Security Breach Rewritten - Animatic - Chapter 1&2

Get ready for the cringe, honestly, cause I'm voicing everyone myself!
When I think of a great story, I don't think of Five Nights at Freddy's: Security Breach. Can I do it any better? Hopefully, but still, props to everyone who worked on the game, of course.
Intro - 0:00
Disclaimer - 1:46
Overview - 2:06
Chapter 1 - 3:24
Chapter 2 - 5:56
Outro - 12:24
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All my social media accounts are under the name Elmushterri✨.

[@bumblebeeproductions1673]

I love the new interactions/dynamics. Specially Glamrock Freddy and Gregory. Glamrock Freddy is just like a dad and the other animatronics are just the crazy uncle and aunts, it’s great

[@Elmushterri]

Thank you! I envision them all as sort of dysfunctional brothers and sisters that come together eventually

[@bumblebeeproductions1673]

@@Elmushterri that sounds awesome! I can’t wait to see more of the rewrite :D

[@smiththeinspiringanimator7042]

@@Elmushterri You did amazing job,I really hope you do chapter 3! ❤️🧡💛💚💙💜🖤🤍🤎💕💞💓💗💘💝💖

[@Mike14264]

That is like the best thing ever. It reminds me of those "slice of life" animations on KZbin with the animatronics, where they all live in their pizzeria like a family and do things together. I always thought the variety of characters in Security Breach, plus the vast array of fanmade characters, would be one of its greatest strengths, and it would be such for this reason alone.

[@itsclover_patches6100]

Never realized until now that all the animatronics are based off predator animals except Chica, WHO’S A LITERAL CHICKEN LMAOO

[@AGoofyJester]

Chickens are kind of terrifying tbh

[@itsclover_patches6100]

@@AGoofyJester no nevermind you’re right

[@gravity1537]

@@AGoofyJester Those wretched hellwraiths are only a few feet tall yet send ungodly fear into your soul as you scramble to comprehend how such a small body can contain so much violence as those reckless monsters charge you with murder in their eyes.

[@Mike14264]

Oh, she'll peck at you.

[@StarBoii360]

"But Vanessa, I'm a Material Gorl!!!"

[@other_Nit_the_nitwit]

Don't feel bad about the fnaf lore and being accurate, fnaf security breach was suppose be a soft reset.

[@smiththeinspiringanimator7042]

Agreed,and personally I actually would love to play as Vanessa because all the advertising and teasers for the game just paint her as an awesome woman who won't put up with anyone's crap!

[@75JUNAKI]

@@smiththeinspiringanimator7042 I believe Steel Wool said somewhere that Vanessa saying thing’s about helping Gregory, is a red herring. Somewhere they said it, idk.

[@mangamouse520]

@@75JUNAKIunderstandable, but the lines where that red herring is, is only in the lines from the trailer

[@22Tesla]

Which is pretty much what it is as we essentialy left behind the idea of the supernatural and are trying to go more sci-fi with the big scary thing not being a ghost... but AI. Sadly, this is what happened with Childs Play with it's reboot going for an AI uprising instead of a supernatural killer

[@other_Nit_the_nitwit]

Glad we got the dlc which did what we asked lol 😅 (also, didn't realize how much my comment blew up so thanks everyone for likes and comments! I kinda abandoned it for about year, whoops 🤷🙃)

[@SPG69]

Freddy is just clueless to modern culture and I love it

[@gravity1537]

How can you tell if siblings are just taking the piss out of each other or being genuinely abusive? Well, you can't!

[@Rredrexx]

I prefer to have the animatronics as freinds , but them being siblings is a cute idea!

[@thatonestupidskittle]

LOVE THE INTERACTIONS BETWEEN THE ANIMATRONICS HEHEHE

[@Elmushterri]

HEEEHEHEHE THANK YOU I HAD FUN MAKING THOSE

[@gravity1537]

@@Elmushterri I just found this in my recommendations after going on an FNAF nostalgia trip, and I enjoyed this story much more than the official game's. I can't wait to see where this series goes next!

