Galactic Aliens Fed Their BEAST a HUMAN Child But What Happened Next Shocked Everyone

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HFY Review

Күн бұрын

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@popeyeandthejeep7459 2 ай бұрын

A touching story of friendship, sacrifice and even love. Well done.

@charlibaltimore7641 Ай бұрын

So...here I am, minding my own business when I see this story. Wasn't going to watch it but, I did. I, a 71 year old woman, am sitting here crying over an imaginary beast and a little girl. This was so well done! The inflection is perfect, the words were all said correctly and the story flowed like fine wine with zero repeats!! BRAVO!! I subbed, this was great. Just had a litter of kittens a few weeks ago (surprise, I know) I think with 4 boys, Thorn shall live on, on Earth a while longer.

@mimig474 Ай бұрын

❤

@mimig474 Ай бұрын

Well what do you think of a continuation.. How about Thorn's child? Lily's own daughters as teenagers on their way to see mom at the statue unveiling get attacked by those warlords that had owned Thorn decided to take revenge for losing their power within their ranks due to Thorn's protection of Lily. They had started torturing his children a female & male who had known of their sires act of protection of a human child. They had roared in sadness & anger when they felt their psychic link with their father severed suddenly. He had sent out all of what had transpired since his waking. As an ancient one of their race he had been used for breeding & unknown to the Warlords their species had a psychic link to their offspring they kept secret from their Masters so this could not be used against them....

@charlibaltimore7641 Ай бұрын

@@mimig474 I would so be there for it!

@ricardocarmona5210 Ай бұрын

There are stories are addicting don't get hooked. LoL ✌️

@tschagalaga Ай бұрын

@@mimig474 honestly? it isnt easy to top that story here... i would not "ruin" it with the try to create another story... but its just my humble opinion.

@cosmicdrift8311 2 ай бұрын

FINALLY!!! An excellent AI story that wasn't riddled with plot errors, mispronunciations and repeating the same things over and over. I was even rooting for Thorn. Lilly's speech to the council reminded me of Rocky's after he beat Drago.

@The-Ent1ty 2 ай бұрын

Or *THE INDOMITABLE HUMAN SPIRIT* gets fucking annoying after hearing 6 other ai reading channels say it every 3rd paragraph

@11B30Inf Ай бұрын

The AI graphics are terrible.

@LS-um3zq 7 күн бұрын

This was written by AI? It was ok then it was boring.

@halearly3749 2 ай бұрын

This is 'By FAR' the best that I've listened to of these SCI-FI stories . . . ❤

@jacquesb5248 2 ай бұрын

very much!

@oldladylinda Ай бұрын

I agree.

@DreamTheory1994 Ай бұрын

Can I pet that dawg? Never underestimate humanity in our ability to go "you fren shaped be we frens!"

@bertarndt9953 2 ай бұрын

Beauty and the Beast. Different angle, but the same story. Way to go Thorn

@ricardocarmona5210 Ай бұрын

I'm gonna name my next dog Thorn in tribute. ✌️

@stevewhite-ko4zj Ай бұрын

Agreed

@illbeyourhuckleberry6484 Ай бұрын

Why not scripture, gave man charge over beasts of the field or something like that.

@CarlGorn Ай бұрын

I was thinking more like Old Yeller, but I can see the B&TB elements.

@soldierscotty1959 2 ай бұрын

Good story! I'm an animal lover so it touched me. I really like that there is no forced CC.

@grantgunz 2 ай бұрын

Humans . . . Pro-tip: Humans can pack bond even with animals who will eat them. 2000 quatloo's the humans cannot be contained!

@RoySmith-wg1kv 2 ай бұрын

3,000 quatloos the evil twin eats her

@tedpollard6744 2 ай бұрын

This is the best story I've listened too in at least the past 3 months or so. Great job

@David-i2e6y 2 ай бұрын

What a great story! Being a visual artist,I appreciate how well this was written an performed. Well done !

@heavystarch100 2 ай бұрын

😮❤❤❤❤👍🏾👍🏾👍🏾👍🏾☝🏾☝🏾☝🏾☝🏾

@MrKrusher2013 Ай бұрын

Trying not to cry, trying not to cry, O fuck it! Beautiful story!!!

