Ghost Stories by ChainReaction [MLP Fanfic Reading] (Dark Fic)

[@revaslatts8011]

Most Creative - Rarity Most Original - Applejack Most Frightening - Twilight Also, that ending scared me $#¡%less.

[@airi392]

Have you ever fell in love..? *WHIPS OUT RARIJACK FANFICTIONS*

[@maxzapsgamingzepzeap2337]

Rarijack shippers: NO BUT I'M GONNA WRITE A STORY ABOUT YOU 2 BASED ON THOSE WORDS!

[@dantheredmemeenderdragnooo4552]

Um (I will never)

[@josecarrilloii4036]

☠ *"NEVER...!!!!!"* ☠ 🎵 (blares *"Blackened"* by *Metallica* on stereo) 🎵

[@smiththeinspiringanimator7042]

LOL! XD

[@th3m1st0cl3s]

Slams massive binder on podium "Let's begin"

[@revaslatts8011]

Colt: "Don't be afraid!" Rarity: *screams before fainting* Applejack: *throws books at him* Twilight: *prepares a teleportation spell*

[@kittybuns1226]

Me:,….

[@moistmikutoy9110]

Then she leaned over and wispered something that scared him right to the bone. "I have siphilis"

[@gothiqplague]

underrated comment right here

[@rum_coke_17]

“Syphilis”

[@movedto4agonism467]

WHEEZE-

[@rubyblaze7225]

It looks like the pony from the scent grimdark story.

[@recording1781]

NOO

[@peabody66]

Between Twilight, Rarity and Applejack's stories, Twilight's story has got to be the scariest.

[@Epic11705]

And with more justice to the antagonist

[@Derpy-tq1qo]

When Twilight’s story came up, and the song “Variati Mountis” kicked in, I almost INSTANTLY got goosebumps because the way she told that story made me put myself in the world of Equestria, and in the library where that incident happened. And that ending was an INCREDIBLE cliffhanger, all up to the listener’s interpretations on what happened to Twilight Sparkle, Applejack, and Rarity that night. Not only that, but this was one of the first MLP grimdarks i listened to at night at one of my relatives house, and a neighbor across the street’s light was on, but then turned off right when the story came to an end. Ohh man, just typing this out and remembering the first time I heard this is giving me goosebumps.

[@Firestar4041]

"Don't be afraid" AAHHHH!!!!! Spike: I brought the nachos :D AAAAAaaaaaahhh...... oh yea he lives here :I Spike: Sheesh and they call me a coward *munch*

[@Firestar4041]

***** glad it could :3

[@ameliagallegos1688]

I can honestly see this happening

[@Guro_Boy_Subliminals]

3:00 spike went to canterlot.

[@queenlatrodectushasselti7711]

Hey Firestar4041 that was a good one there’s just one problem, they said that spike is in canterlot, so if spikes in canterlot then who’s with the girls.

[@josecarrilloii4036]

Who knows...? Maybe somepony with a *knife* or *gun* stalking the girls...?

[@Flowerbarrel]

I still think it's hilarious how Rarity and Applejack get mad at the other for interrupting and Applejack saying she didn't interrupt. They both did! These two just can't stop fighting, can they? They're definitely an old married couple, haha.

[@Imetral0]

I find it hilarious how both Applejack and Rarity's stories involve sex of some kind.

[@Emogak]

***** #rarijack4life

[@probrony2851]

+Emogak good story

[@jamaleanderson6586]

yeah I did

[@Marquiseio]

Applejacks was more sexual

[@crystalwaters7573]

Yes. But Applejack's story though. Throughout the entire story since the first line, I just thought, "Lost had a lot of fun doing these lines didn't she...?"

[@patmcdonald4955]

I like How Rarity and Applejack's stories talk of sex, showing they must be adults.

[@dejabarksdale2210]

Pat McDonald I'm in 5th grade and kids talk about sex all the time

[@patmcdonald4955]

Fair enough. From the show though they are implied as adults. Also, kids don't typically own their own farms or boutiques.

[@kevonmcmillan5656]

Apple jack and twilight story has cheating in it.

[@revaslatts8011]

"Don't be afraid" Okay, my blood froze when I heard that.

[@savagegavblacksmith875]

My blood froze, my heart dropped, and my mouth....well let's just say it made a screaming noise so loud that it woke up my family.

