I love the stories you read and write. What keeps me coming back is that VOICE! ❤
@FaizalNazaruddin-ko8dw3 ай бұрын
altogether a wholesome Lovecraftian excursion. as always, excellent narration Doc
@druidictroy11573 ай бұрын
WOW! I know creepypastas are predicated on the protagonist not being the sharpest spoon in the drawer but this one was blue ribbon winning STUPID!
@noahokayama38253 ай бұрын
“Sharpest spoon in the drawer”
@pandalover9003 ай бұрын
@noahokayama3825 yeah like from the Smashmouth song Allstar, "I ain't the sharpest spoon in the drawer"
@Pabloworldwide3 ай бұрын
@@pandalover900🤣👍🏽
@noahokayama38253 ай бұрын
@@pandalover900 idk that reference, but I’m glad it actually exists 😂😂😂
@Skoda1303 ай бұрын
@@pandalover900 that was "the sharpest tool in the shed", actually.
@eyeruscat94393 ай бұрын
Every time I see a video that’s an hour long from your channel I get so excited. The stories are always so good, and your voice is really nice to listen to. It’s the perfect combination when I want to hear a story.
@lisawhereisthecultjam3 ай бұрын
The hour long stories are perfect for insomnia. He picks stories that are interesting enough to get you hooked and then his hypnotic voice lulls you to sleep. My dreams have been influenced by the stories he narrates many times.
@IW35273 ай бұрын
Once again you have perfect timing Dr. Creepen! I was just looking for something to listen to while I take a break from housework and wait for my muscles spasms to subside when I got the notification, your narrataions always help me relax❤
@VictorNajera-p9l3 ай бұрын
Every time a new story drops, I hang on every word
@Cat_festation3 ай бұрын
Aaaaaahhh. Perfect timing Dr. C. We appreciate you!
@redfern033 ай бұрын
Had a stayover in Vicksburg once. Nice place.
@SleepyLeeeee3 ай бұрын
Ah, a story with a little bit of everything from big boobs to stinky people. The ending gave me the creepy crawlies yikes-a- daisies. Thanks for the story! Well done!
@kentworch2 ай бұрын
Thank you Dr Creepen for another awesome pasta. Excellent story and narration as is typical for you. I've been saving your pastas so that I could binge them later. Thank you for making my day. 🖤🖤🖤🖤
@druidictroy11573 ай бұрын
And after the woman ate a roach like string cheese then the beautiful woman came to talk to me. BUT SHE COULDN'T CAUSE I WAS ALREADY HALFWAY TO THE COUNTY LINE!!!!
@xPantsMcGeex3 ай бұрын
Not often Vicksburg gets mentioned anywhere other than civil war documentaries!
@nancyM1313-Boo3 ай бұрын
🍹🐒 So ready! thank you, Doctor. Nice to be here.
@blake62483 ай бұрын
this is the type of guy to walk around the bad parts of Detroit with 24 karate gold and diamond jewelry
@dolanduk79463 ай бұрын
Lol such a plot twist, getting betrayed by the single 10/10 woman with the big bobbers in a trash heap town full of heathens. Never saw that coming....
@theCidisIn3 ай бұрын
Thanks for another great story Doc. Hope you are well!
@FloridaMan05613 ай бұрын
Ah yeah,the good Doctor back with another great story! Thanks again Doc,your smooth voice and awesome narration is a prescription for my insomnia!
