Something Sweet to Bite - Part 1 [MLP Fanfic Reading] (Grimdark)

[@thelostnarrator]

The SFX of AJ... that whole scene... it's so odd to hear that considering I voiced her! I think this might be my first time voicing something like this. XD Or at least to this level. OTHER VAs DO THAT FOR ME!

[@TsuriaDragon]

You gave true depth to the meaning of horror in this fic wow I thought my iPhone was glitching out but no it was just candymare freaking me out D=

[@nukoidrawz2868]

TheLostNarrator hoii

[@knov8361]

@@nukoidrawz2868 your adorable

[@nukoidrawz2868]

@@knov8361 heheh tank u uwu

[@somerandomyoutubeaccount5895]

69 likes

[@ChaoChao0071]

I listen to this while eating my Halloween candy. This is the sixth year.

[@nightowlanticsvods7061]

Mad Lad

[@pinkiepie8244]

>:)

[@gloriabertram4776]

I see what face you're making that tells me what you think that makes me thinking that you're going to scare me again in Halloween when I want to trick or treating nothing scared me this is thinking that's just what I was thinking now

[@kenp1298]

I SEE YOUR COMMENT EVERY TIME I WATCH THIS VIDEO AND IT GIVES ME SO MUCH NOSTALGIA THANK YOU🥺🙏

[@kellyhernandez8696]

LMAOO bruh that's cool, cool flex

[@ChaoChao0071]

I remember listening to this last year, the year before, and the year before that while eating my Halloween candy. And yes, I'm doing it again.

[@kirbo222top]

Still a fu king legend

[@katelynthewhitewerewolf6376]

@@kirbo222top What other ones should we have next?

[@dylandavies4379]

cupcakes has got nothin' on this gore

[@adorablecenturion8436]

Nope!

[@kittycatastrophe09]

Ikr seriously!

[@charlieeiler1245]

yep

[@JacquelineRisa]

I'm eating my way through the mlp popular creepy pastas, and I have to say, this is the sweetest!

[@stellabat9152]

+JacquelineRisa 11/10 pun

[@ChaoChao0071]

I remember listening to this last year while eating my Halloween candy. Doing it again right now.

[@Minto8384]

ChaoChao0071 but why though?

[@mocos7340]

ChaoChao0071 same

[@GLUTENFREEbeelzebub]

O LOOK IM DOING THE EXACT SAME THING BUT ITS THIS YEAR @_@

[@knov8361]

i love your vids

[@icesswolvescats404]

**screech**

[@ChaoChao0071]

Here I am again! Seventh year. I have my candy.

[@PositiveLycan]

:waves: good to see you once more!

[@paracuna]

Nice to see you another year

[@nullgen]

the dedication oh my god

[@jodieburton1827]

See you in October dude ^_^

[@bumblebee.chimera]

See ya in October!

[@CluelesstheJay]

My favourite part of this fan-fiction is that aside from the Gruesome gore and horror it's actually written like an actual Episode.

[@cyx6ix]

Same

[@sidvicious7477]

It makes it a lot creepier that the story is almost as if the characters were real in the universe and our childhood becoming a blood curdling nightmare

[@katelynthewhitewerewolf6376]

@@cyx6ix I would've enjoyed an origin story about Nightmare Night we have one about Hearth's Warming Eve and Hearts and Hooves Day but not Nightmare Night.

[@katelynthewhitewerewolf6376]

@@cyx6ix The Candy Mare even sounds like Pinkamena.

[@thedarklrd6714]

The author's pretty good at keeping people in character.

[@jesterjacks3933]

Me: I'm a brave boy. *Sees Candymare* Me: Not a brave enough boy for this!

[@ChaoChao0071]

I listen to this while eating my Halloween candy. This is the fifth year.

[@natalollipop_art]

You gonna do it this year too? My friend has the same tradition.

[@ChaoChao0071]

@@natalollipop_art Yes, except I may be buying my own candy this time.

[@pinkiepie8244]

>:)

[@gloriabertram4776]

@@pinkiepie8244 it's kind of interesting

[@kirbo222top]

Still a fu king legend

[@fluttershy8273]

anyone else think the Candymare's giggling / laughing sound almost like , Pinkamena ( from Cupcakes ; another MLP creepypasta )

[@Emogak]

Fun fact

[@fluttershy8273]

***** Cool :)

[@marshmallowbunnies9290]

+Emogak

[@marshmallowbunnies9290]

just testing

[@jordainecloe8767]

yes she does sound like pinkamina

[@Magpiepony]

It's great!! You did a fantastic job!

[@MyLife-oz7mo]

Magpiepony hi! I'm a big fan!

[@eeveelutionlover7301]

Magpiepony hi

[@eeveelutionlover7301]

Magpiepony I'm one of your subs

[@iipineapple6003]

Magpiepony OMG HI

[@andrewq3000]

Magpiepony uhh wierd alittle

[@kittycakes4166]

Is it just me or... does anyone else love the voice actor and all the blood and gory? :P

[@alexlovesfellsans5621]

Kitty Cakes me to

[@rat9178]

Kitty Cakes yep btw u have the same profile pic as my instagram lol

[@hodielol9453]

Kitty Cakes just you

[@VS-mp5ou]

Kitty Cakes I do

[@Dayday-6297]

Me, I think the gore sounds are oddly satisfying to listen to

[@Wispii]

Fun fact: Due to the nature of it being really damn sticky and the heat needed to cook sugar at the temperature, Hot Caramel is basically the sweet equivilant of Napalm. So basically, Applejack and Applebloom were basically experiencing what many vietnamese civilians had to experience during the Vietnam war. Think about that the next time you eat caramel.