[@legionofcats5175]

Roxy not seeing gregs could be from either a something that possibly got put in him when he was on that table or b Roxy can only see movment or c she just chose not to say anything and did actually see him

[@elsonwang7472]

freddy comforting chica while monty and roxy bicker is a thing of beauty

[@OtakuAudioRedux]

Nice to know Glamrock Freddy’s characterization as a himbo is still intact.😅

[@catnep5035]

omg i love this concept!! i felt like the official sb was.. lifeless? it was basically a default horror game using fnaf nostalgia, but this one is so cool :D

[@cumling]

THE VANNY THING SO TRUE

[@Elmushterri]

"it sounds like a combination of vanessa and vanny" they fr went all out on her villain name

[@tableofteaspoons]

the animatronics treating freddy like an inferior little brother (excluding chica common chica w) is a very interesting concept

[@ImadoSonicshtuff]

"Roam." *King Rhoam Bosphoramus Hyrule intensifies.*

[@deviouscrackers9464]

This is really cool, the sibling dynamic with the animatronics feels so natural

[@mangamouse520]

True, and that was a way more natural way to bring up the Bonnie mystery

[@AuyriCakes]

*flips table* SOMEONE MAKE THIS INTO A SHOW, PLEASE I WILL GET TRUMPS ARM AMD LEG AND MY WHOLE LIFE SAVINGS TO MAKE IT HAPPEN! THIS IS AMAZING! DEEPER CHARACTERS, BETTER STORY, ITS ABSOLUTELY PERFECT!

[@Chaos_Fantasmic]

Ok but this is an idea I had What if The reason Gregory woke up in the room was because he was about to be experimented on they would take his soul out of his body and put it inside Freddy. He's there because he was meant to be Glamrock freddy the other animatronics don't want to kill him because they know what it's like became the same thing happened to them. But Gregory was the one who escaped. Wth the rest of his animatronic aunts and uncles lol😂😂

[@duck6994]

man, when mentioned the daycare attendent with Monty. that reminded me of me and my freinds rp of SB LMAO because. The the three of them are in a relationship. but how they met was of Moon destroying smthing out in the open i cant remeber why. but it attracted the attion of Monty because, "WHOS DESTROYING STUFF THAT ISNT ME??" and it was hillirous.

[@duck6994]

also, one more added thing with the bony comment. Something like that did actaully happen, but Bony prevoked him. The two where at constant budding heads, esp because Monty was knew. Bony ended up screaming at him "YOUR EFFING USELESS YOU DAMN THING!" Monty well, lost his temper fully after that.

[@Sammy_The_Umbreon]

SIBLINGS. SIBLINGS. SIBLINGS. SIBLINGS. AHH I LOVE THIS Also Gregory is literally the best oh my god

[@Ramenscrib]

PART TWO PLEASE

[@Elmushterri]

Yes! I should make part two! Might take a bit, but it’ll be done!

[@m.muffin.k9221]

YAYY

[@SpinoSam]

@@Elmushterri So what happened to part 2 lol

[@spiritofchaos58]

Im loving this sibling dynamics here. It's pretty funny, plus a great way to put a bit of emotional impact behind defeating the animatronics.

[@lexxblep-groundzero1369]

YES THE FAIMLY BOND BETWEEN THE GLAMROCKS RETURN!! WHOOOOO!!!

[@thatonestupidskittle]

SO EXCITED FOR THIS

[@Elmushterri]

I APPRECIATE THAT SO MUCH MAN RAAAGH

[@gradualphase]

I'm new here, but whenever part 2 comes out I will make a statue in YOUR honor

[@Vee_Nb_rainbowRat]

Honestly same I immediately started watching MattPats play through, I couldn’t watch it live because I was busy😢 0:05

[@zenith9825]

I subbed so that I can hopefully see this story continue. I love your art style, and Gregory waking up in a blank room (a hospital???????) is already so intriguing. I can't wait to find out how you will develop this further. :)

[@cumling]

AWESOME INTRO

[@Elmushterri]

AW MAN THANK YOU!!

