Dragon Ball FanFiction What if Goku Had a Sister Part 3

[@AblazeMonkee]

Hey guys so I’ve been really ill these past few days and so I was getting this what if requested a lot and I didn’t think I would get it out in time But I was able to power through and get it out to you guys so if I sound of in the video or you notice things that are a bit unusual then it’s cuz I’m ill Lol that said I hope you enjoy this part I’ll try do a lot better in part 4 because in my opinion this part could’ve probably been a bit better but eh oh well Thank you all for all your support recently because it’s been insane I hope you all have a good day or night wherever you are :)

[@greenightponydragon5127]

This what if pretty good interesting Concept to say the least full so much potential so my one Question is for this what if is future trunks timeline still the same or slightly different

[@AblazeMonkee]

@@greenightponydragon5127 well I recommend you watch my other what ifs because for all my what ifs I will be having a different future timeline for all of my what ifs which means there will most likely be a future timeline for this one

[@greenightponydragon5127]

@@AblazeMonkee interesting I like sound of that most what if’s I’ve seen they usually keep his timeline the same

[@greenightponydragon5127]

@@gamingwithjdoghope9433 namkiens can’t do that they reproduce asexually that means they don’t need partners to populate their race and a story doesn’t always need the main character having kids be interesting masakox proved that in his what if Nappa turned good video

[@greenightponydragon5127]

@@gamingwithjdoghope9433 while piccolo can love people he can’t love them like that Namkiens have no desires for those type of relationships they do care a lot about each other and people not of their kind if they know them well enough even in a parental way like Grand elder Guru but romance is just not their thing

[@goldenangel158]

It was so good can't wait for part 3 I wonder how you will change the next arc

[@AblazeMonkee]

Thanks ( I think you mean part 4) but yeah the next part will be starting the namek saga which will be definitely interesting

[@goldenangel158]

@@AblazeMonkee fuck I mean to say 4 how did I mess up but can't wait for the namek saga

[@TheMan_JC]

I love what you did with nappa's character. Normally people just see him as a brute and what you did in this what if. Absolutely amazing.

[@AblazeMonkee]

@@TheMan_JC thanks although I feel like I could’ve done his character arc a lot better but because I was ill I forgot a couple of things so hopefully in the next part I can make things better but I am glad to hear I got the general point across

[@MrMix-sl3yl]

Nappa kinda felt outta character here. While I do see him potentially being good, Nappa showing remorse this early on in dragonballZ is so out of place.

[@AblazeMonkee]

Yeah I know I’m definitely going to expand on him more in future parts And explain why this happened so it actually makes sense still hope you enjoyed it tho

[@greenightponydragon5127]

Wow this what if is amazing

[@AblazeMonkee]

Thank You!

[@greenightponydragon5127]

@@AblazeMonkee np

[@thewerewolflounge3109]

I really like where this what-if is going. Also Nappa's relationship with Goku Sister incoming! :O

[@AblazeMonkee]

Nah Nappa to old lol he’s more going to be a sort of uncle friend type

[@TheMan_JC]

I can see this in the future. Grandpa nappa *This being goten or if Tursa had a child*

[@abbusufiyannizami3489]

@@AblazeMonkee vegeta

[@crazyvj2445]

no please no

[@thompsongaming66]

@@abbusufiyannizami3489 broly

[@kisagondwe7190]

i already know this will be good!🥰

[@onizerg4652]

KZbin broken. I did not get notified when this was uploaded. This series is what made me sub.

[@AblazeMonkee]

Turn the bell on!

[@onizerg4652]

It is. It happens even on my vids. From what few of my viewers.

[@AblazeMonkee]

@@onizerg4652 well my upload schedule is Wednesday Friday Sunday so maybe you can just check the channel on those days idk if that helps part 4 is coming really soon so if you don’t wanna miss it I’d recommend u check the channel on Friday and Sunday

[@onizerg4652]

It a simple fix just turnoff notifications and turn them back off. It seems to happen when they update the app sometimes.

[@isaacgbabo7818]

Need a part 4

[@duncanqueen9139]

I literally got on lunch and this was at the top of list

[@AblazeMonkee]

Glad to hear it hope you enjoy ya lunch

[@jonathanhannah4]

My only issue with this is the way you broke Nappa's character.

[@kingmajinmajin4724]

Love your work

[@AblazeMonkee]

👍

[@Trap5656]

Nappa turning good huh I would like to see that. On who goes with who to Namek: The first group could be Bulma, Gohan, Krillin, and Piccolo (Piccolo would want to check it out, and Tursa would think that Gohan can make the wishes easily [That is untill Frieza shows up!]). The second group could be Goku and Tursa maybe with a gravity chamber built-in the ship out of request from Tursa sense she could know Planet Vegeta is 10x Earth gravity they could train in more maybe more.

