THE BEST PERSONAL STATEMENT I'VE EVER READ (Cambridge University Example)

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Doctor Shaene

Doctor Shaene

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@iTzMaJorTaK
@iTzMaJorTaK 3 жыл бұрын
It’s not about how much work experience you do, it’s about how you demonstrate the skills and insight gained from the work experience that you did do. From a final year medic who got in with basically no hospital work experience.
@ameerahussein9324
@ameerahussein9324 3 жыл бұрын
Thank you for this! Due to rona there’s no way I’m getting hospital work experience
@abdulqadirmaricar258
@abdulqadirmaricar258 3 жыл бұрын
Hey, if you don’t mind could I read your ps. I’m in year 12 and in dire need of some inspiration. Thanks :)
@l.n.9462
@l.n.9462 2 жыл бұрын
Hey, I'm glad it worked out for you. I completely understand the position you were in because I'm in that position right now. I realized I wanted to do nursing late so I didn't have years of preparation or experience. & I only have a few months to apply. (I'm in the UK so you don't do Geneds but usually, people take a year of nursing-related subjects before going to uni.) I was wondering what you expanded on in your essay? Thanks, Best.
@anneharrison1849
@anneharrison1849 2 жыл бұрын
Absolutely, even compared to when this personal statement with written, Cambridge has decreased the importance of work experience. It's generally still necessary to demonstrate some caring experience, but they are trying to decrease the value of "I shadowed a surgeon for two weeks (because Daddy is a doctor and arranged it for me)". Despite this, they still seem to demonstrate some cluelessness, my daughter has been told the best way to practice for interview is to practice talking to someone working in the field and she's quite disappointed I don't know anyone working in linguistics!
@ishakanani2508
@ishakanani2508 2 ай бұрын
How am i supposed to have work experience when im literally not started uni
@alishaashraf3364
@alishaashraf3364 2 жыл бұрын
Looks like he was preparing all his life for this personal statement moment. Shined.
@АсетЖумашкалиев
@АсетЖумашкалиев 5 ай бұрын
😆
@magdalenaglinka2195
@magdalenaglinka2195 4 жыл бұрын
Honestly good luck to any of you guys applying this year. I remember doing my personal statement last year and you can't imagine how happy I am to have this part of my life behind me hahah
@joan5734
@joan5734 3 жыл бұрын
How did it go?
@magdalenaglinka2195
@magdalenaglinka2195 3 жыл бұрын
@@joan5734 It went pretty well I got accepted to my favourite uni (Edinburgh) so couldn't be happier :) How is it going for you?
@SelfImprovement1111
@SelfImprovement1111 3 жыл бұрын
You’ll have to write one when you get a job 😂
@guccitae8416
@guccitae8416 3 жыл бұрын
@@SelfImprovement1111 no you dont lol
@SelfImprovement1111
@SelfImprovement1111 3 жыл бұрын
@@guccitae8416 well certain jobs do.
@roseannetrow1208
@roseannetrow1208 4 жыл бұрын
although this video really clearly explained a structure and why this guys statement was good, its really of no help to most of us. that's a hell of a lot of experience that most of us dont have and cant even think of a suitable option to replace. most of us have retail or fast food jobs. It would be really helpful if you made a video helping those of us who arent already at a massive advantage with excellent grades and work experience, we are the ones that really need help. No offence, i really appreciate the effort and clarity of the video, just i checked out almost instantly because right away i knew you werent talking to people like me and you cant help me with this, that guy was always going to get into uni, the statement was bonus for him. There's a lot of us out there hoping our statement banks our place. is it worth me making a skillshare account or will the template be much like this video and only really help those who are already stand out?
@ShahnawazKhan-re6sj
@ShahnawazKhan-re6sj 4 жыл бұрын
Aye, I agree a lot with you on this. @Doctor Shaene , I hope you're able to us too!