[@rae-rae8005]

good thing I don't eat it lol-

[@Devonlui]

Why must you torment me with these accursed "fun-facts"?

[@fantasyrose3903]

but i like caramel..........Q-Q

[@HARDCORELALALOOPSYFAN]

real.

[@autumngreenglen5706]

Excuse my language but feckin hell

[@ChaoChao0071]

I remember listening to this last year and the year before while eating my Halloween candy. Doing it yet again right now.

[@baileythebirdasona4376]

ChaoChao0071 I saw your other comment lmao

[@blastbeatthefolf1052]

Chao what r u doin here?

[@ChaoChao0071]

@@blastbeatthefolf1052 Listening to this story. What are *you* doing here?

[@Pinkiepiefan448]

@@baileythebirdasona4376 he comments every year

[@mr.memesanddreams5870]

....11:02, well, time to sacrifice some candy to Candymare. 🍫🍬🍭🍬🍫🍭🍬🍫🍰🎂🍧🍨🍦🍮🍩🍫🍩🍩🍮🍫🍫🎂🍧🍦🍦🍭🍬🍦🍨🍭🍬🍨🍧🍬🍨🍧🍬🍦🍧🍰🍫🍮🍰🍩🍰🍪🍨🍭🍬🍭🍦🍪🍦🍰🍧🍮🍧🍩🍩🍧🍫🍭🍫🍭🍬🍪🍨🍪🍦🍦🍪🍪🎂🍪🍪🍰🍫🍰🍮🍮🍪🍮🍩🍩🍪🎂🍧🍨🍬🍭🍭🍦🍨🍭🍬🍬🍨🍭🍬🍭🍭🍦🍬🍭🍬🍬🍨🍭🍬🍨🍧🍰🍪🍮🍩🍪🍫🍮🍪🍫🍮🍩🍰🍰🎂🍧🍨🍦🍬🍭🍨🍬🍬🍭🍨🍦🍬🍭🍭🍨🍧🍧🎂🍰🍪🍪🍫🍫🍮🍮🍩🍩🍮🍮🍫🍪🍩🍮🍫🍪🍮🍮🍫🍪🍰🍰🎂🎂🍨🍦🍬🍭🍭🍨🍦🍬🍭🍭🍨🍦🍬🍭🍨🍦🍬🍭🍨🍧🎂🎂🍰🍰🍰🍪🍫🍮🍩🍪🍮🍩🍪🍫🍮🍩🍪🍫🍮🍩🍪🍰🍰🎂🍧🍨🍨🍦🍬🍬🍭🍨🍨🍦🍬🍬🍧🍧🍨🍭🍭🍬🍦🍨🍪🍫🍰🍧🍦🍬🍬🍭🍮🍩🍫🍪🍰🎂🍧🍨🍦🍬🍭🍬🍭🍦🍨🍧🎂🍰🍪🍫🍮🍩🍭🍬🍫🍪🍮🍩🍬🍭🍪🎂 🍩🍮🍦🍨🎂🎂🍰🍫🍬🍭🍬🍦🍨🍧🎂🍰🍬🍨🍧🍭🍦🍨🎂🍰🍭🍬 and finally, a caramelized applejack. 🐎 and don't anyone touch it! or else... you know what.

[@katt-nokjoke3688]

