Everyone Abandoned This Helpless Alien Child, Except The Humans! | Best HFY Stories

[@LearningThings]

Stories at human beings at our best. We need more of these.

[@shaddi666]

We need more human beings like that period.

[@royscott9162]

Hawkins gets round these stories! He’s an IT guy, starship captain, medic, soldier, Ambassador….😂😂

[@ricardocarmona5210]

Yup!!! 🤠👍

[@porpus99]

Little known fact, that Hawkins was the first on screen kill by a Predator. Guy really gets around.

[@JB-yb4wn]

Maybe its his well connected family?😁

[@pcalix17]

Humanity is indeed first. First to care when all else leave the weak and the wounded behind. First to risk everything, losing hundreds of thousands in the process, to do the right thing. We need this humanity.

[@stewartcaldwell5299]

I like humans being the good guys for a change.

[@jeremykeasbey4145]

Never abandon an alien baby; they might be a saiyan

[@kamoonrathewolfgod9189]

The picture of the child looks exactly like Yoda but the story reminded me of Captain James T. Kirk of the USS Enterprise. Of course he never died. He and most of his crew was always safe no matter what. Great story all the same.

[@grantgunz]

4000 quatloo's the humans cannot be contained!

[@dusanradin5868]

Basically,he got 86'-ed.

[@richardflick8021]

🙏🏻❤🙏🏻❤🙏🏻❤I have found your stories filled with suspense, action, and a real hope of what humanity really is, or should be! Number 888

[@ocnier]

Enemy mine retelling for a new generation, well done!

[@rjmcphee66]

I loved this story. There were plot holes. But the story was very good.

[@malahammer]

Loving all this stories. Many thanks again 88

[@BillDunwell]

An excellent story! We need more like this.

[@flashcraft]

"SUBSCRIBE OR I TAKE YOUR DOG." Hilarious!

[@rosemarielee7775]

So, you have chosen death.

[@janhegarty5268]

More stories like these please

[@phillipnorton2929]

I really liked this story. Thank you

[@ottovonbismarck6310]

Yoda's little brother 🤣

[@anonygent]

Inconsistent. The parents flew away, abandoning the child in the beginning, but then there's a crashed ship later? Doesn't make sense.

[@lyrigageforge3259]

Has got to be an AI story or some poor author who hasn't edited at all to clear up the mess of trying different solutions. More likely the former. Idk how people can even enjoy that - or then they just aren't really paying attention.

[@open_my_eyes3311]

Defiitely an AI. Also, this story seems to have 2 different endings. One happy at around 16:20, and another tragic at the end of the video. I know ppl who uses AI in their work, but take time and time again to correct until the final product is ready to be shown to the world and, maybe one day, beyond. Do not trust the current so-called AI's to make perfect products by themselves. I'm talking to you, 6-fingered hands!!

[@janamathis4729]

Truly enjoed this. Thank you.

[@nonoyorbusness]

The AI has the memory of a goldfish!

[@open_my_eyes3311]

Yeah, that's one way to recognize an AI is behind a story. I learned watching CodeMiko's streams, she interacts with several, gives them an avatar each, also lets them talk to each other. It's very informative. And often hilarious but not necessarily in the way one would expect initially. AI's need constant attention and correction, or they would forget what they just said, or draw human hands with a morphology not compatible with that of a human.

[@greyman1k]

Proper story with a solid moral. May we all be ruled by our better angels.

[@ricardocarmona5210]

Great story. 🤘

[@miimonkey6699]

They forced the guy with the bad leg AWAY from their own shuttle? They hadn’t left the landing sight yet when they were attacked. It was only after that they followed the kids footprints TO the crashed shuttle? And they then say “no bodies maybe he survived the crash?” Uhh sir? You followed the kids footprints here? But anyway, story wasn’t bad besides that.

[@darksider111]

great story

[@emom358]

Story was ok, could use some editing, and spelling of captions was just bad.

[@MrTiberus1701]

Grogu??!!

