"DELIVERY" Rage leads to regret in this animated short film by Patrick Smith

[@PatrickSmithAnimation]

My big brother used to do this thing called the "CRAW", it's when he would grab me by my face, lift me off the ground, and throw me. I was a little dude. Anyway, that is the impetus of my least favorite film I've ever made "DELIVERY"

[@dootYT]

Ouch

[@quintavious1619]

My friends older brother used to grab him and hold him to the ground and spit in his face it was the most trash thing I've ever see someone do.

[@Swirly_D]

@Акva •Kоtek• капец грустная анимация

[@PatrickSmithAnimation]

@@quintavious1619 yes, something similar happened to me. but my brother would keep holding me, allowing the spit to dry.

[@PatrickSmithAnimation]

@@MrOof-ob8uw hahaha, definitely!! whenever my parents would go out, I would just hide, sometimes for hours, until they got home. fortunately i had another big brother that would often defend me, but when he left home, it was open season on Patrick!!!

[@youtubeuniversity3638]

Imagine if the box just contained a replacement framed photo identical to the one that had fell.and smashed.

[@PatrickSmithAnimation]

where were you when i thought up the story?

[@derekzhaosvlogchannel7240]

Patrick Smith lol

[@youtubeuniversity3638]

@@PatrickSmithAnimation At home in the back room.

[@ezfav8675]

That's also what I thought would be in it..

[@BrotherBot3000]

@@PatrickSmithAnimation you better fix the video then.

[@luckytosmile168]

"fear leads to anger, anger leads to hate, hate leads to suffering." -yoda

[@sir_talks_alot392]

"Enough chitchat. What is your pitch, kid? ... Come on. Money, time is. Power, money is. Pizza, power is. Knowledge, pizza is. ... Let's go." - also Yoda

[@robertandreicarabineanu2430]

"Fear anger leads to, anger hate leads to, hate suffering leads to"

[@jdstin1060]

This has happened before to me...

[@mr.y9669]

This tells a story without any dialogue so well.

[@nayzer4544]

True

[@rubythefurrywolfgaming5347]

It's a Gumnut 😑

[@mayyyooo]

Gak bisa bahasa Inggris

[@HeitorXlk]

"violence always solves things" ~Uganda Knuckles

[@10.dominicqueg.jovitta4a4]

@@mayyyooo aku ada temenya

[@no-hw2km]

6 minutes and this is the darkest and best animation I've ever seen. No words said in this video whatsoever and still shows emotion much better than if there was. This is a perfect animation, and it's one of the few videos I've shared with a friend. 10/10

[@PatrickSmithAnimation]

awesome. thanks for this, means a lot to me.

[@bumboxerr]

"life good, get box" "brother steals box" "kill brother" "Regret."

[@ainhyjamil1625]

LMAO

[@pixelcat29]

“life good, get box” “brother steals box” “kill brother” “life better” “time flys” “old age” “die” “go to hell” “Regret.”

[@bigfckingbug10k45]

@@pixelcat29 demons kill bunny Doom kills demons Goes to hell

[@bigfckingbug10k45]

Hell regrets

[@unifiedhorizons2663]

@@pixelcat29 but what if you were a Satan worshiper now your partying

[@PlayItOnIpad]

The two things I’m amazed by: 1. The background art 2. The smooth animation 3. The storyline

[@PatrickSmithAnimation]

Thanks!

[@PlayItOnIpad]

Patrick Smith your welcome :)

[@PlayItOnIpad]

GamingWithJulZ sorry, I’m stupid lmao!

[@JavierEscuella1911]

*BIG* *MEATY* *HANDS*

[@LOL-wk4ej]

Da hands r bigg

[@k2comix781]

rage and revenge will reward you with nothing but regret in the end

[@PatrickSmithAnimation]

yes. I thought it was a simple story to illustrate this point.

[@ryckieknucklesanwiwarrrrhu2811]

who Cares, Revenge Feels Nice At The End.

