IELTS Writing Task 2 | PROBLEM / SOLUTION ESSAY with Jay!

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[@kinesonc]

In conclusion, studying for the ielts is also a cause of stress. However E2 ielts and Jay is an incredible solution

[@imthiyazkhanpatthan7263]

Excellent cause and solution!

[@Heydeeok]

@@ryankerr9916 * are incredible solutions *

[@Heydeeok]

@ kineson: ielts - cause of stress. YOU solution! You made me laugh off some of the ielts stress, with your very true but funny comment :)

[@sayantanghosh2956]

Not to completely disagree with your point but in my opinion I would like to say that TOEFL is actually harder than IELTS, except the writing part the rest of IELTS is quite easy.

[@sumaiyakamal710]

Stress related sickness has become a crucial problem in our life..

[@FemiAdigun]

If you can give this much wealth of information away for free, I wonder how rich your premium subscription will be. No doubt, this is the best IELTS preparation channel on KZbin. Thumbs up

[@sudikshya389]

Yeah I only follow his schedule 📆

[@joanmulama9475]

Incridible work mr jay, I have learnt a lot and am now conversant with this ielts I suppose am ready for ielts examination test

[@obiorachiamaka8174]

@@sudikshya389 how do you do that please

[@blessingoluwole2130]

Thank you so much Jay 🤗. You played a significant role in making me pass IELTS with an overall of 8.0......L 8.5, R 7.5, W 7.0 and S 8.0.... I sincerely give God all the glory 🙌. If I can do it, you can do it too. Trust me....study hard and pray harder 🙏. God will do it for you too. Amen 🙏

[@euchariaokeke1784]

Amen

[@rejoicefrancis8632]

Amen

[@bellatrixie9345]

Hello, Im so nervous and worried my IELTS exam will be in 2weeks I just been watrching youtube channels now.

[@blessingoluwole2130]

@@bellatrixie9345 hang in there dear. Relax and remember if others could do it and pass, why can't you? You got this okay 👌 💪 Break a leg 🤗🤗🤗🤗. I wish you all the very best 💃💃💃💃. You have passed already by His grace 🙌. Amen 🙏

[@akanshasingh9667]

@@blessingoluwole2130 amen

[@bhavankitnavadiyaa]

You are more than a teacher for us. You are our mentor, our support and our guide. Thank you for everything you have done for us!!!

[@habibahdawodu5067]

❤

[@maryogbonna6470]

Thanks so much Jay! My IELTS Result came out today. I scored an Overall of 8! My first attempt. Had about one month to prepare and I only prepared with just your videos!

[@ANIKET_Yadav69]

show here your scorecard

[@jennifermacharia6217]

Hi Jay, I did my IELTS on 20th June 2022. Am glad I watched this problem solution question here because that's the question i got in the exam room. The question was what causes children to eat unhealthy and solutions. I used this exact method of writing and before I knew it, I was done within 20mins did proof reading for 10 mins then focused with tasks 1 question. I got a band 7 in writing and was happy. My advice to students always start with task 2 essay question it carries more marks.

[@julienchine3498]

This is such a good tip! Thank you! Did you take the on-paper or computerized version of the IELTS?

[@chinenyecharity301]

Thanks so much for the advice

[@E2IELTS]

Leave a like and a comment, my friends! :)

[@rahmarabea6994]

from what i heard that's bad for ur score, its highly recommended that u don't use already prepared templates

[@lets_do_some_shoppingmeet435]

E2 IELTS .... check my replies and tell my mistakes please

[@ShadowFangs19]

Hello Sir, the essay repeats "This essay" twice in introduction and in the conclusion, will that leave a negative impression?

[@keerthinagesh5326]

Having healthy atmosphere

[@gi6578]

Hello sir I would like to have individual coaching with you for writing ..how much is the course fees and structure

[@ingelangewouters8553]

Thank you so much Jay, I watched all your videos before the academic test and got a 7,5! So happy!

[@eunicedakwa5838]

I was listening to this video on my way to write my ielts 2 weeks ago and to my amazement I got a problem and solution question. Scored 7 in writing. Speaking 8.5, listening 7.5 and reading 7. All your videos are great

[@biologylecturesbyriffat]

I’m a teacher too. Watching your videos makes me realise that being a hardworking and polite teacher works wonders.