[@AblazeMonkee]

Hmmm yeah I’m planning on doing roughly something like that

[@crazyweeb6738]

Yes finally you violated it episode I can't believe my friend for a unicorn hasn't already seen this video it has been really sick lately and I hope she gets better and she can see this video she'll be so happy when she finally knows that you made another part she's been waiting for this like forever I love this and I'm excited to know what happens next 😄

[@abbusufiyannizami3489]

Ooh bro killed vegeta atleast gaved him second chance

[@AblazeMonkee]

Nah lol

[@lightskingojo]

I love your videos (I am not sus)🤣🤣🤣🤣

[@AblazeMonkee]

Thanks lol Hmmm I think we should vote you of 🤣🤣🤣🤣

[@captain_dsz6049]

saying your not sus is pretty sus bruh

[@tiaanvandermerwe5298]

I kinda of wonder will Nappa train with King Kai and learn Kaioken?

[@AblazeMonkee]

Well he is going to hell sooooo

[@razakeldrukata6502]

@@AblazeMonkee Mabey nappa will train with bardock and his team, or others, train being a loose thing.

[@rajajean-willie3249]

Won't he be revived?

[@AblazeMonkee]

@@rajajean-willie3249 yes he will be revived

[@crazyvj2445]

wha is nappa wierd or is it me

[@zalkor2000]

UNCLE NAPPA NOOOO!.

[@silver8680]

Nappa sucks, TFS Nappa is God xD

[@zalkor2000]

@@silver8680 True that holms

[@KanavDev]

I feel like she'd go ssj

[@AblazeMonkee]

Nah you need more of an emotional trigger for that

[@KanavDev]

@@AblazeMonkee really her entire planet getting destroyed isn't a trigger?

[@AblazeMonkee]

Well think about it like this I don’t think goku would go super saiyan from being told krillin died he would get angry but would it make him go super saiyan probably not whereas if she had seen her planet be destroyed she would’ve gone super saiyan

[@Wazlowo]

Nappa gone soft

[@kisagondwe7190]

finally!😻

[@vericbasilio]

STOP MAKING ME CARE ABOUT NAPPA jk your doing good

[@AblazeMonkee]

:)

[@plummerelijahep]

I like your scripts personal notes work on your voices if you're gonna do voices more, and slow down while reading if you find yourself stuttering (not sure if you got better with this it's based on what I hear in this video.) Never stop being funny and having fun and lasty don't be afraid to do multiple takes. P.s. no one do nothing perfectly on their first try.

[@AblazeMonkee]

Thank you for the feedback

[@crazyweeb6738]

Wait a minute I just read a comment what did Teresa and Napa are going to be okay I hope there is a Napa are not going to be a thing because that would really really not be good and in like the Future part when she is going to ride to Saiyans isn't raditz going to be revived to I'm specific

[@AblazeMonkee]

Well firstly no Tursa and Nappa won’t be getting together secondly no Raditz will not be revived if you want a bunch of Raditz I recommend you watch what if cell went back too far

[@crazyvj2445]

nappa destroyed arlia why does he care now :-(

[@AblazeMonkee]

Nappa didn’t destroy arlia vegeta did rewatch the video nappa clearly is against the planet being destroyed

[@crazyvj2445]

@@AblazeMonkee no I saying in canon

[@tix2260]

@@crazyvj2445 Vegeta destroyed it in cannon

[@KanavDev]

You should make a discord server.

[@AblazeMonkee]

Hmmm I might for a subscriber Mile stone I just kinda don’t know how discord works and stuff because I don’t use it that much but for a subscriber Mile stone I’ll eventually make one hopefully

[@KanavDev]

@@AblazeMonkee I mean I can help you out.

[@KanavDev]

@@AblazeMonkee I've made and moderated many servers.

[@AblazeMonkee]

@@KanavDev cool I’ve got another person will to help to so ill keep you in mind when the time comes I’ll probably do it for like one of my next milestones so just stick around I’ll let you know when I do

[@fatfoxclown]

well I did not see nappa being good, guess no trunks and I do believe raditz death is karmatic not like he didnt have it coming. I would have loved to have seen her react to gokus tales of stupidity, roshi being a dirty old man oolong as a whole meeting korin and maybe some of his other assorted pals

[@Cyril86]

Why did Nappa have to make his own power ball? If Vegeta's power ball wasn't in the sky anymore, he wouldn't have stayed in the Oozaru form either.

[@AblazeMonkee]

Oh lol that was a continuity error I didn’t notice yes your correct but it wouldn’t change anything in the story In the grand scheme of things

[@Cyril86]

@@AblazeMonkee True enough. Well, except Nappa would be a bit stronger, since creating the Power Ball takes quite a bit of strength.

