Fixing Jurassic World Dominion

[@RazorRex]

My first video with the new intro! Besides the given, what other references were you able to discover in my fixed version of Jurassic World: Dominion? Update: my thoughts have changed on Jurassic World Dominion and I did a video coming forward with it: kzbin.info/www/bejne/mJ7Zoqxmftl3rqs

[@RazorRex]

@Jurassic Hero LOL!

[@markcobuzzi826]

​@Jurassic Hero So in other words, JW Dominion would be doing what Godzilla 1998 did for Siskel and Ebert, only if they actually followed Siskel’s advice and took “advantage of having the monster either eat or squash us”.

[@juliancar5700]

​@@RazorRex I had the idea of someone trying to take a selfie with both the Allosaurus and Carnotaurus. Only for the flash to go on and anger both therapods leading to their demise.

[@juliancar5700]

​@@RazorRexWhat about include real life people getting chomped ? Such as Charlie Kirk ( A politician who denies science ) getting eaten by a pair of Metriacanthosaurus for running over their nest. Or Ron DeSantis getting eaten by a Spinosaurus ( Not the JP3 one but a new one with different coloration) since he was near its territory.

[@RazorRex]

@@juliancar5700 We should have parodies of them not the real people.

[@rex-rant4322]

I like your version of this movie. I'd buy two of them.

[@JeremyJamesPrutchick]

These were some clever ideas! I especially liked your idea of bringing in DX and having Maisie be the source of the cure! I personally would've had the movie focus more on the dinosaurs trying to adapt to the world, and everything that comes with it (attacks, ecosystem changes, black market, hunting, etc). I'd keep the end result the same where they learn to adapt and coexist, but I'd just have more scenes filling in the gaps that Dominion left.

[@RazorRex]

Thanks!

[@JeremyJamesPrutchick]

@@RazorRex NP! I added more to my comment, but it was after you liked it, so I'm not sure if you saw the rest of it!

[@RazorRex]

@@JeremyJamesPrutchick I saw it!

[@alexallen9640]

I like your choices, also the fan service part made me laugh. I also like how you had Alan say "Some of the worst things imaginable have been done with the best intentions" to Maisie. Another thing I like how you had Ornitholestes for the opening. 🙂👍🦕🦖

[@RazorRex]

Thanks!

[@margogoralski6294]

Goodness gracious! This is by far one of the greatest takes on this movie I've seen yet. It fixes so many of the issues with the current film and gives so many things a more conclusive end. Honestly, just add some additional "dinosaurs in our world" scenes to the beginning (like in Fallen Kingdom and Battle at Big Rock), and maybe like a Spinosaurus and Pachycephalosaurus to Malta and BOOM! Near perfection. I also agreed with your take on the fan service and call backs.

[@RazorRex]

Like the idea of the Spinosaurus in the ending montage.

[@margogoralski6294]

@@RazorRex As do I.

[@juliancar5700]

5:10 Another scene you could add is to have the Giganotosaurus attack a group of Nasutoceratops and have the Giga eat then leave the bodies there. As a nod to the " Its killing for sport " line from JW.

[@Braint-lr6uf]

Let's ignore Giganotosarus wasn't a psychotic hybrid

[@mveedub7562]

I really loved this rewrite for JWD. Although in my opinion there’s absolutely nothing wrong with this, there are a few things I would do differently. Firstly, I would make the prologue more accurate (e.g. Dreadnoughtus replaced with Alamosaurus), but I would still keep the giga. Then when we get to the scene where Sattler and Grant are in the dig site, Grant would say that they found the bones of a giganotasaurus dating back to the Maastrichtian . Also I would replace Moros with Pectinodon and make it so it can mimic voices. When Ramsay is touring Allan and Ellie Around Biosyn, he goes over to the Moros turned Pectinodon and Says “Dodgson” and the Pectinodon would repeat it. Later in Dodgson’s death scene - while he’s walking out of the monorail - he hears something or someone calling his name. He looks around frantically and see’s a Pectinodon standing on a hill behind him. He laughs in relief since it’s a relatively small creature. It continues to call his name and eventually, he realises that it has a weird look in its eyes. It has been infected by DX. Then more infected Pectinodon join the hill and some call his name again. In a moment of panic, he runs frantically in the darkness, and eventually falls down a hill and breaks his ankle, all the while he hears “Dodgson, Dodgson, Dodgson” echoing through the night. Then they soon catch up to him. Then he is bitten by them and infected by the Troodontids. He screams out into the forest as he dies a slow, painful death.

[@RazorRex]

I like your idea with the setup and payoff.

[@mveedub7562]

Thanks

[@notnicknock8581]

This was really well done. Sad it couldn’t have been a reality. What I would give to see your revision unfold on the big screen😍

[@RazorRex]

Thanks!

[@SHINOBI-03]

In trying to fix this movie I honestly forgot about the DX. I was thinking about putting more focus on dinosaur-related plot and having Maisie a more central figure just so I can write the locusts out.

[@RazorRex]

Alright. That’s a good idea too! Thanks for watching!

[@ParkRanger2000]

Oh wow, hey man. It's been awhile since I've seen you around on YT.

[@juliancar5700]

​@@RazorRex Another idea is to have Maisie's identity out in the world and is wanted for her actions. Like No Way Home in a way , sort of.

[@Casual_guy1234]

YEAH, NO MORE LOCUSTS

[@pika_1_859]

There should have been a scene where massie is killed by the indoraptor but she wakes up screaming in her bed

[@IAkaksjdjtjeidi]

I've always wanted a scene where Blue and Beta meet the jp3 raptors :D

[@RazorRex]

So did I and with the reveal of JP3 raptors in the mainland on the Dino Tracker website I figured I would have this happen!

[@Vredood]

I feel Soyona Santos should’ve gotten more screen time as she was a pretty good villain, maybe a scene in Biosyn where she and Claire have rematch which would be started by Soyona trying to shoot Macy with a shot of morphine, an eleventh hour attempt at capturing her, and Claire would fight her, ending up in Soyona’s fate, similar to Molly and Bellatrix’ duel in Harry Potter and the Deathly Hallows Part 2.

[@jacobbelow4136]

Sorry, I'm late to the part here! I've been busy with getting some things prepared for the holidays, including a bunch of art projects and commissions! Anyways, it was really great and interesting your alternate version of Dominion, and the ways that you would rewrite it (including the idea of the dinosaurs finding themselves in the midst of their own pandemic) to make it live up to the hype all the more while keeping in the bits of fan service the worked in the film, like the kiss between Grant and Sadler, the JP logo image reference, and Dodgson's demise (even making the latter all the more satisfying actually). And the closing line that you brought up here would very much be something I imagine Ian Malcom could narrate the closing of the movie off with.I can't say I really have a whole lot to argue here. Very interesting, BTW, how you brought up Exodus and the way it could easily have played into the movie. (Especially nice mention of the character Aaron and that being a nod to Goldblum playing said character in 'Prince of Egypt'!) On a side note, since you and Mark Cobuzzi now have frequent back-and-fourth conversations (at least on your videos here), have you seen any of the videos/playlists on his channel? Like how he's done his own personal hypothetical rewrite for how he would do a Resident Evil movie, as opposed to the Wes Anderson versions?

[@RazorRex]

Thanks! I'm not the most familiar with the Resident Evil franchise but I'll be sure to check his work out.

