How to Write the PERFECT Why Our School Essay in 2024 | Ivy League Supplemental Masterclass

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bro could sense that i was procrastinating on my essays

[@elevatedschool]

just a lil friendly motivation that's all (:

[@elevatedschool]

I totally goofed, at 0:13 I said the second essay was from Yale, but it's actually from Dartmouth... oh goodness how embarrassing... Anyways, I hope you guys find this video useful! Don't forget to like and subscribe

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10:00 PM. 2 hours before one of my EA deadlines. Lets go.

[@AzizMussilimov]

Dude, thanks for doing this. I have 200 students that i am working with across Kazakhstan mostly and beyond (on their essays), and your insights really help. All the best!

[@Averagestudent289]

This is super helpful! I have been struggling on this essay, Thank you!!

[@elevatedschool]

You're so welcome!

[@waterthecan]

i thought on the yale podcast they said they put "led" because they wanted to know about an actual moment in the past that made you want to apply, and that it's short because they don't want you to do the basic here's-what-i-did-->here's-what-you-have format...

[@elevatedschool]

You're right! I've been studying the Yale transcript (a lot) recently, and what you said regarding "Here's what I did" is the same as "a moment in the past that made you want to apply". To answer your question, even though it's short, they still want you to follow the here's what you did -> here's what I'll do at Yale format (with slightly more emphasis on the first part)... lmk if that makes sense

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[@staywithmenight]

Hi Kevin! I'm a fellow QB NCM and I saw in the past videos that you and your team are doing the essay reviews for free in the fall. I'm wondering if that offer is still up :) Your videos have given me so much guidance and ideas on how to approach my essays and it has made the application process, especially for a low-income student like me, so much less daunting. Please keep up the great work!

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[@imasd2075]

Hi Kevin, wonderful insights as always. I would like to ask if you and your team have any experience with transfer students because on the sites i haven't seen anything related to it. Thank you :)

[@elevatedschool]

Yes we do! We help kids successfully transfer each year :) Feel free to fill out our form on our website: www.elevated.school/getstarted

[@danielsolis5403]

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[@elevatedschool]

Thank you so much!!

[@Lucaa-uf8lh]

Great video Kevin! Thank you!Do you suggest a similar approach for the “how do you hope to use your Harvard education in the future?” Essay?

[@elevatedschool]

Yes, absolutely!

[@Lucaa-uf8lh]

Awesome! Thanks

[@marianokuot]

Hi, how do i get my essay review?

[@graceqiu9995]

What are your thoughts on the Stanford why us essay? It isn’t entirely like the other ones in your video in my opinion !

[@sciency_zone]

BrO, can I say that we want to continue a kind of project established in a particular uni. that I have mostly been interested in and have similar ECs

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what about AI involvement, like chat gpt

[@samilatifi8178]

harvard ask me how will you use our education in the future. can somebody show me a video for that essay. kevin please instruct me i think i am only one who is applying from afghanistan. thanks

[@sabalpoudel9331]

thanks

[@elevatedschool]

No problem!

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