Earth Was Banned from the Council-So They Made Their Own Empire / HFY Sci Fi Stories

[@blindbrad4719]

"We feared earths advancements, but for the wrong reasons…", Haven't met our rampant xenophobia yet then I see.

[@SetsunaInfinite]

For the Emperor!

[@Joehoss1987]

At last a storytelling AI that can actually tell a story without butchering the words. This is good stuff

[@mothmagic1]

I've no idea how you can say that. The narration is still badly mangling the English language.

[@tonyh8166]

@@mothmagic1 He's talking about the writing, not the narration.

[@ScorpiusZA.]

What it can't do it tell what a paragraph break is. It goes from 1 part to the next as if it was part of a the same sentence.

[@InTheWrongTimeline]

I like your sarcasm dot

[@MeNanWazaHowitzer]

Shimming scales lol

[@plokiju8876]

I loved this story. There was no Chen, no casting long shadows, no clicking of mandibles.

[@Sattrax]

But plenty of chin chin.

[@cirabree]

"Moving with practice precision" :) ?

[@GrumpyOldGuyPlaysGames]

There was still a Lyra. "Breathing gills"? The writing is still horrible.

[@TEXASUSA45]

* clicking mandibles *

[@thomaslatortue4764]

Lmaoooo

[@tonyh8166]

Parallel dimension energy extraction- Isaac Asimovs' "The Gods Themselves" has something to say about why thats a baaaaad idea. And worth the read for the tactical life lesson too, even though its 50 years old or so.

[@lordtimothymichel8677]

Some things get better with age, and more truthful.

[@WilliamCairnes-fi2po]

Thinking the same thing, also, TANSTAAFL.

[@Bluesonofman]

The galaxy shall be reorganized into the First Galactic Empire!

[@Lurker37]

Every time the AI says dot, you need to replace that with a pause of 2-3 seconds. It almost ruins what is otherwise a rather good read.

[@Darkom1972]

U see u cant keep the Galactic Empire from infiltration in any sci fi story, All hail to the emperor ^^

[@jyvben1520]

All hail to the new emperor, except there is no empire

[@InfiniteSciFiJourneys]

The humans' determination and resilience after being rejected are truly inspiring-it shows the power of turning setbacks into opportunities for greatness.

[@belmontzar]

You know, its nice to see the story from the perspective of an Alien race that respected humanity from the beginning instead or either humanity itself saying "Just watch us" or a story of regret for underestimating the humans. Seeing an Alien already aligned with Earth and just watching things fall over is a nice change.

[@barksdalehales438]

Wow look at all the Federation (Star Trek ) uniforms.

[@tk0rahl327]

And the Picasso faces....

[@Beef1188]

Another story of "quantum this" and "quantum that" and "quantum whatever". How... expected.

[@qwazxwas]

How quaint uhm?

[@normaldude24]

There's a lot of inconsistencies in the highlighted words vs. what seems to need actual emphasis and the names of the aliens.

[@jackadams7368]

I really enjoyed this! thanks for the great read, keep up the good work!!

[@MeNanWazaHowitzer]

Is starbound the only one of these channels that has humans read stories

[@CuteHangman8302]

Net narrator does as well

[@DarkZodiacZZ]

HFY Girl, Agro Squirrel?

[@tomzawacki8906]

One of the best stories I've enjoyed in a long time, well done and Thank You.

[@rohenthar8449]

Yeah, we humans of the current era, we forgot how to dream....

[@alex29443]

Do you want chaos gods? Because that's how you get chaos gods.

[@J-Del]

Idea for a drinking game. Pull up one of these ai stories, you have to drink whenever you hear the name chen or rodriguez. Hard mode includes the phrases "human adaptability" "Creative problem-solving" "Thinking outside the box" "F*** my liver mode includes the word "quantum" When next to something normal.

[@Abolish_The_S-N-T_NOW]

Thank you

[@iamdragonkrys]

Nice story

[@dpwarb100]

Good story, much better AI it must have been checked by a human Well done

[@retrozmachine1189]

Shimming scales. Why were her scales being shimmed? Did she buy the wrong size at the shop?

[@demonblood8964]

Nice story. Though mi mind kind when on a tangent when I hear EIS Defiance as the first of her clas but the class referred to at the Titan class. Most ship classes are names after the first ship in its class. The Nimitz, the Gerald R Ford, the Flecher, the Ticondaroga, and the Ohio are all ship classes named after the first in class. Though sifi, maybe there is a different naming convention or something happened to the Titan, and they don't want to recognize it as first in its class for some reason but still use its name for the class for some reason.

[@danniemortensen4217]

For once a story where shara chin is not on the payroll 😂. And it was not full of “junk” frases as in 95% of other AI generated stories.

[@cecilb7927]

It wasn't just a fight for survival, Sarah Chen was busy fighting overwhelming odds against an overwhelming enemy showing adaptability and determination!