[@jacobbelow4136]

@@RazorRex He also did his own playlist on his hypothetical idea for a live-action remake of the Hunchback of Notre Dame, where he comes up with his own telling of the story rooted with Disney's version while pulling in some elements and influence from the original Victor Hugo novel (as well as the stage adaptations of the animated movie that are even darker). It might not be the way Disney ends up doing it, but his version is a very interesting watch I think.

[@markcobuzzi826]

Thanks for giving my channel a shout-out. To update both you and RazorRex on my content, I am so much closer to finishing my "Game of Thrones" video essay, despite all of my delays. The end product came to be about 1 hour and 48 minutes long, and all I need to do now is finish adding background music for my final Segments #8, #9, and #10. After that, it should be ready to be uploaded. As far as my projects afterwards go, I intend to finally finish Part 2 of my Top 20 Favorite RE Bosses project, then focus on finishing my Hypothetical RE2 PowerPoint outlines to turn those into a video playlist. Now that I have experience making full video essays, however, I plan to share any future ideas for a Resident Evil movie series adaptation, in the same format as my Game of Thrones video. That format would likely be far more accessible than having people reading through bunches of PowerPoint slideshows with clips/sounds/music thrown in. Given that, I plan to even start those video essays out with updated summaries of my RE1+RE2 playlists, so people won't necessarily have to watch all of those.

[@jacobbelow4136]

@@markcobuzzi826 I’m looking forward to them!

[@LBTElectricDinoOnline]

Great work partner and I definitely agree with your ideas on Jurassic World Dominion so that way, the movie would’ve been a lot better and a lot more enjoyable than the what we got and honestly, this is what the actual movie should’ve been like so that way, more dinosaur characters could get more screen time and more appearances than those stupid bugs known as locusts. This is the movie we would’ve got and it would’ve been so much better than the actual movie we’ve got in 2022 and I really hope these ideas could happen in the new Jurassic movie or series in the franchise. Great work partner and hopefully, Klayton Fioriti and Alex Popp would be very proud of your ideas and analyzing of your ideas for the Jurassic franchise and keep it up. As always, Take It Easy and Life Finds A Way.

[@RazorRex]

Thanks!

[@LBTElectricDinoOnline]

@@RazorRex, you’re welcome partner and keep it partner.

[@abrown5204]

This just works, I don’t have much to say besides it’s gold. Rexy died, yet left a monarchy, Wu and Dodgson got what they deserved, both creating the dinosaurs, and being the saboteur of all saboteurs. This is just pure gold.

[@RazorRex]

@@abrown5204 Thanks!

[@tylerquade5385]

Your version of Jurassic World Dominion blew me away

[@RazorRex]

Thanks!

[@tylerquade5385]

@@RazorRex you are welcome

[@ParkRanger2000]

As much as I really like Dominion, it really did feel so underwhelming. VERY UNDERWHELMING. It should have focused more on having the Park and World characters interact more together in the third act of the Film. The movie should have been three hours long, to be honest. I was also think the DX Virus was gonna be a new huge issue in the Film and Biosyn was gonna try to "save the world" but they would have made it purposely worse. And I DEFINITELY agree that some of the Main Characters should have died, like Ian Malcolm. But yeah, movies out there, nothing we can do but hope we get some better storytelling and plot for future Films.

[@kaixy3]

4:19 let's be honest I would have written giga have sad backstory He was experiment that has been living alone in a cage. It was experimented on for years like even worse than irex having a hate fir human made his mother nd go crazy. Kill everything (I mean not everytime but it would be like spino). It's other subl ngs were killed in front of him and had to kill one of them to put them out out of their misery (the other sibling were born later). Now he is in the wild his hate fir humans has gone to an extreme level that he even kills dinosaurs for no reason at all (this part of his personality is from indo) And how would have showed it by having to delete the Cretaceous prologue and add a original story of giga to add more to his character. But audience don't care because some dinosaurs is a villain they always see it like villain.

[@João-u8b]

It would be a better ending if the Giganotosaurus was defeated(but not Killed) by Rexy and the other T-Rexs, and Giganotosaurus lost its position as the Alpha Predator of the Valley. They could've showed the Injured Giganotosaurus roaming in Biosyn's Valley at the end of the Movie. Zeb DID NOT deserved to Die

[@kaixy3]

@@João-u8b justice for zeb, well what do you think about this rewrite of his character?

[@skyylerkingery98]

I actually agree this one, I don't know what Universal were thinking have they readed the novels and take inspiration from them? And I was also thinking about killing Rexy off because well she's very old, because T-Rex can only live around 30 years, I understand she's mascot of franchise but they still need to kill her off so now I can see the problems with it and why some people hate it, but I still like it and had great time with it.

[@RazorRex]

Thanks for watching!

[@skyylerkingery98]

@@RazorRex np

[@zillafilmsstudios854]

@@skyylerkingery98hey what’s up

[@PoppCulture94]

Thank you for the credit! Much appreciated! This does sound like it would make for a better movie. I do like the thought of it ending on that somewhat ambiguous note. Though personally, I think a more definitive resolution to the emergence of dinosaurs in the world does a better service to the characters, especially Maisie. It may be less Crichton-esque, but the movies have always toned down the bleakness of the novels a bit. Before I make it official that I'm going to write a full alternative version, I'm going to study up on some science to see if I can make all my ideas seem at least semi-realistic. But what I have in mind is that Dr. Wu starts out trying to make a solution that would wipe all the dinosaurs out, but may have serious side effects on humans. He believes Maisie's DNA can perfect it. Maisie starts out resistant after getting abducted, warms up to Wu when she realizes they both want the same thing, and then more hesitant again after Wu gives her the details (she wants to believe that there's a way for man and dinosaurs to coexist). When everyone else gets there, Maisie insists that they help Wu. As they talk things over in a lab, Ellie gets the idea to rework the solution into a large manufactured plant that would serve as dinosaur repellent for towns and neighborhoods that are potentially vulnerable to dino attacks. And actually, as this rewrite is meant to be the solution to the end of Fallen Kingdom, and that movie had parallels to Genesis and the fall of man, I plan to incorporate more savior allegories, as opposed to Exodus parallels. Like towards the end, when Dodgson is basically unloading dinosaurs on the heroes to keep them from escaping with their discoveries of his current and past crimes, Malcolm is seriously wounded and everyone is trying to move him while a pack of raptors is after them. Wu decides to hand them the formula to produce the plant and sacrifices himself to buy them some time. The raptors nab him by the arms, tugging him into a cross position right before the alpha tears into him. Unmistakable savior symbolism, but the part that's flipped (in accordance with playing God) is that it's the sinner paying the price for his own sins. I had already planned on working in that novel speech from Malcolm.

[@RazorRex]

Your welcome. I like your ideas too!