@theunieroux3649 2 ай бұрын

The onion ninjas got me in this one. It was great.

@JohnJBrowne11209 Ай бұрын

Onion Ninjas! Love it.

@traceybrown2399 2 ай бұрын

Lily is a 6 year old??? I've heard of precocious children but lily took it to a whole new level

@David-i2e6y 2 ай бұрын

I very much liked this story! Well written and performed .Well done!

@DavidClark-es1ww 2 ай бұрын

Right on, Dave!❤️♊🧐🦬

@josephhyland8904 2 ай бұрын

All warbeasts love skritches.

@jeffr9945 2 ай бұрын

Never let a Death Worlder pack bond with a apex predator.

@JohnJBrowne11209 Ай бұрын

Like respects like.

@user-dj3nq8ty1o 2 ай бұрын

It is one of the better AI stories I have come across. Little repetition, little weird or awkward sentences, and that for the most part, flow and make sense. It is not perfect, and things like her intelligence as a kid and the way the military attempted save thorn and the lesson with how much it changed things for the galaxy don't make sense but are entirely possible. Side note: this plot sounds familiar and like a kids' book with too much idealism as kids' books tend to have.

@TrikeRoadPoet 2 ай бұрын

Two souls linked, one goal, power focused towards good!

@coolet9132 2 ай бұрын

Human pack bonding strikes again.

@williamdesouza5405 2 ай бұрын

❤thank you for the great story.

@michelleshirek9253 18 күн бұрын

To quote the great Jaydog fetch "White women ain't scared of shit!" "Oh are you a little death beast? You're Mommy's little death beast now..."

@z0s1a98 2 ай бұрын

That brought tears to my eyes! Thorn, you need to some how extend this plot! This was brilliant 👏

@robertnagle6847 2 ай бұрын

The beast may survive years without eating the child can't

@garyvincent6424 2 ай бұрын

Best story I've heard in a long time, Beauty and the Beast. The write outdid himself.

@jeanniecorn2632 Ай бұрын

a dam good one for Lilly and Thorn show what human can do and what we have in us . but look that this world and what it doing , we no longer hear the stars call to us .

@Damoinion 4 күн бұрын

Much better narration than the majority.

@emmitwinchell4307 Ай бұрын

Old battle veteran protects a young life.

@redhankyteddy 2 ай бұрын

i was deeply moved by this story

@sharonkuhn2482 2 ай бұрын

Great story well narrated.

@staroceans8677 2 ай бұрын

Beautiful story. 😢❤

@captainamerica6525 2 ай бұрын

No! No!! No!!! You MUST find a way to reunite Lilly and Thorn! It's a story so make ANOTHER ONE!!

@mimig474 Ай бұрын

How about Thorn's child? Lily own daughters as teenagers on their way to see mom at the statue unveiling get attacked by those warlords that had owned Thorn decided to take revenge for losing there power within their ranks due to Thorn's protection of Lily. They had started torturing his children a female & male who had known of their sires act of protection of a human child. They had roared in sadness & anger when they felt their psychic link with their father severed suddenly. He had sent out all of what had transpired since his waking. As an ancient one of their race he had been used for breeding & unknown to the Warlords their species had a psychic link to their offspring they kept secret from their Masters so this could not be used against them....

@mimig474 Ай бұрын

What do you think?

@mimig474 Ай бұрын

I am going to put in far more detail,but I did a quick start just to set-up my idea

@JANETVICTOR-ql9lx 2 ай бұрын

*LIKE SHERA SHE'S A BEASTMASTER*

@carolinanava3300 2 ай бұрын

Big kitty 😂

@garylee5384 2 ай бұрын

BEAUTY AND THE BEAST

@angelacurtis4456 24 күн бұрын

Very well done. Narrator spoke excellently. I'd watch and listen to another.

@LRMc-jn3pb 2 ай бұрын

If he survives thorn is going to have a feast.......just saying.......

@Atomsplitter69 2 ай бұрын

Fantastic story, go Lilly and Thorn!