@VegitoBlue
@VegitoBlue 4 жыл бұрын
Replace work experience with life experience that’s one thing I plan to do 😄
@mondstadtvlogs
@mondstadtvlogs 4 жыл бұрын
no matter what type of work experience and things outside of school you've done, always find a way to link them back to the course by highlighting the skills you've gained or developed (be it teamwork, problem-solving, etc.) and show what you've learned from those experiences
@arabboyakhmadullaev7914
@arabboyakhmadullaev7914 4 жыл бұрын
Yes, right. I dont even have that good level of English and my ps now looks like a story for kids🤦‍♂️
@hoshihonasaneha7563
@hoshihonasaneha7563 4 жыл бұрын
they specifically said this is a Cambridge University example, so I don't see why it is surprising that the applicant has lots of experience and perfect grades. Maybe you should search for personal statement examples that are more suited to what you want to achieve?
@kawaiikitty4569
@kawaiikitty4569 4 жыл бұрын
The personal statement was effective because it showcased the best aspects of this individual, using a fact based method. This also avoids any aspect of appearing arrogant as it is the facts that show the passion of the individual backed up with the active steps they have taken to learn about the subject. This format also works for personal statements for job applications.
@DoctorShaene
@DoctorShaene 4 жыл бұрын
facts
@Catitalaratoncita
@Catitalaratoncita 3 жыл бұрын
I love your vocabulary skills.
@kawaiikitty4569
@kawaiikitty4569 3 жыл бұрын
Ophélie Baudelaire Thank you, that’s very kind of you!
@tdreamgmail
@tdreamgmail 3 жыл бұрын
And what do you write if you're not the perfect human being.
@JessicaAnyanwu-c2l
@JessicaAnyanwu-c2l Жыл бұрын
😂😂😂😂
@rimshazulfiqar6067
@rimshazulfiqar6067 Жыл бұрын
That's the most valid question anyone can ever ask.
@meera8577
@meera8577 10 ай бұрын
but at last we r human being and machine of cooking up stories. So do that lie lie and just lie.
@chisomudeze7706
@chisomudeze7706 8 ай бұрын
​@@meera8577most of them obviously do
@ramieofori-adarkwah3118
@ramieofori-adarkwah3118 7 ай бұрын
Honestly 😂😂😂😂😂
@rosie6
@rosie6 2 жыл бұрын
I’m not gonna lie when I heard his intro I drooled a little. Whenever I see really good writing it makes me so happy and inspired! Thank you!
@plebjames
@plebjames 2 жыл бұрын
Having an amazing array of experiences is a big part of what makes this personal statement so good
@martinb1488
@martinb1488 4 жыл бұрын
So well edited, simple and easy to understand. You earned a new subscriber !
@DoctorShaene
@DoctorShaene 4 жыл бұрын
Awesome, thank you!
@NoahAndABadger
@NoahAndABadger 4 жыл бұрын
Me 26 years old graduates uni 5 years ago watching a video on how to write a personal statement
@DoctorShaene
@DoctorShaene 4 жыл бұрын
loool
@akdlg9sjjslk8
@akdlg9sjjslk8 3 жыл бұрын
Dude I'm exactly the same as you, glad I'm not the only one 😭
@katrinapaliukenas7232
@katrinapaliukenas7232 2 жыл бұрын
i really enjoy the break-downs you provide, but it would be nice to hear a full read-through right at the end to understand the natural flow of the statements
@toothfairy5352
@toothfairy5352 3 жыл бұрын
I wish people would just read start to finish and dissect it after. It’s important to hear how it flows.
@Anshul_126
@Anshul_126 Жыл бұрын
I have to write a sop within 48 hours and here i was looking for it on KZbin. The details are immaculate.
@hikalight
@hikalight 4 жыл бұрын
With all do respect this is far from the best personal statement, and honestly, in rare cases, most personal statements are adequate enough, and only get labeled as outstanding when the person using them succeeds enough to become relevant for people to analyze it wishing to replicate the same success.
@munirabasher8873
@munirabasher8873 3 жыл бұрын
Whoa ur friend is a full package, but honestly he is such a great example cuz we have to learn from the best. Thanks.
@papariham4008
@papariham4008 7 ай бұрын
I CAN NOT THANK YOU ENOUGH FOR YOUR OPSONIZING WAY TO COLLECT THE INCREDIBLE IDEAS MEDICAL STUDENTS
@contemporary_Latino
@contemporary_Latino Жыл бұрын
I’ve been watching videos RE personal statements for a couple of days now. I’m at the beginning of this one and it’s already clearly the best.