Mr. Memes And Dreams Kislan 🍦🍦🍦🍦🍦🍦🍦🍦🍦🍦🍦🍦🍦🍦🍦🍦🍦🍦🍦🍦🍦🍦🍦🍦🍦🍦🍦🍦🍦🍦🍦🍦🍦🍦🍦🍦🍦🍦🍦🍦🍦🍦🍦🍦🍧🍧🍧🍧🍧🍧🍧🍧🍧🍧🍧🍧🍧🍧🍧🍧🍧🍧🍧🍧🍧🍧🍧🍧🍧🍧🍧🍧🍧🍧🍧🍨🍨🍨🍨🍨🍨🍨🍨🍨🍨🍨🍨🍨🍨🍨🍨🍨🍨🍨🍨🍨🍨🍩🍩🍩🍩🍩🍩🍩🍩🍩🍩🍩🍩🍩🍩🍩🍩🍩🍩🍩🍩🍩🍩🍩🍩🍩🍩🍩🍩🍩🍩🍩🍩🍩🍩🍩🍩🍩🍩🍩🍩🍩🍪🍪🍪🍪🍪🍪🍪🍪🍪🍪🍪🍪🍪🍪🍪🍪🍪🍪🍪🍪🍪🍪🍪🍪🍪🍪🍪🍪🍪🍪🍪🎂🎂🎂🎂🎂🎂🎂🎂🎂🎂🎂🎂🎂🎂🎂🎂🎂🎂🎂🎂🎂🎂🎂🎂🎂🎂🎂🎂🎂🎂🎂🎂🍰🍰🍰🍰🍰🍰🍰🍰🍰🍰🍰🍰🍰🍰🍰🍰🍰🍰🍰🍰🍰🍰🍫🍫🍫🍫🍫🍫🍫🍫🍫🍫🍫🍫🍫🍫🍫🍫🍫🍫🍫🍫🍫🍫🍫🍫🍫🍫🍫🍫🍫🍫🍫🍬🍬🍬🍬🍬🍬🍬🍬🍬🍬🍬🍬🍬🍬🍬🍬🍬🍬🍬🍬🍬🍬🍬🍬🍬🍬🍬🍬🍬🍬🍬🍬🍬🍬🍬🍬🍬🍬🍬🍬🍬🍬🍬🍬🍬🍬🍬🍬🍬🍬🍬🍬🍦🍦🍦🍬🍬🍬🍬🍬🍬🍭🍭🍭🍭🍭🍭🍭🍭🍭🍭🍭🍭🍭🍭🍭🍭🍭🍭🍭🍭🍭🍭🍭🍭🍭🍭🍭🍭🍭🍭🍭🍭🍭🍭🍭🍭🍭🍭🍭🍭🍭🍭🍭🍭🍭🍭🍭🍭🍭🍭🍭🍭🍭🍭🍭🍭🍭🍮🍮🍮🍮🍮🍮🍮🍮🍮🍮🍮🍮🍮🍮🍮🍮🍮🍮🍮🍮🍮🍮🍮🍮🍮🍮🍮🍮🍮🍮🍮🍮🍮🍮🍮🍮🍮🍮🍮🍮🍮🍮🍮🍮🍮🍮🍮🍮🍮🍮🍯🍯🍯🍯🍯🍯🍯🍯🍯🍯🍯🍯🍯🍯🍯🍯🍯🍯🍯🍯🍯🍯🍯🍯🍯🍯🍯🍯🍯🍯🍯🍯🍯🍯🍯🍯🍯🍯🍯🍯

[@sylveonlover6685]

Mr. Memes And Dreams Kislan 🍦🍭🍰🍫🎂🍡🍩🍩🍩🍩🍩🍩🍩🍫🍫🍫🍫🍫🍭🍭🍭🍭🍭🍭🍦🍦🍦🍦🍡🍡🍡🍡🍡🍡🍪🍪🍪🍪🍪🍪🍪🍬🍬🍬🍬🍬🍬🍬🍰🍰🍰🍰🍰🍰🍰🍰🍰🍰🍰🍭🍭🍭🍭🎂🎂🎂🎂🎂🎂🎂🎂🎂🎂🎂🎂🎂🎂🎂🎂🎂🍯🍰🍦🍭🍫🎂🍮🍩🍪🍮🍮🍬🍬🍬🍬🍮🍮🍮🍮🍮🍥🍥🍥🍥🍥🍥🍯🍯🍯🍯🍯🍯🍯

[@lpsmusicvidslps4life758]

Mr. Memes And Dreams Kislan lol nice

[@apothecaryofthedamned1529]

🍥🍡🍧🍬🍮🎂🍰🍦🍭🍫🍨🍥🍡🍧🍬🍮🎂🍰🍦🍭🍫🍨🍥🍥🍥🍥🍥🍥🍥🍡🍡🍡🍡🍡🍡🍡🍧🍧🍧🍧🍧🍧🍧🍧🍬🍬🍬🍬🍬🍬🍬🍮🍮🍮🍮🍮🍮🍮🎂🎂🎂🎂🎂🎂🎂🍰🍰🍰🍰🍰🍰🍰🍦🍦🍦🍦🍦🍦🍦🍭🍭🍭🍭🍭🍭🍭🍫🍫🍫🍫🍫🍫🍫🍫🍫

[@lockedupgaming6831]

🍭🍭🍭🍭🍭🍭🍭🍭🍭🍭🍭🍭🍭

[@epicsyincs7261]

Not a brony, but I love listening to these horror stories based on certain universes. Just turning something innocent, into a gruesome reality gives me the love for these stories.

[@samueltrusik3251]

While most are mediocre, there are a few MLP stories that are... well... EXCEPTIONALLY well written. "Diary of a time looper" was my first MLP story that actually scared me.

[@katelynthewhitewerewolf6376]

@@samueltrusik3251 My favorite ones are this one Ghost Stories Grimdark Stories and Creepypasta ones.

[@FirestormDDash]

@@samueltrusik3251 Another tuber read a fic called Dont open the Door, and that one actually had me sit up for most of it. Some of it is the story, but some in part to how well the reader sells the sfx and words too. kzbin.info/www/bejne/poCceJauj9N_abM

[@Moon666RPG]

Ugghhhh... Those snapping and sopping sounds... >.

[@rottengrapes8605]

I agree. The first time I listened to this, I had to pause it quite a few times because I felt nauseous. THAT IS HOW AWESOME AND SCARY IT IS

[@callformybones9232]

+Bonnie Da Bunny Are you okay?

[@quirkymischief03]

hi ^-^

[@ashbear234]

Holy crap. Those gore noises. I actually felt bile rising in my throat.

[@galaxystarex4776]

Ticci Toby what are u doing watching mlp

[@mephistoknackerman1406]

This turned out so very good! I can't thank you enough for picking my humble little horror story for this. Big thanks to the entire cast! I can't wait for the rest!