[@AblazeMonkee]

@@Cyril86 Ye

[@fezzih700]

Wow, up to ep 3 and i found another plothole.

[@captain_dsz6049]

WHAT PLOTHOLES TELL ME I MUST KNOW

[@fezzih700]

@Deleto blue the out character Nappa.

[@AblazeMonkee]

Probably gonna redo this part tbh I was really ill when I made it and out of all the parts for this series this one is by far the worst

[@MD-kv9zo]

the beginning music is wayy too loud for my ears

[@AblazeMonkee]

SORRRYYY

[@captain_dsz6049]

plotholes i noticed in this 1. nappa would have gotten a zenkai from the senzu 2. nappa wouldnt have needed a powerball because vegetas existed 3. gohan tursa and nappa should have become ozaru from vegetas powerball 4. how did nappa and vegeta know about the dragonballs they were never mentioned to the villians/on a scouter they only came to earth cuz of radditz' brother/sister 5. nappa was super out of character 6. power levels even if they had someone who would be stronger than radditz due to her zenkai from fighting him and recovering they probably would not be vegeta lvl by saiyan saga although perhaps nappa lvl since gravity training and zenkai exploits were happening 5. tursa prolly couldnt just barely dodge ozaru vegeta even if he was huger so better movability, she was no where near that power even if had been weakened 6. they didnt try and exploit solar flares or destructo disks to remove tails

[@betsmaria486]

ablaze monkee write about who is. vegeta his little sister part 1. yes are no tonight ablaze monkee

[@logaliem8883]

Hope nappa gets a girl in this what if, eventhoug he is old as shit. or maybe make him younger again in the fight against frezzer, so he gets stronger (even if it is just a bit)

[@AblazeMonkee]

Gonna be hard lmao but I have something in mind I guess sos haven’t put all too much thought into nappas love life but I’ve got an idea so hopefully it’ll work out lmao

[@logaliem8883]

@@AblazeMonkee please not bulmas sister there so many what ifs where nappa is with bulmas sister

[@AblazeMonkee]

Really I was thinking like maybe mai but instead of being a kid she’s just his age lmao

[@logaliem8883]

@@AblazeMonkee yeah but she will eventually make the wish with the pilaf gang, so im not sure

[@AblazeMonkee]

@@logaliem8883 hmm yeah I could do what masako did with it tbh cuz I really don’t see who he could end up with

[@JaviiDW]

Who else doesn’t give af about the bug people

[@AblazeMonkee]

Lmao

[@marquinngibsonjr1169]

me

[@Caelus3528]

I don't see how not going to king kai's planet and just doing regular training with someone weaker than raditz is suppose to make them stronger, it literally makes zero sense.

[@AblazeMonkee]

First of all goku didn’t train with king Kai that much in fact most of the time he was dead he spent it running on snake way whereas here he got the full time and trained with piccolo too!

[@Caelus3528]

@@AblazeMonkee So? He still would have been better off with king kai due to the spirit bomb and especially the planet's 10x gravity.

[@Caelus3528]

Aww your making me blush!🥰 Just for that I'll subscribe to your channel!

[@Kingin_Black]

Dude I want goku to be stronger it’s better when goku is there strongest

[@AblazeMonkee]

There are a lot of what ifs where goku is op lol and although goku will of course get a lot stronger in this what if the main focus of it is of course his sister

[@Kingin_Black]

And that will make it boring this what if is my least favorite ur other what if’s are great but not this one for me

[@AblazeMonkee]

@@Kingin_Black really well most people seem to have this as a favourite on the channel well goku will be getting stronger and will be important so don’t worry about it my next new what if will focus heavily on a new aspect to goku I think you’ll enjoy !

[@urionlimitbreaker8876]

@@AblazeMonkee True.

[@jirenthegray6401]