@nesrinedahou7919
@nesrinedahou7919 3 жыл бұрын
it just inspired me and motivated me to write mine after getting confused between the personal statement and statement of purpose, I think everything is clear now, thank you
@Jessica-zf9ok
@Jessica-zf9ok 3 жыл бұрын
can you explain a bit about the differences pls I'm still so lost😢
@anonymous-wi1pw
@anonymous-wi1pw 2 жыл бұрын
1:20 1:36 1:58 2:41 3:35 4:52 5:08 6:01 6:35 7:18 8:16 8:43 9:12
@willwithers8171
@willwithers8171 3 жыл бұрын
I think the most important thing here is doing lots of relevant work experience and volunteering!
@ranwaalsheikh5105
@ranwaalsheikh5105 4 жыл бұрын
Can you talk more about the structure for the personal statement that doesn't have a work experience also how to include extracurriculars.
@maisie1120
@maisie1120 3 жыл бұрын
Without work experience, applying for a competitive course like medicine especially at Oxbridge, you barely stand a chance
@Cz-hd3vu
@Cz-hd3vu 3 жыл бұрын
This is by far the best PS analysis I saw on KZbin. Thx a lotttt
@lilaipad3075
@lilaipad3075 4 жыл бұрын
I wouldn't say this personal statement is "the best I've ever read" or even all that great. There's no specificity in the examples, they're rehashing their CV talking about a lot of different things superficially, there is no real theme interconnecting the examples. Obviously, they've done a lot of impressive stuff... maybe UK Personal Statements are different, but it's better to focus on a few things and talk more deeply about their meaning to you.
@shahadarzouni5601
@shahadarzouni5601 4 жыл бұрын
I agree with you point on having no theme. However, I suppose through the numerous experiences he went out of his way for, he does show a genuine passion and understanding for Medicine.
@chloelau8291
@chloelau8291 4 жыл бұрын
UK personal statements are very different from other places in the world especially the us, however, I don’t think that is the best I’ve seen too
@brightigwe3313
@brightigwe3313 4 жыл бұрын
How is this personal statement different from a statement of purpose?
@chloelau8291
@chloelau8291 4 жыл бұрын
Bright Igwe it is used deliberately for applying universities, UK universities have student fixated on a specific course (like a major) from the start so you would need to specify what made you interested in it, life goals and more of american essays are deemed rather a bad approach to UK Personal Statements
@tanushagarwal5522
@tanushagarwal5522 4 жыл бұрын
It's quite a bit different from Essays or personal statements elsewhere in the world. It's a lot less deep and a lot more explanatory especially with regards to one's passion or experience in the field for which they're applying.
@Celinassousa
@Celinassousa 4 жыл бұрын
Amazing video! I even took notes and I am not thinking about writing a personal statement any time soon. Amazing advice
@DoctorShaene
@DoctorShaene 4 жыл бұрын
Glad it was helpful!
@Visitusexamsharkscom
@Visitusexamsharkscom 3 жыл бұрын
★★★I used this website topedgewriters.com to help me write my application letter and they did a good job. I only sent them a draft and they wrote a professional letter for me.I recommend that you guys should check them out.★★★
@martingirgis5150
@martingirgis5150 Жыл бұрын
I recommend this video to all who do not know where to start with their personal statement. Take the idea of the structure of the essay and make it your own. Goodluck to app students and God bless
@kattylike5266
@kattylike5266 3 жыл бұрын
This was very insightful. I was wondering if you would recommend mentioning a levels in the personal statement alongside the other points for economics
@sacdaabdurhman
@sacdaabdurhman 3 жыл бұрын
“You cannot be protected from the things that frighten you and hurt you, but if you identify with part of your being that is responsible for transformation, then you are always equal or more than equal of the things that frighten you” Keep you head up 💜
@No-ky3kb
@No-ky3kb Жыл бұрын
fantastic quote
@manasichavan1331
@manasichavan1331 3 жыл бұрын
This video helped me to understand what exactly is the personal statement. I also watched other videos there but was not that clear and easy to understand. I followed the steps in this video and my application is approved for LLM program. Thanks a lot ❤
@DoctorShaene
@DoctorShaene 3 жыл бұрын
You're very welcome
@DanzEnglish
@DanzEnglish 2 жыл бұрын
I hope the other tutorial videos are like this. SO well made. Thanks Dr
@natalieadams3463
@natalieadams3463 2 жыл бұрын
Thank you so much! This totally helped me write my personal statement for a scholarship application.