@RenaAlam3 ай бұрын
I had to stop by,i live in Vicksburg Mississippi the mighty Mississippi river runs straight through it,,, it is known for the Battle of Vicksburg and probably lots of ghosts😊
@debraleavy83383 ай бұрын
I was born in Vicksburg Mississippi 69 years ago ✌️
@shelivesforjesus23533 ай бұрын
Then,have you ever seen anything? I am originally from Oak Grove,La. ; but my husband and I lived and raised our five kids in West Monroe,La. which is around 75 miles from Vicksburg,Miss. He always enjoyed stopping at the Visitor Center off of I-20. It was a place he could get a free cup of coffee and let our kids run around a bit before heading on out to either the beach in Florida or the mountains in North Carolina. He has passed on now and I don’t go to that part of Mississippi anymore as I now live in South Louisiana. Anyway,to make a long story short,I always felt spooky vibes around that place. Being part Choctaw,my grandmother was a full Choctaw from up around McGee ; like her,occasionally ; I get weird vibes. One late evening,on the way home to Louisiana,we stopped there so we could have a BR break. I glanced up at the cannon up on the hill and I could have sworn I saw soldiers. In full dress. So,I ask…have you ever seen anything?
@MrJedimedic2 ай бұрын
This is awesome. Innsmouth vibes.
@Edgycoo3 ай бұрын
Nice! An hour. Love it.
@puca79083 ай бұрын
The good doctor never disappoints! Thank you again, Good Sir!
@joshuachidester85093 ай бұрын
I read that title to the tune of Rumor in Saint Petersburg from Anastasia and kept me from actually listening for a minute.
@FernBlackwood19953 ай бұрын
Oh jeez. Now I hear it in my head and it’s- AHHH 😂😭
@dascooter82873 ай бұрын
Brava! Way to go Doc!
@jackdurden4663 ай бұрын
As interesting as this was, it was highly predictable and neared total cliche status. I enjoyed the description of Narcissas looks, and that was about all. It was so gleamingly obvious who and what she was that I could’ve stopped listening right as soon as she spoke. But I enjoy Dr Creepens narration and was a bit curious as to what would happen to the protagonist. So that kept me hanging on. Thanks Doc for your work brining us all this story, I’ve made my personal opinion clear and yet I greatly appreciate your dedication to making these for us. As always your work was flawless and kept this one afloat. Any other narrator would have probably sank this ship! So I’m looking forward to your next notification so I can delve deeper into Creepenland! 👏👏👏👏👏👏
@audreygullas87283 ай бұрын
I agree with predictable. ❤
@jackdurden4663 ай бұрын
@@audreygullas8728 thanks Audrey:)
@nivision3 ай бұрын
I haven't even got to her in this story yet and I can tell what she is just by reading that name that's such a tacky lampshade it has to belong to one of those sexy leg lamps from back in the day. hoo boy, wish I had time to write content better than this is gonna be, but I'm too busy doing manual labor to survive. such is the works
@autumnlilienthal39623 ай бұрын
His voice makes it worth it. No matter how predictable the story is 😊 I am glad that someone noticed that as well.
@ernestinadominguez75513 ай бұрын
Your voice is mesmerizing 😊
@annettew57403 ай бұрын
Thanks Doc!🤗💜🕷
@saragog3 ай бұрын
Thank you kind Doctor. ❤
@einienj32813 ай бұрын
Thank You, Doctor 💜
@alboichone11533 ай бұрын
Predictable ending aside, why would you trust anyone named Narcissa? :D
@danthonym85393 ай бұрын
>Something strange in Vicksburg >Tells us about the most average experience in Vicksburg
@frederickbrock27402 ай бұрын
In 2002 I bought a sword. A Civil War sword in an antique store near view of the river or rivers. Plucked down $850.00 for a model 1860 Union Light Calvary Sabre. The owners seemed please, smiling at the Yankee paying full price 😢.
@henryphilipbelliIII10743 ай бұрын
"FOR WE WRESTLE NOT AGAINST FLESH AND BLOOD BUT AGAINST"... 🙏👊🙏
@kentworch2 ай бұрын
I love spiders in real life. I'm honestly more afraid of bees and especially wasps. I'm definitely allergic to wasps, but I've never been stung by a bee. I'm honestly much more comfortable holding a black widow spider in my hand than having a wasp come near me. I know the wasp has a much higher chance of killing me dead.
@cheesburgr3 ай бұрын
Does it count as a twist if your only question is, "why is the author delaying it?"
@FernBlackwood19953 ай бұрын
Yeah because that’s simply how you feel, and others don’t feel the same sometimes.
