The Scholarship Essay Formula - Top 10 Things you NEED to say in your scholarship essay/ application

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[@vannessanoreus1123]

Hello I am a middle school student applying early for scholarship. Do you know any free resources to edit essays?

[@farahbreval4627]

I woke at 4 am thinking about my son dream school acceptance in the price tag . I would like you to help me with good essays to help him win few scholarships. He is a good writer but it is hard for him to start. Actually I would like to get help with my daughters as well . Please let me know how to contact you personally

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[@Raya-bx5bl]

Thank you so much for your informative video! This is what I have gathered about your tips: 1. “I want to create a scholarship fund/ nonprofit/ charity for myself” 2. Send the person on the selection committee a thank you note 3. Address your financial situation e.g. medical expenses, death in the family, etc… 4. Mention your trials to your triumphs: your personal growth 5. Write about your major and career goals and why you are inspired to go into the field, and simplify your terminology 6. Mention what you have done so far to get to your career goals, like: Volunteering, leadership experiences, and course work (if you don’t have internship experience) 7. How receiving the scholarship will help you! Sound humble and not entitled 8. Your life goals.m, ex) traveling 9. Your community involvement relating to your life goals, and include 10. Leadership position and leadership roles and be specific and what the role does and how it ties in to the scholarship 11. Who inspired/ motivated you? And include a quote that ties into the things you are involved in that pertain to the theme of your essay 12. I think I missed one, so please watch the video!

[@briannakenan9561]

I love the “be humble” aspect of essay writing for scholarships! Thank you for your advice

[@EM-ME-]

Just won a $1000 scholarship because of this video. Wrote from the heart while following this structure. Thank you so much 💛

[@ESPDaniella]

Just now seeing this. CONGRATS!!!!!

[@EM-ME-]

@@ESPDaniella I ended up receiving an additional $1500 from another application :) Thank you!

[@ESPDaniella]

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[@kylashofner2656]

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[@ESPDaniella]

Thank you so much! Also make sure to follow my Tiktok for more advice. I am much more active on there. my username is @espdaniella

[@writtenwhale659]

Your channel is fantastic! Thank you so much for breaking down scholarships in a real way. Since I changed my scholarship application-style predominantly inspired by your advice, I've been awarded one $5,000 scholarship! Hoping to hear back from others soon, but it's already more than enough just to be acknowledged! I'm so glad my Aunt saw you on the news and kickstarted this journey :D Thank you

[@ESPDaniella]

OMG !!! CONGRATZ !! By the way, I love to keep in touch with those I helped win scholarships, so if you could contact me through email ([e-mail]) or social media (Insta: @carle100), that would be awesome ! ^_^

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[@victorysampson]

I’m in the 11th grade rn, and this was incredibly helpful. I’ve written a few pages of just raw material from my life connected to my major. Just because of this video, I’m ahead. Thank you so much. -A Mass Com/ International Relations major 🤎

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[@Faithful.adanna]

You're absolutely amazing! You're also very pretty! Thank you for all this

[@ESPDaniella]

Glad I could help! :)

[@obama2523]

my first intention in watching your video was just to admire your appearance and I just found myself taking notes

[@tawandaw2160]

OMG!! one of your videos came across my IG timeline and I can't begin to tell you how on time this is. I have twins who are juniors in high school and didn't where to start. You have been an inspiration and and great help. Thank you so much I will definitely be recommending friends and family to subscribe/attend your classes.

[@ESPDaniella]

Awesome!! Also for added inspiration my first scholarship was my HS junior year. Make sure to check all the resources (as well as my services/strategy book!) link: beacons.ai/scholarshipguru/home#hard_reload=true

[@SnowStop]

Just found this channel and I cannot wait to dive more into your content to learn how I can be a much better applicant. Really excited now so thank you (: this is something I didn’t know I needed

[@ESPDaniella]

Glad I could help; good luck!!!

[@renaj8899]

This was really helpful! While listening to your tips I could formulate a rough outline for my own academic and art scholarship essays. I hope I get it, hopefully they won’t be too harsh as I’m only in 9th grade, not college 😅

[@danielaramos370]

I just wanted to thank you because I am currently preparing myself to apply for scholarships for the first time ever and I am currently a sophomore in college. You were so helpful and I wish you the best of luck !

