"Last time i saw you, we were in a hotel bed, the only window opened over an alley filled with garbage, the kind you would only jump to from a burning building. Each night as you slept beside me, I had a choice, to lay wrapped in the air our bodies had created the heavy fabric of sex or to let the reek of that alley inside, that sour gasoline, and I opened the window every time." This was so beautiful, yet so sad - you sir are incredible, never has a poem hit so close to home.
@eventerchick51711 жыл бұрын
All of his poetry is wonderful, but I think this one is my favorite. I lack the words to describe how enthralled I am with his delivery and way with words. As an English major, I am envious. As a human, I am enchanted. I look forward to seeing new pieces by Dylan!
@elizabethbennet47915 жыл бұрын
no wonder youre an english major. it's a boring self-involved, privileged poem
@BenGillespie11 жыл бұрын
Usually I dislike when I can't find anything to relate to in a poem... in this case I am blessed
@karenlogue106811 жыл бұрын
I love the first seconds of the video. It's like the embarrassment of of leaving a sordid night. And then hiding from the truth. Done it and done it.
@paix22111 жыл бұрын
This guy is just incredible.
@AsToldByBrittanyy11 жыл бұрын
The last two lines broke my heart..
@jonathanelliott460211 жыл бұрын
DG, your work was transcendent, inspiration, I enjoyed the piece immensely, the camera work added to the drama, the timeline - use of the clock - was really original and I appreciate your words
@Lunalikethemoonn12 жыл бұрын
I love this poem.
@elizabethbennet47915 жыл бұрын
A song about cheating- Boston, of course.
@creepykels10 жыл бұрын
I went to Northfield High School. Good fuel for poems like this -_- But really, this was beautiful.
@OliviaSoule11 жыл бұрын
Great poem. The camerawork is weird
@Kinnishian12 жыл бұрын
I think you might be using the word difficult in two different ways, which confuses your statement. In the first I would say we're talking about the moral difficulty (courage?) of speaking something. It is not to say it would always be hard to tell someone you cheated on them, but there are scenarios in which it might be difficult. In the second, it is painful to be told, but is it difficult? It might be difficult to proceed, exist, continue, but to be told is not your choice.
@SSSLUGS11 жыл бұрын
Oh my.
@SnackThatSmilesBacktm2 жыл бұрын
im all for expressing ourselves through poetry, this poem is beuaful, but should we really be honoring cheating by giving a whole poem about a cheater a fancy video?
@suzukimayhem11 жыл бұрын
Translation: "Look guys, I had sex! With more than one person!!!"
@elizabethbennet47915 жыл бұрын
lol
@elizabethbennet47915 жыл бұрын
insecure people thing tacky, easy things are difficult things
@SincerelyRomro11 жыл бұрын
whoops I have a big crush on you
@elizabethbennet47915 жыл бұрын
gl with that dummy.
@Toyman600011 жыл бұрын
its a girl filming...
@hashack1110 жыл бұрын
how'd you know?
@ih8itdotcom10 жыл бұрын
sounds like Micheal lee's pass on but not as emotional. put more emotion in it.