@nusratali7179
@nusratali7179 Жыл бұрын
Hello! I want to thank you Shaene for your amazing free personal statement guide. I followed it and made it my own and I am happy to say I got into NEOMA Business School. Thank you so much for contributing in such a significant way to my journey.
@okolosioghenerukevwe9418
@okolosioghenerukevwe9418 Жыл бұрын
Congratulations
@musoseven8218
@musoseven8218 6 ай бұрын
A great video, empathically done. Your friend is a star, caring, empathic and eloquent. 👍😊💜✌️
@saachisharma9804
@saachisharma9804 4 жыл бұрын
I just found out about your channel from tiktok and your videos are so helpful and informative! Thank you :)
@DoctorShaene
@DoctorShaene 4 жыл бұрын
Yessss 🙌 Glad it’s useful!
@Charlie-gq9vu
@Charlie-gq9vu 4 жыл бұрын
Wow ok making feel bad about the rubbish I just wrote
@theliopleurodon
@theliopleurodon 4 жыл бұрын
Relatableeee
@ultraalvafa4962
@ultraalvafa4962 3 жыл бұрын
X2!!! :S
@LonDanDoc
@LonDanDoc 4 жыл бұрын
@2:46 I'd say 'and although' could be changed to '. Although' It's a gd PS because of the flow and structure. Id recommend students to really pay attention to the way he compound's point on point without sounding too cliché
@fameliaputri5098
@fameliaputri5098 4 жыл бұрын
This is such a great content, but i found some difficulties to keep up with ur speed when u explaining all the materials 😅
@shelbiej94
@shelbiej94 3 жыл бұрын
0.75 speed 😘
@mayathethy1565
@mayathethy1565 4 жыл бұрын
I don’t have any work experience coz of corona😢
@jackstannah4800
@jackstannah4800 4 жыл бұрын
Maya Thethy exactly the same here. sucks real bad :(
@kazi21029
@kazi21029 4 жыл бұрын
Check out BSMS virtual work experience.
@DoctorShaene
@DoctorShaene 4 жыл бұрын
1. BSMS Virtual work Experience - Brighton and Sussex medical school has put together an incredible online package giving to an insight into the NHS which walks you through different medical specialities. 2. Observe GP - interactive video platform has been put together by the Royal College of GPs designed to give medical school applicants an insight into General Practice and primary care. 3. The NHS Explained Online Course - a free 8 hour online course by the King’s Fund giving you an insight into the structure of the NHS and challenges of working in the NHS. 1.Re-engage - a charity looking for volunteers to join their call companion service to provide some friendship to lonely and isolated older people 2.Covid-19 Mutual Aid - a service connecting people in the local area to help others who are more vulnerable or self-isolating. 3.The Sliver Line - a confidential helpline that provides advice, friendship and information to older people. They currently have an emergency appeal for volunteers. 4.Age UK - lots of different opportunities to volunteer to become a digital buddy, a campaigner or fundraiser for the Age UK charity.
@LonDanDoc
@LonDanDoc 4 жыл бұрын
Guys exploration of medicine isn't just work experience. It's volunteering in the community esp in health and social care environments, speaking with drs and med student s and other health care staff . Reading books on medicine etc.
@michellef609
@michellef609 4 жыл бұрын
@@jackstannah4800 Look into being a medical scribe
@syedmohammadaanasfarukh890
@syedmohammadaanasfarukh890 3 жыл бұрын
Bro you have no idea how much this helped. NO WONDER YOU GOT INTO CAMBRIDGE 😭😭. Really want to thank you man. This video has single handedly done soooo much for my ps. THANK YOU BROOO.
@connormcdonnell8802
@connormcdonnell8802 4 жыл бұрын
Love the video and great new about the masterclass you are doing on Skillshare any idea of when it will be available. All the best :)
@DoctorShaene
@DoctorShaene 4 жыл бұрын
The planned release date is tomorrow 🙌 Thanks so much!