[@ESPDaniella]

Good luck! I hope you win some scholarships! Also mainly look into professional organizations relating to your major. Thats where I got most of mine as a junior/senior in college

[@martingirgis5150]

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[@billie_808]

most useful vid ever. love u

[@jasmine3288]

Thank you for the amazing tips! I just sent this to my gc with my friends also applying for scholarships. Also, side note: when you said you got the Floyd Mayweather foundation scholarship, I smiled so big!! Floyd Mayweather is actually the father of one of my friends, so I thought that was a funny little coincidence!!

[@amarauzo7650]

I’m so anxious and scared that my family will pay a lot for school. Thanks for your dedication

[@kclarke421]

2:30 financial statement thingy ( don't mind me I'm taking notes 😅)

[@strawberrycreme7181]

This was so helpful! Thank you!! I’ll be sharing this to friends also applying!

[@chillbi98]

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[@ESPDaniella]

Thank you! And feel free to share my channel with others you know seeking scholarships :)

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[@kaylaguevaraaa]

ahhh! thank you so much! this helped me out so much!! I didn’t even know you were so close to me too! I live in the DFW area but I’m going to Texas Tech next year! hopefully I get the scholarship!

[@ESPDaniella]

I hope you get the scholarship as well!! And please update me if you do, I love hearing success stories ^_^

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[@ESPDaniella]

Good luck!!

[@NyokaWill]

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[@notsopopularkid1238]

Thank you

[@vivac995]

thank you so much for this video:) I'm a middle school student trying to get a scholarship to high school, i want to ask, if it is necessary to talk about my life goals, careers on my motivation essay? especially since I've never enter any community or club related to the careers I dreamed of

[@elizabethm907]

I did understand what you was saying about how you suggest to write about taking a class that relax to your major. Can you gave a example?

[@ESPDaniella]

By this I mean if there has been a certain classes that is within your major (for example, I'm studying journalism so I have lots of journalism classes) and that particular class was really a defining moment for you -- consider writing about it in your essay !

[@Eve_Y]

Can you please do a scholarship tips video for those who have student debt and have already graduated?

[@artswithemma]

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[@Saltuwka_flame]

Hello! This is very informative. Thanks a lot. If I am applying for the university’s presidential scholarship which is fully funded, is it okay to repeat the same things from Activities list, Honors & Awards, and Personal Statement in my scholarship essays?

[@ESPDaniella]

it all depends on what elements you think can help your application stand out the most (without overstepping word count limits)

[@ChangaPradera]

No AI can detect long papers written by PaperGen-it’s that good!

[@queenwdgSMP]

Do you offer a spreadsheet to help a student keep track of the colleges they apply to, financial aid, scholarships etc…?

[@_inett]

Hello! I am just wondering if perhaps, my letter of intent for a scholarship can be written in a creative way? Or should it remain formal and be written professionally? I just thought that maybe making my letter of intent in a creative way will make my application stand out from other applicants, but it can also be the reason for my application to be rejected if it might not be the right way to write the letter of intent. Thank youuu~

[@adelynhernandez938]

How can I show that I am someone deserving of the scholarship without plainly bragging or putting down others? Ty so much btw

[@PascalineKelechi]

can these tips be used for a masters degree scholarship personal statement ?

[@ESPDaniella]

Yes, of course!

[@PascalineKelechi]

@@ESPDaniella Thank you

[@sophiex363]

Anyone else feel like they are never going to win the career goals essay type scholarship because of your major? It’s my dream to go to film school and work as a director/producer, but if I write about that I feel like i will seem self absorbed lol and chances are theres someone else with a more academic/meaningful major who writes about how they want to go to med school and cure cancer or feed starving children in other countries and they will probably give the scholarship to them ig.

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[@trentenswinton954]

How would you go about maintaining humbleness when the topic of the scholarship essay is why are you the most deserving?