[@loveducanes3625]

YEA

[@groundbird7477]

I mean, he got the box

[@dingabooridiboor1655]

Rage is good when u too powerful than u think,thats why ppls scared come closer to you

[@afist5595]

I wonder what the guy was thinking when he picked up the box from the door. If there was nothing inside, he should've been able to feel that there wasn't anything simply by moving the box around. They both should've been able to recognize there was nothing in the box during the moments they held it, yet they both still fought for it. The brown haired guy seemed like a jerk though, and had probably been one for awhile. For some reason, he may have thought something good was inside, despite there being no apparent labeling and the certainty he should've gotten that it was empty when he moved it around, but he could've also just wanted a reason to play some cruel tricks on the white-haired guy (Although, from the way they were looking at each other, they probably genuinely thought there was something of value in it). If this was the first time something like this happened, the white-haired guy would've been ticked off sure, but definitely not willing to kill the other guy. So while it definitely was wrong to kill the brown-haired guy, there is still some blame on his side from fucking with someone so much they reach their breaking point and snap. At the same time, the white-haired guy murdered a man, one that he knew for a while at that (although from the description, their relationship was abusive, so knowing him for a long time wouldn't really help. For example, would you knowing your torturer for 3 years make you treat them better than a stranger? Probably not.), for a random box that he didn't know the contents of, and, for all he knew, could be something worthless. It could just be that while he was expecting something decent from the box, he was mainly focused on killing the other guy because of his rage, and the box would just be a nice prize he would get, only for him to find out it had nothing in it, and realize that he had committed murder for essentially nothing. However, although anger was obviously a factor in this whole thing, a little bit of stupidity also comes into play here. The white-haired guy was unnecessarily happy for a box, and for some reason couldn't tell it was empty from both its weight and the fact that no sound came from inside when the box was shaked, implying that there's nothing in there (and this was before the whole fight thing, I doubt he had so much rage at the time that it'd blind him from obvious things like this), although this could be seen as a little nitpicky. Really though, both people are at blame here, and even though it's only an animation, it's kind of sad to see how this whole thing could've been avoided if the two friends had a better relationship and just decided to open the box together. They'd be disappointed, sure, but it definitely wouldn't be as bad as what happened in the video. Also, the package delivery guy at the end of the video with a box makes me curious as to whether that's just an extra bit that's unrelated to the story of the video, or if the guy took the original box and replaced it with an empty one. Regardless, it wouldn't have really mattered, the white-haired guy might've actually gotten something had the delivery guy not (hypothetically) swapped it, but he most likely would've still committed murder.

[@afist5595]

Comment was a little long and messy, but just wanted to put out all (or at least most) of my thoughts about the video in one comment.

[@silverhawk6748]

Bro just want to say I read this to understand but damn

[@CallOfCabbage]

Me brain no good now

[@camiloandrade1666]

mucho texto, but good abstact

[@Ohokok_channeledition]

I like the way your brain works!

[@BunnyQueen97]

This felt relatable instantly, especially the feeling of the brown haired brother running all over him and even climbing out of him. That’s how it feels to be totally crushed by a sibling you still stupidly look up to.

[@PatrickSmithAnimation]

yes.

[@scaredycat999]

i really really hate myself because of this movie, but still this is the most interesting one I’ve ever seen keep this up

[@PatrickSmithAnimation]

Thanks for your comment. I wasn't going to post this, but based on the reaction it's getting, I guess i'm glad I did. it's a personal film, and is probably too dark and violent for some people.. but the violence is expressing something very specific.. the idea that rage and revenge don't lead to anything.

[@oneoftheegreatest]

4:50 Congrats! you killed your friend! "New achievement unlocked!"

[@TheOverwriter]

take that shit seriously.

[@TheNoiseGAming808]

​@@TheOverwriter Nuh Uh

[@TheNoiseGAming808]

Last Time I Checked Friends Don't Make You Draw Blood When They Hit You They Only Tap You

[@nulflare]

they’re brothers

[@violentwhite0]

“How Did We Get Here?”

