Fair enough, yeah the opening was the best part. Maybe longer or shorter n terms of word count. Like short story might have worked or something longer. Maybe, some kind getting the group together at the end. But then I’m thinking everything just kind of change. Can you imagine being the editor or the agent for this manuscript? I mean there’s so much goodness in the story elements and it structurally makes sense pretty much. I like the idea of it taking placein less than 24 hours. A very very worthy effort.