[@Sableantelopeenjoyer]

All else I would have changed is instead of Rexy having offspring and dying. During the final battle After Rexy is knocked out and Zeb roars at the original characters. We hear two other familiar T. rex roars. We then see two t redes emerge from the forest with lightning striking and then revealing that they are the Buck and Doe rex. The two fight Zeb but Zeb overpowers the couple. And Wu does the samething he does in your fix and gets killed. The remaining characters then board the helicopter as it starts to storm. Zeb manages to throw the doe onto a ground, Buck rex rushes to save his mate, but Zeb counter attacks the buck and throws him on the ground. We then see Rexy unconscious, lightening strikes triggering flashbacks. And Rexy gets back up and Saves the Buck and doe, then the three rexes fight Zeb and take him out with an epic version of the Jurassic Park theme playing. The trio of rexes then all roar in victory. Another change I would make is when The Biosynthesis employees are evacuated, Dodgson tells them to go to the courtyard, but he activates the brain chips of the Pyroraptors, Dimetrodons Therizinosaurus and Zeb to kill the employees so they don’t expose him. And after in your version of his death when he is throw down a hill and infected with DX, a Dimetrodon Emerges from the brush and proceededs to tear Dodgson’s face off. But we only see it from a shadow, as I don’t think a pg13 movie could physically show it.

[@RazorRex]

Great idea. I went with Rexy beating Zeb on her own because it WAS her fight and I felt like she should have died because many film finales have ended with key characters dying so Jurassic should have done the same. I thought that Dodgson should have been infected with DX because that would be a fate worse than getting eaten.

[@tylerquade5385]

@@RazorRex those are excellent points

[@kaijukid_films]

Rexys death at the end was very similar how i wanted dominion to end, but i really like the sad ending for rexy.

[@Casual_guy1234]

Honestly, we kinda all want rexy to die peacefuly

[@wolfpredator155]

For this movie, i make some changes in JW and JWFK: These are my scripts for each movie using the same base 1. Jurassic World. The velociraptors almost kill the guy that fall in the paddock, they make huge injuries. There is no kiss scene (the jurassic park trilogy had kiss scenes that were cut in the final versions of the movies) Masrani when discussing with Wu about Indominus, they mention the creation of illegal species and the collapse of Isla Sorna. Masrani brings the remaining dinosaurs to transport to Nublar to save money on creating these dinosaur species (including Junior). When Claire goes to the vet unit, she kicks off her heels and puts on some boots. Velociraptors have muzzles when they hunt the Indominus. After Indominus escapes, some soldiers saw the muzzles and realized that the velociraptors ripped them off. The final battle is the same until Indominus knocks Rexy down, when Indominus is going to kill Rexy, shock tremors are heard, another T-Rex appears, a male (junior as an adult), he manages to give Indominus more battle by being 18 years, then Rexy and Junior fight together to push the Indominus into the lagoon, here I-Rex's arms are ripped off or just one. (It makes more sense for 2 animals of the same species make a tag team rather than rex/raptor). The two T-Rex retreat from the area due to the injuries inflicted by the Indominus. Owen, Claire, Gray and Zach think Blue is dead (this is for a scene from Fallen Kingdom) At the end of the movie, the 2 rex climb onto the helipad and roar claiming the island. 2- Jurassic World Fallen Kingdom: Earth one is accompanied by two mercenaries. Rexy, approaching, kills one and eats it, the other mercenary and the operator escape towards the stairs. The remaining mercenary is about to reach the ladder when Junior kills him by attacking him from the side, then anyway (note: the lagoon is in the center of the island and the Mosasaurus escapes into the sea through a tunnel system) When Mills shows a photo of Blue, Claire is shocked, because she thought Blue was dead. At the bar, Owen asks why can't the dinosaurs go to Isla Sorna instead of the Sanctuary, Sorna still belongs to Masrani and can't be used to relocate the dinosaurs. When Nublar's final scene is shown, seven thunders in the ash clouds. There is no kiss between Owen and Claire. Junior and Rexy kill Mills together. 3- Jurassic World Dominion: The film begins with the Cretaceous scene, which is going to be “exact”, as far as it goes. The Dreagnothus scene is changed to Alamosaurus, the oviraptor scene is changed to a mammal, the Nasutoceratops scene is changed to a Triceratops scene. A male t-rex hunts an Edmontosaurus,(not Iguanodon) and gives it to a female. Then another male shows up and they fight over the female, the fight is just like in the movie (male t-rex have much longer and more conspicuous feathers) The drive-in scene is with Junior (since in this version Rexy died of old age), but Junior was carrying a dead animal in his mouth Biosyn's introduction scene instead of being with Lewis Dogson is with George Baselton who replaces Ramsay Cole and the Quetzalcoalus is changed to some Pteranodon in the news. Instead of locusts, the childrens see a herd of Dryosaurus eating a part of the plantation. Then the Dryosaurus get nervous and suddenly a carnivorous dinosaur appears. As far as the children are hiding, the carnivore had killed two specimens. One that takes the carnivore and another that throws against the barn. Ellie arrives at the farm and when she analyzes the dead dinosaur, she is shocked at the makeup of the DNA. When she goes to see Alan, he identifies the dinosaur as Dryosaurus and is shocked. Alan mentions that this species of dinosaur does not belong on the InGen or Masrani list. Ellie tells him that this specimen also has a percentage of locust DNA. She comments that Biosyn must be creating their own dinosaurs so they can release them all over the world and have the government pay them to house them in the valley. She also tells him that these new dinosaurs don't eat biosyn-created products Alan and Ellie while in Pennsylvania observe 3 Tyrannosarus Rex infants (Junior and Rexy offpirngs, 2 males and 1 female). And that they are preparing to transport them to the valley with their father. George Baselton greets Alan and Ellie and explains about biosyn. (Here Alan sees a Brachiosaurus) After explaining about livestock for predators, we move on to a shot of a male Tyrannosaurus Rex with feathers (no Giganotosaurus here). After Alan, Ellie, and Ian talk in the lobby, Dogson goes to the labs and is seen talking to Henry Wu and Howard King about dinosaurs with locust DNA. Lewis is happy because they have made money, not only from Biosyn products, but also from rich people who asked him to make dinosaurs for them. Howard King is against everything they are creating, as he says that they are making a serious mistake, as he suspects that accelerated growth will cause the dinosaurs to reproduce very quickly and cause a collapse in the ecosystem. Wu tells him that a solution to this problem will be found. In the Malta scene, the Atrociraptors are replaced with another kind of scene using Giganotosaurus (JWE or TLW design) The Moros Intrepidus scene does not appear in the film. George Baselton tells them about the facilities. The video Maisie watches, instead of being shown to her by Henry Wu, is shown to her by Howard King. According to information Howard compiled, Charlotte was killed by The Big One. That caused Benjamin to clone her. He did it in 2014 after 21 years of failure. Maise has a growth spurt, so her grandfather cured her after implanting a repair gene into her. Howard wants to study it so he can find a solution to the dinosaur problem. But Dogson wants to study it to understand the human cloning process and do more business with it. Alan and Ellie are in the sub-levels and there they observe all kinds of experiments (rabies experiments, drug experiments, food product experiments and the creation of new species of dinosaurs, here locusts would be seen in the distance) Alan and Ellie manage to take samples and photos of everything that is going on.When Maisie escapes, Dogson activates the alarm, this causes the Moros Intrepidus to attack Ellie and Alan, due to the noise that the alarm causes. Here they meet Maisie. When they escape in the Hyperloop, Howard finds them and leaves with them, saying that he will testify against Biosyn. Before reaching the caves, Ellie encourages Maisie by telling her that despite being a clone, she is still a person and that it is not the fault of the dinosaurs to have been created that way. The scenes of Claire, Owen and Kalya from the plane until they find the dead deer are the same, except i change the Pyroraptor for the Quetzal.In the forest Junior approaches the area with the 3 infants. One of the male infants wanders off, then the feathered male T-Rex appears and kills the infant. Junior tries to confront him, but in the end he retreats with the 2 remaining infants. In the caves, Ellie loses the evidence due to the Pyroraptor attack. Here they are rescued by Ian and George. When Dogson fired Ian, George decides to help him rescue his friends. Claire's scene with the Dilophosaurus instead of being strangled, Owen hits it with a stick and Kayla electrocutes him. (There's only one Dilophosaurus here) Lewis begins to destroy the evidence and some of the dinosaurs in the lab escape and cause the fire When the 2 groups meet, more Dilophosaurus appear, when they are about to attack, they get scared and run away. What happens is that shock tremors begin to be heard and the male feathered t-rex appears. As they hide behind the car, Howard King stands still thinking about the vision theory, but is killed by the t-rex. Here George sacrifices himself so they can escape (Ian Malcolm doesn't do the spear scene and there's no zilla flare). The attack is the same. Lewis talks to Wu. Dogson blames Wu for everything that has happened, saying that he is the one responsible for the problems with the dinosaurs and leaves him behind. A character then questions why the T-Rex attacked Howard, and Grant explains that the vision theory is incorrect and that the Rex had excellent binocular vision. As Ellie and Claire go to restore the power, they are attacked by Moros Intrepidus. When Wu meets with the protagonists, he explains that he found a solution to the dinosaur problem thanks to the work of Howard King, so he leaves with them. As they are about to escape, Junior appears with the two infants. Just behind the protagonists appears the feathered T-Rex (because when they activated the emergency system to collect the dinosaurs, they cataloged them by species). Junior and the Feathered Rex face off in the same way. When Junior is knocked unconscious and Ellie goes after Owen, Claire and Maisie, the feathered Rex is distracted. He then hears the sounds of the 2 infants, as he approaches to kill them, Junior reacts to the sounds and prevents him from eating them. In the end, Junior, with a combination of bite force and impalement, kills the feathered rex. Alan and Ellie start a relationship, but they don't kiss. When the final monologue is seen, Junior is seen with his 2 children as teenagers and Alan say the phase of Jurassic Park and ends by saying the phrase "at the end we have to coehixist" after the speech and the film ends. These are some changes, which I think would make the movie much better. Blue and Delta's scenes are the same. Dogson's death is the same. Dogson wants Beta to study the I.B.R.I.S program because she is young and Blue has gone wild.