[@pvp257]

Well, everything in this video was a blast. I've become a fan of yours since the POUR series. The most heartbreaking moment of this film is when both of them are confronting each other and the brown haired guy sees the other bleeding. In that moment, his face turns to be sad, as if now he was realizing that what he's done was wrong. And then, when the white haired one grabs his face and caresses it, it's like he's recording the lasts shreds of life from his friend before snapping his neck. Like, there was some doubt because he knew what he wanted to do but was still thinking about how wrong it was. But in the end, the rage was stronger than humanity.

[@PatrickSmithAnimation]

thanks for taking the time to watch, I truly appreciate it. also thx for such a great comment.

[@redlady120]

Oh my. Now that's a strong sentiment on what greed and selfishness can do to siblings. Esp if it's material in nature.

[@ainhyjamil1625]

Damn a membership

[@TheNoiseGAming808]

Is That What The Star Means? I Never Seen It Before

[@Douglup]

Wrath can pollute your judgement in ways you can't even comprehend. This animation is something that everyone should watch and ponder about. It's better to learn from the mistakes of others than to suffer the guilt of your own.

[@nikolasknight4061]

Imagine breaking a neck that sounds like ripping cardboard

[@ainhyjamil1625]

Imagine throwing someone like throwing a trash paper

[@dogeiscool3135]

🙂

[@graditude1]

It is

[@polskabalaclava]

This is too damn relatable, having issues with grudges and my own mind torturing me with things that happened in the past is sometimes just agony (and annoying)

[@xionvebb1708]

Things im amazed about: 1. The background art 2. The smooth animation 3. The storyline 4. The fact they could both beat the crap out of eachother with an empty cardboard box 5. they're both about as strong as popeye the sailor man (popneck/necksnap man) 6. that patrick smith didn't do the same thing as his own animated guy

[@PatrickSmithAnimation]

background art was done by my friend Tony Curanaj.. he's brilliant.

[@markysharkboy0261]

This kinda reminds me of Joker because that guy got revenge for being abused

[@ieatworms7919]

I absolutely loved the scene where the white haired guy faded out of consciousness into the weird trippy world (seemingly a concussion). Im not sure if it was intended but the part of his roommate LITERALLY walking all over him really explained the dynamic between the characters. That as well their very beginning interactions really sold the idea of the hero and the villain, but I was pleasantly surprised to see that there was no grand victory. No matter who won they both would have ended up the same, full of mistakes and nothing to show for it

[@PatrickSmithAnimation]

thanks for watching, and for your insightful comment. this was one of my first films I ever did, I'm happy it resonated with you.

[@clowngaming6589]

The box: I Defined laws of gravity. me: ok den

[@PatrickSmithAnimation]

you're too observant:)

[@stm7810]

actually given the ending and the spinning of it that can physically work.

[@wdrutherfordium4886]

losing friends to a pointless argument over nothing. I really like how you did it.

[@fleurgymcheurgy9267]

The dark-haired roomate was a bully and a parasite, but the light-haired roomate didn't take the chance to communicate their displeasure, at least not on-screen. The result is a tangled mess of things that likely both regret, all told, assuming the existence of an afterlife in the world of this animation. btw I really liked the fluid reality-breaking animation illustrating how the light-haired roomate felt like a doormat.

[@NikNokGamer]

Ngl, considering what a douche-bag dark-haired roommate is, he probably wouldn’t have stopped bullying mushroom man if mushroom man politely told him to stop.

[@michellegong1626]

Well, this turned out darker than I thought. I like how the blood is bright red in comparison to the rest of the background.

[@Sylvarvar]

Dude this is so realistic I thought, I could go in the screen and take some of that popcorn. Amazing job on this Animation! The sounds are just.... Wow!