[@E2IELTS]

Leave a like and comment my friends! And if you like what you see DONATE $ to E2 here: www.paypal.me/e2language -- help us help everyone!

[@jalaknasit]

Hi Jay, First of all thanks a lot for such a great vidoes. However i found somethng confusing about causes you mentioned in first para and solution. Causes:- Long working hours and job pressur Solution: work-life balance and diet am a bit conused about second cause and solution, i think it's necessary to state the solution of the causes we mentioned in para1. Thanks Again

[@ganeshb.k.5301]

thank you sir..from nepal

[@zahedahmed7116]

Summing up: studying for ielts is also cause of stress. However jay in an incredible solutions. A lot of people who have got a good teacher.thank you so much for giving writing videos

[@IELTSDK]

Very powerful, I myself a trainer and closely studied so many teachers on youtube but this guy is simply superb. He is so clear, effective and influential. God bless you.

[@srizuprajapati4576]

I understand much more by ur video than my ielts tuitor. tq. u r really great sir. i wish i have chance to learn frm u.

[@layla_fit]

This was really useful and you absolutely deserve a lovely comment not only because you're an IELTS expert but also a linguist!

[@tusithbarua952]

Though I haven't performed well in Task -2, surprisingly I got my desired band -7 in writing. Just tried to follow the prescribed logical structure. Tons of thanks for your tips & tricks, best generous educator in KZbin.👏

[@skairipa8862]

You are very professional and thorough , thank you so much for the help really appreciate it :)

[@anhkieu910]

thank you so much for this video, i've been struggling with writing task 2 such a long time. And now, i have more confidence for this test after watching u . LOVE your videos!!

[@sruthikuppusami2680]

Great work !!! Just watching your videos on youtube I was able clear the exam not to mention I am just a below average candidate....thanks to Jay...he really seems to know his stuff ...

[@kanwarprashant2168]

Nobody has explained so well in such a simple language about writing task. Thank you so much Mr Jay

[@reneocorona514]

You were such a very good mentor and a well-rounded IELTS resource speaker!Hope to get a suitable overall Band Score this coming Jan.18/19,2023 Sir Jay.Thanks a lot on your videos.God bless you always.From the Philippines.

[@ruthprathusha747]

E2Language is the best to be the best! :-)

[@irenek5819]

Jay you are indeed heaven sent. Thanks for being an amazing teacher

[@imthiyazkhanpatthan7263]

Very true!

[@jamnain6216]

Thank you Jay.your tutorials have helped immensely to improve on my vocabulary.I had a lot of issues with writing and right now I find it very interesting listening to your lectures.May God bless you.

[@VAleixo85]

You have been a really useful to me and I want thank you for that. I am going to do my Ielts Test next month. Please come to Portugal, I want you as a teacher!! Keep your good work!

[@wilsione]

I believe it will be 9 solid if the simple sentences are combined to compound. I have been following and studying your post..nice work jay

[@habibahdawodu5067]

You also need to add complex sentences

[@sameernayyar]

I got R-7.5 W-7.5 L-7.5 S-7 in my first attempt without any classroom coaching in March 2018...big thanks for your videos.. sitting again in 2 days..wish me luck!

[@amu808]

Why again?

[@UdtaPunjabi1]

8777

[@lifewitharzoo1786]

@@UdtaPunjabi1 score again?

[@princekainth2342]

@@UdtaPunjabi1 did u get ur result?

[@UdtaPunjabi1]

@@lifewitharzoo1786 bro 8777 is required for additional 50 points in CRS as it is considered level CLB 9 in english efficiency.

[@hiteshv005]

Awesome way of teaching Jay ! Precise and to the point, with an essence of well structured tips. 🙏🏾👍🏽

[@samsam8296]

Great tutor with very simple way of explaining, thanks a lot Jay.

[@gurpreet8609]

In my essay I'm going to throw light on two causes behind stress including the changing pattern of work time and family related problems..

[@pihusharma8834]

great job! the answers given by the students must be displayed so can learn more ideas from others too

[@rosovarnia2448]

Pihu, open the transcript. You can easily have access to other students sentences. Look at the three ... at the right bottom, next to like, dislike, share and etc. you wont miss it.