@danielpryor1382 Ай бұрын

I'm a 59 year old man in tears the story is awesome

@debbielong2226 29 күн бұрын

I'm right there with you!!! Forever Thorn!!!

@DarrenKastl 2 ай бұрын

Oh my ! This is so exciting! I could just squeel with glee!

@msmom1183 2 ай бұрын

Yay for human pack bonding!

@RickH-v2g 2 ай бұрын

Love the truck in the background!

@CharmainedaSilvaAnderson Ай бұрын

Very heartwarming and beautifully read. Thank You💖

@PiratePrincessYuki Ай бұрын

An apex predator knows when another apex predator is near…

@jazsimea Ай бұрын

I suddenly found myself crying like a baby, had to stop listening for a bit, but then I kept going, lovely ending ❤❤❤❤❤❤ Why does it feel like I've lost my pet?

@davidcoyner7314 2 ай бұрын

Well done. I cried.

@cherub112361 2 ай бұрын

Absolutely the best story! Keep it up and you know it you will 😂❤[🎉😊

@bricolleen7956 2 ай бұрын

This was so beautiful ❤ this made me cry the same way scp-harbinger did.

@jamespseaman4136 2 ай бұрын

The story would have been better if Thorne would have lived!

@HollyMcCormick-r7n 2 ай бұрын

That was a great story loved it, and I did subscribe.

@seannash4695 2 ай бұрын

Very good story. Gratitude😊

@Darkfemmefatal Ай бұрын

Poor Lily and Thorn, I don’t think I could have left him

@lvrbc Ай бұрын

Love the voice💛

@jacquesb5248 2 ай бұрын

a very touching story

@golubgolubovic8991 2 ай бұрын

Cool story

@owllover813 8 күн бұрын

A fantastic story❤

@CraigerZ-Myra1 2 ай бұрын

This was a great story, it would’ve been better if Thor would have survived but more stories like this, please but with a happier ending

@dh0614dh 2 ай бұрын

No. It was the perfect ending... but might see @ronsindric4241 entry above.... That could work... FYI - Ever see the movie "Love Story" (1970)..? Very emotional...

@susanmartin3762 18 күн бұрын

Is there more of this story? I just accidentally found this and I'm with you Charlie Baltimore. This is great! Where can i find more?

@oldladylinda Ай бұрын

There is war. And then there are the atrocities of war. The story shows that even tho we go to war, there are those we go to war to protect. Thorn chose to go to war to protect the innocent child.

@ronsindric4241 2 ай бұрын

Love, friendship, honor, and enduring bonds last long after our physical bodys give way. What if as Thorn were dying, he chose to NOT kill the remaining soldiers who were killing him. Or better yet, what if Thorn was given the chance for deathly vengeance against the Overlords who used him. What if these Overlords were trapped, frozen in fear as the dying Thorn approached them pressing his massive head against the Overlord's bodies. What if Thorn waited, then moved back choosing NOT to kill the Overlords to die before them ? What if Thorn's biology was similar to that of THE DRAC fighter pilot Jeriba Shigan in the movie ENEMY MINE whose body held his child Jammis ? What if within his dying body, Thorn bore a new Life like a Jammis ? What if Thorn's dead body with the new Life trapoedbwithin was visited by Lilly just prior to Thorn being placed on a Warrior Hero's Funeral Pyre ? What if Lilly sensed the presence of Thorn's offspring and enlisted the help she needed to save Thorn's offspring? What if the bond shared by Thorn and Lilly passed to His offspring? What if. .. .. ..

@dh0614dh 2 ай бұрын

Beautiful thought....

@skyward711 2 ай бұрын

It's a good storey but you did say the girls was sick and she can make a plan and fly a space ship

@gwolfstahl 2 ай бұрын

Escape pod

@richardprobst7885 2 ай бұрын

The beasts could not harm the girl

@bymenz1388 2 ай бұрын

thorn recognize the god-inside of lily.. its simple as that.. what a beautiful story.. thank you

@susanmarie7777 2 ай бұрын

Wonderful story. Well made.

