Deathbed [RETAKE] - Mediocrity UST

Original song composed by ‪@Landel1689‬
Mod owned by ‪@GrinchedHeavy‬
Retake and album cover composed/drawn by ‪@KetchupTheComposer‬ (Me)

[@KetchupTheComposer]

Y’all need to listen to my latest song I don’t want it to flop

[@mewxtherealitygod4706]

"wasting precious time on fighting for your doomed life instead of enjoying the life you had is human instincts, it can't ever be your fault. Ascend with no regrets in your heart"

[@GrinchedHeavy]

I can smell the talent seeping from this.. I’m going to keep a close eye on you bigman.

[@KetchupTheComposer]

@@GrinchedHeavyOh Hello! I did ask to join mediocrity a while back but the team was full- Either way, awesome seeing you here! I appreciate the kind words.

[@massimoyoquese1212]

@@KetchupTheComposer ma boy you dont understand no more innocence its going to no more innocenceing you

[@miaumixxx]

god bless

[@zemikluh]

why do i see you everywhere

[@mr.quietturtle]

Wait a minute...

[@emmanuelaquino4482]

I smell the fight or flight vibes

[@Tails_The_FoxVHS-CD]

and I smell farts😐

[@mihathenobody]

@@Tails_The_FoxVHS-CD Darnell wet farts.....?

[@user-eq6wb1wj3b]

@@Tails_The_FoxVHS-CD and I smell wannabe kid

[@TxniJxnes]

Imagine hearing your OWN FUCKING DEATH REPORT ON THE RADIO WHILE BEING ALIVE ON THE DAY RIGHT BEFORE YOU DIE ON THE RADIO 😮😮😮😮 This is sooo fucking cool man pleaaaase keep making more yoo!

[@PawnToons-HDOV]

A false life flashing before eyes that don't belong to me, to watch a little one die from inside his body, a fate undeserved. A fate I have caused. I won't let you flatline, child. I will not let this be your end.

[@xeddylore2008]

It's okay, young one. No more innocence doesn't mean no more peace. Come with me, child. *The light is waiting for you.*

[@KetchupTheComposer]

Y’all need to gas up my previous original song Dine and Shine Me and VibingLeaf worked hard on that shit

[@squashgaming7219]

VIBINGLEAF⁉ SAY NO MORE‼

[@bigsmoke6675]

Say no more king, on it right now. Great retake btw.

[@THEBEAN090-pt2kr]

@@bigsmoke6675 already listened to that shit. goes hard fr

[@massimoyoquese1212]

i always try to talk in english to made the creator of a song more easy to read my coment but now, idfc NUNCA HE VISTO UNA INTRODUCCION TAN HERMOSA TODO LO MEJORASTE, LA CHROMATIC DE NO MORE INNOCENCE ES MAS BELLA QUE NUNCA EL DIALOGO QUE PUSISTE AL INICIO MEJORA TODO LITERALMENTE AGARRASTE LA FRASE "no arregles lo que no esta roto", TE IMPORTO UNA MIERDA Y DECIDISTE HACER UNO DE LOS MEJORES RETAKES QUE HE VISTO ACABAS DE PERFECIONAR LO QUE YA DE POR SI ERA PERFECTO

[@KetchupTheComposer]

I had to use google translate to understand some of this comment - so it could have messed up, but from what I did understand, I thank you for the incredibly kind words.

[@Cool-Dude]

Can't believe they killed my man shinji; shit's fucked up...

[@a_rker]

This is fire as hell. I hope this blows up

[@jojoelgamer3144]

Yooo

[@a_rker]

@@jojoelgamer3144 Yo

[@omglul616]

Absolute banger, keep it up

[@cursed9019]

This goes unbelievably hard holy shit lmao

[@soundsdotzip]

That radio news bit at the end actually sent shivers down my spine, it's a brilliant addition! Great job on this retake!

[@lovestrucklovestruck]

its always so nice seeing your stuff pop up on my feed. amazing remix of an amazing song, really neat art too! youre skilled in so many ways :o)

[@KetchupTheComposer]

thank

[@mihathenobody]

This is such an awesome retake. Can't stop listening to it! ❤️❤️

[@Mr.Innocence11219]

Amazing work from the ust!

