Critiquing Your Logo Designs on Reddit! Ep7 🚀

[@sodawater17]

3:17 I think there's something very clever about the logo on the t-shirt. From this distance, it looks just like a tiger with stripes. The obscurity of the letters still adds to the overall design. Not sure if intentional but very cool either way!

[@oogway2513]

oh ye

[@csar07.]

I think it is intentional and it looks really good.

[@hobabo9703]

When you scrolled down to the "Integrated Self Councelor" post I thought it was an actual ad on Reddit, so I guess they succeeded with the logo?

[@JakeDragash]

AbrahamWhistler here. Thanks Will for critiquing my Integrated Self Counselor logo. Really appreciate the kind words and was ecstatic to see I made it on this episode when it came out!

[@Ash_Wynn]

yours and the tiger were my favorite!!

[@JakeDragash]

@@Ash_Wynn Thanks so much, Ash! Appreciated.

[@icarusap]

Primary-pineapple-97 here, thanks for reviewing my design, I'll redo it according to your suggestions. Once again thank you!

[@DesignWho]

nice one!!

[@nick1681]

Did you mess around with the logo as the ampersand I’m so curious what it looks like

[@craigseddon4884]

On that business card I think he was a little bit harsh, but what I would maybe do is an oversized red logo in the bottom left side that is 75% in from the bottom and the left, and goes up perhaps 75% of the white background. Then just drop opacity to like 20-30%, enough to it is visible but also so it doesn't interfere with the text. To keep some brand continuity as well I would probably opt to change the flat red line to instead incorporate the three peaks idea from the logo, I'd do it incredibly subtle, almost flat but just enough to see the three peaks design.

[@windwalker8604]

Thank you! I'm proud I didn't suck with the "Desert shield" logo.

[@nosoyheineken]

Maybe not everyone has seen one, but at a first glance it looked to me like a menstrual cup.

[@nosoyheineken]

No offense, like its a good logo. It just looks like a logo for a menstrual cup brand.

[@windwalker8604]

@@nosoyheineken yes I haven't seen one before and now that you pointed it out, Thanks, I hate it.

[@medhinekadi2929]

@@windwalker8604 Your logo was my favorite ! Absolutely love the shading and depth of the dune. It gives off that sci-fi desert planet vibe

[@windwalker8604]

@@medhinekadi2929 I appreciate your kind words Random person, you made my night.

[@emmastar13]

Thank you so much for featuring my work and for the advice on it, it means a lot, will definitely be taking it on board for my final major project in university 🤩

[@iwanjoness]

Great logo!

[@csar07.]

The switch one was really good.

[@juniorcoder5244]

Kindly do logo critiques every week so that more small logo designs would be covered

[@amaryasir4473]

Big fat thanks.. Every time I watch your videos I learn something new .. very Informative and I love the way you present your videos Keep it up.

[@powergannon]

Very impressive how the lightning bolt i in the Switch logo both follows the slant of the w before it, but also aligns with the shape of the cross on the t after it. It’s very well thought out.

[@millsy88]

Hands down Switch, its simple yet lends its self to illustrating that its a quick mode of transport through the city and with a a hint of playfulness too. :-)

[@emmastar13]

Thank you so much ☺️

[@2amcpllc]

I liked the last two. Especially the logo before last more. My only change for that is that I would suggest the ends of both the speech bubble and the smile in it to be round opposed to being flat.

[@michaelcranwell9456]

Really helpful video to see your thought processes on branding and tweaking designs. 👌🏻 what’s works and what may not work in a true context.

[@claudschgi4794]

i liked the idea of the southpaw very much but its for my favor probably a bit overloaded so i like the reduced logo switch, was a bit better :).

[@mimille8201]

HOW did you do this teardrop mark ?? Edit got it so cool

[@ClosestToTheSun]

This was a great batch, I think I liked just about all of these. The Pick Pack logo was particularly striking to me

[@TheWarnink]

Hey man, loving these videos - one can learn a lot from these. What came to my mind in this one - have you thought about making a video about how to make a mockup of a logo in some way? I'm sure there is something like that out there but I would love to hear some inside from you!

[@hiffahyphae6707]

At 3:21 we can look back to 3:13…. It looks like it’s about sports, does it not? Agile and active animals are great for representing sports.