[@MayaAshAnimation]

All he had to do was pull the string and then an embarrassing picture of spongebob will pop up.

[@cashitobias7731]

You can see the guilt in his eyes When hes about to snap his Big brother's neck 4:40

[@piepie3799]

Наткнулся на shorts в ютубе с вашей анимацией. Это невероятно! Как же мне нравится подобный стиль и анимация! Ещё и саунд дизайн очень приятно слушать. Вы проделали невероятную работу! Молодец ♥️♥️♥️

[@edmeadart]

Always love seeing your work, Patrick!

[@bruh2407]

0:14 This man head just did a full 180

[@chambernowell1917]

1:14 genius, starting to chew before even stuffing

[@umekiomckee4033]

It’s sad but the animation and the lighting and shading is good keep it up also I would love a animation on an alternative universe of food that eats humans

[@josephgamble2230]

Im a simple man. I see Patrick Smith. I watch his animations

[@mywayfernandez8704]

I'm about to be the same, myself.

[@vinstatic420]

This animation is very good at depicting the precise way someone acts that leads to violence or violent thoughts. In particular getting aggressive or violent/abusive themselves when confronted. It's like they leave you no other option. You'd think humans are smarter than animals and yet so many of them can't be reasoned with words alone. It's sad more than anything

[@PatrickSmithAnimation]

thx for thoughtful comment, def a tragic film

[@squiddy7118]

4:46 reminds me of SCP-173

[@intruder9127]

Bruh

[@mywayfernandez8704]

He will move when you stare, though(the guy that's here).

[@Inky5]

Yeah but 173 is a Peanut

[@pogo5909]

nah, 173 did it a lot cleaner and quicker, no hesitation, just one load *CRUNCH*

[@khmasterva6919]

Ah peanut

[@zeroinfo6582]

MY MANS JUST MURDERED SOMEONE

[@PatrickSmithAnimation]

brutal, i know.

[@circleinforthecube5170]

@@PatrickSmithAnimation he goin to prison

[@grackr2zo]

Meh the dead guy deserved it

[@juliasmallwood4703]

Jesus Christ That was gruesome. How do you crank out videos the smooth and beautiful so fast?

[@PatrickSmithAnimation]

this is an older film. yes, very gruesome.. part of the story. Ultimately it's one of the reasons that this is my least favorite thing i've ever done.

[@ashamed5232]

just casually twists his brothers neck

[@mywayfernandez8704]

@@ashamed5232 Look at him right before he does, though.

[@night_sniper5754]

To be fair, he had it coming. Treating brother like trash all his life and then this? No wonder the dude just snapped.

[@targashsensei7900]

Which one?

[@night_sniper5754]

@@targashsensei7900 good question.

[@underdosedhedgehog9436]

the storytelling is really good, and I love the art style and the way the hands are drawn

[@PatrickSmithAnimation]

Thanks!

[@tylosenpai6920]

Rage, if not controlled properly, can crush you and leave you with regret

[@lich.gr1182]

this animation reminds me one of the episodes from Spongebob with a "magic" box thing

[@christhecat2915]

White Hair Guy : "I won but what cost"

[@aqirno911]

Fr

[@Kaylee-Bear]

Yikes. This is felt by every middle child

[@PatrickSmithAnimation]

indeed. getting terrorized by my older brothers was the impetus for this film.

[@Kaylee-Bear]

@@PatrickSmithAnimation well Im glad you were able to take what happened with your brothers and turn it into something that people can learn from and enjoy

[@Sylvarvar]

@@PatrickSmithAnimation I feel so bad for you 😭

[@amogus6770]

My sister does the same thing I have a lot of repressed anger on her I just don’t show it because she is my sister

[@Paperman21]

Finally I found the original video of this animated

[@Inky5]

Plot twist: the mailman planned this

[@winterdoesedits]

Bro just mad😂

[@bunlegoat3826]

Nice and epic another animation from our very good animator Patrick Smith

[@TheNoiseGAming808]

Atleast He Didn't Pull The SECRECT STRING Leading To The SECRECT COMPARTMENT

[@dogmation]

WOW IS BEST ANIMATION AND I LIKE THE VIDEO :DDDD

[@PatrickSmithAnimation]

Thank you so much!