[@amber2080]

Whoah wait u wrote this this is quite famous now also I'm way to young for this why am I even here..... I'm creeped out Nice story though Those popping sounds 👀😭😰

[@mephistoknackerman1406]

I'm not sure what you're asking. (mainly because you said 'our' and I think you meant 'your'.) If you are asking if I am sure that I wrote this... yes. Very sure. Same with the sequels and prequels. I distinctly recall sitting down, delirious from pain killers and putrefying wounds, and writing this story.

[@chlz6442]

Mephisto Knackerman I doubt u wrote it, but if u did great job..

[@mephistoknackerman1406]

Why do you doubt? :P I am Knackerman. You can ask on me on my tumblr, on my deviantart, or on fimfiction or reddit and I'll let you know, yes, I wrote Something Sweet to Bite. Or do you doubt I'm the real Knackerman?

[@uhno7496]

Mephisto Knackerman teach me how to write horror please-

[@krystachan7690]

I like how the narrator includes little details and trivial things, instead of just, "AppleBloom got tossed into a cauldron! AppleJack died! These two are having a fight about sweets!" I feel like most things in the stories I've heard or read have been to-the-point. Nice refresher!

[@xxwolfielovexx5571]

Apple jacks death made me feel a bit sick

[@leslieorrickisda1]

i injodit

[@rukiakuchki1591]

XxWolfie LovexX love your pic ^_^

[@Ziggyopp]

B-b-but your picture!

[@honeybeansblog1534]

How you killed her

[@magicalblackcat9605]

CANDYMARE IS MY TWIN

[@narclump6143]

Well I guess you could call her a (puts on shades) "caramel apple" yeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaah

[@Comiccosplayz]

MUM GET THA CAMRAAAAAA

[@narclump6143]

***** I DONT WANNA!!!!

[@scientificallyfailed8371]

Good job bro. Corny jokes.. There everywhere. ( puts on the pixel glasses) DEAL WITH IT

[@raybrewer8409]

YEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEHAAAAAAAAA!

[@CuteieMonster]

+MynameBob jr GET OUT

[@lindsayshanks7555]

Does anyone else get really annoyed when they hear Diamond Tiara and Silver Spoon's voices? Jeez...

[@mephistoknackerman1406]

I think that may be how you're meant to feel.

[@skyefell5450]

yep they are mini brats

[@funky_frogies]

Yup

[@emilyendergirl4732]

But they became nice :)

[@lindsayshanks7555]

+emily endergirl really? I haven't been keeping up with the series stopped sometime after Shining Armour and Cadence's wedding

[@thecrazygecko4783]

Am I weird or does anyone else not get scared at any creepypastas or get nightmare from them?

[@iminlovewithmyownsinsnottr2685]

Obviously not.

[@momoplays9669]

Well I think of them as sad stories sometimes.)Because I get very emotional in sadish ones.))

[@henryb8513]

i listened to sweet apple massacre, I had a dream with pony's in it, but not a nightmare like I expected

[@callmecookies8299]

I'm never scared!

[@ellacraver5505]

shadow bunny's the queen of gaming! this story scared the shit out of me, what are you talking about?!

[@notcopyright3404]

Me:*love eating candy* Candymare: *Exist* Me: Ooo candy! Candymare: Oh this is not good!!

[@lahannasingh8598]

If you eat her you become her! Or worse one of her candy puppets

[@katelynthewhitewerewolf6376]

​@@lahannasingh8598 Bet Laughing Jack would try to eat the candy himself

[@harrypotter2700]

"The taste of death and candy" Death is sweet

[@adorablecenturion8436]

Good to know, I might try it soon!

[@scribblebee5412]

Death is sweet...Bittersweet

[@charlieeiler1245]

You are weird

[@malia6957]

+Scribble Bee if you read butterflies, you would also say it's beautiful 💗

[@harrypotter2700]

+Malia Huff I love that one so much

[@mcchicken2392]

Oml when it was happy I didn't expect it to go scary so fast. Also I got scared straight to hell when you did the flashes of the candy pony thing

[@haylenq1340]

You mean the candymare

[@bleakautomaton4808]

If Candymare had been a character in the show, I could imagine a Nightmare Night episode where they'd stumble on her and befriend her a little (with a cutesy moment of having Candymare scare the bullies and such).

[@oldbonniebunny8478]

is it just me or does the candymare look like a stiched together pinkie pie and fluttershy

[@cherryberrybeatz5606]

Old Bonnie bunny kinda

[@krampus7520]

I thought it was pinkie pie but half of her flesh was peeled off.

[@Charlie19508]

Just you but defined to be pinkie pie

[@shaunyjimenez9637]

@@katelynthewhitewerewolf6376 hahahahahhahahahaha no

[@justin2308]

Not gonna lie, before I decided to listen to the Hearthswarming Story dub that Scribbler’s crew did, I honestly thought it WAS supposed to be a fusion of Pinkie Pie and Fluttershy

[@GabiShy]

I miss Emogak, just something about his narration is just unique and relaxing. Yes I referred to Emogak as a He/Him since he came out of Transgender which I’m so fucking proud of him for transitioning!!!

[@PeachTeaDragons]

What happened?

