The reason it didn't win imo is because the way the sentence is structured, isn't actually social proof. Turning it to social proof would be something like: Our Customers Send & Receive 150,000 Faxes Per Day Or even better would be something like: Join More Than 100,000 Others Who Ditched Their Fax Machines For Us
@JakubLinowski7 жыл бұрын
Good observation. Thanks.
@ttfrancisco7 жыл бұрын
I think the people do not always read what is written. and this sentence at the bottom of the button can seem like a sentence in very small which says: it is free BUT... ". Another remark, there is too much text on the button. the button must be a call to action and not explain the value of the service. what do you think?
@ttfrancisco7 жыл бұрын
One more thing. You tried too much to sell the product. By putting so many arguments, people can think that you are forcing them, that you are too insistent. It's a bit like shop sellers, who insist on selling when you just want to watch for yourself.