Full IELTS Writing Task 2 essay | STRUCTURE, TASK, SAMPLE ANSWER (Part 1 - Task Response)

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Thanks madam, for such a helpful video and loved the way you have presented your thoughts in the essay. Ideas can be : Most university graduates does not find a job in their field upon graduation, due to increase in competition. Nowadays, many students are opting for a specific subject in the university programmes due to its popularity which in turn increases the competition among students and therefore, it becomes more difficult for young fresh graduates to get jobs in their chosen fields. As a result, the students have no other option but to compromise by taking up below graduate level job. Another reason can be lack of guidance and support by the universities for job placement. Many students does not get the guidance and relevant support from the universities post completion of their degrees which is essential for them to get a great job in their own field. The reason for this is because few universities are commercial and mainly emphasizes on getting the full fees of their courses from the students in return of course delivered to them, but these universities does not provide any assistance related to jobs post completion of degree. SOlution:- Government has to play vital role by imposing necessary guidelines to be adhered by the educational institutions by limiting the number of students for any specific subject irrespective of the popularity of that subject and should rather provide the admission basis some evaluation test. Universities need to concentrate not only on the course completion and fees collection but also on providing the job placement guidance, training and support to fresh graduates by all possible means. So that once these students hit the market after study, they will be able to crack the interview rounds of jobs related to their fields and get their dream jobs. Mam, pls advice on the ideas as this is first time I have tried to write an essay on my own.

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Traditionally, University education is meant to train prospective students to be qualified for their preferred career path. However, due to the insufficient real life job experiences and competitive job market conditions, many university graduates find themselves straying from their desired professional path. This is a serious problem, highlighting the inefficiencies of the university’s subject programmes and a lack of understanding when it comes to job requirements. Hence, I believe that the problem that arises is mainly due to a student’s limited life experiences and a lack of co-operation between the government, private universities and prospective employers. Understandably, a student’s inability to qualify for their desired career path may be due to a number of reasons. Firstly, the inexperienced youth may not hold an idea of what their future work entails. Hence, the student may not take it upon himself or herself to find additional skillsets or working experiences to appeal themselves to their prospective employers. For example, in the programming fields, a university certificate doesn’t prove their ability to code. Hence, some students may blindly believe in strictly following their studies programme, instead of finding other part-time working experiences or getting additional coding certificates. Another reason may be the lack of consideration of the job market prospects. For example, for careers such as Accountancy, we are seeing more university intakes despite the fact that IT programmes provide risks of taking over their jobs. The market is extremely competitive and highly saturated. As such, universities with high intake of graduates may not be considering the student’s future job prospective. I believe that there’s a solution that may be the “one stone that kills two birds”. With a tripartite relationship between private university, companies and government, the job market can be appropriately controlled and opportunities may be improved for all graduates. Firstly, companies should convey their expectations and requirements properly to the university deans and government officials. Hence, university programmes should be strictly reviewed and revised to include more internship experiences and employers’ seminar talks to better prepare the graduates. In addition, government should conduct an overall analysis of job prospects and opportunities, before setting up a recommendation of intake allowed for each university. This would prevent the oversaturation of qualified participants and create betterment of career path in the long run. In conclusion, we see that the lack of control has created inappropriate qualifications in graduate students and an overly crowded supply of possible employees for companies. The best way for this problem to be resolved involved the government, higher educational institutions and possible employers to co-operate and work for a win-win solution for all parties involved.

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Are we supposed to write 4 paras for both Task 1 and 2. Task 1- intro, overal, body para 1, body para 2 (as mentioned in a previous video) Task 2- intro, body para 1, body para 2, conclusion. Are we not supposed to write more paras in the 2nd one?

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It is a beautiful words essay. However, there is an other reason that derives from freshers. They really do not want to work with their major to have a stable job, they want to be entrepreneurs in vary fields due to probably from their parent’s business that they are forced to follow, or the kind of business are now looking for differs with the in initial interest at the first year of university. Anyway, I love your style!

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I think in the body paragraph -1, it is mentioned that "Universities do not recruit enough students.....", this might be OK, but I reckon that the choice of words "admit" or "register" instead of "recruit" students sounds more appropriate to me, as universities don't recruit students. The word "recruitment" essentially pertains to the company process for seeking suitable employees for filling up the vacant positions/job openings in the company. However, I might be wrong. Thanks.

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Can you tell me if we should write our opinion in conclusion ?? My exam is on 31

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@@shanjohn970 if the question states give your opinion, then yes. If its a disagree/agree question or advantage/disadvantage question then just write a conclusion. Example: To conclude, while there a plethora of advantages of having a child home-schooled, it has notable negative impacts on the child. Although the child will definitely get individual attention during the former situation, however, the child is bound to lack social skills which may lead to significant problems in the future. Hope this helps!

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Typical problem-solution or cause- solution essay this is in my opinion the easiest to approach. What I did iny last IELTS was using a strategy like this: Cause 1---> solution 1 Cause 2---> solution 2 Cause 3---> solution 3 Causes go in one paragraph, solution in the other one. Conclusion: just rephrase my self Intro just paraphrase. Then say something like "Some roots to this phenomenon and solutions will be provided"

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10:18 Do you need to put an example for both the reasons or having only one example for a reason is sufficient enough for task completion?

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Dear Asiya, on 14 March 20 Task 2 question was “It is argued that parents of children who break laws should also be punished as they are some way responsible. To what extent do you agree or disagree.” First two sentences of my introduction were “In recent years the number of children committing unlawful activities has increased unprecedentedly. Hence, many opine that parents of children who do not abide by rules are responsible...... But now I feel the first libe was irrelevant and unnecessary including the linking word in the second sentence.. I don’t know why I wrote this... will I get very poor marks? Please let me know... I’m so tensed!

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Ma'am.. where is your relevant example with your experience? I failed to find it..

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Asiya no doubt you're the best teacher Help me with this as I have wasted lots of time already Few teachers say that opinion and agree disagree is the same kind just paraphrased.. So now if we completely agree or disagree with the given statement still we need to acknowledge other side too as discussion essay has the same structure, there are chances that examiner thought student has taken opinion assay as discussion one and more likely to give less marks for task response criteria... Answer plz🙏

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[@pulokbiswas]

Illustration with "relevant examples" as mentioned in the task question is missing. I suppose adding one line example in each of the body paragraphs might be required to make it more pertinent. It's my opinion. Already the total word count for this essay is 289(66+98+59+66), so can we extend it to say 335, by adding one example sentences for citing our reasons in body para 1&2? Please comment. Thanks.

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