@cheesburgr3 ай бұрын
@@FernBlackwood1995 I wouldn't ask, but it said "award winning" and that bothers me
@jasonroberts44703 ай бұрын
Thanks 😊
@FernBlackwood19953 ай бұрын
Someone else in the comments mentioned this story feeling like Fear And Hunger 2: Termina, and yeah. Absolutely. I feel like this is from Karin’s POV when she first gets off the train in Prehevil. Curious and stupid in a dangerous occult town full of people alive-yet-scorched by the moon god Rher, stuck in a cyclical death game.
@chriso55073 ай бұрын
Listen yall its hard to think when youre so perpetually TORQUED that none of your blood is in your brain like this guy
@danielagnes8433 ай бұрын
There is a part of the story that make the guy look stupid, the woman is the only one that is not pale and she tell you the myth of the town more than once and still you follow her willingly in a cave.
@robbyroba3 ай бұрын
He was convinced at first that it was just stories.
@DarkKnightCap3 ай бұрын
the best in the business
@taylorfain69573 ай бұрын
Woop. Not sitting back. But I’m working. So I’m up and going with my water. But let’s go either way.
@jackdurden4663 ай бұрын
27:13 ok, I’m predicting that this woman is the one who caused all of this craziness in V-Town. Or Vicksburg if you want to be formal about it. Just a prediction…let’s see what happens!! 54:57 Bah da da! Apparently I was right. Not that I actually had to guess, it was simply too obvious. And the poor guy didn’t even get to hit it. Tsk Tsk Tsk. Jackass.
@pocadon4 күн бұрын
Yeah but thinking about those spiders inside her probably made him feel better right before he had to carry his kids (I don't know where they'd be stored on a dude.) The girls name was basically narcissist so it was pretty easy to predict. Plus she was the only human there. An entire town that couldn't go out in the sun has disgusting implications if they were human because it would mean excessive inbreeding.
@angeladay21963 ай бұрын
Talk about don't ignore the red flags when you see them!
@irena45453 ай бұрын
Roaches everywhere, people behave weird and strange ooze drips from their mouths. Yeah, totally a place to stay longer than five seconds, business or not.
@clydedevlin10843 ай бұрын
Earliest, we've been so far, lol. Another restful sleep thanks to our beloved friend, the wonderful Dr ❤️
@MrsCaranAmy3 ай бұрын
This was an excellent classic story tonight. Great narration. Thank you ❤️ 🤗 🌟
@TattooedPink3 ай бұрын
Cheers 😊
@heretic9973 ай бұрын
Honestly kinda reminds me of fear and hunger termina
@FernBlackwood19953 ай бұрын
Oh jeez. That’s literally my favourite game. Now I HAVE to listen to this whole thing.
@SilentForest-cs9dm3 ай бұрын
We love you my dear.
@TheMidwesternViking3 ай бұрын
Thought we had a civil war creepy pasta, but a story from the good doctor nonetheless, here good sir join by the fire we with some best brandy
@Jak04673 ай бұрын
I saw vicksburg and that's the first thought I had too
@robbyroba3 ай бұрын
The author chose the name because it sounded cool rather than it being named after the real place.
@debrapoirier44353 ай бұрын
🖤🖤🖤
@VictorNajera-p9l3 ай бұрын
Hell yeah just in time
@rileymcdaniel5271Ай бұрын
Couple things i didnt like about this story but thats not unusual for stories but overall this is a great story. I really liked the ending
@marcusgray27993 ай бұрын
I live in Vicksburg ms
@jamesleonard65843 ай бұрын
I'm in Olive Branch
@droopy02663 ай бұрын
Are used to live in Vicksburg description of the town are inaccurate
@khtauhidislam75053 ай бұрын
✅
@mr.delightful72533 ай бұрын
Starting with that name
@didsombodycallme30243 ай бұрын
Dr creepen 😱😱
@druidictroy11573 ай бұрын
Well, someone's been reading H.P. Lovecraft!
