Drawing In Photoshop CS4 - Party It Up

A very haphazardly done speedpaint done as a request by one of my followers on Formspring. I don't usually take requests, even if the request is for my own character, but it has been a long time since I drew Remmy the anthro horse. So I decided to roll with it.
I like the finished piece a lot less than I liked the initial sketch/concept. But... what can be done?
Song is "Move Your Body" by Eiffel 65
and is copyrighted to Eiffel 65 and all affiliated parties. I lay no claim to it, and use it here without intent to gain or profit.
Character and artwork however are mine. Don't... you know, copy it or whatever.