[@ghadasalem4597]

just as great as all your other videos, I am an ESL instructor and I learn a lot of useful strategies from your videos. Thanks for sharing

[@norisanis9288]

Thanks so much Jay! I've been struggling lately but watching your videos helps me a lot. You're an amazing teacher!

[@drriaz9075]

Jay I owe you my IELTs writing score. BAND 8. Followed your tips and method as it is. Worked! Thank you

[@vardayaseen6781]

How many days it took to prepare have you only followed him?

[@brittomon]

Dear Jay U r the BEST teacher i ever had. Thanks for ur classes I love learning from u guys Great Job E2 Team Thanks a lot :)

[@danzak6235]

Thank you Jay. I took my ielts on July 29, 2023 and got band 7.5 in Writing by following your strategies. I was really amazed because i couldn't complete the task 2 due to the challenge of time. I was just about writing the conclusion when i heard " TIME UP!! STOP WORK"!! I used just 25 minutes for task 2 eventhough i never practised writing before the exam. I JUST WATCHED YOUR VIDEOS TO LEARN THE STRATEGIES. I ALSO AVOIDED MECHANICAL LANGUAGE IN THE ESSAY. THANK YOU SO MUCH.

[@shaksham007]

Thank you for putting up wonderful learning tutorials online!

[@Broke-disastrous-guy]

You guys have no idea how helpful your lessons have been to me. I sat the test and the questions that I got were insanely tough;my mind went blank for like 10 minutes or so when I went through the writing questions. I went out of the test hall disappointed and devestated. I was dreading the day the results would come . I promised myself that I would make this comment on the last e2 video that I watched if I get a band higher than 7. And lo and behold, my results have just arrived and I got : W:7.5 R:8 L:8.5 S:7 I was freaking elated and I danced around (literally) and immediately recommended you guys to all my friends. I will be eternally grateful for what you guys have done for me. This YT channel has completely changed my life. PS: to be honest, I was expecting to score more in reading and listening. But I am so happy with my writing score that I don't care about it anymore

[@jovittajoshy9903]

Did you learn grammar lessons for the test?

[@faridap1061]

This video has helped me to improve my writing skills immensely as well as gives me amazing tricks to write the essays

[@sardorabduraimov303]

Precise, simple, brief and encouraging! I am glad to have found you, E2 Team! Thanks and Good luck!

[@briskaalidunah7267]

Jey happy to meet you I hope every thing is going on well with you. Your doing a great job I love how you are analysing essays in e2 languages, I wish to learn more. Thanks

[@acsahmatthew1445]

Thank you e2 ielts. I just followed some tips and tricks from e2 ielts and prepared for ielts in a week and i got 7.5 overall band score .

[@debopriyadutta7413]

You are Awesome Jay. I have not seen many teachers or tutorials teach in such depth. Its remarkable to see how you teach IELTS writing task 2 sentence by sentence. I have gained immense knowledge and confidence by listening to your videos. Thank you for posting these videos on youtube. I hope you continue to post more videos for student like us who are willing to learn and are in search of honest teachers who can guide students to achieve required score.

[@roselynenyakwara5852]

Awesome indeed Jay

[@hwngozinwaoha3870]

Jay you are such a life saver. I wrote my ielts today and I enjoyed the whole ride because of all you taught on your videos I had downloaded and watched over and over. I was literally hearing your voice at the exam hall throughout my test time I enjoyed using my chichi the way you taught doing my tasks was a smooth sail. Thank you for making yourself a blessing to our generation and age, God bless you Jay, God bless E2Language.

[@elietshimpaka683]

Jay, thanks for this wonderful and simple method to reach any required band in IELTS.

[@user-tu6do7uo7f]

Thank you for your extremely well-planned detailed lesson! All the best wishes !

[@odvutmanush3234]

Thanks to god I find out about this channel. I was freaking out about task 2 writting. Thanks a to Jay. You are amazing. Undoubtly This is the best Ielts related channel .

[@gauravbhasin757]

Hey Jay, your classes are just amazing as i learned a lot, moreover your live classes are very helpful and to be honest i started working on writing part a week ago and i scored 6 in writing. If i had have started earlier i would have achieved more, But i am completely satisfied and in future will aim for more. Thanks a lot for your support!

[@weiwei36362]

thank you so much for the detailed instruction. I had paid 300 $ for my writing lesson and but it just feel money goes down the drain as I was still quite confused about it. I just feel sooooo much clear now. thank you so much .