[@ESPDaniella]

For this, try and use still sound humble and indirect as to why you deserve it (perhaps even use reverse psychology). I did this for my other video of where I read the essay that got me a scholarship from Future, the rapper. It was within the very last paragraph of my essay in that video!

[@tifyuploo]

I haven’t done any community service,clubs or organisms I feel bad about myself now

[@reverie8223]

Me either, it can be pretty hard when you don’t do that kind of stuff...

[@queenartly3323]

Just do some stuff for churches or your local community center.

[@ZzzZ-sb9ju]

Hello, I have a question. What am I supposed to put if I’m not in any extracurriculars, sports, or have community involvement? It’s not that I don’t want to, but I can’t.

[@onyeogalionyedika905]

I'm so scared Dani😔, I have loads of questions, this would be my first.

[@yxhani4387]

Hello Daniella, I believe you are doing well. I would like to know if the tips are in chronological order. Hope to hear from you soon. Regards, Jo

[@ESPDaniella]

Not in order! Just things to consider incorporating.

[@mackenzieclick7248]

What are the best ways to find these not-so-well-known scholarships?

[@ESPDaniella]

Nearly half of the scholarships I won (about 11) were from ones that my counselor at my high school as well as during college told me about via email. Also, it helps to stay connected with people in your local community because not all scholarships have a website to let you know that they even exist. The only way of knowing sometimes is by word of mouth.

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[@Wiz92]

Should I write the essay in this order

[@ESPDaniella]

No particular order!

[@usmanabid2959]

I have to write a essay related to the Queen Elizabeth ll what do l do, l need help (it’s the platinum jubilee Scholarship programme)

[@jesuschristlovesyou2015]

can i say that it employees in a scholarship application?

[@mehu8949]

My daughter got young scholar but I don't have any idea for young scholar essays so can you give me some tips?

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You're so beatiful and so inteligente, thank you!

[@blaisewati4036]

Hey Daniella is it possible you help me out in reviewing my essay for a scholarship I'm applying for..if you are ok with it?

[@ESPDaniella]

Sure! I offer a service of where I edit scholarships essays. I will link that here: forms.gle/yfJ7cYLJ9bGggY8A6

[@eslorda_tv]

Hello there, I'm from Ghana and I want to know. I graduated with a second class lower(2.9Gpa) in Bsc. Environmenral Science... Are there any Schorlaships for students within that class??

[@nasrinrahmat207]

Wow. mam you are amazing. I am a big fan of you. Mam can you please send me a sample pdf essay. ?

[@stephanieansah8561]

I’m sort of confused. Are these rules supposed to flow with my story? Cause for example the scholarship donors are telling me to write about my “role model”. Do I still need to go in the order you’re suggesting?

[@Owlette03]

Maybe you can mention how that role model inspires you to achieve your major/career goals?

[@ESPDaniella]

These tips are not in any specific order!

[@espoir3842]

Hi Daniella, do you still edit essays? If yes, please, how do I reach you?

[@ESPDaniella]

All my services are here; sites.google.com/view/scholarshipguru/scholarships

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[@gregw3469]

Not to be a party pooper but, I feel that scholarships are a waste of time lol I remember turning in over 3-400 scholarships back in high school. Recently tried in college and got denied. I think scholarships are only meant for 3-4.0 gpa students

[@ettamae05]

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[@anhthu390]

how can a 700 words essay can mention all of that T.T

[@gladiolyvillanueva4540]

Hi how do you start your essay? Do I need to introduce myself first?

[@ESPDaniella]

it depends on the prompt! I have two essays of where I literally read word for word my scholarship essays which should help you see how to construct yours :)

[@danielshussaini8045]

Damn you are so beautiful and your channel is very helpful.

[@nancynabulime2860]

Hi Daniella , I have just come to know about scholarship and in the process of reviewing some of them on u tube that's when I came across your advice , kindly pliz if its okk with you can I get you in the watsapp in box so that we can talk more hw best you can take me through the whole process. Thank.

[@ettamae05]

Thank you

[@onyeogalionyedika905]

I'm so scared Dani😔, I have loads of questions, this would be my first.