[@RazorRex]

Quite some ideas you got there.

[@wolfpredator155]

@@RazorRex using the same basic plot( a kidnapped and an investigacion), i think i make a movie that feels more jurassic

[@juliancar5700]

​@@RazorRex ​An idea I had recently was have Jeffrey encounter the Pyroraptors while trying to escape. Dodgson sent him with some DNA samples to continue selling to The Black Market at Malta and to continue Biosyn if Dodgson gets caught. But before he can leave he sees an unchipped Pyroraptor sleeping in an open crate. He tries to close it but it awakes the feathered dinosaur. It knocks him down. He tries using a cattle prod but it only makes things worse. We hear an off screen scream and the chatter of DNA samples. This is a nod to the opening of the first JP film but where Joffrey Brown was the victim , now Biosyn's Jeffrey is the attacker on the raptor rather than the victim of the attack.

[@Realfm0lk]

Why would the raptors wear muzzles if they were going to attack the Indominus. Wouldn’t biting the Indominus be effective aswell? And also if they wore the muzzels and could take them off after being manipulated by the I-rex wouldn’t they have just taken off the uncomfortable leather muzzles after they were set free to track down the Indominus?

[@wolfpredator155]

@@Realfm0lk the raptors were used to track indominus, not to attack her.

[@BluLightningMusic]

For Wu I would give him his novel death, but with Atrociraptors instead.

[@kadenbowdige2896]

To be perfectly honest with you, I would like this version better than the one that we got!

[@dozierworld4350]

In a similar version of the final battle, I'd have both of the animals accurately evenly matched and the fight would be somewhat brief yet even more brutal and climactic, as the two go back and forth as the aging rex targets the young gigas weaknesses and the giga shlashes back with his teeth and the occasional claw. The battle would end in a draw slash clif hanger to show that these things are just animals being animals.

[@julyakacarrie6260]

The Giga was more like a bully than an antagonist.

[@RazorRex]

I get what your saying but more screentime would have been better. And I would have preferred a Joker Zeb.

[@julyakacarrie6260]

@@RazorRex And more backstory, why Biosyn created it and why Biosyn had the idea to make it fight with Rexy.

[@connersmemes9172]

I know I'm a little late to the party but this is actually Epic and should have been like this No locust more DINOSAURS!!!!

[@RazorRex]

Thanks!

[@connersmemes9172]

@@RazorRex 👍

[@jurassicpark1fan920]

The catalyst of Dr. Henry Wu's role in Dominion should be either creating the locusts or some other genetically modified threat due to the fact Wu is a geneticist.

[@blakegordon606]

I think it would have been cool if they used the DX disease. I heard speculation that it was the original thing instead of locusts, but the pandemic forced them to rewrite the script.

[@RazorRex]

Interesting. If that were the case they should have just stuck with it.

[@blakegordon606]

I know that people wanted The Lord of the Rings to change the name for The Two Towers after the attack on the World Trade Center, so something like this wouldn’t surprise me.

[@beaufryer2042]

That Zelda music *chefs kiss*

[@RazorRex]

Thanks. I mostly used music from the Dino Crisis games but I figured I would use some other songs and those two came to mind for the scenes.

[@RiseNRunEntertainment]

Now if only we (the fans) can start an online movement to remake Dominion like your rewrite, similar to how the Synder Cut for Justice League happened only because its fans wanted a good film.

[@RazorRex]

I doubt that will happen.

[@RiseNRunEntertainment]

@@RazorRex I know. But your re-write is still awesome tho!

[@RazorRex]

@@RiseNRunEntertainment Thanks!

[@markcobuzzi826]