[@stardust7635]

How everyone emotes is amazing

[@malikarsyasakani]

In my FNAF AU: a company like Armacham Technology Corporation had ownership of the Fazbear Entertainment. The Glamrocks were part performers and part soldiers.

[@petthepirate3115]

YO I LOVE IT SM (and the cursed images were funny LMAO) keep it up man! Can't wait to see more of it! (don't pressure yourself though)

[@Elmushterri]

I appreciate that so much! Especially the compliment toward the cursed images, they’re my favourite thing to do! 🧡✨

[@orisfamaemon]

I heard Roxy bragging about the fan art she gets… Not sure if that’s really a dub or not 💀

[@gravity1537]

It's not a dub; it's cause for a restraining order.

[@Mike14264]

Oh, I'm liking this. Oh I'm really liking this! Most other reworks of Security Breach rework the story and mechanics but keep them mostly similar to the base thing. Yours is more of a complete rework! I love chapter one, it actually explains how tf Gregory even got inside Freddy in the first place! Plus, it actually makes us feel a connection with him, we feel sorry for him! Now, in chapter 2, Gregory actually has a good reason to not trust Vanessa _that we know of!_ We're not left in the dark on the first ten minutes of gameplay, we actually understand Gregory's point of view! The interactions between the animatronics take the cake tho. That's it! That's what I would've loved to see in Security Breach! These robots are alive, they have personalities, let me see them! I wanna see Monty being more than just a brute, Chica being more than just a glutton! Also, given how Monty says dinosaurs are all the rage as if it was a point in his favor, you could have Freddy say that, in reality, dinosaurs weren't closer to lizards, but rather birds. In fact, their closest descendants are... chickens. So Chica would technically be the one to get all the dino popularity, just to make Monty even more annoyed 🤣

[@fizzlewizard404]

I JUST FOUND THIS (and your entire channel) AND LIKE??? I LOVE THIS??

[@_silent_memory_2252]

I like your stories of the animatronics hopefully we can see more I’m very interested in this re-write.

[@fishysc0okielife]

I love this so much! The intro was so funny (just like the interactions between the characters) and the start of the rewrite was great, and the art was the cherry on top. I'm a new subscriber! :D

[@whiterabbit3050]

Also in my rewrite monty would have green scales and glam rock chica will have a boss fight where she would throw stuff at you while you find monty mixer ingredients to make pizza and lure glam rock chica(also she be yellow like in very installment) and roxy boss fight would be roxy jumping and throwing go kart at you while you complete the 3 lap then roxy would jump in front of the kart and get ran over also when glam rock freddy gets roxy eyes he would be able to see enemies and vanny would have more of a present like her face appears in glitched arcades,and even the faz watch plus if you get spotted by the camerathe canny meter would go up if it's full vanny would start hunting us/ gregory down, and also burn trap now called afton hybrid would try and corrupt freddy in his little base and also burn trap would have different design like having cameras on his shoulder and having some animatronics parts in his sides and chest and his head would be just a endo skeleton with a burnt spring trap face and afton hybrid would have his own boss fight where he try's to make his way to you kinda like in fnaf 1

[@yoriimv]

11:54 PLS I LOVE THIS

[@1Soul]

That was great!! I really want ch 3. But I get it if you don’t want to work on it.

[@TheSameGoobyGuy]

*Me:* Elmushterri? *Elmushterri:* Yeah? *Me:* Where’s my part 2? *Elmushterri:* What? *Me:* Where. Is. My. Part 2!? *Elmushterri:* I uh… put it away. *Me:* Where!? *Elmushterri:* Why do you need to know? *Me:* I NEED IT!

[@gabyeguizabal7164]

More! Moremoremoremore

[@Elmushterri]

Yess and more will come! It just takes a while since I plan the rewrite from beginning to end so there aren’t any mistakes ✨✨🧡

[@TheGamerninja15]

When you said you've watched Matpat's ENTIRE playthrough of FNAF SB, I did something similar to that with SuperHorrorBro's playthrough of BATDR.