What If Goku Was A Frost Demon?(Ofcourse Bardock/Gine And Raditz Are Frost Demons As Well.) Bardock Would Still Work For Frieza Since Frieza See's Him As"Useless" And Are Only Usefull When It Comes To Conquering Planets But Overall He See's Him As "Useless." Goku Would Still Be Sent To Earth And Would Probably Get The Head Bump? It Wouldn't Really Change Anything Since All Of Goku's Family Are Pure Of Heart. Raditz Would Still Work With Vegeta And Nappa Like Normal, And Vegeta Would Still See Him As A Weakling And Would Make Fun Of Him. Raditz Doesn't Really Care About Vegeta's Stupid Comments About His Strength, And When He's Annoyed With Vegeta He'll Simply Say "I Dont Need To Prove Anything To You Saiyan." Vegeta Would Ofcourse Just Laugh At This And Walk Off With Nappa. Raditz And Nappa Often Have Conversations In Their Free time, And Have Formed Some Kind Of Friendship With One Another. Bardock Would Still Try To Push The Supernova Back To Try And Save The Saiyans But This Doesn't Have Any Effect, And Bardock And Gine Are Killed Along With The Saiyans, With The Saiyans Bieng Confused At First On Why Bardock Is Trying To Save Their Planet, But They Soon Come To Realise That Bardock And Gine Never Really Hated Them Or Bossed Them Around. There Was Even One Time When Gine Stopped Frieza From Killing Two Saiyan Children. They Die With Some Sort Of Respect For Bardock And Gine. Everyone Else Is Informed That Planet Vegeta Was Destroyed By A Meteor That Killed Everyone. Raditz Is Sad That His Mom And Dad Were Killed And Then He Begins To Cry. Vegeta Make's Fun Of Raditz Like He Normally Does, But This Time Raditz's Snaps. He Screams And A Purple Aura Begins To Surround Him, He Goes Into His Second Form And Punches Vegeta Right Across The Face Sending Him Flying And Knocking Him Out. Raditz Then Falls To The Ground Gasping Heavily For Air, And Nappa Lifts Him Up And Puts A Hand On His Shoulder And Say's "I'm Sorry For Your Loss Raditz." Raditz Looks At Him And Cant Help But Smile A Little, But This Soon Turns To A Look Of Pain As Raditz Realises That That Power He Let Out, Burned Through All His Stamina. A Few Day's Later While Raditz And Nappa Are Having Their Usual Conversation, Raditz Tells Nappa That He Was Taught How To Access A Second Form From His Dad, During The Night Bardock Would Give Lessons To Raditz On How The Form Works And The Most Effective Way Of Using It (Esspecially For Quick Attacks For When New To The Form And Using It In Short Bursts Once Raditz Got The Hang Of It.) Nappa Would Appreciate Raditz Telling Him About This, But Raditz Would Ask Nappa To Never Tell Vegeta About It. (Since He Doesn't Like Him) Power Levels For When Bardock/Gine Were Still Alive: Frieza (1st Form): 530 000 Bardock: (Base/Final Form): 240 000 Gine: (Base/Final Form): 130 000 Raditz (1st Form): 22 000 Baby Goku (1st Form): 12 000 * Power Levels At The Beggining Of DBZ* Goku(1st Form): 68K Gohan(1st Form): 6K Piccolo: 43K Raditz(1st Form): 70K Raditz(2nd Form): 145K (Vegeta And Nappa Are Stronger Here Due Training With Raditz And Ofcourse, Zenkai's.) Were Assuming Frost Demons Have Sexual Organs. *Wink.* 😂😂 Appearences: Goku Looks Alot Similar To Frieza, Just Without The Pale Skin, We Can Make Goku Purple-ish Or Dark Blue. Raditz Would Look Alot Like Cooler. Raditz Could Be A Green-ish Colour.

[@AblazeMonkee]

Hmmm That’s a very interesting concept you could probably in corporate a lot of other things tho like king cold reproducing I believe asexually so I don’t think that gine would exist also it might be interesting to have bardock Be extremely powerful and just leave Raditz abd goku but yeah has a lot of potential for a good story needs work though but could possibly be very interesting nice what if dude

[@jirenthegray6401]

@@AblazeMonkee Sorry. I Wasn't Trying To Make It A "What If" I Was Just Trying To Give You Some Idea's On How This Would Go. I Guess Frost Demons Dont Really Have Sexual Organs Then, Since It Isn't Really Mentioned In The Series. But Hey! If We Wanted To, We Could Be A Little Bit Fan Fictioney And Say That "Frost Demons Have A Way Of Reproducing The Human Way." Just To Make This Interesting And Make A Human/Frost Demon Hybrid. (A.K.A Gohan.) I've Suggested This To So Many What If KZbinrs Now That I Think About It.😂😂

[@jirenthegray6401]

@@AblazeMonkee I Forgot To Mention That: " King Cold Is Very Powerfull And His Power Is Massive, So When Frieza Was Born His Power Would Be Massive As Well, Maybe Even Stronger Than His Father. Bardock Or Gine Aren't As Powerfull As King Cold Or You Can Say "They Wern't Born On That Level Of Power" So Their Children Wouldn't Be As Powerfull Either.

[@AblazeMonkee]

@@jirenthegray6401 lmao ye I see you on other what if you tubers channels a lot So that’s expected but hm yeah it’s an interesting concept very fan Ficcy tho

[@jirenthegray6401]

@@AblazeMonkee Sometime's You Gotta Be Fan Ficcy If You Wanna Create Something Superb. And Dude.😂😂 Were Making Goku A Whole Other Race So This Is All From The Magnificent Minds Of The Fans.