Your ideas were very different from mine, and I enjoyed listening to them. If you want, I can repost the comment I showed you earlier, so my list would be in the same spot as other people’s ideas. *And now to share some thoughts I had on your approach…* When you gave one of your new characters the last name of Levine, was that intended as a nod to the second novel? Just a smaller thing I noticed and wanted to bring up first. I liked your idea of Ian Malcolm’s speech near the end, which reminded me of Richard Attenborough’s ending statement in one of his recent nature documentaries. To paraphrase, he believes that having healthy and stabile ecosystems should not so much be seen as a requirement for saving the planet, but rather as a requirement for saving ourselves. I think that if environmental issues were framed that way more often, where the planet will endure with or without us, but we cannot survive without our biodiversity, then these issues would seem noticeably less controversial. Speaking of Biblical references, your rewrite reminded me of a certain implication that theologians commonly perceive in the first Genesis chapters. According to them, the Abrahamic faith affirms that mankind was created to have, well… “Dominion” over nature, with an important caveat that people also bear responsibility with said privilege to be proper stewards of the Earth. So mankind is said to not be subordinate to nature, while nature is not ours to disregard and abuse either. That sounds like another Biblical reference/motif which could be subtly incorporated into the narrative, especially with your Ian Malcolm speech at the end. Your reimagining of the DX disease was another interesting idea, and whether you intended it or not, it sounds like you combined the book’s DX prion disease with the book Dodgson’s failed experiments using an airborne rabies vaccine. My approach for JW Dominion does not utilize the DX disease, but I have suggested earlier that JW: Fallen Kingdom could have at least introduced DX, to establish why Isla Sorna would no longer be a viable sanctuary for Nublar’s dinosaurs. *As a last section to this comment, your DX-rabies idea has provoked me to brainstorm other ideas for your version:* 1.) Since modern birds are dinosaurs, and your version of DX is a rabies-type virus that dinosaurs are susceptible to, what if the opening could show whole fields littered with dead and spasming birds? This could be reminiscent of “The Giant Behemoth”, where the beaches are ominously littered with dead irradiated fish. 2.) What if the plot established that the DX disease evolved in the Hell Creek ecosystem of the Late Cretaceous, with T. rex being one of the few animals that evolved to combat it? They could have not only evolved a greater resistance to DX itself, but also a far greater perception and hostility towards dinosaurs which succumbed to it. That way, a T. rex could feed itself and sanitize the environment, by going after any infected dinosaurs, killing them, and safely devouring them bones and all. 3.) If the above point is incorporated, could that also lead to JW Dominion’s prologue establishing Rexy’s “ancient rivalry” as one with the DX disease itself, rather than the Giganotosaurus? For example, the last segment of the prologue could show a massive Edmontosaurus annectans succumbing to DX like the sauropod in “Primal”. It is extremely violent and destructive until a T. rex finally brings it down (not easily, though, since the deranged and sickly hadrosaur could still put up a decent fight). Later on in the movie’s climax, Zeb the Giganotosaurus could get infected, going from a dominant but reasonable predator to an enraged killing machine. This triggers both Rexy and Zeb to be far more aggressive towards each other and fight to the death.

[@RazorRex]

Those are great ideas! And yes Willard was a reference to Richard Levine.

[@markcobuzzi826]

@@RazorRex Btw, I meant to say David Attenborough, rather than his brother Richard. I guess the topic involving Jurassic Park caused the wrong brain cell to fire off, making me think of the one who played John Hammond. I believe the Netflix documentary I was thinking of was the one titled "David Attenborough: A Life on Our Planet". If you have not already seen it, I highly recommend it.

[@AndrewDavis-sj6mb]

A very long comment there @markcobuzzi826 Still haven't seen Dominion I only saw the Final battle scene.

[@jjproduction297]

Awesome video, Razor! :D 👍 You have a good idea :)

[@RazorRex]

Thanks!

[@jjproduction297]

@@RazorRex You're welcome! :D

[@Casual_guy1234]

18:42 add in "we are falling past the edge of chaos into it, or maby the opposite,"

[@markcobuzzi826]

I am reposting my current list of ideas for possible improvements/rewrites, with a some additions/edits... *Overarching Plots* 1.) Rather than inventing an ancient rivalry between T-Rex and Giga, I would have the upcoming conflict be more a personification of InGen vs. BioSyn, orchestrated by Dodgson. 2.) I would also have BioSyn planning to sell its batch dinosaurs embryos to black markets across the world, pouring gasoline onto the fire that is dinosaurs' unchecked spread around the world. That way, the dinosaurs are actively driving the ecological stakes too and not just the fictional prehistoric locusts. 3.) Maisie could have had a similar plot in Dominion, without retconning her backstory from Fallen Kingdom so much. 4.) Dodgson could have more chances to be ruthlessly threatening, and our protagonists even learn that Dodgson was responsible for Jurassic Park’s collapse. 5.) I know Red Raptor Writes debunked a lot of the discourse surrounding “The Frog Fallacy”. But as a compromise, I am going with the idea of John Hammond’s dinosaurs were meant to be accurate in-universe, but only for what the characters would have known at the time. Many inaccuracies will just be treated as artistic license for that universe, while others are attributed to the dinosaur clones being imperfect replicas, based on in-universe outdated information or BioSyn’s artificial embellishment. *JW Dominion Prologue* 1.) The narrative is framed with a recurring caption that starts out earlier in the Cretaceous, then counts down by “X Million Years Ago”. After a glimpse of 66 MYA, it suddenly jumps to 0 MYA and shows Rexy at the drive-in theater. 2.) To showcase the same variety of creatures without creating too many anachronisms, the animals could be shown in an order that aligns more with the captioned countdown. Also, more animals like the Pteranodon and Ankylosaurus could be given a slightly different design in the flashback, besides Rexy’s ancestor. 3.) An ancestor of JP3’s Spinosaurus could make a cameo hunting some Onchopristis, with its design being a compromise between the fictional and realistic version (like having JP3’s iconic roar, color scheme, and fin design, but with the real one's shorter legs, paddle-like tail, and snout crest). 4.) The Giganotosaurus’ ancestor could appear in its natural habitat, with a slightly more natural design than BioSyn’s Giga. 5.) Rexy’s genetic donor could instead be a T-Rex parent with its offspring (complete with The Lost World sound-effects), who just brought down a Triceratops. As the family eats, they witness the asteroid breaching Earth's atmosphere. An earthquake ensues, and the adult fatally tumbles down into a ditch. As the K-T Extinction event begins, a mosquito begins to hover over the dead adult. *Maisie’s Backstory* 1.) If they planned ahead more during Fallen Kingdom, it could have just been stated that Charlotte Lockwood died from a genetic disease to begin with, rather than a car crash. 2.) Maisie is still cloned after her biological mother’s death, and it is her surrogate mother who fixes her genetic disease. 3.) To both explain the surrogate mother’s absence and give Dodgson more motivation to kidnap Maisie, it could be revealed that the fallout between Hammond and Lockwood made the woman take her research to BioSyn. But she uncovered something disturbing about Dodgson’s criminal activities, feared that her invention could be dangerous in his hands, erased all her research, and disappeared (with the unconfirmed possibility that Dodgson got her killed, to give him more of his book counterpart’s edge). *Use of Beta and Feathered Raptors* 1.) Instead of Atrociraptors and a Pyroraptor, there could simply be a more purified batch of Velociraptor clones that are fully feathered. Those feathered Velociraptors take on the Atrociraptors’ role, while the Pyroraptor scene on the frozen lake can now be easily cut. 2.) While Maisie is trafficked further to BioSyn’s facility, Beta is left behind in the Malta black market, to be trained as either an attack animal or cage-fighting animal. Owen and Claire find Beta in a small enclosure, alongside a juvenile feathered raptor. 3.) Owen and Claire take both Beta and the feathered baby with them. With Beta back in their hands, they focus on escaping Malta to rescue Maisie, bringing the two young Velociraptors with them. 4.) Towards the very end, Alan Grant gets to see both Beta and her feathered companion side-by-side. The former gives him a better experience with his past, while latter makes his lifelong research feel even more validated. *T-Rex vs. Giga Conflict* 1.) Dodgson plans to stage a fight between InGen’s Rexy and BioSyn’s own Giganotosaurus for the world’s black markets to see. Dodgson intends to have the Giga win, as an egotistical sales pitch for BioSyn overtaking InGen's legacy. 3.) To make JP3 more relevant, Dodgson could state that he got the idea from hearing about the Spinosaurus killing a T-Rex. He wanted to replicate that, using another large carnivore which has not already been replicated by InGen. 4.) As a test run, he uses the drones seen in Camp Cretaceous to force an Allosaurus and the Therizinosaurus encountered earlier by Claire to fight. The latter is victorious. 5.) The T-Rex vs. Giga fight happens earlier in the movie, per Dodgson’s plan. Once they are forced to fight, the Giga has the upper hand, but the seriously wounded Rexy manages to clamp down on her opponent’s leg (nod to "Dino Crisis 2"). 6.) The limping Giga more stubbornly refuses to continue fighting and finish Rexy. Dodgson gets frustrated at the prospect of a tie, and shocks the Giga harder. But then our protagonists' meddling with the security system inadvertently disrupts the drones, allowing both big predators to run amok in the climax. 7.) Both the Rex and Giga are still alive at the end, only with the latter now treating Rexy with more respect. *Miscellaneous* 1.) Ian Malcolm gets injured in the climax and spends the ending in critical condition, while high on morphine. This could both add more tension and be a nod to both books. 2.) The opening could perhaps show the Mosasaurus being successfully hunted down by Japanese whalers, who don’t want it eating up their quarry. This animal's fate presents the stakes of certain people believing the only solution is eradication. Yet, we see some juvenile Mosasaurus swimming around, implying that it reproduced asexually and the problem is still not over, like in Godzilla 1998. 3.) The ending could show Rexy ascending the pecking order among the valley's big carnivores, in a scene similar to Godzilla: KotM. It features not only a cameo of TLW's Buck and Doe, but also the Giga from earlier, JP3's Spino, and another large Allosaurus. 4.) Dr. Grant could maybe show more sentiment towards his hat in the Dimetrodon cave, referencing how the injured Billy in JP3 held onto it for him. 5.) The plane could be downed by a Pteranodon colliding with it, while the Quetzalcoatlus is introduced after the plane crashes. In a slower paced scene that initially gives no clear view of the creature, it investigates the craft by dangerously jamming its beak through the roof, while Owen and Kayla are inside.