[@theunknownfurry4728]

12:59 ... WORST IDEA EVER! I closed my eyes for a moment, and put the screen close to my face, so i could hear, and opened my eyes... I nearly threw my tablet XD anyways, its cool, and I liked that gore XD.. do I need help?

[@mushu1105]

When seeing that CandyMare’s face up close like that... at 12:59 *NANI!?*

[@knightjade9126]

the candymare is very creepy I mean just looking at her gives me the chills,and if I had a poster of her in my room I would not sleep for a month cause she is creepy as hack. Don't get me wrong but u have to admit she is creepy. I'll jump out of my fur if she was real

[@pinkamenalovessans9948]

i think she isnt but ok

[@lazycookies]

She’s not THAT creepy. Like she’s scary I guess- but when you read as many fire and horror stories as me it’s all just the same thing lol

[@kumo8370]

I think she looks kinda cool but I have a feeling that fluttetshy has a right to be afraid of nightmare night lol.

[@katelynthewhitewerewolf6376]

​@@kumo8370 Yeah Candy Mare is likely why and those splinters are going to hurt Candy Mare's mouth if she doesn't remove the wood pieces.

[@RedWolf777SG]

Now this is a Halloween/Nightmare Night story, I just loved the suspense I've actually on the edge of my sit here! And The Lost Narrator as voice actress for Applejack is fantastic, I mean she's sounds exactly like she did in the show! X3

[@realmjumper7221]

Sweet Celestia! I thought I was tough, but this....this is dark....And yet, I listen, and can't leave the story.

[@francescaprice2999]

Im reading this when Im about to go to bed in about 40 minutes. :(

[@inactive666.]

Pun intended with the ‘SWEET Celestia!’?

[@RegenWasTaken]

Luigi's Mansion? AW YEAH BOIIIII! You just earned yourself a fan! Your talent and good taste made me a fan.

[@maggots7131]

rawer541 EVERY THING

[@ditzyderpy7500]

Watched MLP creepypastas for over 5 hours straight and this is the only one that gave me haunting images. 20/10 stars

[@rae-rae8005]

same- gross... horrifyingly haunted images

[@lunasocarina1364]

Watching at 3:00am not a good idea,home alone and a storm.......why did I watch this,but it's AMAZING so it ok!😋

[@br7078]

+Luna's Ocarina 2spoopy4me

[@mwillowv]

I'm watching it in pitch black darkness with ear buds and I'm hearing noises I'm getting paranoid😅

[@walkingonmusic6580]

+Color Crush7892 Same except I'm wearing headphones😅

[@ianheroarceo9154]

+Color Crush7892 me too

[@hodielol9453]

Luna's Ocarina Y would you do that

[@MinersLoveGames]

Oh God... I just finished reading this! And now I'm listening to the reading! Why do I do this to myself!?

[@mephistoknackerman1406]

MinersLoveGames Cause it's fuuuuuun? *grin*

[@scientificallyfailed8371]

+Mephisto Knackerman CANDY MARE!!!! How ya doin? Hangin around with the creepypastas? I think Pinkemena has made some Cadance flavored cupcakes..... I was one of the first to try one, and it's DELICIOUS!! Anyway, gotta run! ( flys away to Rainbow Factory)

[@buffmaeda4553]

+Bonnie Da Bunny Hi, Bonnie! My names BonBon, ya' know, toy bonnie? Wait, don't leave! *flies off to catch up to Bonnie*

[@idkanymore1410]

someone needs to make an animation of this

[@no9ah103]

tony flamingo OH HELL NO

[@idkanymore1410]

+DeltaNoah oh hell yeah!!

[@donnavaldskatingandfriends3908]

tony flamingo YESSSSS!!!!!!!!

[@jami677]

NOOO PLZ NO

[@edgyfluffyunicorns9187]

YES SOMEONE SHOULD!! Honestly, I'd *PAY* anyone to animate this! OwO

[@JinxsPlace]

Its become a tradition for me to listen to "Something sweet to bite" every time Halloween is on its way.

[@katelynthewhitewerewolf6376]

Jinxspace And it's Spooky Month too perfect for it

[@crescentmaroon9715]

this should be a game anyone agree?

[@mephistoknackerman1406]

+Nancy Constancia But from the Candy Mare's perspective or the pony's?

[@amber2080]

+Mephisto Knackerman Both two different modes But if I had to pick one it would be candy mares

[@lesasynoground3410]

Yeah

[@iquittedajpwsorry4849]

They should name a horror mlp game it's and it will be called candy mare . Exe game

[@iseestars5144]

Crescent Maroon I agree

[@AppleDash19]

The sound effects used in all five parts of this story are amazing, even the chewing sound effect sounded real.

[@M.W.K6996]

This is without a doubt, one of the most terrifying fanfics in the MLP universe. Though there are other fanfics we'd like you to try: "Cupcakes", "Sweet Apple Massacre", "The Experiments of Twilight Sparkle", "Rocket To Insanity" & "Lil Miss Rarity". 0:09

[@Derpy-tq1qo]

I listened to this tale during the summer, and now that it’s October, it’s TRULY an appropriate time to listen to this gruesome tale of pony terror

[@CharybdisM0ns]

Ten years later and still can't get enough of this fanfic reading.