@connormcdonnell8802
@connormcdonnell8802 4 жыл бұрын
Doctor Shaene amazing thank you 😊
@Visitusexamsharkscom
@Visitusexamsharkscom 3 жыл бұрын
★★★I used this website topedgewriters.com to help me write my application letter and they did a good job. I only sent them a draft and they wrote a professional letter for me.I recommend that you guys should check them out.★★★
@xmodMAN76
@xmodMAN76 4 жыл бұрын
wait i just finished my ps for PA school and the idea in the introduction here is also what mine was about. i feel good right now
@Ali-h3b1i
@Ali-h3b1i Жыл бұрын
feels good to see the name of my university right in the beginning of the statement ^_^ nice video with informative content.
@linzczyra
@linzczyra 4 жыл бұрын
I wanted to apply to MIT for next autumn and i was so so so hesitant because I just have no confidence in my personal statement writing and my experiences in uni but after watching your video I guess i'm starting to write it up!!! thank you for these tips
@chaecelestia7352
@chaecelestia7352 3 жыл бұрын
Good luck :)
@abrarelidrisi6888
@abrarelidrisi6888 Жыл бұрын
Hi how did it go
@the_crackin3610
@the_crackin3610 10 ай бұрын
@linzczyra how did it go
@SaadAli-qv9nf
@SaadAli-qv9nf Жыл бұрын
Imagine, You are applying for scholarship program and instantly you just scroll and start watching out video of how to write a great Personal Statement while author make you understand by giving a example of your own university Dow University--- wuh proud :)
@irene-bz2yq
@irene-bz2yq 3 жыл бұрын
This was really helpful, but I have an issue. During my university years, I was so caught up in getting high grades that I never bothered to engage in extracurricular activities, which, made my life boring. Any suggestions?
@elyssatruman1292
@elyssatruman1292 3 жыл бұрын
start getting involved now! no time like the present
@alexanderbroose3027
@alexanderbroose3027 3 жыл бұрын
kzbin.info/www/bejne/bIG1e3t4o9aqnM0
@balqisadnan5780
@balqisadnan5780 2 жыл бұрын
You can also join volunteering works outside of your university! Make sure the organizations/ associations are legal first then there you go
@emilycarter8922
@emilycarter8922 2 жыл бұрын
You might want to check this out kzbin.info/www/bejne/nX-lo5d7lKiFbpI
@LotusBlack5
@LotusBlack5 2 жыл бұрын
I didn't do any; I got into Cambridge.
@supwintphyu1991
@supwintphyu1991 Жыл бұрын
The essay was inspiring, and your analysis is quite helpful. I am in the process of developing my personal statement and getting thought-blocks in the way until I found your channel. Thanks a lot for your clear and strategic guidance.
@darrenjosiah9246
@darrenjosiah9246 2 жыл бұрын
me learning Spanish for 5 years... 5:35 aight, it's my time to shine.
@Eludinium
@Eludinium 2 жыл бұрын
The first paragraph appears as what other sources describe as "flowery language", there are so many conflictions as this is a subjectively judged document, I'm still confused as to what is wanted and how I may be judged..
@navinafrancis3273
@navinafrancis3273 3 жыл бұрын
You are the best I see on KZbin so far.. Thank you..
@barrettoliver2009
@barrettoliver2009 4 жыл бұрын
What I hate is that I'm being told to avoid flowery language , but all the best statements contain flowery language
@matthewwestwell9151
@matthewwestwell9151 4 жыл бұрын
I reckon it depends where you're applying. Most unis don't really care about it but some like Oxbridge and London ones that are more traditional and academic might prefer it. It's always good to link your personal statement to the universities you're applying to like traditional/integrated
@camille6873
@camille6873 4 жыл бұрын
By any chance, do you proofread essays too? 🥺
@aspookyfox
@aspookyfox 2 жыл бұрын
What an impressive candidate profile. I need to organize myself better.
@maeganjoseph8377
@maeganjoseph8377 3 жыл бұрын
This video is very inspiring. I am trying to develop my personal statement for Pharmacy school. Do you have any advice on how to merge desire, work and life experiences, and faith in my personal statement?
@WriteYourAcceptance
@WriteYourAcceptance 3 жыл бұрын
I love Pharm PS! You have a great opportunity to blend community minded values with your personal passion and life experiences. Consider thinking about starting with - in story form - an interaction with a patient/ customer If you work at a pharmacy already. what did they need? how did you help them? then par 2 could be your explanation of desire and passion for the field and why...then middle could be a couple other life / work experiences and how they have taught you diff lessons about pharmacy and your pursuit of pharmacy. good luck!