[@RazorRex]

Alright!

[@markcobuzzi826]

​@@RazorRex I think the only gap I have in my version of JW: Dominion is that I never stated exactly how my final action sequence would end. All I stated is that both predators could be running amok in the climax. To give more detail on that, I would have the same kind of action scene as when Zeb the Giganotosaurus first endangers the group. Rexy eventually arrives on the scene and the two carnivores stare each other down once more. But by that point, the two carnivores are so badly wounded from fighting each other that they now want to leave the other alone. This could lead to an “Oh crap!” moment, where Alan Grant says “They’re not after each other anymore”, right as they both begin to stare at the humans. It would be an inversion of “This isn’t about us”. In a subversion of expectations, cast of characters now has to run from both carnivores separately trying to attack them. This would also provide a scene, in which Rexy is actively threatening our film protagonists again, for the first time since the original JP. Our characters can finally escape to the chopper, carrying a critically hurt Ian Malcolm with them, when Kayla lures the Therizinosaurus with a flare gun. The Therizinosaurus comes between the two carnivores and the humans, without noticing the latter. Since my version already has the Therizinosaurus killing an Allosaurus, the climax could simply end with the herbivore keeping the carnivores at bay, until the people escape in the chopper. We get a final shot similar to the one in the actual movie, where the Therizinosaurus makes one more threat display, the lightning illuminates all three massive theropods, and the predators finally back down.

[@taliesincoleman6569]

"Use of Beta and Feathered Raptors 1.) Instead of Atrociraptors and a Pyroraptor, there could simply be a more purified batch of Velociraptor clones that are fully feathered. Those feathered Velociraptors take on the Atrociraptors’ role, while the Pyroraptor scene on the frozen lake can now be easily cut. " small problem... if you mean the mongolian velociraptor... then they'd be about as dangerous as a fox... what about utahrpator or deinochyus? heck deinochyus could work because techically speaking... THAT IS WHAT THE JP RAPTORS ARE

[@jurassicpark1fan920]

Also, Ellie is a paleobotanist which makes more sense as to why she would show up at the farm due to the locusts destroying the crops.

[@endermanwithalowercasee]

I agree with a lot of these ideas, with Maisie and Dogson especially, but honestly the one thing I was glad the movies stayed clear of was bringing DX into it, well who knows that might become a thing in JP7, we'll see. Good video!

[@pedrosuperhero3]

These are all great ideas for fixing Dominion i mean I love the movie but even then still wouldn't hurt to add some changes and fixes. Would want to make my own changes as well but not 100% sure for either video or something else. But having DX instead of locusts sounds way better I mean a little nod to the book and also to focus on the dinosaurs. Overall great changes and honestly already had me crying for the death of Rexy.

[@RazorRex]

Thanks! When writing the part of Rexy dying I almost cried myself.

[@wingman772]

(no spoilers) The moment when you know what shows up, when you know who is hanging from another you know what, is actually awsome.

[@GODZILLA-HELL391]

I loved dominion when I first saw it in theaters and I thought it was okay the way it was BUT OMG THIS WOULD'VE BEEN THE BEST JURASSIC MOVIE EVER!

[@SuperGBros]

Awesome job mate. Still enjoyed jurassic world dominion either way

[@RazorRex]

Thanks!

[@SuperGBros]

@@RazorRex your welcome buddy

[@Tucher97]

This maybe just me but I wouldnt just have Maisies as the main focus, have Beta in the movie but remove her from the trailers, then have a few other side characters get involved, then maybe add in hints that there are other geneticists who are making hybrids, some are making them for war and others something far more harmless. Through out the movie, there is a side issue going on where there are people struggling to adapt with the dinos but there are others who are adapting very well. Heck maybe in the damn sequence, Owen and whats her name are met with a biosyn guard where you are made to think he is a side antagonist, but really is there to tell Claire and Owen are idiots and Maisy is their daughter no matter how she was made, who sort of helps out but is revealed to really be a game warden, oh and the pyroraptor makes a return, assaults the guard with a fish, or some animal just to say "yea no matter the era, there is danger in all forms. Edit: Ok so just to note, if you are reading this, this was a rambling of someone at like 11:50 PM, but thank you for reading, my point is, with the dinos in the mainland, there should be more sections where some people are struggling, while others figured stuff out, its a side focus.

[@RazorRex]

You mean Kayla Watts?

[@Tucher97]

@@RazorRex Yes, she has a simple name and a sort of major presence but I somehow forgot her name. So I thank you for correcting me.

[@lunaitor-uq9hz]

12:46 scientifically sized Dilophosaurus spotted!

[@Giga.raptor20998]

Terrifying but amazing plot can I use some parts of this on my own version of the movie made with Lego stop motion?

[@RazorRex]

Sure.

[@Giga.raptor20998]

@@RazorRex thank you so much I will mention you in the end credits.

[@RazorRex]

@@Giga.raptor20998 Thanks! I’ll look forward to it.