[@haydengibson1996]

Those sound affects though... Ew!!!!

[@kittycatastrophe09]

Ikr

[@PassionBlaze]

I'm feeling sick... good thing I got some Whisky here

[@rowanhagan9033]

lol this is fun for me :D I find this funny

[@valentinalee4047]

...okay then...xD

[@ozzyneedshelp9167]

Passion Blaze lemmie take a sip homie

[@tsunemara]

It doesn’t matter how many times I listen to this story in its completion I just can’t get enough. You’ve done an amazing job. This is actually the first story I had ever listened and the reason why I subscribed.

[@sherlyam]

Oh man.... I never really read the story on fimfiction, but this is awesome! BTW, Lost Narrator is really good at doing an Applejack voice 14:44 scared me.... Good work

[@vinyldash2333]

This is on fimfiction?!?! Thats my home site! I should find it.

[@lesasynoground3410]

Did anybody else see that candy mare picture for a sec

[@myparentsaredivorced4573]

Yup, goodness...

[@foxypirate0205]

Yelp

[@skyefell5450]

yes I did at least..... my sister kept looking away....

[@foxypirate0205]

+Skye Fell lol

[@skyefell5450]

😜

[@zamas_samaz]

Its been literally 6 years since I'd listened to this, and here I am again, listening to it. Last I heard it I was so young and this story really helped spark my love for Creepypastas. This story is too good, and the reading too. It's so nostalgic listening to this again.

[@kimberlyvoss9032]

14:38 GIRL YOU DONT NEED HELP. YOU NEED JESUS.

[@BellaPinkSavage]

iconic Queen YES!!!

[@BlackArcherGaming]

YOU NEED EVERY HOLY THING

[@eros1702]

Jesus with a side of therapy

[@notcopyright3404]

The heck Jesus is not in mlp

[@Latoos976]

@@notcopyright3404 omg

[@eternalcomrade8144]

I am going to regret listening to this, aren't I...

[@eternalcomrade8144]

Kirsty Richardson how was it?

[@brooke5202]

Grusha TV yep

[@sonofcthulu8772]

Not at all Sarcasm

[@stardustlover8446]

Nope!

[@melissatheneko930]

I have no regrets.

[@lizziebloom1637]

Me: Oh, no! Applebloom's my favorite pony! *sad noises* Also me: *Sees a picture with Applebloom in it* *hold up*

[@sokesamurai]

Superb job. The story itself is fairly frightening but what you did with the sounds truly gave me some heavy willies. I only JUST got around to downloading it to listen to on the go. Can't wait to be utterly terrified with the rest.

[@CyrilSmithVA]

I'm going to make this a series on KZbin soon so look out for it

[@baldpai1047]

I'll subscribe to look out for it =3

[@emilyendergirl4732]

+Baldpai omg baldpai!

[@baldpai1047]

emily endergirl You have been noticed

[@littlepip4014]

i will subscribe if you do something sweet to bite too, it is so much scarier than the first and this one is pretty bad

[@lennidoll2721]

LIES!!

[@poptartcartoons4272]

Your blood is red, And all over the room, You liked to eat candy, Now it likes to eat you.

[@davidradcliffe955]

I'm so playing this during my Halloween party all the guest are bronies

[@mephistoknackerman1406]

+David Radcliffe Do let me know how it goes over!

[@deejayrainbowzderpderpyay1681]

me too

[@ostrichguy-nf2lv]

HOW I WISHED I WAS THERE😭😭😭😭

[@davidradcliffe955]

Mephisto Knackerman it was awesome

[@joshuagarcia5804]

I wish you recorded the reactions!

[@dawnramos4723]

This should be a game...I'm telling you

[@tomjack8582]

I absolutely love grim-dark and gore fics but the noises are just nasty..... love it!!

[@katnotcattt]

Very rarely do these stories I listened to when I was little disturb me so deeply when I rediscover them. Such an excellent piece of fanfiction, and an EXCELLENT narration!

[@GreysonAuctor]

This was the first Grimdark fic that legit scared me. Coming back 5 years later I understand why! Its so well written, voiced, and produced.

[@emmigummi2895]

Well, I feel like Silver Spoon and Diamond Tiara are going to eat their words soon.

[@skrall107]

I love how well this video uses bits of Batman: Arkham City's soundtrack. It's not something most people associate with the horror genre, despite working so well in that context.

[@captainhat760]

Sweet apple massacre has nothing on this gory story of death

[@wowisntitanamazinglyamazin9550]

I think sweet apple massacre was worse

[@nicolethatsme4116]

if you think thats bad than you need to see butterflies

[@wowisntitanamazinglyamazin9550]

bichon lover I have and sweet apple massacre is worse

[@nicolethatsme4116]

Ok

[@weezeryuri]

Lemme explain why this story is so much better than SPM. (Warning: Paragraphz) Sweet Apple Massacre was obviously made to be not serious, I believe the creator of the story said that. It's just a series of non-stop gore and rape. SPM is a story you can read with a friend as a challenge, being able to laugh at every shocking sentence. Now this, this story actually had heart to it, the gore is realistic and detailed. The bloody parts don't overstay their welcome, and the whole story isn't just made to shock. The gore has a better hit to it and has you on the edge of your seat. Butterflies is great too.

