3e]

i think i disagree with the critique of argelia at 4:50 , although i agree that the viewers eyes are brought away from the legs, i think that is a good thing. with the strong focal point and absence of other detail until you look (ie. the legs dont jump out at you), i though it made the drawing feel kinda lonely and elegant. obviously critique like this is subjective, i just felt that before the piece packed more of a punch. afterwards, i thought it felt more generic, even though it was easier to read. But great video, i love how rebekah is so kind even when criticizing!! I think this is a great help for younger artists 👍

[@sunshinecrystal2001]

I may not be the artist for the last one but there is something about her I took note on, i noticed how the artist made her, she is a steven universe gem oc and gems in that show don't have ears I looked it up but that show is cartoonniny and the artists art is semi realistic so it having no ears does make it look off =w=;

[@ktostam35]

I love how you're always polite but the thumbnail is a bit much (if someone posted my art as a thumbnail of criticising art video I'd be so upset even if I sent it lol) but still you're so kind when criticising the art it's so much better than the other videos like these

[@Gwennybeann]

Looking forward to watching this! ❤