The black ship series has had me since I listened to the first one. No repetitive words, excellent listen. Multiple characters, races.
@mycastlecellar10 күн бұрын
Mostly just two things. 1. No one is bothering to proofread. 2. No one is using the correct wording such as peace & piece. You have got to proofread to get these fixed. Other than that, I loved the story. Two thumbs up.👍👍
@jpassen59803 ай бұрын
I find this a listenable story, which is saying something compared to previously listened stories. I’m still annoyed that the on-screen text has a lot of mistakes. Still, getting better, with a story that makes sense and actually goes somewhere.
@mycastlecellar10 күн бұрын
The mistakes are there because no one is bothering to proofread.
@aaronhale86023 ай бұрын
Everyone that died while she was debating whether or not to use the whippers, their blood is on her hands
@crazydeano813 ай бұрын
Great story
@Elvuscus3 ай бұрын
Thank you …love it
@andremorse9282Ай бұрын
Wyatt Staples is the main character.
@lesteropog778325 күн бұрын
Captain Rice, Reyes, Rhys. Lol
@ObesePuppies13 күн бұрын
🤦🏽♂️ I genuinely hate how these stories start okay then just end up being so dumb, like why is this captain feeling bad for an alien who’s been killing humans and their allies?! It makes no sense, if the captain is so emotionally weak then they shouldn’t be leading in a war.
@user-maxorlov53 ай бұрын
The AI creating the stories is good but need to be perfected, logically and morally. Storyline segments repeat themselves unnecessary and plot fluency stuck suddenly. Hopefully this will be corrected.
@jordanlongwell3 ай бұрын
why drop the disguise when firing. more confusion would have resulted in their own ships destroying supply depot's.
@andrewgeorge42943 ай бұрын
I have criticism of all the stories that I’ve read. They always use a very limited number of names for people and the Prometheus that seems to be a ship name that is is used by everybody. There are thousands of shit names out there that they could use, which would be suitable things like ark royal Avenger. in the same way that the admirals all have the same name and there are thousands of names they could choose other than that I really love the stories
@Erin-Thor3 ай бұрын
Love the HFY themed stories, but I would love them to be a little realistic, first battle and they lose badly, a little less hubris and instead of saying “We’ve overcome so much more than you know, we can overcome anything.” Why not an honest “Don’t know, we may fail, but [continue we hate bullies lines…].” This is like a 100 pound rich kid boasting he can beat a 6’ 6” 245 pound martial arts expert.
@user-maxorlov53 ай бұрын
Can not be acieved: the AI creating the stories is good but need to be perfected, logically and morally. Storyline segments repeat themselves unnecessary and plot fluency stuck suddenly. Hopefully this will be corrected..
@Erin-Thor3 ай бұрын
@@user-maxorlov5most of these are human written (albeit not by published successful authors) and posted to the HFY Reddit thread. They are converted by multiple KZbin channels by using (AI?) text to speech engines, and AI created graphics. I like the HFY concept, but sometimes I find myself thinking, never ever gonna happen like that. LOL!
@CommonsVivian-w6p3 ай бұрын
Moore Jason Perez Joseph Miller Steven
@jimyates4453 ай бұрын
The fact that every sci-fi story ALWAYS uses the same ship and people names. NO originality.......sad that, just like movies, no imagination
@belelokai33283 ай бұрын
Bro these are 98% written and read by an AI. The issue is the prompting. There's little variation and no prompts to exclude specific words, terms, or short plots. I'm probably gonna generate a catered story for myself for an AI to read. Sometimes they are irritating.. also... hearing an AI narrator take breaths is sort of difficult for my brain to process. I'd tell it NOT to. But it's been trained on recordings of people so, it learned there's breathing noises before and after sentences. It's not good at consistency. Sometimes no breath, sometimes breath
@kennethnystrom5933 ай бұрын
Good but flawed.
@Ben-u2y2k3 ай бұрын
Plus this captain sacrificing her self is bullshit, it's old story telling, not sci fi, it's jingoism
@parrot84915 күн бұрын
What’s with every leader, commander, president, admiral, ambassador, leading scientist, general being all women? Well…, with the exception of the knuckle-dragging spaceship’s security goons, in all these stories what are the men doing? Just staying home in their underwear, lounging on the sofa with a three day beard growth, a pack of Galactic Marlboro cigarettes and an overflowing ashtray on the coffee table; and a can of Spacely Sprocket’s pale lager beer resting on their fat belly’s, with the TV remote control in the other hand watching the soaps?
@SANN-19692 ай бұрын
Genetation problems never end repeating mistake Trillions Trillions years
@LancelotMandy-g6z3 ай бұрын
Brown Linda Lewis Amy Perez Helen
@morrisanderson8183 ай бұрын
Pity these story's have to be woke,concidering the attitudes of women towards having to enlist when they reach the 18 ,so never going to bother with this woke rubbish,
@Ben-u2y2k3 ай бұрын
You don't hesitate, if you do you die. This story is poor
@RobertCrickmore3 ай бұрын
Captain Elina Reyes. The last story it was Elaura Rodriguez. The previous one to that was also Elaura. Your AI is obviously brainwashed with DEI. I saw the captains name in the first 10 seconds and that's it for me, I don't give a shit about the story. Way too repetitive, no originality. I'm out.
@jackfisher19213 ай бұрын
You definitely need to work on some different story lines.