The Day an Alien Duel Master Faced a Human Swordsman and Realized He Was Outclassed | HFY Sci-Fi

[@martinwoodcock7365]

Goodness me, have people forgotten what fiction is? It doesn't have to be plausible, just enjoyable. I enjoyed it

[@luci_furr4206]

Exactly

[@luci_furr4206]

Plus one of the main characters is named jack black(wood)

[@marcuschauvin7039]

The point is entertainment.

[@robertrice6679]

Finally a more simple unique story, I absolutely enjoyed it, thank you!

[@johnsullivan6560]

Well created story! A real pleasure to hear. Thank you for sharing!

[@shaidorsai4834]

Zato Itchi lives on.

[@grayclaw1391]

Great story. Waiting for another one.

[@giljensen1132]

Great story

[@charleslamontagne983]

Oh yeay, vaporize mountains. So realistic

[@DavyErni]

What you need a sword for? I live life unarmed in faith.🥰🥰🙏

[@michaellinnet6095]

Not too bad for an AI story. But the "Starfire" sword was a little ridiculous. A true swordmaster wouldn't need gimmicks because true mastery is about skill. No AI, no power armor, and no enhancement. Just skill.

[@LordRaven30]

and luck, never dis luck

[@ScottHinger]

Luck can and will be a factor and you get luck through hard work, sweat, blood and pain.

[@PlayaSinNombre]

That was kinda the point…

[@michaellinnet6095]

@@PlayaSinNombre Boooh. That was a real stinker of a pun.😂😂

[@PlayaSinNombre]

Thanks. I’ll be here all week. Try the lamb.

[@17even]

I rather enjoyed that😊

[@Brown_Buffalo]

I thought it was a death match how can he yield?

[@tranquilthoughts7233]

I like it.

[@stephenbeck8753]

A sword that cleaved a small moon in half - it must have been either a very small moon or a really long sword 😂

[@jx.cx.6514]

JUST ONE QUESTION: .. Eh .. Wasn't this fight to the death? .. AAAAND .. I would've included the next dialogue in the final scenes of this story .. Grandmaster Calix Vor: "You humans are going to be INSUFFERABLE about this victory, aren't you?" Jack Blackwood just grinned and said " Oh absolutely .. we're going to be COMPLETELY UNBEARABLE .. So much so that here's an example ..Have you ever heard of or seen the classic 1981 movie titled "Miracle On Ice" or the 2004 movie titled simply as "Miracle"? And if you're not aware, both movies are about the US Men's Ice Hockey Team's incredible victory over the Soviet Union in the 1980 Winter Olympics ..Yeah it's gonna be something like that .. I'm gonna make a fortune with my personal biography, book series and online training courses, exclusives anticipated well paid interviews pushing my books and online training courses, then I'll make another ton of cash from movie rights and subsequent exclusive Netflix, Apple+ HBO series as well as all out marketing campaigns that'll include action figures with matching Anime movie series for the kids .. Yeah, we're gonna rub your alien noses in it pretty good for the better part of the next millennia ..."

[@joseestevezhernandez558]

I quite liked it, yes, there's that suspension of disbelief, but that's what sci-fi is about👌🏻

[@garybrown9719]

I call BS when he attack at 11 different angles 😅

[@jesseyspencer4582]

Yeah - it was only 9 different angles!!! /s

[@SeptemberMeadows]

Seventeen. It's always 17.

[@donaldboyd7496]

There's a reason behind it... It's not actually the number 17 they're referring to, it's just a representation for another number the AI isn't supposed to utilize in stories

[@BeltedhaZZar]

📅📆🗓️🎰🥀🍀❤️ New guy, reporting.

[@BeltedhaZZar]

​@@donaldboyd7496 What is the plan? I just wanted a blue pill

[@PeterDad60]

Excellent writing! Well worth my time! - Peter age 74

[@rons3634]

I'm not familiar with this channel so I don't know how it is voiced, but if this is AI it sounds like the best AI out there. Of course, the fighting goes full edgelord, but I guess there's not helping that if they want to draw out a fight so that the story can be fully told.

[@Apagador69]

" sounds like the best AI out there" you haven't been around much, huh?