[@andrewgalindo6959]

Very impressive. Not only the story but the story telling AI. Well done, I hope y'all keep it up to date.

[@MurderPierrot]

Finally, stumbled something good

[@YDV669]

Shades of "The Excalibur Alternative", "Dahak" series.

[@Sattrax]

It's a satisfying story. Inventive and well told. Uplifting and looking ahead. The future can be the present. Interesting fusion. Thanks Subbed.

[@nargalda773]

I can already smell the oil in paralel dimensions

[@jamesgiovagnoli7754]

I grew up next to railroad tracks (bedroom maybe 200 feet at the most from the tracks). I can sleep through anything.

[@goatkiller666]

Q: How many of these ships are you going to make? A: Enough that the extre time we spent building the factory still saves us time. As opposed to building them all bespoke.

[@FukuYTmark6]

An original story and no Chen 👍

[@pray9207]

I mean sometimes the AI cuts off for a millisecond but f it HUMAN GLAZING BROTHERS!

[@garyhoffman8197]

Really, an imperial star destroyer.

[@SciFiCreation]

perfect!

[@Vodyinoii]

Is there a place where these stories are written out? Or is it only via AI voice that we can get them?

[@TigerSpirit67KItty42]

The narrative of this was extremely poor, missing grammatical cues. But awesome story and watching the images used and noticing the similarity to the Star Trek uniforms and communicators, I would love to see this story weaved into the prelude of the Star Trek Franchise.

[@matthewgibbs6886]

i wonder if ai generated graphics can be sued for copyright infringement

[@mrblue4602]

Good story. So with quantum realities. There only revenge if think it revenge !

[@MrSpartanicus]

Hey the ai didn’t butcher any words! Only thing off here were the words on the screen not being consistent. Little more work on pauses and punctuation.

[@elton6656]

what is a quantum dampened wall

[@Ron-y1b]

the companion of a quantum hardened window and my quantum softened head

[@frankmoore3598]

Now build cargo ships and really take over the galaxy

[@jyvben1520]

not logical, "technologically too agressive" so denied membership, only a prosperous system can advance that fast, the council has no influence

[@TheLH86]

Quantum, quantum quantum, quantum. Quantum walls, quantum glass, quantum air, quantum cheesecake. For Christ's sake, you don't need to add it to everything.

[@Ron-y1b]

paused at the chamber door

[@blueeyeswhitedragon9839]

The AI generated voice/narration, and some of the AI generated graphics are slightly distorted, such as the narration pronouncing the period at the end of sentences as "dot", and the faces being "twisted" on a couple of the graphics. I believe you are depending too heavily on AI without a human proofreader. The story is good, the presentation needs work.

[@RichardPoxon-m3w]

TIE fighters?!

[@JW-452]

A political entity that wants to prevent people from expanding militarily and scientifically would not reject them from joining they would want them to join because then they'd be able to use their membership to control the expansion of their military and scientific knowledge by not doing that the only way they have to control that is to straight up declare war because you've literally cut all diplomatic avenues with that that just seems really dumb. Like the basic premise of this seems to start from stupidity.

[@KFlexFantastic]

The narration needs to learn punctuation

[@lordtimothymichel8677]

What's the wrost that can happen? Bad, bad, choice of words....

[@badvector4314]

and everybody gets a pony

[@KeyOrion]

An interesting story. However, between the chapters, you really do need to put a period at the end of the sentence and some space. Because as it switches chapters, it drones on as if the sentences were sleeved together, which doesn't sound very good. Also, the last two chapters were the same thing, repeated using different words. Again, know when to stop the story, instead of trying to extend it beyond what is needed. I don't care if you put in a number for an AI generated writing program, telling it to put in 5,000 words. If the story only needs 3,000 words, then it only needs 3,000 words. 2,000 words extra of the story repeating the same thing over and over and over and over again, that is not a story. That is a broken record player.

[@Al-mf4uo]

Good story. The ideology lecture at the end got a bit long and wordy.

[@fresmarco78]

nope the text reader program is still dodgy cant seem to handle grammar . its all one big run on sentence.

[@anttilahtinen4583]

The world "quantum" has become over-used buzzword which adds nothing to the story. You could delete every "quantum" and the story wold not change at all.

[@MeNanWazaHowitzer]

How fast can AI generate images and narrate a redit story? Fadt enough to pump out 3 videos a day for a click farm i wonder how many channels this guy is flooding YT with

[@Cel-es-Tien]

It is improvement for previous AI storytelling, but still far from good. Really overtelling, exaggerated. Not realistic about timelines. And just spamming quantom this and that. Cannot be taken seriously as a story.

[@simply2187]

AI Slop.exe

[@adrianritchie1363]

One of the better stories av listen too

[@unprofor10]

the ai sentences are bad in this one.. .story ok.. .but reading ai ... bad

[@kjellmesch8060]

I have listen far to many times to stories that are in principal the exact same as this. Very small changes between them.