@emilycarter8922
@emilycarter8922 2 жыл бұрын
You might want to check this out kzbin.info/www/bejne/a4u4mIdrmMyHnZI
@maeganjoseph8377
@maeganjoseph8377 2 жыл бұрын
@@emilycarter8922 thanks! Will do.
@marinagemoftheseas
@marinagemoftheseas 3 жыл бұрын
Thank you so much, I love you, you are the reason I'll write a good personal statement!
@gracewilliams1227
@gracewilliams1227 4 жыл бұрын
Can’t lie this is not the best personal statement I have ever read for medicine ha
@nitesh10
@nitesh10 3 жыл бұрын
I agree. It doesn't really show that the student is curious about medicine.
@nitesh10
@nitesh10 3 жыл бұрын
@@Lauren-7777 To me, it looks more like a statement for a nursing course. And he said he read papers but he did not really show it; he could've written what he likes about these papers to lend some credibility.
@jameshowlett2694
@jameshowlett2694 3 жыл бұрын
It looks more like a list of things the student has done, it has the best ingredients for it but isn’t good itself
@limolly254
@limolly254 Жыл бұрын
Great video! It has been quite helpful. Thanks a lot.
@garibanbabasaragorn2096
@garibanbabasaragorn2096 Жыл бұрын
You are doing great job man! Thanks a lot!
@ninamay4401
@ninamay4401 2 жыл бұрын
Thanks for the video, super helpful! My personal statement is supposed to be only 300 words max. Do you have any tips? I find it quite hard to fit all I want to say into such few words.
@ajreddd
@ajreddd 3 жыл бұрын
Grateful that I found this. Thank you so much for sharing this!
@DoctorShaene
@DoctorShaene 3 жыл бұрын
Glad it was helpful!
@garima2473
@garima2473 2 жыл бұрын
Greatly helpful! Keep up the good work📈
@rishirasavathanan8757
@rishirasavathanan8757 4 жыл бұрын
thanks for the very informative video
@DoctorShaene
@DoctorShaene 4 жыл бұрын
Pleasure! Glad it was useful! 🙌
@antseverafter251
@antseverafter251 16 күн бұрын
The way I pushed the pause as soon as I read Dow University, Karachi. As a Pakistani, I'm so happy for him. Studying at Dow is a big deal, but he didn't stop there. He aimed for the stars and grabbed them. AND HE'S AMONG THE TOP THREE IN CAMBRIDGE!! Ya Allah! I'm so happy for him. He must've worked really hard, Allh rewarded him sufficiently too. May Allah SWT bless him and help him through out his journey.
@sharon3397
@sharon3397 4 жыл бұрын
Hey, when writing a personal statement for physician associate do I also use the key term “medicine” As I’m not exactly a doctor ??
@DoctorShaene
@DoctorShaene 4 жыл бұрын
yeahh i'd say medicine is an apt key word - it's not specific just to doctors but all healthcare team members no?
@aryasatre8738
@aryasatre8738 4 жыл бұрын
Is this personal statement for undergrad med or post-grad? And what do you suggest the format should be for students applying for 2021 seeing as we can't get work experience?
@DoctorShaene
@DoctorShaene 4 жыл бұрын
work experience is still legit in 2021! 1. BSMS Virtual work Experience - Brighton and Sussex medical school has put together an incredible online package giving to an insight into the NHS which walks you through different medical specialities. 2. Observe GP - interactive video platform has been put together by the Royal College of GPs designed to give medical school applicants an insight into General Practice and primary care. 3. The NHS Explained Online Course - a free 8 hour online course by the King’s Fund giving you an insight into the structure of the NHS and challenges of working in the NHS. 1.Re-engage - a charity looking for volunteers to join their call companion service to provide some friendship to lonely and isolated older people 2.Covid-19 Mutual Aid - a service connecting people in the local area to help others who are more vulnerable or self-isolating. 3.The Sliver Line - a confidential helpline that provides advice, friendship and information to older people. They currently have an emergency appeal for volunteers. 4.Age UK - lots of different opportunities to volunteer to become a digital buddy, a campaigner or fundraiser for the Age UK charity.