[@dogmation]

No thank you you best!

[@Ataraxas.]

Here again, hello once again, Patrick Smith!, :).

[@sovietunion142]

2:43 The fact that this kid was able to draw blood by just grabbing him terrifies me

[@ARandomGuy112]

Well if it isnt the Soviet union

[@DokkanLad]

@@ARandomGuy112 Well if it isn't the guy who asked

[@ARandomGuy112]

@@DokkanLad a

[@neo.998]

Man that part where he snapped his neck made me disturbed

[@SansTheSkeleton-tb9jv]

*VERY nice*

[@nagyakos7269]

Ahh the sweet revenge, that is the cure for everything, that is the true sweetest feeling Ppl think about what they doing think about what you are going to do and then you will nothing regret

[@Gary_King_001]

but what a good animation ... rating. 10/10

[@PatrickSmithAnimation]

Thanks so much!! i have trouble watching older work because i feel like it's so crude. the more recent films like POUR 585 are a lot better, animation wise.. check it out if you have the time!

[@Gary_King_001]

@@PatrickSmithAnimation Okay

[@Gary_King_001]

@@PatrickSmithAnimation There is a cheerleader that you should know, she is good and she sees that Adrián is a good team kzbin.info/door/eQwCalZK1scamopwHt9UWw

[@ScaleneMender45]

The delivery man did a big fuck you moment

[@PenguinieReal]

Love ur vids keep it up man

[@idonthaveanameidea3883]

Penguinie you are so right man

[@mmp2350]

Yee we all support you

[@shawnparkieboi2082]

Yah

[@PatrickSmithAnimation]

Thanks, will do!

[@NoahDoesStuff.]

Just casually breaks his brother neck...

[@cartooncritique6625]

4:35 Not gonna lie, at this moment, I was half expecting them to kiss. 😅

[@SentryGaming275]

What did they fight for? Just an empty box. It all started from a few punches to murder. That's just sad.

[@gabesterwitz9054]

5:15 instant tape!!

[@thisman2021]

"when I was a little kid, my mother told me not to stare in to the sun, So once, When I Was Six, I Did, in that day I had my first headache ..." see my animation and like it if you like! kzbin.info/www/bejne/b5q3e4WEZqeaeqM

[@kingcheeseman7299]

The fact that bowl cut hair dude killed his friend over a box though: Edit: left tears coming from my eyes after this.

[@melvin7086]

2:43 ge got yeet lol XD

[@MasiahWillis-ib6el]

Bro did a asmr video fr

[@_Indisisive_]

Amazing work as always 👍

[@thisman2021]

"when I was a little kid, my mother told me not to stare in to the sun, So once, When I Was Six, I Did, in that day I had my first headache ..." see my animation and like it if you like! kzbin.info/www/bejne/b5q3e4WEZqeaeqM

[@raldimoment]

Is nobody gonna talk about how bright that yellow box was in a dull scene

[@SchizoGuitarist]

You know you should collab with the guy that made double king

[@shawk952]

Yes!!!!!

[@dezman311]

Felix Colgrave

[@humanationtoon]

4:45 well geuss white haired boy wants revenge on brown haired boy

[@ReonE60000]

3:12 he literally smashed his face with a goddamn KATROON BAWX

[@victorias8539]

Woah! I absolutely love this animation, new sub 🎉

[@PatrickSmithAnimation]

Thanks for subbing!

[@dannisaloof8398]

People who Bully you should never be ur friend. AND This friendship will end anyway because of selfishness. So here is nothing worthy to regret. The mushroom guy does the right thing.

[@MILKYWAVE-gj3qt]

Pov: When we play with my Sibling.