[@abdullahwarraich2469]

you are my inspirational mentor jay...

[@julianaredzuan3154]

Thank you so much e2 Language for the amazing tips. I use most of the tips during IELTS exam. I just got my IELTS result today. I got 7. I quite surprised because I thought I at 5 or 6 😅😅 Thank you so much Jay and friends.

[@priscillaobeng-akrofi619]

I appreciate your step by step explanation and the practice aspect of it. Your lessons are easy to follow and understand.

[@loversangelheaven]

I really enjoyed your class Jay!!! It's fun learning with you. Thank you 👍

[@islamkaharov6139]

will have exam soon, after 3 weeks, please pray for me good luck to everyone who is studying hard, also thank you for such as good videos from Kazakhstan with love

[@sukhrajmahal8537]

All the best.. m also having exam next week.. and unfortunately it's third time... Pray for me too..

[@mrdiamondsdv5847]

Islam Kaharov , me too in 2 weeks

[@suresh625]

Today, jan 6th 2018, I have completed LRW of ielts.. I was in panic mode for essay writing until I saw this video two days before the exam. Watched all essay writing videos just before the exam. Now i am expecting band score of 8 in writing. Thank you Jay, once again. Will post my scores on January 19, 2018.

[@AHAMMohd]

please when you got it ,tell me by reply

[@suresh625]

Unfortunately, my results are withheld. May be the tricks given by Jay might have tricked the examiner. Will post my results once I get them.

[@suresh625]

7 7 7 Speaking 6.5

[@karthiksainadhpasumarthi5707]

suresh625 congratulations brother, which topic is given in task2?

[@suresh625]

Advantages and disadvantages of Apartments in cities. I followed the structure given by Jay. Now I will be taking the test again in April. For that, I have enrolled in Bonze course of E2lang for $129. The course material is excellent.

[@akashprasad5750]

Outstandingly brilliant! Thank you very much Jay for such an insightful episode!

[@bornyaadi9910]

You are not only touching lives; you are touching hearts...Thank you!

[@gbsatish22]

Hi Jay, cool bananas.. thank you so much for your videos, you rock.. after watching all your videos I was able to get the required score..thanks again..

[@pragtikapoor8493]

Jay your videos helped me get 7.5 in writing, I was stuck at 6.5. Thank you sop much!

[@sarahorinda1479]

Thank you Jay.i listened to only your videos, had a month in between work to study, sat for paper based exam in November 20th and just received results today! Got a Band 7 overal with 7.5 in writing having used your strategies. you are doing an amazing work, bless you.

[@adrianamanova4072]

Great tutorial, very well explained and helpful. Thank you!

[@lalalauz9297]

Thank you Sir Jay for this video. It is very helpful. Please don't get tired sharing your knowledge with us🙏❤️ Stay healthy and more power😍🥰❤️🙏

[@mahinkazemi7957]

Thank you Jay 🙏 I adore your lessons. ❤️ You can't imagine how much I have improved in writing an essay with your help🤠

[@PerkyKids]

Hello Jay, you are an amazing teacher with vast experience .I will be writing the second part of the IELTS examination on Saturday.

[@Lina-vq1mq]

THX Jay!it is really helpful for me!i like your class so much!

[@guduguntatarun7496]

wowww... u r d best ielts teacher in d world sir.... 👏👏😎

[@nixoneric3890]

Hey there Jay please do some easy on environmental issue, and government role or individuals have both issues,along with opinion. Thanks

[@elizabethtompsett3530]

Just wanted to say thank you for all the IELTS Writing videos. I also received 3 x 9s but a 7.5 in writing, Having watching and practised along with the videos I feel so much better prepared to nail the technique in my test tomorrow - what a wonderful resource!

[@benitauche6038]

Thank you Mr. Jay. I really appreciate all your efforts here to make us pass IELTS in one sitting

[@chaunguyen-iw6gi]

Thank you E2 IELTS team for your dedicated and hard work. I just got my the result which i wanted. Thanks a lot!

[@iemberjossy8809]

Writing task was one the scariest modules when I started preparing for ielts but after watching some of your video clips I am becoming quite confident. Thanks so much Jay for the amazing job you are doing.

