Scholarship Essay Sample About Why I Deserve The Scholarship

[@TheScholarshipSystem]

Comment below: what’s a specific example you could use to help answer this question?

[@walkwithme2700]

Why do i deserve this scholarship money : 1. Fund will help. How impact in the long run. Better the world. Contribution to society. 2. Focus on the purpose of the scholarship. Core to the purpose of the scholarship. Relate to the donor 3. Use spesific example. Show them something. Not tell them. Spesific story about the idea you want to say. 4. How to overcome obstacle 5. Maximize the word count

[@TheScholarshipSystem]

YES!

[@daviddimanochie5405]

@@TheScholarshipSystem Can number 4 and number 5 blend in together?

[@michelemusick6498]

Thank you for this information. We just joined the scholarship system in June and starting to apply. It's actually fun...thank you for all that you do!!

[@TheScholarshipSystem]

You're welcome! We're glad you are finding it helpful!

[@ibe.11]

What if the field I plan on pursuing in the future isn't as 'helpful' as a veterinarian for example? I plan on majoring in information technology, how can I highlight how I'm bettering the world?

[@rogeroseitutu]

I want to use an experience I had at a hospital with a family friend who is a doctor. How I conversed with some of his patients and comforted them

[@TheScholarshipSystem]

This would be a great topic to include in your essay!

[@baotramnguyenle9720]

I have a question. I'm preparing a video application for a scholarship. The requirement already included some questions and I have to answer within 2 minutes. Should I just follow only the provided questions or add other bullet ideas like you recommended in the video? Thank you so much

[@TheScholarshipSystem]

If time permits, you can add other content. Check out our video on video interviews. kzbin.info/www/bejne/joDIdHynaN1lpKcsi=X-TGf0WOmHuWMMnh

[@helenjabar5196]

Hello, I have a question! For some programs, I’ve applying they asked What will I contribute to the program? little confused, what would you recommend? Did you make any video about it? If yes can you attach the link for me? Thank you a lot!

[@TheScholarshipSystem]

The answer is similar to Why I deserve the scholarship. When asked about what you will contribute, you will need to share what makes you different. How will your perspective, personality, attitude, or skills make a difference to the program, the participants, or the project? So you will want to share how you being involved will make an impact to the program and to the overall experience. So if you reframe the question to, Why I deserve to attend this program... it may make the question a little easier to answer using our suggestions.

[@helenjabar5196]

@@TheScholarshipSystem thank you, helped a lot!

[@eloisecarcini1280]

Thank you for the advice!

[@TheScholarshipSystem]

Glad it was helpful!

[@prathoma2375]

Hi, so i am applying for this scholarship where i want to amswer this question by mentioning the financial burden that the only earning member of my family faces to pay for my education, and hence, the scholarship would lead to me being able to help relieve that stress somewhat, while also clear away some educational fees...what do you think of this?

[@TheScholarshipSystem]

This would be a great start, but you also need to mention how it affects you personally.

[@prathoma2375]

@TheScholarshipSystem Cool, will keep that in mind. Thank you tons for the reply :)

[@Max_Lavoisier]

Please, what about merit scholarships

[@TheScholarshipSystem]

Hi Maxwell - did you have specific questions? If you are just wanting to learn about scholarships in general, try this video: kzbin.info/www/bejne/rJvVdqWtZ6qlZtU

[@PixelproAnimation]

I am going to apply at GIST korean university for master. In application it asked what are your financial problems and why do you need matriculation fee waiver??? please tell

[@TheScholarshipSystem]

Our content is for students living in the US attending college in the US. But for the most part, if a scholarship asks to prove financial need, then you have an opportunity to explain your family's financial situation. You can include a monthly cashflow budget, if necessary, to prove that there is no discretionary money available. You can also discuss how you want to avoid student debt and how that will benefit you in the future.

[@PixelproAnimation]

@@TheScholarshipSystem one more question related to us universities. I have heard that people should directly apply to the PhD instead of masters because for PhD we have good chances. ? Additional, recommend university list without IELts and no applications fee. And currently open admission of which universities?

[@ChristTakoumbo]

Please is it a must of having 25 points to have a Scolar ship ??

[@TheScholarshipSystem]

We don't understand your question. Could you please resubmit?

[@zuriyatiismail4917]

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[@jesubankejosephine2381]

This was so helpful

[@TheScholarshipSystem]

We're glad you found it helpful!

[@itzregina326]

Hello I have a question! For a some scholarships I’m applying for there is no word count. What do you recommend as a solid word count for this kind of essay?

[@TheScholarshipSystem]

If there is no word count, usually about 500 words is good. But it never hurts to approach the scholarship organization itself to see if they have a preference that wasn't stated.

[@itzregina326]

@@TheScholarshipSystem thank you!

[@ayeshaakter3959]

Hello madam I enjoyed watching your video. I want to apply for a fellowship to do Ph.D. in public health. I am going to apply for this first-time international scholarship. So I don't understand how to write nicely. I have masters in public health and have been working in the public health sector for 10 years. It would be very helpful if you could advise me on how I should put all this together. Thank you

[@SontySobonaneako]

What about the question tell us about a personal achievement that makes you proud

[@TheScholarshipSystem]

That's a great topic - we can certainly cover that one in future video!

[@shaeztime6972]

hello mam can i get scholarship i have money problem but my have a dream study in abroad im' looking scholarship 5 months too i dont know what can i do for my dream 😢

[@TheScholarshipSystem]

Our content is for residents living in the US attending college in the US. You may need to search for international scholarships.

[@sairamariamissac2881]

Hi mam, I have opted for Msc accounting and finance in uk university. Can u tell me what kind of community service I can provide?. Plzz reply

[@TheScholarshipSystem]

Our information is for residents living in the US attending college in the US. You may need to find resources closer to your area.

[@ShreyalAhir]

Great vdo

[@TheScholarshipSystem]

Thank you!

[@usmaarshad9196]

It's really awsome video...very informative

[@vikashdas003]

Thanks Ma'am

[@TheScholarshipSystem]

Most welcome 😊