[@Bunny_BoxEXE]

I never thought to leave a comment here before, but listening to this is one of the most important Halloween traditions I have! I loved listening to this story while I work on my costumes, or walk about at school ^^ I've kept this tradition for about 6 years since I was in middle school and am so thankful for this masterpiece! I love My Little Pony and the amazing fanmade content that stemmed from it. I hope these videos never get taken down!

[@dad7790]

Oml . . . That flash of the CandyMare at 4:57 nearly gave me a heart attack. Not really. Metaphoricaly speaking.

[@vinyldash2333]

Thats why im hiding down here.

[@theastokeley454]

Me: I've watched cupcakes, sweet apple massacre, the rainbow factory and lots more so I'll be fine *10 minuets later* Me: Scratch that, I'm outta here!!

[@ThatGeorgeMoment]

i promise I will not show this to any of my scardy friends *crosses fingers*

[@mephistoknackerman1406]

+Munchy Bunny I like that promise. I like it a lot.

[@ThatGeorgeMoment]

XD

[@kimberlyvoss9032]

+Mephisto Knackerman you have a weird creepy Picture

[@mephistoknackerman1406]

Thanks?

[@mamabear2847]

lol thc forbthe idea so when my bffs come over YAY FOR MY KERKINESS!!!!

[@TheEnterShepman]

0.o .... Awesome! well done! gave me the chills

[@aaaaaaaaaaaaaaaa800]

Let me tell you "a great idea" Watch this at night way past your bedtime, when you're only 11 and there's a storm that has winds that make creepy noises, Yep the smallest idea ever is this, yep not the dumbest thing ever, yep Edit: why do I say yep a lot?

[@pixelatedpictureszz8199]

That “great idea“ is not really good

[@pixelatedpictureszz8199]

But, maybe one day I’ll try that

[@voldy3565]

Aren't you a bit young to be listening to something like this?

[@aaaaaaaaaaaaaaaa800]

@@voldy3565 yes and that won't stop me from wanting to fight God

[@MareCat31]

truely perfect for the month of oct,i ate a lot of candy yesterday and its really a nice palette cleanser of a story...i really have a feeling that eating too much candy can make you have some weird or even scary lucid dreams.

[@blueclawoflunarclan4479]

I've listened to this story about four times now. It never gets old.

[@TheNachoKat]

I've been avoiding listening to this because I assumed it would be another psycho killer Pinkie Pie story, and maybe it'll turn out to be just that. Either way, It's more interesting than I though it would be. :) Dear GOD Diamond Tiara's voice is irritating! D'X> I wonder what the actual voice of the person who did Diamond sounds like. Apple Bloom sounds great though. *Spoilers* I know this may be horrible, but in the beginning, the description of Apple Blooms body reminded me of warm salted caramel! So delicious, it made me crave some!

[@mephistoknackerman1406]

Delicious sweet, salty caramel. All warm and gooey. I admit, that's pretty hard to resist, even with the roasted Applebloom filling. I have written psycho killer Pinkie Pie stories. Not much of a spoiler, but this isn't one of them.

[@TheNachoKat]

Mephisto Knackerman Oh yes, I finished listening to the story yesterday, I was pleasantly surprised! I had assumed Pinkie Pie was the pony depicted in the thumbnail, but I'm glad I was wrong. :D

[@undead4542]

+TheNachoKat OMG! I thought the same thing! I thought the thumbnail was Pinkie Pie

[@joshuagarcia5804]

Mephisto Knackerman How screwed would the DBZverse be, if Majin Buu consumed The Candy Mare?

[@blueberrysans2640]

Nightmare night~ Such a fright~ Give us something, Sweet to bite~

[@ladyren1575]

Blueberry Sans nice

[@vinyldash2333]

I will forevermre hatd that damned phrase.

[@WhiteIndoraptor]

It goes like this: Nightmare night what a fright give us something sweet to bite🎵 poison,drowning,blood, or knife so many ways to take your life.🎵

[@chaselayman6815]

Bruh, this truly needs to be animated. All o f the parts do. I really wanna see that.

[@LunamoonOwO]

Ikr?

[@Minto8384]

You have a great voice! I love how you capture every bit, EVERY. BIT. Of the terror and trauma.

[@kiarrabazan6306]

I'm so excited to listen to this all over again

[@maya-wr4yr]

I watched this in the dark with head phones on high volume

[@charlieeiler1245]

Honestly, that is REALLY stupid.

[@mcchicken2392]

+Charlie Eiler shut up charlie!

[@coyotealienss]

Same :)

[@2brn4you]

Me too in the dark at night I swore I saw something.......my sister she scared the crap outta me From Madeline

[@midnightsparkle2725]

me too I watch this in the dark...

[@zodyak9999]

The best, and my favorite, series/ creepypasta reading!

[@seashell9570]

Jesus Christ the Voice Acting in this grimdark is impeccable. Seriously, there aren't that many things on youtube that are on this level bruh.

[@maximillian1109]

Every damn October I return to this story. Thats how much of a icon it has become in my life.XD

[@fuzzybuzzy3159]

Pinkie's mic quality is keeping me from being immersed.

[@artgurusauce]

bruh, listening to this late at night during a thunderstorm makes it so much more scary.