[@mohameddief6373]

I found it more relevant to cover all about one cause means ( cause 1 - reason - example ). Then cover all about the second cause ( cause 2 - reason - example ). I think this will be a better structure especially if the two causes are not so similar - Please advise

[@gr8ofnetwork289]

Same dilemma here. Using New placement and Diet for causes.

[@chimmalambo5023]

You were so right. Knowing theory is one thing. Practicing it is something else entirely

[@harsimratreij4007]

Jay, thank you very much for sharing knowledge online. I m sure your tips and tricks will help me clear my ielts. 🙏

[@gwengwengwenvivivi]

You are the solution of my IELTS writing part, I love your lessons.... Thank you for being that much incredible

[@gurpreet8609]

Traffic congestion: Causes: 1)Dense population 2)poorly built roada 3)increasing number of vehicles

[@michcorbe3560]

Hi jay! You're doing a great job! Thank you so much for all your advise its very useful. I wrote my exam last july 2017 and i just followed your techniques, the funny thing is i was thinking about you while i was doing my writing. I didnt have a formal ielts review because i didnt have so much time so i just watched your video andnit really helped. I think i didnt achieve the required numbernof words but maybe because of the format that you have taught us i still got a high score. Again, thank you very much.God bless you!

[@evannasama2833]

really its the best channel in youtube ever , we learned too much from you you do your best to offer a good material , all our gratitude to your respectful person

[@monarodriguez1772]

Regardless of what my score will be, I have to say that you're a really good teacher. Your lessons are very informative and detailed. It's setup in a way that anyone can easily understand - it all boils down to individual skill and our ability in absorbing the lessons. You're doing a fantastic job, Jay. Thank you. :)

[@jamilrezachowdhury8661]

Just fabulous!!!!

[@jamilrezachowdhury8661]

Jay you taught me how to truly write an essay. I have already graduated from an engineering school of my country but didn't know how to write before your online videos.

[@TimTom712.]

Thanks a million for that simple and understandable lesson. You have put calm and convidence in my soul.

[@umeonuohakenechi2699]

This is way more than helpful Jay. Your teaching are very vital and i must appreciate your effort in putting all this together. Keep up the good work. I will be back to testify about your impact on my study. Thanks a lot bro.🙂

[@florenceobogwu1202]

This essay will discuss the two main causes of stress related illness which includes longer working hours and limited time for rest. This essay will also discuss the two main solutions to these problems including reducing the time spent at work and creating adequate periods for rest thus stricking a balance

[@damodaranmudaliar8556]

Hi Jay, What if i have two different causes for which reason cannot be put in one sentence, as you have done in this? If i put my two causes and then two reasons and then two examples, then would that be coherent? See below structure: Cause1 Cause 2 Reason 1 Reason 2 Ex 1 Ex 2 Conclusion My two causes were family issues and job pressure.

[@kirpalsingh9063]

hi jay your class is nic

[@irohagraceudo9595]

I didn't have time to prepare for my test due to work and a close deadline I was trying to meet. However, I watched your video on the problem and essay the night and morning before my test. I made a band 7 in writing Thank you Jay.

[@ANIKET_Yadav69]

joking wow

[@muhayyoodilxojayeva6157]

Thank you so much Jay!!! I learned preciseless structure because it seems more easy than others and excellent

[@yassernovo7654]

The E2IELTS team are doing a great job!!! I highly recommend this channel!!!

[@tanu5401]

Thanks Jay! Your video lessons really helped. Got 7.5 in writing in the first attempt

[@ideal_fitnesss33]

Hw long did u study IELTS for??

[@tanu5401]

@@ideal_fitnesss33 For about a month. You need to understand what exactly are the examiners looking for in your answers and write according to that. If someone's grammar and vocabulary isn't up to mark they would need to work on that as well.

[@ideal_fitnesss33]

Tanu Gupta ohhh okay....i studied for about 4 weeks aswell ....i feel like im ready and at times i feel like im not ready at all.....cn u give me tips please fr all 4 sections :)

[@tanu5401]

@@ideal_fitnesss33 as far being ready or not is concerned, your practice test score is a good indicator for Reading and Listening sections. Speaking is something you have to practice. There's a pattern which is followed for speaking test. You just need to understand that and prepare at least the intro section. E2 IELTS video is good enough. For writing you need to follow the guidelines. For formal, informal letter and essay types. I suggest reading some good reading material on a regular basis to improve your English in general.