@zedeyejoe 14 күн бұрын

Great story

@mimig474 Ай бұрын

Wow this is so very good. It actually made me tear up😢

@AtmaDiAce Ай бұрын

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@susanmartin3762 18 күн бұрын

She looks like a tiny version of Daenerys Targaryen.😊

@CarlGorn Ай бұрын

An interesting twist on Old Yeller.

@Amy-sj9xf Ай бұрын

Omg this was so good I’m crying 😭

@bfrazier85 2 ай бұрын

I'm not crying... You're crying!

@111smd 2 ай бұрын

it is definitely raining today

@vordu4403 2 ай бұрын

I think onions for the entire company of McDonalds are being processed somewhere nearby..

@lycanwhisper2724 2 ай бұрын

😂

@loreliehuddy6997 Ай бұрын

Great story it made me cry 😢

@bradleyp3655 Ай бұрын

Well done.

@GimmieTheGaff 2 ай бұрын

You’re breaking my heart.

@spamham897 13 күн бұрын

I’m not crying, your crying 😭😭😭

@RojerG-gc9hr Ай бұрын

Thanks 😊 what a cool Story

@redfog42 Ай бұрын

Well read!

@frederickcheatham9405 2 ай бұрын

This was a very touching story I hope to run into dog man and Susquach with love and understanding friendship in West Virginia someday we need alies. Like them to fight the evil on this planet

@TheAdeybob 2 ай бұрын

AI-tastic

@suzannenonya3077 Ай бұрын

You should flesh this out into a novel. Great job

@Always4ward 2 ай бұрын

She found a pit bull...

@samcovingtonmd 2 ай бұрын

The author does not seem to have experience with young preadolescent children.

@MsSarinakg Ай бұрын

I really enjoyed this story - thank you. Who wrote it?

@donscheid97 Ай бұрын

An intelligent, thinking creature might react with mercy, but in nature, that is the exception and newborn are often the target because they represent an easy meal.

@Always4ward 2 ай бұрын

Some of the concepts being expressed by a 6 year old seem a little advanced... Working them out maybe believable, but her ability to articulate these concepts, not so much. That however is my only real criticism

@gpasprimus6505 2 ай бұрын

The beast was once a man who was made into a monster by alien geneticist millenia before

@richardm3023 2 ай бұрын

THAT is some pretty high level thinking for a 6 year old child. Also how did she eat and drink? It would be nice if these stories could make some kind of logical sense.

@richardm3023 2 ай бұрын

Really a 6 year old concentrated on navigation?!? Give me a break.

@mimig474 Ай бұрын

Well honestly children who've dealt with war,abuse,death,etc can even at 6 have this adult-like behavior. I personally had a very adult like behavior as did a few other kids I've met throughout my years My own kids though smart & all didn't have that adult like thinking due my kids not having to survive & grow up in a terrible environment. Unfortunately if you have never talked to kids raised around this type of environment you wouldn't be surprised by her intelligence in her environment. Also not very many novels talk about bathroom breaks or eating often unless it is a part of the plotline so that's not surprising at all. It was an enjoyable story with a good amount of description of the scene with decent detail

@alexdavis-mann8513 Ай бұрын

They did say in the story that they where going to keep her alive , so I assumed they fed her

@richardm3023 Ай бұрын

@@alexdavis-mann8513 you should never assume.

@Kim-h2m Ай бұрын

Come on... just enjoy it!

@leighmackie3242 Ай бұрын

Aw, I wanted a happy ending. I wanted Thorn to be rescued, too. 😭

@debra-qq1np Ай бұрын

The girl needs to be older than 6 to plan their escape and pilot a shuttle!

@maxinerowe2925 Ай бұрын

Love it

@senecaknowsbest8380 20 күн бұрын

Note they offer up a white blond girl. Whoopi was unavailable

@fire_ant_187x7 Ай бұрын

Damn, a 6-year-old girl doing all this😮 amazing

@philliptorres5582 Ай бұрын

Make the movie....

@mickeymike-yk4bf 2 ай бұрын

🤟👍

@whodidthat2732 27 күн бұрын

Just once, I would love to see a happy ending to a story. Just once. But, I guess that in a real world as on earth, reality is so depressing and sad. Might as well have that reinforced.