[@cristinasantamarinapm]

Nice one! I liked your comment about how hard it is to critique a logo without knowing what it is for. Knowing what the brief is for each logo could help!

[@BLCKSMTHApparel]

could you do a video on the 'marketing' side of logos and logo designing

[@MrNobodyX3]

To answer your question why Coca-Cola chose red; It’s because at the time of the drinks were earth tones so the red help that stand out on the shelf.

[@augustgast]

Finally FreshBooks has a new logo!

[@jackbonner6804]

hello, I am starting out as a graphic designer and was wondering where you find free commercial-use fonts, and how to do a mockup on an electronic device. thanks, and I just subscribed because I like your work.

[@psdjklgfuiob]

that lightning bolt/scooter icon is too good not to use, i hope they fit it in somewhere

[@Anita-vx5bz]

thanks a lot for doing these critiques, this kind of feedback is so important for young designers to grow! I feel like I m learning just watching other people's work and your opinion. I ll definitely submit some when I get the chance

[@LockedInNOW]

Always love these types of videos you do ♥️ !

[@bramcopermans7494]

Great video lad! always interesting to see your insights!

[@brianaviolet5935]

I immediately thought desert shield looked like a menstrual cup

[@sol8074]

Im not sure if it was red or yellow but i remember one of those causing hunger/cravings

[@dappersama]

for the pick pack logo, it also doesn't read as a hand from afar, the text at the bottom and top directly confused me, and im an artist

[@maanasaprathana]

Awesome! A new video!!

[@gob8883]

Its amazing how much people in the comments have logo profile pictures.

[@ArcheoLumiere]

The i in the Switch logo is a double play, it's a person riding a scooter and a lightning bolt

[@kokochono5054]

I liked switch the most! The colors were fun and it was pretty consistent (except for the app)

[@nobodyknowsforsure]

Integrated Self Councelor was pretty good. That and the desert shield.

[@erichbauer3991]

I'm kinda triggered that the southpaw one doesn't have a boxing reference haha

[@markkorving]

Funny how it’s called SOUTHPAW, while the jaguar is in orthodox stance.

[@eyuelzero]

I found this in my recommended. This comment will help the algorithm so here you go! Your content is way too sweet for only 19k subs

[@Wieringenn]

Nice video! Also, for some reason I cannot post on your subreddit :( I also filtered to 'new' but my post won't show up? Anyone know what I'm doing wrong?

[@ChaossX77]

5:28 isn't the lightning bolt to signify it's an electric scooter?

[@ahmedabdulamir7600]

loved the idea of pick pack but as you said they should get rid of the extra information.

[@claudschgi4794]

can you shred us something on that nice guitar in the back :) ?

[@willpatersondesign]

hahahha I will in a live stream :)

[@pmabdullah87]

@@willpatersondesign waiting for it 😀

[@shikharchawla1605]

Can you make a video on Font selection? I always make mistakes while selecting fonts.

[@amelie2335]

i love the southpaw one! very cool

[@daytonb8045]

I liked the idea and color way of desert shield

[@rationalskeptic1]

Southpaw .. and I think it was supposed to be a tiger? It looked that way to me because the letters were stripey

[@dogmakeamove808]

EYYY I go to north texas, cool to see a designer from here featured on your video.

[@gendawg4584]

12:24 I couldn’t see the arm for a while, I thought it was a rubber chicken TBH

[@miamiceprincess]

I don't understand the "period" at the end of Desert Shield. Why would you have a period in a logo???

[@hilmanhazazi64]

u deserve my subscribe. glad youtube recommended this to me

[@shuaibsalim6616]

Can someone link down a video how to create something like the Southpaw logo ?

[@sugarita06]

I really need the keyboard you have... where can I get one? 🔥

[@potto1488]

Looks like a custom build, the keycaps can be found anywhere and the case is a 60% build with a a slope type.

[@Tchkadua08]

love this type of videos

[@darshanraj30]

The purple light in the background hits in the eye. I really don't like it much but it's just my opinion I liked the previous one better

[@fixer10091994]

To be fair, when I saw that lightning i I immediately pictured a person

[@hodaelmesawi]

Does anyone know what font was used for the integrated self counselor wordmark?