[@yazdbanaji4945]

Tanu Gupta did you take the academic version of the test ...because there aren’t any formal or informal letters in that till I’m aware of ?

[@nohaclinical9025]

Thank you for your great efforts Jay , your videos about writing are very helpful , your presentation skills are magnificent, God bless you, Thanks again

[@ayukayuk7585]

Thanks Jay. The piece has so much modified my IELTS writing preps

[@DRMOIN1991]

KZbin really lacks in love button... What a lesson!!!!

[@julietasanchez4530]

My Essay! Thanks you so mucccch :D (I'm not great at spelling) Cause-solution Essay. Topic: Stress-related illnesses Nowadays stress-related illnesses are affecting millions of people around the globe. This essay will discuss the main causes of it, includding University pressure, in early age, and the competitive work, in adulthood. This written paper will also suggest how meditation techniques and practising yoga might help handleing these issues, which are becoming more common day by day. Human beings are drifted to compel a high society standards, such as being sucsesfull in degree' studies or Masters in formal education. But after the student period, it comes the worst: insane office hours, that are endless, time-comsuming and of course, tremondously stressful. Both types of tension, in academic institutions and in working environments, tipically occur because of the lack of self consciouness, in which they are putting too much effort to acomplish social standards. For instance, a complete week without sleeping during final exams in order to persue excellent grades or a office worker spending extra hours in order to climb a corporate ladder. This most of the time undoubtely ends up in stressful-scenarios that negativelly affects people´s health. Applying daily meditation methods or practising yoga could prevent stress-related illnesses, such as insomnia, depression or hypertension. Just breathing with awareness calms a person´s mind and by doing yoga' postures the body has the chance to deeply relax. For example, it is scientifically proved that a steady breathing reduces twenty percent blood pressure and yoga practice helps to avoid mental disorders. Therefore, in order to diminish academic and work related disseasses, these oriental practises reduce stress symptoms. In conclusion, stress-related illnesses are a current coin in our demanding society. In this written work we have discussed two main causes of it: academic and laborative pressure. In addition, this essay also suggested that breathing techniques during medidation or doing yoga can make a person live less stressfull, and therefore, way healthier without stress-related illnesses.

[@muhammedkaraduman7294]

absolutely who wrote this essay i can understand it easily when i read ahaha : struggle to go master degree ( the same thoughts in my brain too :/ )

[@titiu1194]

Thank you Jay. You are simply the best, your patience is worth emulating

[@sashazand1967]

YOU ARE AN AMAZING TEACHER , ACTUALLY MORE THAN A TEACHER , WELL DONE . I AM LEARNING IELTS JUST WITH YOU. AND ALL OF MY FRIENDS AS WELL .

[@adithyabura9815]

Thanks so much, Jay for this excellent tutorial. I have a question: "This essay will discuss...." was used in this essay. Because this looks so simple to write, would not an IELTS examiner reduce our score? Thanks in advance for your response. It means a lot to me. Thanks.

[@E2IELTS]

+adithya bura No. It's standard and accurate. Don't reinvent the wheel.

[@ismailsulaiman7153]

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[@siddharthkotadiya8428]

you are doing an Amazing job Jay, Thank you so much for your teachings. keep doing the great work. :)

[@rabiasaeed8104]

Extraordinary ! Thank you so much Jay

[@marjoriebacdayan2489]

Im a bit nervous on my exam this coming oct 12, 2019 but because of your excellent tutorial I know that i can make it💪🙏

[@kalyanimahakalkar7841]

Me too . I am so Damm nervous 😩

[@santoshturamari]

Hi Jay, Is this an advantage / disadvantage + opinion essay or just opinion essay? Being a celebrity - such as famous film star or sports personality - brings more problems as well as benefits. Do you think that being a celebrity brings more benefits or more problems?

[@E2IELTS]

+Santosh BT Sounds like a straight opinion. Where did you get it?

[@santoshturamari]

Hi, This is from one of the Cambridge Practice Books. Thanks for the confirmation.

[@RaajueSheikh]

All of your tutorial is very effective. Your instruction is helping me a lot to prepare for IELTS. Thanks a Lot.

[@naomibautista1732]

Hi Jay! It is always great to listen to your lecture.