[@JeronWhite]

This is a good one

[@jyvben1520]

the AI needs more practice, it always gets "practiced" wrong, it uses "practice"

[@charleslamontagne983]

and of course, quantum magic

[@charleslamontagne983]

sundering a battleship? cleaving a moon ? ridiculous

[@Vognee]

The moral of the story is relatable but details don’t make any sense

[@murphymmc]

The story starts out by telling us jack had chosen to use his steel sword, then in the arena everyone acts surprised he chose a steel sword, c'mon man, give us a break. He assumes the human will overcompensate in his weapon choice, then Vor proceeds to overcompensate..must be a Bidenite. Vor has a simple steel backup blade, one that felt familiar? He relied on tech for his "super sword" for a couple of centuries. That's a stretch to think he was comfortable with a simple blade. Why the descriptive embellishment of the star blade (are all his swords forged in a dying star)? That's pure overcompensation in writing.

[@sandman6849]

Naww, definitely a MAGAt overcompensating, as usual.

[@renaissancephoto]

Great story telling, please learn some science, and you'll have the perfect combo.

[@ryancrawford9894]

Could’ve used “quantum” thrown in there a few more times

[@bus6292]

With editing, this could be a good story.

[@NuTex1954-lk5un]

This was a better story! I liked it! However, and for whatever reason, it suffers from an all too familiar problem. NOBODY proof read/listened to the "DOT" audio/text; merely did a sloppy amateur publication. It must be kids grabbing stories from elsewhere just in a hurry to take credit.

[@BeltedhaZZar]

Dot What kind of unafraid emotional drive let you here.

[@gordoncampbell3514]

Sword master in 17 Galaxies! A sword that can cut through a moon! What a load of krap.

[@NathanBChampine]

And from that point in time they became brothers of the sword learning from each other.

[@texaswildcat2000]

A rarity...a really good story...

[@charleslamontagne983]

and by the way, in true fencing, the objective is not to clash steel against steel, it is to deflect the blade and touch the oponent.

[@samsignorelli]

And in true irony....this story posts when I'm working in the armory for a regional fencing event!

[@kenseajr]

you are correct however if I followed the story correctly they were NOT fencing. This was a true sword fight. From the way I read the story the human was using some form of single edge long sword. when sword fighting there will be times where you may block direct blade to blade. While dodging or parrying are ideal, there are times where blade to blade is the option.

[@paulthoded]

Yay, the humans win again, against all odds. Lol

[@blackenpowerment0140]

Much, much better!👍🏿

[@justinsullivan6410]

Was meant to be a metal sword fight , this is rubbish,cut through moon indeed!

[@michaellimerick2746]

Where is the human narrator? He had the best voice. AI sucks with appropriate intonation, pause, subtlety.

[@Tumbleweed2015]

The AI needs to be corrected where a period ends a sentence. STOP SAYING DOT!

[@HFYRevelation-2]

hi

[@leeannedowdell2110]

Jon Snow. Best swordsman in Westeros. Didn’t need gimmicks. Just skill

[@crc.agoodguy]

I hit the like button...I think you should also.

[@sergiotoews2475]

quantum swords, quantum field, quantum cheese, quantun quantum quantum nonsense everywhere everytime, oh pleeeeeeeeeeeeeeease...

[@jeffreyschuler7271]

wtf I just read this same story just the character names were changed as is the name of the sword. The human here is male . It’s either a grift or pure plagiarism. And it’s not just this story it’s like ten of them.

[@diGritz1]

Meh.... Kinda disappointing. The ridiculous comparisons of the starfire saber to things like a dying sun had no place in this story. It was insulting to a story as old as human kind. The only reason to put it in is to prop up the story. But honestly it wasn't needed here.

[@charleslamontagne983]

A lot lf Hohawh

[@AndyCaley]

Dot dot dot dot

[@JonAngell98]

Lazy. The story ain't too bad, aside from some contradictions popping up, but the implementation of the AI narration was sloppy. No effort made whatsoever to correct the numerous flaws.

[@bigpuppy9923]

" Attacking from 11 different dimensional angles .. simultaneously " is pushing the outer limits there Mr Horizon. Good stories need some sort of core credibility for them to be worth listening to. Half way thru and I'm gone.

[@petergaskin1811]

It was a bit repetitive.

[@cmpm7195]

the AI narration is pathetically bad and monotone there must be something better

[@jamiekirkpatrick3634]

AI trash oooh I must watch!

[@jamiekirkpatrick3634]

it was truly as shit as I assumed

[@nitinravi8400]

I wouldn't talk so much during a fight. Jack should just keep his mouth shut and not expose anything. Why give your opponent any wisdom at all?

[@kenseajr]

because it's a story and there has to be some form of drama. Have you read any books in your life?

[@ghostshadow9046]

Several FAILS in this AI story, big one is it is a DEATHMATCH... one of them DIES.

[@MegaCyrik]

A 40yo c64 could do movement and slash prediction with ease. This story is quantum stupid.