[@OriAndTheBlindForest]

A song ya can just **Feel.** You'll blow up for sure dude

[@greatestgryphon]

"Heh heh heh. Splendid."

[@DikShow]

What does NMI say when he appears for the first time at 0:39?

[@KetchupTheComposer]

@@DikShow that’s the child saying “Father, is that you?”

[@toastedmilk]

this is really good

[@theovermind2889]

First of all art looks great, pretty well made by you, but getting into the song itself, Makoto's chroms are nice, but in my opinion, after he transforms into his true form nmi's chrom should overtake kiddo's voice, being him a force stronger than kiddo, the instrumental sounds real nice, like in 3:10 I really love how well this part sounds, but starting the end it sounds way too powerful and kinda hopeful if you understand me, this part being a last struggle from kiddo to keep themselves alive against nmi's attempts, should have a heavier tone to it, now onto the end of the song itself, I like the concept of giving an actual end to kiddo's fate, but I feel nmi prescence should be more important as in the scrapped end he gives a small speech before kiddo's death. All in all it is a real nice retake giving it a more energetic touch, but the heavier tone of deathbed itself brings down some sections of the song, but don't let this comment get you down, I could never achieve anything near as good as this is, as the creativity in the end really gave it an extra kick to the song. keep cooking bro

[@KetchupTheComposer]

many words. Much thanks to you i Give

[@theovermind2889]

@@KetchupTheComposer Also I gotta say i enjoy kiddo's new chroms, sounds even better than the v2 version

[@kaiyuzujinkaihou]

its just...so peak....

[@LamingtonTrueTimeLord]

Well. Very nice. I like it. 👍

[@user-sn2qw7fq8n]

I like this, more energetic then the og that’s for sure

[@that_one_gardener]

Cool asf

[@jafguy]

Woohoo!

[@lordrwbyandnepwatcher1387]

Absolute legend in the live chat 🗿

[@Kogamat]

i didnt think anybody would retake this song

[@Quataries]

Coolio

[@Goobertron90000]

I thought that said metrocity for a second 💀

[@mrinsomniac2968]

bro i need this FLP

[@syrupgs]

Will u upload the instrument too? 😊

[@KetchupTheComposer]

1 .hthousan d/ at th7e%

[@Xioverze]

​@@KetchupTheComposerso true

[@Megestas]

Well its BANGER, but you took all the Past Memories of the good times vibes so thats more like another song than just remix

[@StarXxshine0]

INSTRUMENTAL PLEASE🥲🥲👍🔥

[@KetchupTheComposer]

At 1 thousand view

[@N3utral1zed]

I see you use the same pitch as my friend's remix (he made the randomix)

[@KetchupTheComposer]

oh i haven't seen that remix yet but that's cool ig

[@N3utral1zed]

@@KetchupTheComposer defo check his channel out And also one tip, try learn how to make Z-Game visualizers

[@KetchupTheComposer]

​@@N3utral1zed In the past I have created many visualizers but found it to be a quite unenjoyable process. I much prefer using album covers.

[@N3utral1zed]

Ok then you do you, my friend when remixing this used catmania's gameplay ​@@KetchupTheComposer

[@ncisk5939]

Cuhhh

[@KORRUPT_NOIZE]

if you told someone this was a fnf song nobody would believe you

[@sowet1]

Nah you trippin'

[@KetchupTheComposer]

@@KORRUPT_NOIZE I think they would, but I appreciate the kind words nonetheless

[@undergrinder6]

Flp when?

[@KetchupTheComposer]

@@undergrinder6 I don’t release my flps

[@QuitoTheSpiderMonkey]

This shi dont got my art, so its mid 😒😒😒/j

[@Survivabilityrate]

Quit being salty.

[@QuitoTheSpiderMonkey]

@@Survivabilityrate naur🤬🤬/j

[@SXRN238]

OLD

[@KetchupTheComposer]

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[@daunt5784]

@@KetchupTheComposer i think he meant that the original song is an old version. V2 is on production if im not wrong anyway ignore it, this retake is great