[@pasteltears1229]

Scariest mlp darkfic ever: Twilight opened her closet door with her magic. The door creaked, making a squeaky noise. "boo" a skeleton said from inside the closet. Twilight jumped, then said, "aaayyy you here fo a party?" "fo shizzle mah nizzle" the skeleton said.

[@maxaroni7279]

:D

[@coolteethman472]

I'M CRYING XDDD 😂😂😂👌👌

[@flowerblastandjathomas3295]

I cant sleep

[@sleepiihead]

So scary that I couldn't sleep for a week.

[@slayer1433]

sleepiihead1119 oh no i feel bad i couldn't sleep for 2 weeks 😖

[@RedWolf777SG]

O_O; Holy shit. The first two story were good, but Twilight story was....damn and what made it even more creepier is the fact that around 19:30 through the story was when I just notice the face of that ghost colt that kill by his mother and it was right after those three words were said that I had shiver down my spine and goosebumps on both of my arms. Goddammit all, whoever did the artwork for this fanfic reading did a pretty damn good job with it, unless you pay closer attention to it and give a good look over it. you would thought just a mark or a smudge on the vid. This is a good dark fanfic and the good voice acting, music, and artwork really sets the mood and theme of it, which really sells it for me. Keep up the good work, dear, I'll look forward to hearing more creepy fanfic readings from ya. =3

[@lokiwasbored3355]

The picture was from one of the episodes And the colt is added!

[@smolson8471]

I don't see the ghost colt

[@RedWolf777SG]

Alexis Lyle Look at the top right corner closely. It's somewhere around there.

[@julialam8557]

Okay now I see it after like 5 replays. XD

[@RedWolf777SG]

Five replays? You're kidding...right? Right? ^_^;;

[@GreyNimbus41]

Did anyone else notice that... thing in the top-right corner?

[@Dan-lc1ky]

+Soul Akai Not until you mentioned it.

[@Blitz_Spencer]

+Soul Akai Thanks for the nightmares, BUDDY.

[@br7078]

+Soul Akai Holy shit! I though my monitor was just dirty.

[@Blitz_Spencer]

***** Yeah. "Don't be afraid..."

[@dreamcastsonic3356]

+Soul Akai holy shit, that scared me when you pointed it out

[@vamp1310]

I feel that the way Twilight hyped up her story is a nice little nod to the -trash pinging flasher- the -mash ringing clasher- the hash slinging slasher

[@joshuasawtell1557]

Ok, that legit creeped me out at the end. About half way through the story I only just noticed something in the picture, at the time, I thought it was just a mark or a smudge on my computer screen, but as it got to the final few minutes of the story I realised that was the face of the child! O_O' Other than that though, brilliant read like the last one. :)

[@sashacindersys3166]

Where?

[@Cortal_Gaming]

Ian Soemarna look at where twilight is staring at in the cover and zoom in, u will see it clearly

[@Milkwhisker1]

Ian Soemarna Here: i.imgur.com/8q1AHvn.png

[@B.O.Xproject]

Oh god I have chills I don't wanna see it

[@revaslatts4301]

I saw it, too!

[@galeshine7173]

I wonder what kind of Ghost Story Rainbow Dash would have told...

[@coyotealienss]

The Headless Horse!!!!!

[@kamariowens694]

Ahhhh I see it too

[@thesciencefanficwriter7696]

the tale of the singing flowers

[@katelynbodiford5680]

Kamari Owens Or The Olden Pony

[@pauldawson5851]

It would be the story of me

[@DarknessXxMaster]

I love this! It's actually kind of fun to be scared sometimes.

[@Dani_1012]

It is

[@katelynthewhitewerewolf6376]

​@@Dani_1012 Yeah and I find Twilight's scary story the scariest

[@Dani_1012]

@@katelynthewhitewerewolf6376 Woah, your reply just sent me back 7 years, I was 12/13 when I wrote this comment, now 22, nice throwback. I loved this cartoon, it was my first experience with fandom too, I've been in many other fandoms since then but none have grown to the multitude this one was, with fan creations and all, it was a special time

[@bethanyevanson9443]

That was awesome Twilights story sent shivers down my spine!! While I was listening I soon noticed that there was a head with no eyes in the direction twilight was looking I felt like it was watching me!!