@suhanirathour5106
@suhanirathour5106 2 жыл бұрын
This is the best personal statement... Can you please make a personal statement video for student who choose dentistry
@941119yan
@941119yan 2 жыл бұрын
Thank you, that's a good example.
@candacejune416
@candacejune416 3 жыл бұрын
This was great!! thank you very much for this. I will be looking into your guide
@shen7728
@shen7728 4 жыл бұрын
Uhhh give me chills😬😬. Amazing vid btw
@DoctorShaene
@DoctorShaene 4 жыл бұрын
Haha thanks! 🙌
@shen7728
@shen7728 4 жыл бұрын
Doctor Shaene is he working with you now?
@fakhrulzainal5384
@fakhrulzainal5384 3 жыл бұрын
I feel impressed at his PS and depressed looking at mine lol
@abenarhtuesday
@abenarhtuesday Жыл бұрын
I want an introduction for Accounting and Finance And also a best conclusion New subscriber here
@abhinayareddy6747
@abhinayareddy6747 Жыл бұрын
Thank you for the information.
@yonissaid4057
@yonissaid4057 9 ай бұрын
The best thing to do is go to a place where you can reflect upon yourself quickly. That place is the shower, so I just brought my phone and opened up notes. I typed my first draft in one shower with how fast my thoughts spilled haha.
@yonissaid4057
@yonissaid4057 9 ай бұрын
It's now paved the road to multiple drafts and will edit it with this video guide in mind.
@linglee5759
@linglee5759 4 жыл бұрын
I do Chemical Engineering and I hate the people who just seem to pick it up so easy. I got 4A*'s too but seems a 10x jump at university.
@santiagoarce5672
@santiagoarce5672 4 жыл бұрын
I think that's called being envious of other people.
@SanaSheikh2011
@SanaSheikh2011 4 жыл бұрын
Omg what subjects do you do? Where are you studying and is the course really intense ? Does the course encourage innovation. ?
@the_crackin3610
@the_crackin3610 10 ай бұрын
What about if I have good grades but no work experience I’ve seen many video on personal statement and all of them have experience shadowing a doctor or working in a ward . What can I write if I don’t got any of this
@ezrajeya2674
@ezrajeya2674 4 жыл бұрын
Nice Vid... Bro I need help with my law personal statement for Cambridge, do you know anyone or can u help??
@DoctorShaene
@DoctorShaene 4 жыл бұрын
Thanks! Absolutely - couple of them have been so kind to share their PS! Will be releasing videos on this one very soon!
@ezrajeya2674
@ezrajeya2674 4 жыл бұрын
Doctor Shaene Thanks a lot brother keep up the help👍🏽
@hangkertzy9722
@hangkertzy9722 4 жыл бұрын
damn that guy is.. very achieving
@KyurinDiary
@KyurinDiary 3 жыл бұрын
AMAZING ONE!
@rudhrarekapally3330
@rudhrarekapally3330 2 жыл бұрын
He should have linked the sop to download , That can help us to read and understand
@ruthkamwi_youtube
@ruthkamwi_youtube 3 жыл бұрын
So helpful!👏🏾👏🏾👏🏾Thanks a bunch!
@DoctorShaene
@DoctorShaene 3 жыл бұрын
Glad it was helpful!
@zakgoulding794
@zakgoulding794 4 жыл бұрын
Although he’s obviously an incredibly clever guy, he seems well sound. No way my personal statement will be anywhere near as good though 😂 What did he get in his A Levels, I’m guessing 4 A*?
@DoctorShaene
@DoctorShaene 4 жыл бұрын
Haha yeah I think so
@Tom-vu1wr
@Tom-vu1wr 3 жыл бұрын
Ye 4 astars is ez compared to his achievements at cambridge
@jagrutinanda323
@jagrutinanda323 4 жыл бұрын
This video was really helpful ! Thank you so much :)
@DoctorShaene
@DoctorShaene 4 жыл бұрын
Glad it was useful! 🙌
@Visitusexamsharkscom
@Visitusexamsharkscom 3 жыл бұрын
★★★I used this website topedgewriters.com to help me write my application letter and they did a good job. I only sent them a draft and they wrote a professional letter for me.I recommend that you guys should check them out.★★★
@clloyd022
@clloyd022 Жыл бұрын
Thank you so much for this !! I got accepted into my dream university XD
@alexandramiracle5011
@alexandramiracle5011 4 жыл бұрын
My congratulations. Thank you for the statement
@SID-nr4lz
@SID-nr4lz Жыл бұрын
and here’s me struggling to get into dow medical university 😭 xD
@KA-yl7nq
@KA-yl7nq 4 жыл бұрын
When is your skillshare masterclass going to be available for us? :)
@DoctorShaene
@DoctorShaene 4 жыл бұрын
Working hard to get it out to everyone next week. Getting through more personal statements to analyse and chucking in new points! Will let everyone know when it’s out via email with some extra goodies! :)
@KA-yl7nq
@KA-yl7nq 4 жыл бұрын
Doctor Shaene oooh okay thank you!
