Horrors Of The Rails: Caledonian Twins - A T&F/RWS Audio Story

[@narrowgauge9717]

Special thanks to Victor Tanzig and NWR58. Their performance here was fantastic.

[@steadyeddiee]

Could I adapt this?

[@narrowgauge9717]

Sure.

[@steadyeddiee]

Thanks!

[@steadyeddiee]

kzbin.info/www/bejne/hqLIiYiXjtWkmrs it’s done hope you enjoy!

[@obanwashere]

Hello Narrow Gauge. On a separate account I’m starting another channel for Thomas content. Would it be alright if I use this audio for a adaptation? I promise to give credit. Thanks

[@peleanimationcomics3263]

In the words of what Mrsanstheblackadder himself said… --- “you do NOT want to mess with the SCOTS”

[@FellowManofAggieland]

“There’s more coming! Should you miss behave?!” -Donald

[@muhammadfadhiil3430]

music: chilling narration:creepy story: Disturbing great job tho!

[@plagued_inferno6059]

"But I think he deserved his punishment..." "...don't you?"

[@bengray8637]

Yeah. Diesel 5 had it coming. It was his fault for causing so much trouble in the first place.

[@andrewboyd8073]

I also love how the windows and nameplates become highlighted when the Twins realize what happened until they eventually kill Diesel 5.

[@22Tesla]

Whoa...….. Donald...…….Douglas...………. I knew you hated diesels..... and rightly so...…. but...….. still...………….……..…….I'm sleeping with one eye open...…

[@generalprincecodyhedgewolf2944]

I think i wet the tracks... im a SD80 MAC-2

[@Blueberries19482]

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[@ytchannel1207]

That D5 was a #£& its right that the #£&*@#£ of the railway was knocked off that bloody bridge He killed Maura-liath and that other engine, the Twins had the damn right to D5 was a #£&*@#£ and that shoe box on weals should have been smashed to the back of an excavating shed a long time before D5 IS A #£&*ING MURDERER SO HE DESERVED HIS BLOODY PAINFUL DEATH NO DON’T COMPLAIN THAT THE TWINS WITNESSED MURER SO ITS DAMN FINE SO SHUT DOWN UR BROKEN ENGINE Sorry i just got angry seeing ur comment

[@BrokenBuffer]

Imagine how donald and Douglas would have reacted to old stuck up, Spamcan, or Bowler.

[@Ian-cv6rx]

​@@BrokenBuffer they would possibly commit war crimes

[@itsmeemerson]

If EE93 should voice Edward in every fan video, then Victor Tanzig should definitely voice Donald and Douglas in every fan video.

[@DieselD7101]

I fully agree with you.

[@mentaljudge8649]

Agreed

[@jamessullivan9048]

An amazingly terrifying story. Plus it's always nice to be surprised by Victor's voice out of nowhere. Amazing job to the both of you.

[@TARDIS9]

OMFG! That was so amazing! There needs to be more Thomas stories like this on KZbin!

[@jacobdragonblood1217]

9:50 mhm i know that music anywhere Grand. Admiral. Thrawn. perfect choice of music for this part and I absolutely freaking love it haha!.

[@OlivergwrThomasthetankenginefa]

Diesel 5 is such a murderer for killing 5 engine

[@FelrinKirla]

And wasteful, too! Scrapping engines is one thing, because as sad as it is, at least their bodies will be put to good use with other steel products. Wrecking them in the sea, though, beyond salvageable reach... that's spiteful. Harming others with no benefit to yourself or others is a horrible thing to do.

[@NickolasMontagnino]

Whoa, that was quite...quite unexpected. Even if what Donald and Douglas did was wrong, Diesel 5 and his driver got what they deserved for what they did.

[@benjaminalvarez2171]

There are some things I am confused about, nick: 1. Why would this be a horror story? and 2. What exactly are the full names of your friends leman and noah (whose wooden railway models you made were from Ben and spencer) and just what are their youtube channels?

[@benjaminalvarez2171]

Sorry about that Nick, name's Benjamin, Benjamin Alvarez, I'm from Marianna, Florida. But still why is this even a horror story?

[@richardhoffmann6813]

When I heard the scream of diesel 5 I got chills ran down my spine amazing work

[@narrowgauge9717]

I felt the same when he sent me his lines. Obviously, I expected it since it was in the script, but I still felt uncomfortable when I heard it.

[@richardhoffmann6813]

@@narrowgauge9717 are you planing to do more of these horror audio books if you would that would be great because you can hear that this has gotten quality put into it

[@narrowgauge9717]

I plan to do more after finishing my series.

[@ThomasKinninmonth]

This sent chills down my spine, but all the same brilliant work Joe

[@DarthWill3]

This is like a combination of the movie _Christine_ and the _Sweeney Todd_ musical. Great work.

[@General1855Mantua]

spiteful breakful breakvan has been real quiet since this one dropped “DONT GIVE ME THAT RUBBISH!”

[@LUCADOLLAR]

Dude, this was so well written and very creepy (In a good way of course! XD) Kudos!

[@tomnom3097]

Ok rule one watch out for Donald and Douglas

[@ryanwiebe4096]

The Spiteful Brakevan Probably Realised Why Douglas Broke Him Apart If He Was Watching This Video.