[@noahdillehay1077]

You sound JUST like the trio! Excellent voice acting job! Can't wait for more fan fictions, this one was awesome :3

[@sashacindersys3166]

At the end, when they said 'Don't be afraid', I was thinking 'is it safe to come up yet?' when it showed it ended, I was all like 'YES!!! I'm ALIVE!!!

[@samuelneilson912]

Oh my gosh I was the same way like don't move it's just a story it's not real then an add played and I was like I SURVIVED

[@sheshedj1995]

😂🤣 2 true lol

[@josephspencer6257]

True

[@cosmic_riff]

Applejacks story really creeped me out XD _my_ name is Ruby XD

[@sonicfan3588]

yikes

[@hollysandy1259]

+Animated Trash hesh ka besh

[@stekerri]

XD

[@rwbyistrash603]

How convenient

[@Simply_better22343]

wait u ruby u no ded

[@unholypepe]

***** this is one of the best fanfic reading i've ever listened to. the end of the fic though made me look around my room to see if that little kid was in there. had to force myself to go to sleep but it was good

[@etps4444]

Okay, but these are honestly amazing ghost stories. I'm a fan of spooky ghost stories that have a touch of tragedy to them, so these are lovely stories ((lovely in a dark way, of course. :) )).

[@jeanniehobbes6144]

Am I the only one who thinks this could be canon?

[@terrorantulaplatinumcollec7034]

+leah frederick (Leah Rants and Sings) that would be awesome if canon

[@arkangelic]

+leah frederick (Leah Rants and Sings) nope i want it to be canon

[@terrorantulaplatinumcollec7034]

yes

[@katelynthewhitewerewolf6376]

​@@arkangelic I can totally see that being canon without the intercourse but the murder definitely

[@arkangelic]

@@katelynthewhitewerewolf6376 this comment is 7 years old 😭😭

[@midnightbloom8252]

does anyone else see the creepy face in the corner?

[@mythmask7864]

Holy.. Bugs... O_O

[@midnightbloom8252]

+Myth Mask lol

[@doxieovrgwn4982]

No

[@mythmask7864]

Good for you, Doxie...

[@DoctorTex]

Noo.....I didn't see it... (turns up brightness) AAAHH!!! OK YEP! I SEE IT NOW!!!

[@lpsjewel324]

Amazing! The whole thing is great! The voice acting, the music... But I just don't get why in stories, someone who was brutally murdered always takes revenge on others, or someone innocent for that matter

[@chickengod3957]

It makes the whole scaaaarrryyyy 👻👻👻 Well, at least that's what I think the logic is

[@Flowerbarrel]

In Japan at least ghosts just get back at anyone and everyone because they're stand-ins for forces of nature. Lots of cultures make up creatures or entities to explain natural phenomena because we'd rather have any explanation rather than being afraid and not knowing why something happens.

[@torntokoroa]

....yeah... fuck me....i didn't need to sleep anyway. Twilight by far had the scariest...because that shit happens a lot today.

[@ashleytrautman7743]

Torn Tokoroa wait, it did? all the ghostly stuff happened?

[@twistedfreddy9621]

Torn Tokoroa fuck this snit I am leaving

[@revaslatts4301]

​@@ashleytrautman7743 I think they mean child abuse and messy splits.

[@deathheart7572]

welp.....twilight's story will haunt my dreams for years....literally.

[@Ignitus541]

Couldn't the unicorns just fix the power... No I musn't apply logic or else everyone else will get angry at me for it.

[@youdontsay9150]

+Mini Hoovy Logic shall lead us all to a painful doom dammit!!!!

[@puppypone9982]

+You Dont say??? we are not vulcans! logic shall not apply here!

[@Magicalwolfgamer]

Mini Hoovy I agree with you, you would think twilight would use her magic to fix the power.

[@ridingriptide2644]

gem heart I feel it was a prank

[@guti2009]

the face is kinda hard to notice, but once you see it, no matter where you look on the screen you can't not notice it.

[@Dani_1012]

Exactly

[@LilacLycanvic]

What

[@idkanymore1410]

yup

[@doxieovrgwn4982]

I can't see it

[@guti2009]

And the fact that you can't unnotice it is just absolutely terrifying.

[@victoriaguizar4656]

Applejack: "They wold even kill to be with them." Me: YANDERE!!!!!!!!!!