[@mikkelkristiansen3694]

What keyboard do you have?

[@NerdJam]

Anne Pro 2 😃

[@jaredg.4071]

Nice, love your vids!

[@krisostomo6145]

I wish you could critique on a logo that I recently designed for a friend, sir.

[@shannonharris5173]

Great video as always 🤞

[@IkkezzUsedEmber]

What hurts me the most is that the "Southpaw" design in the thumbnail is literally not standing southpaw. like both left legs are in front which is orthodox. southpaw is in reverse!!

[@engespress]

I liked the Pick Pack one and the animal one.

[@Dynoboot]

Switch. Is it a lightning bolt or a person with no arms squatting?

[@biocybernaught3512]

I love these videos.

[@rafiktagrapes]

Pleease 🙏🏿🙏🏿 where can I share with u my logo to appear in next video?? 🙏🏿🙏🏿🙏🏿🙏🏿

[@willpatersondesign]

Post it to Reddit :) Link in the description!

[@tekateman6464]

I think the switch logo could look cool if you make the i and the scooter different color. The i black and the scooter white

[@FilipBrowny]

Am I the only one seeing the sense in SWITCH logo? This isn't a lightning bolt in my opinion, it represents a human standing on the scooter which you can clearly see on the icon. That dot on , let's stay letter i, in the word SWITCH, that dot actually represents human head and bolt is actually a torso and legs.

[@luchito200818]

can someone please tell what was the typography of "Integrated Self Counselor"???

[@JakeDragash]

Raleway :)

[@JanneWolterbeek]

Just joined the Reddit. Can we share old logos as well?

[@nosoyheineken]

The first one looks like a menstrual cup. Someone had to say this.

[@LifeofhOfficial]

Just wondering how can I share my works too?

[@mimille8201]

Go on Reddit and post on the R/ he built ;)

[@jameswatts7901]

Does anyone know the name/ brand of his keyboard?

[@NerdJam]

Anne Pro 2 😃

[@mohamednaflan4361]

how do I join the reddit community?

[@VanelVeltaz]

switch was my favorite

[@yout8ube_videos]

I liked the switch logo

[@dannyr2976]

Integrated Self Counsellor

[@biancecrash]

i thought the pick pack logo had a nose and it said pick so i thought it was a picking your nose joke..😰

[@IsacSandelin]

Good content!

[@dedytron]

Reminds me of Malaysian legends, the Alleycats!

[@unleashthedog]

Can neumorphism disappear in silence already?

[@willpatersondesign]

yes. Oh please yes.

[@asishnehra1131]

By looking at the logo, I though u were the founder of freedom phone.

[@jfaycomedy]

I recently had logo designs made for my small handmade jewelry company. Would you be willing to critique them?

[@DariusDrive]

Hey. Can you help me with new logo?

[@andersmorille7653]

The Integrated Self Counselor looks a bit too much like the Samsung Upday logo. Can't unsee it now ...

[@AshishSharma-xo6ig]

Next time you guys might see my logo... 😁

[@ndxs]

So now let's talk about fresh books logo design...

[@jahmone]

Yessss

[@MELK0R87]

That's not the new Firefox logo

[@funnyshortsstudio5255]

nice design

[@willpatersondesign]

Thank you!

[@seismixx]

Why you keep running out of coins in every episode >

[@t0ad_]

lots of ✨nice✨ pfp’s in the comments

[@mkrnkv]

thanks

[@escapepeterpan]

Yippee

[@acemanNL]

What is your WHS handicap? ⛳😀

[@ΒασίληςΞυλογιαννόπουλος-ο5ρ]

Maybe it's just me but he look a lot like Eddie from Kingsman.

[@naomipaterson9300]

🔥🔥🔥

[@raze9748]

❤️

[@robertpatterson1905]

Pick Pack and Southpaw

[@ErCapoAlex]

Wow

[@porcelainface7809]

you know id rather have a more complicated logo, the super minimalist logos look really boring honestly =/

[@tacoanneveldt7647]

Hey man, awesome video! I think i have made a very interesting logo and would love you to check it out and critique it. I would love to hear from you.

[@sam81832]

I've seen other videos like this. But This guy rants and critiques too much like he knows everything. Lol sad.