@22mkzzzz1
@22mkzzzz1 4 жыл бұрын
hi I’m in yr 8, and I’m not sure how to revise for my GCSE’s, also what did u do and get for ur GCSEs?
@DoctorShaene
@DoctorShaene 4 жыл бұрын
Use the testing effect! kzbin.info/www/bejne/h3XPintvZ9B_hJY I did the main ones and Geog, German, RS, Astronomy lol and Add Maths. Got all A*s
@nashparbhu
@nashparbhu 4 жыл бұрын
if ur in yr 8 then just have fun and mess around, but do try stay top of your classes. start revising for your gcses in year 9/10.
@shivenarora500
@shivenarora500 4 жыл бұрын
@@nashparbhu nah year 9 and 10 are so chill have fun. Start revising at start of year11/year 10 summer
@charliecharlie846
@charliecharlie846 4 жыл бұрын
Wow I didn’t even think about GCSE revision until January of this year. I guess it’s a good job they got cancelled. Year 8 seems ridiculously early to be worrying about this kind of stuff though. Go make some friends and play some sports or something.
@lakshmimohan183
@lakshmimohan183 4 жыл бұрын
omg I just read it as you're an 8 year old who's revising for the GCSE's :') i was so confused for a moment lol
@lushi4206
@lushi4206 3 жыл бұрын
such good video, thank you very much
@itzelr3514
@itzelr3514 2 жыл бұрын
This is awesome! Thanks! :)
@larshoernle5400
@larshoernle5400 2 жыл бұрын
This is excellent !
@rosietindall4075
@rosietindall4075 4 жыл бұрын
Do you have any personal statements for a degree in psychology? To see the structure of this was very helpful but obviously the content for psychology would be very different.
@llorettaamos
@llorettaamos 3 жыл бұрын
link me up when you find one :)
@eugenie2413
@eugenie2413 3 жыл бұрын
hey great video! Can I have the full personal statement for reference ?
@r.ghaffar2578
@r.ghaffar2578 2 ай бұрын
Thank you so much for the great tips. Do you think I have to be able to prove the experience I mentioned in the SOP? I'm a junior doctor from overseas. Currently I'm applying for a Masters of Medical Education in the UK, and I have some experience teaching medical student during my foundation training back home. I can't really prove much about my experience since I did it to help out the senior doctors when they were feeling too lazy to teach the students. So it wasn't really anything official and was never mentioned in any of my letters of recommendation.
@ramdinakar5114
@ramdinakar5114 4 жыл бұрын
Great video man! Would you be able to give feedback on my personal statement if I emailed it to you ? Thanks
@starfishxxl229
@starfishxxl229 3 жыл бұрын
Thanks a million!!
@hollypusheen7651
@hollypusheen7651 Жыл бұрын
Needs more commas.
@peeper2070
@peeper2070 3 жыл бұрын
I went to a school football club in yr 8 is that good
@peeper2070
@peeper2070 3 жыл бұрын
I wish I was joking.
@saralowe_arts
@saralowe_arts 3 жыл бұрын
I’d currently like to take the Undergraduate Diploma in Genetics at Cambridge. If anyone is there wanting to do the same please shout out!
@zzasserzz
@zzasserzz 3 жыл бұрын
Excellent video !!
@aliciawise3331
@aliciawise3331 3 жыл бұрын
Wow! What a useful video! Thank you (:
@shamhammoudi4418
@shamhammoudi4418 3 жыл бұрын
Thank you very much
@mavjudaotamurodova
@mavjudaotamurodova Жыл бұрын
thank you very much. But I have a question what if I do not have any work experience??
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