[@nicolediangelo2374]

yes

[@janellehenry9698]

OMG that's the exact same thing I was saying😂

[@thecanadaman6862]

+Victoria Guizar Lol I thought the same thing!

[@marshmallowbunnies9290]

+Victoria Guizar same

[@ashleywarren2786]

+Victoria Guizar NOTICE ME SENPAI!!!,,Honestly cant you blame for not making that obvious joke?

[@magicalzal]

I thought the 3 words were going to be " I'll be back "

[@dejabarksdale2210]

Mallory Monster Me too

[@sonofcthulu8772]

*GET TO THE C H O P A A A*

[@rum_coke_17]

Mallory Monster now I wish that were it

[@queenlatrodectushasselti7711]

TERMINATOR!!!!!!!

[@jaspernavall8204]

@@sonofcthulu8772 thats 4

[@Rose-bi2rg]

POOR LITTLE FOAL X:::( Cool story though!

[@shadow_wisp7443]

I know Shadow:THAT DARK BA- SHADOW!! Shadow:sorry sky

[@mollyjazz460]

The last one was the scariest. I was terrified by that one badly. And it leaves you sort of at a cliff hanger.

[@Danmeilover69]

During the third story it was almost impossible to hear what twilight was saying over the background music, music which did not fit the setting super well. It made you feel more like charging into battle rather than feel creeped out. Other than that you guys still did a good job putting everything together! I hope I didn't sound too harsh.

[@JacobMKeeneAKADrPepperKing]

Very interesting story! You do really good Rarity and Twilight impressions, and your natural voice sounds beautiful, I am now your 6,350th subscriber! Also to TheLostNarrator, you did a good job as Applejack as always!

[@zzzz910]

Silver Spoon was molested oh gosh thats why shes always quite and is not always there in episodes she will dieeeeeeeeeeeeee ohhhhhhhhhhhhhh

[@CeoOfTheBOIS]

BRU MOMENT

[@rum_coke_17]

“I thought you said they were found dead in their home.” “Exactly.” Explain please!!

[@CeoOfTheBOIS]

but drown at same time

[@rum_coke_17]

My Dude more like Our Dude ... I’m sorry, I’m still having trouble catching on.

[@emmigummi2895]

The colt in the top right corner is majestic. Said no one ever but me.

[@Liongirl5137]

I'm shaking, I should not have worn headphones when listening to this the ending terrified me.

[@virieger7578]

its kinda awsome how twilights story actually summond a scary ghost!

[@carinnerothwell1206]

When it was morning. The authorities were called after twlight, applejack and Rarity didn't came to work. Flutteryshy, rainbow dash and pinkie began to worry as the authorities went inside the tree house library. They found a horrible site, that uses to happen 25 years ago. What they saw was gruesome. Twlight was lying lifeless on the floor, with her own pool of blood were coming out of her eye sock after her eyes were focusly removed. And written on the floor. It said: don't be afraid. Next, they found them. Applejack and Rarity were on twlights bed and were in the same state as twlight. Words speak across ponyville and the story of starshine and her devilish deeds. The story became an urban legend and a creepypasta. But what do you think, they saw. Did they really saw the ghost of starshine or was it something else?

[@revaslatts8011]

"Don't be afraid..." *screaming intensifies*

[@revaslatts8011]

I'm officially shook!

[@reinmanmarren5225]

i have tears in my eyes! THAT WAS SO SKETCHY!!!!

[@ReverieHellebore]

Super scary, compliments to whoever made this, try to make an animation to this story.

[@thesilverokami800]

I freaking love this ending of the story

[@thischick5542]

watching this in the middle of the night is a bad idea...

[@wandaroger1688]

Art Girl soooooo true I regret nothing 💀

[@heavendals.9097]

Art Girl watching this downstairs on the couch in pitch black was a horrible I dea

[@sonofcthulu8772]

Dont give a shit cause i got a knife

[@sylveon-kfpbarista5746]

I did the exact same, but at the end, a sweat drop went down my neck and I thought it was breath (at midnight as well)

[@savagegavblacksmith875]

No shit! Never watch creepy shit at night! ESPECIALLY AT 3AM!!