[@bide2505]

Ian was injured before too jp 1 14:51 so this time grant ? And also if u see Jw1 climax fight it showed the dino fight angles thru which human escaped But in JWD it showed human escape angle and thus fight was missed 😭😭

[@daffierpython7755]

I feel to add to the jp3 raptors accepting blue maybe she gets into a fight with a concavenator and gets badly wounded but not dead. Conc is the only Dino from the displays in fk to not appear in a movie yet

[@JOSH-lw2jv]

My own personal choice of actor to play Lewis Dodgson was Judge Reinhold. It was a missed opportunity for him to reunite with executive producer Steven Spielberg whom he hadn't worked with since Joe Dante's *"Gremlins"* in 1984, where Judge played the slimy Gerald Hopkins, who was more of a secondary human villain in the deleted scenes after Mrs. Deagle.

[@jessicaso2167]

There are a things I can agree on with this rewritten story of Dominion, the only thing I wouldn't like to see in Dominion if it was rewritten is seeing other new characters die immediately, because in my opinion if we get to see new characters and then just kill them off immediately before we even get to know them better feels like a waste of potential, not only that I don't think OG Jurassic Park fans ( myself included ) would you like to see the original cast dying especially Ian, also I think the writers would let Rexy long enough for fans to keep seeing her before before finally deciding that her time is up, and if she does end up dying in her last appearance I would see her having a few kids but instead of having two kids it would be better if she had three obviously one will be a boy and the other would be a girl but the third one will be another girl and she will be rightfully called rexy 2, not only that I think rexy would trust buck and doe enough for them to take care of her children, also I think rexy having mate would be another good thing and this T-Rex would be the 7th one and would be the largest of all the T-Rexes even larger than rexy and have more scars and would be much older than her, and when they do die they will have buck and doe to take care of their kids. Edit: this is just my opinion, but I do agree with some of the things you said in this video, and if you disagree I really don't care it's just my personal opinion.

[@Casual_guy1234]

12:48 novel accurate dilo, cant wait to see dodgesons death

[@rexyht2697]

this should have been the movie we got because its so good.

[@andrewcoulthard-clark]

Liked your video. Wish they had continued and expanded on 'Battle at Big Rock'...

[@JinxSanity]

Here from Deviantart 😀 Yeah the locust being the main plot was just the films biggest mistake. If I could recommend something from the 90's comics, there's a plot about a South American dictator using Raptors as weapons which easily could had been a movie by itself. Now they did touch that subject on the movie, but it was a action part device than a actual subject they should addressed on the overall impact it would had on society. God I forgot about the Giga being reference as a Joker type character and even when into the theater expected a psychotic Dino 🤣

[@RazorRex]

Thanks for watching!

[@mrjh3484]

One of the things I'd add into my version of dominion is have Owen and Claire take blue with them to save maisie and beta, So it would make blue have a lot more screen time and in Malta she could try fighting off the atrociraptors and even kill Sonoma Santos as a call back to the clever girl scene in jp 1 and I would also have blue be present in the final battle and have her and beta stay in biosyn sanctuary.

[@anthonytorresproductions]

This rewrite version of dominion is much more faithful to the novel of The Lost World DX disease, the plot of the story is great. I'll give it a 4/5.

[@edguizar1907]

I think these are the fixes that make the movie at least a 7/10 Ellie works on a farm and it gets attacked by locust which is when she finds out about them and adds more reason as to why she wants to take down biosyn Take out the Claire saving dinosaur scene and say that in Malta Claire finds a Biosyn card and that’s how they find out that biosyn took maisie or make them find the card in the beginning of the movie when Claire saves dinosaurs skipping Malta Dr Wu is the one to burn the locust realizing his mistake Alan in the end says that was one hell of a ride smiling showing he had fun, he wanted thrill in his life and that was what he got Cassidy should run away from home and when Claire looks for her they see the same poacher in the begining of the movie take her.

[@thejurassicwonder2307]

Oh shit wait...i just thought of something. You could have Dodgson die like he died in the original Lost World novel by having the dilophosaurus spraying on him, blinding him, and dragging him away. After Dodgson wakes up, he discovers he's in an underground dilophosaurus nesting era as baby dilos fist onto him alive as the adults watch. Just an idea.

[@drewm.2790]

It’s kinda comical how you came up with a way better script for a blockbuster movie from one of the biggest film companies in the world with easy access to the best writers and directors of the industry… 💀

[@RazorRex]

😅Gee thanks!

[@justyouravgmegalon]

I actually love this-

[@thejurassicwonder2816]

.... It's sad when you're idea of the movie of the jurassic franchise is better then the actual movie..

[@RazorRex]

Thanks!

[@thejurassicwonder2816]

@@RazorRex np. Then again I do blame covid for the film's problems..

[@narawilliams2429]

Jurassic World: Dominion Directed by: Guillermo del Toro Screenplay by: Guillermo del Toro, and David Koepp Written by: David Koepp Produced by: Kathleen Kennedy, and Gerald R. Molen Executive Producer: Steven Spielberg Creative Consultant by: Guillermo del Toro, and Steven Spielberg Visual effects by: ILM Animatronics by: Jim Henson's Creature Shop Cinematography: Jess Hall Score Composed by: James Newton Howard Edited by: Jeffrey Ford and Maryann Brandon Starring: Chris Pratt as Owen Grady Bryce Dallas Howard as Claire Dearing Isabella Sermon as Maisie Lockwood Sam Neill as Alan Grant Laura Dern as Ellie Sattler DeWanda Wise as Kayla Watts ????? as Aran Shoedsack BD Wong as Henry Wu Mamoudou Athie as Ramsay Cole Campbell Scott as Lewis Dodgson Scott Haze as Rainn Delacourt Dichen Lachman as Soyona Santos Dinosaurs: Tyrannosaurus Rex (Rexy, Regina and Roy) Velociraptor (Blue and Beta) Giganotosaurus (Zeb) Nasutoceratops Parasaurolophus Corythosaurus Lambeosaurus Stegosaurus Ankylosaurus Atrociraptor Pyroraptor Ornitholestes Compys Triceratops Styracosaurus Allosaurus Carnotaurus (Demon) Dreadnoughtus (Appears in the background) Therizinosaurus (Gets killed by the Giga when it was stalking Claire) Spinosaurus (Appears in Malta fighting a Carcharodontosaurus in the background) Carcharodontosaurus (Appears in Malta fighting a Spinosaurus in the background)

[@RazorRex]

@@narawilliams2429 Would love to see del Toro direct Jurassic sometime. Also great use of the Spino.

[@narawilliams2429]

@@RazorRex And would you like to see Hans Zimmer or James Newton Howard compose the score for Jurassic sometime too?

[@RazorRex]

@@narawilliams2429 Maybe. But i’m liking Michael Giacchino doing the soundtrack for the soundtrack for now. He did the soundtrack for The Lost World game BTW.

[@narawilliams2429]

Other creatures in Dominion: Pteranodon Quetzalcoatlus Dimorphodon Eudimorphodon Rhamporynchus Dimetrodon Otodus Chubutensis (replacement of the Mosasaurus)

[@idogoshen470]

This is a really cool rewrite I would love to mix mine with yours I did like the idea of Regina and Roy the big dilo and blue joining jp3 raptors I will have some changes in my rewrite and replacing the locusts with either microraptor or ornethelestise I will not kill rexy but I will have the therizinosaurus in the final battle but it later retreats badly injured but still awesome rewrite you can do also a rewrite for fallen Kingdom

[@RazorRex]

Thanks for watching. I actually plan to do a follow-up video explaining my thought process and revealing the references.

