Hey man, loved the video! I was pleasantly suprised of the quality of your review considering your low subscriber count, show him more love people! I have a couple of points of improvement but please take them with a grain of salt, this is just my perspective as a viewer and as someone with 0 video editing or production skill. I think the commentary pacing would be easier to consume if you paused a little when transitioning to different topics, it sounded like one long sentence (impressive tbh for having such long takes without mistakes) but it felt a little unnatural hearing you transition from topic to topic so quickly, even when you reached the closing thoughts it still felt like a sentence from the previous paragraph. Sometimes the order in which you mentioned some topics went a little back and forth, how you talked about combat a little, then xp, then back to grabs. Same when you mentioned your dissapoinment in the lack of bosses who are God's, and later in the video you would mention how the bosses are few and underwhelming. I personally think mentioning those together would be more seemeless. I think your choice of footage accompanying the commentary could be better, instead of skipping to different timestamps during your gameplay vod it would go a long way to record a couple demonstrative clips to go along with what you are talking about in the moment. Examples being, showing off every spell as you mention them, a slow run through of the xp and skills screen in order, samples of the music you said was bland and footage of the small number of bosses since i only saw footage of the leviathan. Maybe it's because you were avoiding spoilers but im suprised you didnt talk about the Ares fight or "Saving your family" encounter. To me those were very memorable moments of the game. Again these are just my personal thoughts which are obviously not objectively correct and you night have specific reasons for your decions which I might have not thought of. Overall I enjoyed the review alot and can't wait for more , keep up the good work dude 😎👍.