[@tygrahof9268]

Nice story. Actually didn't expect that ending; was expecting a "Boo!" kind of ending. lol

[@alphonselover825]

Wow! I didn't think anything was really gonna happen. That it was just gonna be a normal sleepover with ghost stories, nothing really creepypasta like. But that ending... Really caught me off guard!

[@WhiteIndoraptor]

That last ghost story chilled me to the bone! 😨

[@LilacLycanvic]

Twilight... Stop looking at that thing in the corner and continue the story

[@lesbianlemon8507]

of god I just realized that the pony in the corner is the same pony in scent😰

[@AnixielLu]

Oh yea it does

[@bloodleaf5717]

yeah, I'm not surprised I didn't notice the face before....

[@RealCobaltStorm]

Lol nice one blood leaf

[@drswag0076]

Big Mac i think. or at least his copy.

[@tristan_keeb_273]

Where

[@LanceTheAutobot]

Nice Reading it gave a Nice slice of life feel wich turnd grim as the story developed also it is good to learn u are making this a thing lady emogak yet another thing i can look forward to in the week ^^

[@kyliewalker9170]

OMGOSH!! I JUST SAW THIS!! LOOK AROUND THE TOP RIGHT CORNER OF YOUR SCREEN WHILE LISTENING TO THIS!! DO U SEE IT?!?!?!

[@doxieovrgwn4982]

No

[@tickedoffsquid37]

Yep... But not in the video.

[@tickedoffsquid37]

Help me.

[@CeoOfTheBOIS]

@@tickedoffsquid37 POLICE SIRENS WHALING IN THE BACKGROUND

[@kidfury2177]

this was like the best fanfic I've ever heard good job👍

[@choleloveskittens8985]

7:05 I thougt he ate her but ok

[@GarfieldsTeapot]

I'm amazed that applejack knows what a yandere is

[@goldenflame4884]

I haven't even started and already I think, Phhh who actually listens to warnings anyway. Right?

[@CeoOfTheBOIS]

yeah

[@envy_fade]

Rarity was referenced to another fanfic, applejack referenced to yandere, and twilight to baby from FNAF sister location.

[@TheOldScrapIron]

*looks in the top right corner of the screen* Me: What is that? *turns up the screen brightness* Me: Well holy sh*t, it’s slendermare😏

[@MLPSolarDash]

Jumping junebugs! That was creepy! Especially at the end! I had goosebumps all over myself and chills ran up my spine! Dang! This was great and scary! O_O

[@ryderTheHedgehog2004]

I don't if it's me but I'm pretty sure that pony on the top right corner of the video wasn't there before

[@blaa6]

Proof that pony creepy stories are better than Jeff the Killer, I hate you, Blood Whistle, Thomas and Sonic.exe. #betterwithponies

[@emilyguzman2964]

Word.

[@QueenFondue]

And Ihsoy. Especially Ihsoy.

[@blaa6]

hystericaldominolego Gotta remember to recommend that to Bad Creepypasta.

[@QueenFondue]

Bobby XD Yep

[@bronegan8203]

Mehoymenoy

[@supercyclone87]

That's how it ends?! Nooooo-oh well. XD Awesome story btw!!!

[@daisyramirez5939]

has anybody noticed the pony with no eyes watching the others from the shadows

[@samarabrown7838]

+Daisy Ramirez yes

[@doxieovrgwn4982]

No...help?

[@sonicfan3588]

yep

[@Connorwhatever]

what sidr

[@sonicfan3588]

***** right side

[@RallyTheTally]

All of those ghost stories are really good.

[@josecarrilloii4036]

⚠️ • *TV-14-DL* | *Parents Strongly Cautioned!* • ⚠️ The following program contains sequences depicting graphic subject matter that some audiences might find disturbing to some others. *Viewer discretion is advised.* -- Story Timeline(s): • Faux Pas (Rarity's story): *c. April or May of 1974.* • Ruby Willow (Applejack's story): *c. early-to-mid April of 1994.* • Star Shine and Day Shine (Twilight's story): *c. mid-to-late May of 1989.* ☠ "(chanting): *DIE!"* ☠ 🎵 (blares *"Creeping Death (Live - Cunning Stunts)"* by *Metallica* on stereo) 🎵

[@antonrueda1044]

6:49 Ayo?? I didn't expect Rarity to go to that kind of route when she was telling her story.