[@smiththeinspiringanimator7042]

Please do part 3! ^_^

[@ArtisticPigeon_03]

If yiu are interested to know the reason the game shows little about gregory is because originally there was more that happens in the boulder room however this room was removed and there are missing voice line that will tell you more if your interested.I believe that most of not all of what was taken out before the games please will be showed in the "ruined" dlc

[@sindraile5128]

Love it so far. Only thing I would fix is the volume of the robotic filters. They are a bit too grating for my taste. Particularly Roxies filter.

[@incriveldinossauro5282]

I miss this project

[@cloudstock3030]

May i ask when part 2 of security breach rewrite is gonna be uploaded? Im already inlove with your rewrite. Im always a simp for good stories and ur security breach rewrite looks like one hell of a good story. Pumped for part 2, when it will come. ps, Take your time with this if you need to, Quality over quantity

[@alyssabaney9951]

This was really good.

[@akko4536]

UNDERRATED this is beautiful

[@chausaa]

man i need more!! great job!!

[@catherinecarroll6747]

oooh i love this! I hope to see more someday!

[@zacharypeterson1331]

I can’t wait for another par of this

[@DreamDragoness25]

Part 2, please!

[@funkyman9283]

i love this sm please more

[@Kittyboi.]

I love how you draw the animatronics! They look so cool!! Also love this rewrite!

[@annaellescharfenberg7716]

Love it so far!

[@22Tesla]

Is it wrong to wonder if you'll ever continue this? I'm always interested in hearing a new take on SB in a better way. I kinda liked this bit, seeing the animatronics being just a kind dysfunctional family, it gives them charactr outside of being "must kill player character, hunt hunt hunt, taunt taunt taunt, (insert tiny piece of characterization here.)"

[@Elmushterri]

I am, actually! I’m halfway through the story in terms of planning, it’s just a lot! My next version of this will be a full rewrite (this first part will still be canon-ish but I think I’ll just do it all in one part next time. That may change depending on how tired I am when it comes to editing! ✨✨

[@errorraccoon6169]

I need more of this! ❤❤❤

[@Alpha_Synergy]

I would love to see more of this

[@thatonestupidskittle]

WOOOOO

[@Elmushterri]

WHY DIDNT I SEE THESE COMMENTS BEFORE SMHHHHH youtube smh smh

[@shushimlb3d]

How have I not seen this before?? This is really good

[@MelissaBlueHunter]

man i love your re-write but i life for your edits. comady gold < 3

[@connorcaddy5661]

I hope you continue this rewrite cause I really love it

[@whisperghxst]

I'm new to your channel and really enjoying your work! I'd love to see this continued if that's something you're interested in doing

[@moniqueperkinsmp]

I NEED MOAR

[@Duhgel]

this is so entertaining omg

[@DextroussAS]

Freddy frazbear rewritten by the jupiter

[@Projekt_Nightmare]

where is the rest?

[@Soggy_Speggetti]

Haha I love the botw references

[@gravity1537]

I didn't quite catch those. Could you please explain them?

[@DuckiDrawzzStuff]

Yesyes

[@JediBobAndFordoCanonCommitee]

Will there be more???

[@arandomthingintheabyss2062]

im curious if they will make more parts?

[@fivepebbles876]

are you gonna continue this?

[@thesmilyguyguy9799]

:D

[@jettsimmons7441]

I like if we see more please.

[@gamingdevil49]

Will this ever be continued?

[@puddles3425]

vanny and vannessa aren't the same

[@nightmareact1498]

I am not trying to be mean or anything but your drawing for vanessa kinda looks like the lady from "doors the animated backstory."

[@75JUNAKI]

So this rewrite ditched what Help Wanted and Special Delivery game’s set up?

[@lordyiamnot4021]

Listen I still think the actual fnaf lore is better than this Is this a joke it’s honestly horrible I’m sorry😂