[@dreamqueengalaxyj5069]

Me:*Randomly seeing a video because of its cover and notices it's boring and skips it,I stop and hear the good part and then a creepy face pops out and falls from chair.* XD

[@MysticWolfy7]

I listen to this as a bedtime story and the warning at the beginning always makes me smile. :)

[@liiivi3432]

When the sound effects make you throw up,you know it's good.

[@Molly_Mauk]

I come here for the from dark stories and I stay for the top tier sound effects, keep up the good work

[@katelynthewhitewerewolf6376]

Molly Mauk Yeah and I would like to see an animated version of this story

[@AngelWolfArt]

"Apple Bloom, you in here?" Ooooh yeah, she's in there all right, but not what you think Aj

[@fishstx5897]

I'm actually shaking I've seen some gore in my time but this is something else This needs a lot more attention

[@storm_xo07]

Bully: You go trick or treating? What a baby looser! Kid: Take that back! Bully: *mocks* "tAkE tHaT bAcK!" Kid: *turns into Candymare* Bully: *fUcK tHaT sHiT i'M oUt*

[@JustAShyGhost]

I remember listening to this years ago, glad i found it again

[@momoplays9669]

I love this so far!!!)I really love the voices and the sound effects!!!!)So accurate!👌))

[@ozzyneedshelp9167]

welp, don’t forget to sacrifice the candy! :) 🍬🍫🎂🍩🍪🎂🍬🍫🍬🍬🍫🍰🥛🍰🍬🍫🍫🍬🍫🍬🍫🍫🍬🍫🍰🍬🍫🍰🎂🎂🍭🍮🍪🍪🍩🍩🍫🍫🍦🍮🍭🍪🍫🍬🍦🎂🍭🍭🍪🍿🍬🍦🍮🍪🍪🍫🍬🎂🍩🍪🍰🎂🍭🍰🍦🍿🍭🍪🍿🍬🍰🍭🍿🍬🍿🍪🎂🍦🍮🍩🍰🍦🍮🍪🍿🍦🍮🍪🍩🍫🍦🍮🍩🍿🍦🎂🍪🍿🍫🍩🍿🍬🎂🍪🍰🍪🍰🍪🍰🍫🍫🍩🍪🍭🎂🍦🍦🍬🍿🍩🍪🍭🍮🎂🍰🍦🍬🍫🍩🍩🍪🍭🍮🎂🍦🍬🍬🍫🍿🍩🍩🍪🍭🍮🍰🍰🍬🍫🍩🍪🍪🍭🍮🎂🎂🍦🍦🍬🍫🍿🍩🍪🍭🍮🎂🍰🍦🍬🍬🍿🍩🍪🍪🍭🎂🍰🍦🍬🍿🍩🍪🍪🍭🍮🎂🍰🍦🍬🍫🍿🍩🍪🍭🍭🍮🎂🍰🍦🍬🍬🍿🍿🍩🍪🍭🍮🎂🍰🍦🍬🍬🍿🍿🍪🍪🍭🍮🎂🍰🍦🍬🍬🍫🍿🍩🍩🍪🍭🍮🍰🍦🍬🍬🍫🍩🍩🍪🍪🍮🍮🎂🍰🏈🍬🍫🍿🍩🍪🍭🍮🍰🍦🍬🍬🍿🍪🍪🍭🎂🍰🍫🍪🍪🎂🍩🍿🎂🎂🍭🍰🍫🍦🍬🍿🍪🎂🍦🍩🍫🍩🍩🍦🍪🍫🍪🎂🍩🍩🍩🍪🍿🍿🍪🍰🍩🍰🍪🍰🍩🍫🍩🍫🎂🍿🍿🍿🍫🍿

[@existfutile]

Bruh this went to a corpse party type of story real quick.

[@xlisha1997x]

CORPSE PARTY!!!!!!!!!! :D

[@MissRaex]

I'm a very visual person, and as a writer, I'm very impressed with how well this story was written. The only thing I couldn’t handle was trying to visualize how Apple Jack got burnt by the caramel and how she died in such pain. 💀👀

[@PapaPorpoise247]

WOW!!! This is probably one of the most horrifying fanfics I have ever heard and/or read...both you and Knackerman have outdone yourselves...(Cupcakes: 3/10 scary, This: 9/10 scary)...just WOW!!!

[@olive7900]

Idk y but I enjoy things like this Especially mlp grimdark stories I dont get scared with these or grossed out I smile and laugh when I hear someone in pain or screaming I know....im weird

[@demongrinder8515]

Same lol. I know it's not real and it's very interesting.

[@blueclawoflunarclan4479]

this is beyond cupcakes

[@aspenraine5712]

true

[@jessrose1384]

Huehuehue dark room headphones full volume bone snapping blood curdling screams muffled groans bloody piercing sounds ugh I WANT MORE!!!!

[@milquetoast3233]

19:52 I know this is a little late but scary, but FUN! spooky, but FUN! secret... but FUN! not fun, but FUN! FUN FUN FUN lmao good job on the narration btw

[@CherryPawCreations]

wow, that candy mare really is a beast, she must be extremely strong if she was able to tear through that barn door like that! she has to be one of my favorite mlp creepypasta monsters! by the way you described her she seemed as huge as atleast an elephant, kinda reminds me of the timber wolves from the original mlp.