[@idogoshen470]

@@RazorRex no problem anytime

[@Stellar09_]

Almost perfect But still good job 👍

[@RazorRex]

Thanks!

[@UltimateYoutuber999]

beautiful🥰

[@RazorRex]

Thanks!

[@UltimateYoutuber999]

@@RazorRex ur welcome :)

[@tylerquade5385]

That was AWESOME!❤😊

[@RazorRex]

Thanks!

[@tylerquade5385]

@@RazorRex you are welcome!😊 you know, I still love Jurassic World Dominion Extended Edition, but if your version of the movie was the real version, Dominion would still be my favorite.😊❤️🦕🦖 Long live the Jurassic era!

[@dylancashen5922]

Thank you

[@spencerbricklord474]

Not bad ideas, only thing I might change is moving Dodgson's final demises to the end of the film, as if when the Group flies away over the vally, the light hits Dodgson as they leave

[@narawilliams2429]

In all honestly, the dinosaur villain could've been another T-Rex in Dominion.

[@MikeythePizzaBoi]

I know how to fix it, the giga killing everything, causing havoc around the world final battle in biosyn sanctuary Dr wu returns as a villain who wanted something bigger, stronger cooler I believe

[@SuperGreed19]

I'd watch this

[@Pawtism_Legacy]

Love this

[@RazorRex]

@@Pawtism_Legacy Thanks!

[@thegoldendinosaur6767]

I think you should have brought Kelly Malcom’s daughter arrived with Sarah and Malcolm have a son in his early twenties who was born sometime after the lost world Jurassic Park maybe like 1999

[@RazorRex]

@@thegoldendinosaur6767 I actually thought of that (the daughter part).

[@Knightdude6]

I would fix the locust with replacing them by all the bugs in Jurassic park arcade ( 2015 )

[@RazorRex]

Funny. Cos I did a video where I mentioned the 2015 bugs! m.kzbin.info/www/bejne/qn6UhWeAgKt_oZo

[@João-u8b]

It would be a better ending if the Giganotosaurus was defeated(but not Killed) by Rexy and the other T-Rexs, and Giganotosaurus lost its position as the Alpha Predator of the Valley. They could've showed the Injured Giganotosaurus roaming in Biosyn's Valley at the end of the Movie. Zeb DID NOT deserved to Die

[@João-u8b]

I actually like the way Zeb is portrayed in the movie, as an animal, not a monster. I just wish they'd given him more screen time

[@tylerquade5385]

How do you rank all of the Jurassic movies now?

[@RazorRex]

1. Jurassic Park 2. The Lost World 3. Jurassic World 4. Fallen Kingdom 5. Dominion 6. Jurassic Park III

[@tylerquade5385]

@@RazorRex this is my personal ranking of the Jurassic movies: 6. Jurassic Park 3 5. The Lost World: Jurassic Park 4. Jurassic Park ( don’t get me wrong I love the classic movie ) 3. Jurassic World 2. Jurassic World: Fallen Kingdom 1. Jurassic World Dominion: Extended Edition! (If your version was the actual movie released, Dominion would still be my favorite movie of all time.)

[@julyakacarrie6260]

Ghost looks more like a Zebra :v

[@RazorRex]

😆Yes!

[@Realfm0lk]

Something a little sad to me is that for all of the years Rexy had been alive she never procreated an offspring asexually or not. And going off of the timeline she should be around 31-32 years old. And the average life expectancy of a T-rex is 30 years. Meaning soon after dominion she died. All alone

[@angelical5386]

Thank yooouuuu. I had so many idea for this instead. This movie sucked so much.

[@thejurassicwonder2816]

Also you have no fucking idea how sad I was sad that alan didn't meet blue...

[@RazorRex]

That’s why I added it here!

[@thejurassicwonder2816]

@@RazorRex yeah Also the ONE thing I would change is having lewis death after the finale battle. That might be because I'm so use to it like eli's and peter Ludlow's death

[@RazorRex]

@@thejurassicwonder2816 I thought of that in my version.

[@thejurassicwonder2816]

@@RazorRex ok

[@Casual_guy1234]

Yeah like in the novel​@@thejurassicwonder2816, sounds good

[@TylerRakstis]

At least I like these idea suggestions, since it's at least you still show most of it can still work, but even still need some improving or stuff that could've been done bit felt missed. A It's at least better compared to what others had to say. Even if its their opinion, they either sometimes look like they didn't get it/ missed the point or the way it's delivered felt condescending. Like I'm or anyone else who likes this film is treated are they're stupid.

[@RazorRex]

Thanks for watching!

[@TylerRakstis]

@@RazorRex Your welcome.

[@edguizar1907]

I don’t like the T. rex remembering the giga, instead the giga and T. rex should both be very, VERY skinny so we all know they are starving, the fought is both the dinosaurs fighting to eat the humans while the T. rex and giga both die and the humans escape. Finally Rex’s daughter is an amazing idea just so her legacy remains.

[@34r343]

Also redisign the dinosaurs to look like 90s reconstructions instead of the ugly ass jw designs and perhaps it should scientifically accurate dinosaurs in the prologue

[@RazorRex]

I don't hate the JW designs.

[@34r343]

@@RazorRex idk like if you are gonna have inaccurate designs at least make them consistent with the original trilogy, like you have so many shades of brown, yellow, tans, oranges, green, red, white, on the original animatronics and puppets they are genuinely pretty but like the color pallet of jw designs consist of grey, dark red, tan, dark blue and black like all of them are the same color they just look so boring and then they are more shrink wrapped and have even more liberties taken with their designs and it's not like how they exaggerate traits like the t rex has a even more boxy angular skull they just straight up add shit and yeah the dilophosaurus dosen't have a frill but that addition can be viewed more as speculative, and there was a theory about it being venomous back in the day because of how weak its bite force was or something along the lines of that, but like the giga just had croc like scutes on it back

[@RazorRex]

@@34r343 And yet Grant found a man-sized Velociraptor in Montana and encountered them in the park. And they weren’t Deinonychus or Utahraptors because tie-in material made it clear they were different.

[@34r343]

@@RazorRex well aside from that they don't take nearly as many libraries as they do with jw

[@NatureEnjoyer523]

I don't think killing off Alan, Ellie or Ian is a smart idea Same for Rexy

[@RazorRex]

I didn’t kill the OG trio. But I felt the need for Rexy to die. As for why I did a behind-the-scenes video explaining why that is.

[@NatureEnjoyer523]

@@RazorRex I posted that comment when i haven't watched the full video yet

[@RazorRex]

@@NatureEnjoyer523 Okay.

[@Casual_guy1234]

Ian dies in the novel but it gets retconed lol, yeah we shouldn't kill Alan or Ellie, kill the new character

[@NatureEnjoyer523]

@@Casual_guy1234 ik

[@antoineweldon9037]

The best way to fix this movie, number 1 make it a shorter movie

[@RazorRex]

I’d actually disagree with that.

[@Casual_guy1234]

​@@RazorRexsame, tlw world needs to be longer to fit in character development and some deleted scenes and an edited version of the original ending to fit in San Deigo

[@alditoification]

That was a nice video. But... I doubt these fixes would make the movie great. Sorry, but I'm done with this franchise.

[@RazorRex]

Well thanks for watching and the kind words.