@harrygrimley43523 ай бұрын
When you narrat a story
@kaillajohnson12613 ай бұрын
Is there a part 2
@Theflag_Streamersguy3 ай бұрын
Ahh yes, Hotel Vicksburg. Pretty ....'pretty' boy(s).
@nicolebogda14823 ай бұрын
Well done dear Doctor!!! 👏👏👏 My only critique to all these creative, incredibly conceptive stories would be; Please dear writers- so many adjectives, if you could find it in your creative centers to avoid the use of “inky?” ⬆️ this? Past the opening use! 👏🙌great varied writing! Plz don’t open with, or continued use…. The stories are always great Doc’ ty’nn
@JustBlessd843 ай бұрын
Stevie Wonders could have seen the chick was the witch from the legend 😒🤦🤷
@CatEnthusiast-gr3cv3 ай бұрын
What award did this win? Most garbage in class?
@DeltaPi3143 ай бұрын
How did we get the story if the protagonist dies in the end?
@pax_aurum_nightlord3 ай бұрын
technically, we don't know if the protagonist is dead or not. this is more up to interpretation.
@otheragee11443 ай бұрын
Did an AI write this
@adriennepyle76253 ай бұрын
CAN SOMEONE PLEASE WRITE IN 3RD PERSON OMNISCIENT! PLEASE! Give me something other than all the damn first person. I need Stephen King essence. Why does every creepy pasta, reddit, and amatuer writer do first person. It immediately brings the writing down a point, or 30, for me. These stories are all getting so predictable. 😢
@adamspivey59633 ай бұрын
Don't listen to them Steve k. Go pump some out of that big brain you got and just give it to about 5 of the creepypasta people who narriate them for us why does everyone want to judge these guys so horrible I am here because I just love listening to amateur stories from the same people you don't have a pot to piss in in this race I just sunk your battle ship oops I did it again oh my sorry Brittany me too!!!!
@frederickbrock27402 ай бұрын
Agreed. Thought of that many times myself why always 1st person? Probably because it's easier to write 😮
@jendubay37823 ай бұрын
ITT: MC doesn't have the sense gods gave a turnip. 😂
@droopy02663 ай бұрын
One horse town but has car pollution one store ha
@AmandaKasper-si9dg3 ай бұрын
Bug spray
@awolstew10363 ай бұрын
Whats up doc?
@shaun6013 ай бұрын
Being being from Jackson Mississippi (32 miles from Vicksburg) I had to tap in😅😅
@Gfish173 ай бұрын
I would happily go for eternal life and youth. I just don't want to be tied down by a god.
@pax_aurum_nightlord3 ай бұрын
well the fountain of youth was a thing explorers have searched for, so there's a goal
@mennott83463 ай бұрын
Is she just telling her own story?
@DSWL_3 ай бұрын
👀
@DSWL_3 ай бұрын
thanks doctor
@rileymcdaniel5271Ай бұрын
Men really cant write female characters without describing their breasts, wtf
@sweethavenmyparadiseforani550129 күн бұрын
Rule number one... never trust a beautiful woman... duh...
@scottkeppler72513 ай бұрын
Your voice sounds so much like Sam Neal.
@madeinengland49103 ай бұрын
That was the worst story i have ever heard you narrate,,your voice sounds like its Ai at beginning..but the story is grimm boring and Terrible,,this is not worthy of you,and ive followed you for a couple years,i had a job to do Windows ,i looked for a hourish long story eg duration of job becuase its ladder work so didnt want to have switch channels,,i kept thinking it will get better soon,but it didnt it got worse.,sorry Doc,,just my oppinion,,hello from England ll the same 😎
@Dion77653 ай бұрын
Chauvinist.,
@karehhartig72873 ай бұрын
Great reading Dr. Creepen. 📖🪦⚰
@jasonroberts44703 ай бұрын
Listening for second time enjoyed it so much had to listen to second time😊😊😊😊
@kathleencandelaria41063 ай бұрын
Our hero might be better off with listening to his big brain.