[@klintbartle54]

88. Love these short storys. THANK YOU ❤ THEM

[@bobcampbell2486]

88 good story, I'm glad I found this site. I do love space story's and this made my day. Bob's wife.

[@steventurner8428]

I am just wondering how the aliens know what the black death is and how its going to infect them across space into their ships. I assume you know it was spread by fleas and they wont survive in space..

[@open_my_eyes3311]

Word

[@zolisassi2861]

if its truly written by you please, give your stories proper intros and worldbuilding, it doesnt have to be too much, just a few mins will do. Also please describe what the aliens look like, in most cases you just say scales and sharp teeth, that doesn't say much.

[@dertasdert2419]

ita an ai writing the story then publisher has ai narrate it th4en has ai caption it its all 100% ai only a human publishing the video and even that may be suspect

[@baldbastardo]

​@@dertasdert2419I doubt it's AI written, just an enhanced text to speech program. Apparently there's a whole genre dedicated to this type of stuff with many different contributors. So the world building has already been loosely established. It's a different sort of pulp fiction..

[@robertpopa2628]

Most of the hfy stories are ai, maybe all of them. The bones are decent in most cases, but need a human to check inconsistancies, overused tropes, and other issues.

[@melodymacken9788]

Maybe this style doesn't work for you. There's a ton of other stuff out there on YT.

[@robertpopa2628]

@@melodymacken9788 it's ai. Granted, at some point we won't be able to tell, and most do have decent bones, but you can generate hundreds of ai stories a day, and flood the streams, which is what hyf is doing.

[@devlinpereira4750]

Hilarious story,good for

[@michellehall3133]

88. Loved the story. Thanks

[@tiararowburn4507]

First the child was thrown out of a ship and abandoned by his parents then he was exiled after his father was executed?!? seriously you need to make up your mind on the plot!!!

[@open_my_eyes3311]

The AI did what it could. The human should have not trust it to make sense by itself. AI's need supervision and correction. This story has those script fails (like the unexplained double ending) because of the human component not paying enough attention :(

[@MarkSmith-zg5hq]

why or how did the shuttle land in the bioluminescent forest again this time with the kid AFTER they fled the planet in the Valiant!

[@open_my_eyes3311]

And that, my friend, is the right question

[@lifelongconservative3338]

88 Well Done.....Well Done. Great Story. I just subscribed to your channel.

[@oldman9642]

You need the text on the screen to keep pace with the spoken word!!

[@open_my_eyes3311]

And to be able to keep pace with the text on the screen, it would be advisable to make it synch to the audio and not run ahead of the voice again and again. The story has the promise to be a good one. The AI did what it could. The human component failed the AI, though.

[@scottphillips2870]

Are these AI written? Cause this one makes no sense.

[@open_my_eyes3311]

Agreed. Sounds great until one pays attention to the words and the faulty logic and the double-ending situation that no one bothered to correct :(

[@bigunone]

Who sent the radio message? In the tradition of the valiant Cpt Kirk he leads the away team; not going to happen the Capt. is responsible for the ship period. Marines are who leave the ship Hmm they don't even bind Hawkins wounds?

[@KandyKane999]

There are enough plot holes in this story it could do double duty as a colander...

[@anonygent]

Should have worked on the AI pic a little more... the story is set in a forest, but the picture is of a desert.

[@edspencer7121]

Poor R2D2

[@mikemoscato2995]

Halkins,rodreguwz,stay frosty?stealing the characters and language from the movie ailens are we?😅

[@garymathena2125]

Its Yoda!!!

[@LoganJohnson-lm2bh]

Subscribe or you'll take my Dog ? I think not .in human years he is 88

[@Steve-yk5jx]

but why 2 endings to the same story

[@Spirit612]

Loved this story! 88

[@reesofraft4166]

if you have AI read something and display the text - at least write it in a good english.

[@malahammer]

How is your second language? 100% perfect I suppose.....better than YOUR English??

