Elderly Human Diplomat Terrifies Galactic Senate With One Speech | Best HFY Movies

[@stephenpublicover8818]

Great story, Please more!!😀👌👍✌🤘

[@jeffdornan5122]

I congratulate you on your effort. Next time deliver a finished product.

[@TDarcos]

I have listened to probably dozens of similar stories on this and other channels. As soneone who writes full books, 100s of pages long, I know that the hardest part in the creation of a story is not the writing, but the editing. To learn to cut, tighten, strengthen by keeping what is essential and dropping the superfluous. My suspicion is whoever wrote this was in a hurry to get it released, not realizing that stories _must_ be edited to remove unnecessary words, stories or scenes that don't fit the overall narrative, and, to remove duplicate passages and story errors, like events not matching or won't work because the timeline is wrong. This was an OK story, but some editing could have made it a great one.

[@JMM33RanMA]

Thanks, I was wondering if my mind was playing tricks on me, or if someone had a word limit deadline to meet. I've noticed the blatant plagiarism in these SciFi videos. Though sometimes taking an old story and updating it works, it can also fall flat. A few of the short stories are good as throwaways, or commuter reading, some are genuinely funny or thought-provoking. Then there are the constant errors like hole, hull, whole, or trying to mix American and British usage.

[@roberthodge2771]

Far too many repetitions in slightly different words.

[@michaelvonblucherafaltona1994]

Yes. Definitely needed more editing. There was way too much repetition, the whole thing could have been streamlined and the repetition significantly reduced. Otherwise okay.

[@leonitas91]

This story was not edited at all, it sounds like an AI / MPC under the influence of some strong weed rote this story.

[@ainnunyabidniz]

"the future of humanity hangs in the balance" Even if not an AI story, I dub this a bad AI story. You know what a perfectly good replacement phrase for that overused nonsense? "The future of humanity depends on it."

[@kaykaymishka5548]

The story repeated alot and would cut off in the middle of a scene and tell something completely different...you need to proof this before posting. It had a good base,just need to listen and edit.

[@JohnHRPieper]

This needs to be edited. The repetition and fractured storylines make this a disappointment. Like other comments before me, I found that the was extremely satisfying until it wasn't.

[@stevensola3361]

I story line kept cutting off and restarting before it cut off time and time again.

[@paddyfitz71]

Jesus the repeating of chapters is unreal pure bs

[@brucebailey8070]

Why does this story repeat so much

[@patriotwethepeople7486]

When you have haters, you're doing something right and to improve and evolve. If you're using artificial intelligence, build your friendship to improve your story and also give a nickname to ai. Write a story about ai trails and tribulations on who we walk together.

[@rafallemanski6149]

R u fn kidding me the story is spliced and repeats it self over and over

[@gprivat812_my_selection6]

The story starts with nonsense! This Marcus guy got handed over a strange device, okay! He never tries to find out what it can do! So I'll block this BS! 👎💯❗️

[@David-mo4st]

More AI rubbish.

[@Spirit612]

Could be a great story if there wasn't so much reputation of things being said and repeated 3 or 3 times - the senate conflict with the void people, then all of a suden the ancients, then back in the senate as if the attack never happened? Utterly bad storywriting.

[@jas8542]

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