[@snugbug7241]

N o way THAT WAS THERE THE ENTIRE VIDEO

[@libertasgrace2547]

7:51. I just realized this is a gangster story! Ha!

[@carinnerothwell1206]

The female pony, he feel in love, was dead the whole time. Look like we have a new cryptkeeper, tale of the horror

[@thedidact07]

Will you ever read more fanfics?

[@thedidact07]

Ava Rojas When? It's been months now.

[@thedidact07]

Ava Rojas I've never heard of a fanfic that takes 6 months to work on. She probably just lost interest.

[@Emogak]

***** I do plan on it! I've been wrapped up in a bigger project that is taking longer then expected~ I'm super sorry for the wait but I had to move to a whole different country and have been having a hard time setting things back up.

[@thedidact07]

***** Holy crap I wasn't expecting a reply from you! I didn't mean to sound rude if that's how I came across.

[@thedidact07]

Avia Bryan I get that a lot.

[@mirandabeaulieu7735]

she didn't become distraught she went insane

[@applejack9852]

Don't be afraid?! Sneaky ghost you was in way to kill them from scare XD

[@flippitydee1151]

apple jack's story is yandare sim

[@Draconicus702]

the first time I listened to this video it was 2:00 am and I had been listening to dark fics in the dark all night and after Twilight's story I actually felt like I was going to die....I felt like something was going to jump over my computer and kill me.....

[@valentinalee4047]

TOP RIGHT CORNER EYELESS PONY!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! HAVE UR BRIGHTNESS ALLL THE WAY UP ON KEYBOARD!!!!!!!!!

[@revaslatts8011]

That ghost colt needs a Snickers. He's most him when he's hungry.

[@GrayD_Fox]

I’m sorry but when is telling someone to not interrupt you because they said a snarky comment about how your story is lame is being mean.

[@Twelsaloom]

i LOVE THE LAST PART i WAS REALLY AMAZED !!!

[@waffuwaffle8969]

This is perfect for me! This used to be my favorite episode,

[@deathbat5721]

OMG I DONT KNOW WHAT IS SO SCARY ABOUT THIS PART BUT WHEN TWILIGHT SAID DONT BE AFRAID I JUST SCREAMED

[@peterbutler1232]

Why would he say “don’t be afraid”?

[@Double-R-Nothing]

I'm listening to this at night with headphones. YOLO

[@virieger7578]

don,t dont stop there! i want to know what happened next! what happened to rarity, applejack and twilight? what about the ghost pony? i really need to know!

[@spiderdog3414]

Is that the eyeless coilt in the coroner

[@rum_coke_17]

What did they mean at the end of Rarity’s story?? The Silver family were found dead in their home but they all drowned. I don’t understand

[@lizzybizzy7159]

Ok the thing at the top right hand is staring into my soul ....look closely

[@unsubnewchannelforlateruse8585]

I love this story so much I don't even know what to do with my self XD

[@tOmOrrOwUndErArEdskY]

me: just listening to this as background noise. rarity: "that's a wonderful idea!" me: . . . flowey?

[@mayonnaise9085]

You're great at voice acting.

[@Rae0814]

With Rarity’s, I assumed it was a true crime and she wasn’t telling a Ghost Story until the family was drowned(?) and she admitted to making it up.

[@avamcdonough7691]

I'm watching this while there's a thunderstorm, it's so much better.

[@jacobblackard2574]

You mean the grey one that has no eyes just a grin

[@avamcdonough7691]

@@jacobblackard2574 what?

[@Ignitus541]

Dont be afraid? That's it? I was hoping for a little bit better like ''You are next'' or something

[@Flowerbarrel]

I'm bad at telling ghost stories. I'm always the one who just wants to listen.

[@darkcornerreading3884]

Me listening to this while play the sims for like:👁👄👁

[@NathanielPiscian]

Ten years later and I still can only imagine the aftermath of this story Did they vanish without a trace or were they murdered? I also wonder if the rest of events of mlp carried on after this incident 🤔 So many questions..

[@crosshammer1787]

sweet celestia those where great stories. loved the ending of twilights

[@redineverysense140]

AHHHHHHHHH!!!!!!!!!!!!!! Don't be afraid!!!!! O.O

[@inkyboythecosplayer6634]

Lady Dia Apathis * runs to the ghost * Kill Me!!!