[@reesofraft4166]

@@malahammer english is my third language, but there are some very bad mistakes that most first graders can point out. I"m not saying the story is bad. just the ai writing on screen.

[@Wise4HarvestTime]

I think AI wrote this and AI read it. It's a long string of cliches. Nothing special

[@allenhamilton6688]

That story really didn't make much sense. Why didn't Zagon just destroy the Earth ship. He'd have the perfect excuse for doing so.

[@damnhandy]

Eighty-eight!

[@notcherbane3218]

Okay the premise of this is kind of dumb human saving an alien child nothing wrong with that but it sounds like he's just outside of a city of his own species and while I don't know if it's a city or a large village you would figure out if possibly a hundred or a thousand of his own kind that one of them would come to get the kid why would you send a SOS about one of your own kids near your own town or village that part really wasn't clear, this would have made a lot more sense if say an abandoned space station partially damaged or a derelict shipped damage with the parents killed or a crashed spaceship on an abandoned planet with limited life support something similar that would make a lot more sense this scenario is really bizarre but I do enjoy the premise.

[@fredmaxwell9619]

I really get tired of the miss spelling/changed spelling of names. (Xantar-Xanthor changed spelling I guess, so annoying)) (Xyloth-islet WTF). I enjoy the stories but this changed spelling happens continuously in the stories.

[@Jagabot_Esq.]

AI isn't that smart ...yet. Give it another ten years before it takes over the world, right now it's learning how to spell and speak.

[@brucewelty7684]

the whole discontinuity is disturbing. A little brat in a forest full of carnivores? and it survives??

[@JonBeowulf]

Author needs to focus on the point of the story. Random encounters with random creatures followed by an anti-climactic showdown followed by overly dramatic rescue (with the enemy watching) creates a meandering and annoying tale.

[@PabloCruise9398]

No need for the huge captions.😊

[@jeffclark2869]

07 Captain James Thompson

[@brucewelty7684]

disjointed SHEET

[@Wise4HarvestTime]

I suspect this long string of cliches was written and read by AI. Nothing special

[@michaelagin7076]

Poorly down story

[@thomasmccabe-lw9hg]

88, good story.

[@Reshtarc]

Eighty eight.

[@open_my_eyes3311]

Apologies. I feel I would be failing this channel if I don't point out the elephant in the room. We like the stories in this channel but this one is an uncomplete product. We are failing the channel if we don't point out a few things to help keep the good quality of future stories. I don't mean to give advice when it's not needed. I've liked previous stories, but the lack of care shown for this one during it's making, with all the contradictions and even an unexplained double-ending situation saddens me. Like, why bother telling us that the shuttle reunited with the ship in orbit and headed home with the protagonist alive and well?? And then continue narrating seamlessly that the shuttle, for some unknown reason, is back downside, landing on the same spot of the alien planet, thus endangering the child without explanation?? Why tell us the hero of the story manages to escape with the child to space?? And then magically reappear on the alien planet's surface only to die?? I'm not against the strategy of showing several possible endings. If that was the intention here, I'm not saying anything new or extraordinary: it should be hinted the reason behind the logic of ending the story using multiple endings. Like, maybe he was dreaming one of the 2 endings present here? Pretty basic stuff. But there's no hint or explanation offered. Makes me wonder if there is even a human supervising the AI/ AIs anymore. Please don´t let the quality decay like this. For the sake of the channel and it's subscribers, it's better to not publish a story that is not ready yet. Thank you for getting to the end of my longer-than planned comment

[@stateofthearts]

88, Looking for more!

[@autopartsmonkey7992]

i gotta admit,,,this one is pretty crap...worst one yet...sorry.

[@DawnAdams-d5i]

impractical drivel

[@Jagabot_Esq.]

AI written garbage.

[@truebluepatriot2739]

💙🇺🇲 "88"...🤪

[@sanseiru]

88. Quite ennoyable. Thanks

[@samueljones6021]

Thank You 🙏🙏 88