[@fancyrobloxian]

Favorite video yet 1:45

[@fancyrobloxian]

I meant to say part

[@Zoffee662]

A few minutes later... *Damn, that escalated quickly*

[@SahibSingh-ok5tj]

I love your animated short films😍😍😍😍😍😍😍

[@BabbyGGGgG]

Your sharp edged art style is absolutely gorgeous!

[@PatrickSmithAnimation]

Thank you so much!

[@dead_insane_entity]

I think if you showed flashbacks of other abusive things that his brother did to him instead of showing his brother walk all over him i think that would have sold it. But other than that i think you did an amazing job at this animation because of how much detail and oviase sybalism there is in this animation. And it is always the animations about abuse that sure can touch all of us and make us fell some empathy for others.

[@PatrickSmithAnimation]

thanks for watching, and even more thanks for your thoughtful critical comment. It means a lot to me that you took the time!

[@norman8737]

They really “fought” for nothing

[@V0IDWARE]

4:45 Well that was jarring

[@Kirby0Critico]

1:21 Why this looks so appetizing😭

[@aksomeone]

I actually like the style of animation!!🤞 I hope I create something like this some day!😶 More power to you!❤

[@NazoKira]

Damn, I love the artstyle, the animation, and the atmosphere. Sound design and the music too as well! Gives me newgrounds vibes and I love it.

[@PatrickSmithAnimation]

thank you!

[@hellobye2301]

Imagine...inside a card fluttered down....and in it was the words,”I miss you,bro.”And attached wasn’t a picture of them both with their recently passed on father.What if that was why he took it,because he wanted to see one last glimpse of their father before he gifted it....

[@JoaoHenriquePlaysOficial]

Moral of the story: Never kill your brother before finding out what's inside a delivery box.

[@kevinxz1125]

1:29 that 2nd guy it looks exactly like lincolin loud

[@Notsmarter125]

I fell super bad for the both 😢

[@GoblimMusicandgaming]

We need another part of pour 585 please

[@PatrickSmithAnimation]

working on it!!

[@PatrickSmithAnimation]

@@Mega_The_Friendly_Shark still working on it.. actually, i'm working on a series of very short videos that use same characters from pour 585

[@mywayfernandez8704]

@@PatrickSmithAnimation I just wanted to say I love the subscriber animation you made from the 585 characters.

[@PatrickSmithAnimation]

@@mywayfernandez8704 thanks! yeah that was fun to make, i wanted to do something original for 100k. i'll have to do something similar for 500k!

[@justaboi4438]

Amazing!!

[@Duuo49]

2024 everyone here?

[@erhankuzmin]

Я но русский

[@говноаниматор-и5т]

​@@erhankuzminо русский:D

[@ПовелительНосков]

This. Is. Amazing.

[@ChennxD]

4:45 The kill moment is like a game that called among us. A new trending game. Btw nice animation. Where did you Created it?

[@Wizard_635]

awesome video!

[@M3TAH34D]

Fun fact:he did the neck snapping fromenterthedojoshow 4:20

[@river5390]

Bro really killed his brother? Roomie? For an empty box 😭😭

[@camp30schannel73]

4:58 link be like

[@fancyrobloxian]

A rare box that is inside nothing!

[@stm7810]

Wow, just wow that was a trip, It's scary thinking of the connections between this and so many real world toxic relationships.

[@lidiadiroteo1314]

Esto nos deja una gran leccion de vida

[@mobiletaskforce9210]

Yea Dont kill uour brother

[@Проверьте-ФСБ]

You kill a person, you are happy, you recive your prize, and then....you realize that the prize is nothing, and you killed a person for nothing....that's how thing works but this is bad, very very bad

[@Portal8720]

This is kind of violent 3:42

[@PatrickSmithAnimation]

indeed. this film is about rage and regret. not my fav film, but it's ok.

[@the_madson]

4:26 Notice the concern on his friend's face when his nose starts bleeding, its genuine.