[@abk2k3aaronkauflin83]

10:49 top 10 best one liners before the death

[@kbtiger1279]

Another fantastic narration, Narrow Gauge!

[@dabluepittoo-aqua4213]

It's even worse if you think about it. There might have been a chance that Diesel 5's victims had their crew drown or die alongside their engines. It's bloody justice what the twins did and they likely made an escape to Sodor after the Diesel's death was forgotten.

[@SudrianSteamers]

This was truly amazing my friend

[@adamtain7627]

Diesel 5 said “Do you mind?”. The same thing Boco first said to Bill

[@XavierAndFriendsOfficalChannel]

THATS RIGHT!

[@NWR58]

I been waiting patiently for this and I’m glad it came out good, fantastic even. Can’t wait for next week’s adaptation. Good job mate, you did get the email I sent you right?

[@narrowgauge9717]

Thanks and yes. I saw the email and I have recorded my lines for one of the episodes so far. I should be able to do the rest tomorrow.

[@jackhusky9320]

Nice use of the 28 Days Later theme, really adds the eerie tone to this story!

[@niyaziaktn1596]

"Dont get to there bad side..." - Calidonion Twins

[@Plagued4Life]

Smashing work Joe! This once again was amazing!

[@nathandioza7821]

*Slow claps 4 the Scottish twins 4 their heroic efforts* Well done my Caledonian friends! ^-^ You've done those murdered engines proud!😌

[@excitablepack7076]

Lesson learned: “Don’t fuck with Donald & Douglas.”

[@silverdrake3353]

never screw with Donald and Douglas

[@dannyh.s.1936]

shadic kurosaki the 3rd agreed

[@rogersstinson4019]

Daniel Sturino me too

[@jockdouglass3824]

I yu should never mess with a Scott

[@jintyno.13tankengineoffrai34]

Please continue this creepy series! This was so scary! Please find some more TTTE horror or make up some! Just continue it!

[@andrewboyd8073]

If you want my honest opinion, the Twins had the absolute right to do what they did.

[@adammiranda357]

I wonder what would have happened if Donald and Douglas told everyone on BR what they did on that night?

[@jesusquicksaves]

Tanzig really hit it out of the park with the twins. NWR58 was amazing as well

[@Blaze06]

This story is how I discovered this channel! Also the Kevin Kiner Star Wars music goes hard lol

[@icylittlejerry8916]

Anyways, I think it is a masterpiece. I thank you for that.

[@Trainboy9681]

"Its to teach him a lesson we be wantin'! Now how do we do it?"

[@rainbowracer9576]

That is one bone chilling story. I love it ❤️

[@Jaidyn228]

You know what he could have said? “This isn’t murder...THIS IS EXECUTION!!!”

[@anyfan1friends175]

To me this is Bone-chilling, but this is awesomely written, can't wait to hear more creepy Railway stories from you ^^ also I was wondering if I'm allowed to make my own Video take on this story when I get the Take-a-Long Donald & Douglas

[@narrowgauge9717]

Thanks and while someone already has adapted this, you can as well.

[@anyfan1friends175]

Narrow Gauge awesome, you might also expect a piece of artwork from this too ^^

[@J.Tstudioproduction6375]

this story was amazing, even though it's a little bit dark, but it was still amazing. I was gonna do a recreation of it soon, if that's ok? if not, it's alright, but at least I have enjoyed your audio stories.

[@shawanderson5747]

Hello Narrow Gauge I just wanted to let you know thank you for letting me remake Caledonian twins and its going to premiere on march 23 7:30 pm

[@sudriansignalman9387]

And I'm resubing, this is great, good job

[@steadyeddiee]

This was AMAZING

[@JustCallMeHeavy]

Diesel should never mess with them if he wants to live.

[@greninjazac4577]

The new season of Stories of Sodor is really starting out dark XD

[@joshuatheredenginebrickand8943]

This story gave me so many goosebumps.

[@shawanderson5747]

link to the Caledonian twins video kzbin.info/www/bejne/eHS1ZqKfmtysoM0

[@urtooslow4415]

Those twins are the masters of insults I'd say!

[@icylittlejerry8916]

How beautiful!

[@adamtain7627]

A British version of a Mr. Nightmare story Also I wonder what Boco’s reaction would be to this story, he’d most likely help the twins is what I’d think 😡😡😡😡😡

[@yanski-sc6vc]

what story

[@adamtain7627]

Just go listen to any creepypasta stories or stories told by Mr. Nightmare or Killer Orange Cat and you’ll understand

[@lachlantheGWRengine]

He'd probably be freaked by the twins' actions toward Diesel 5 and Diesel 5's actions toward the twins and innocent engines.

[@WickedFizz999]

THIS IS AMAZING!!! Are we aloud to make adaptions? It would be awesome to use your story!

[@narrowgauge9717]

Thanks and yes, you can adapt this.

[@WickedFizz999]

Narrow Gauge cheers

[@davidantoniocamposbarros7528]

@@narrowgauge9717 i got a question: how is this a horror audio?

[@DieselofAlrest]

Holy cow... This was certainly interesting... :)

[@aidenfritz429]

The 2 trackmaster trains remind me of my childhood.

[@kidz4p509]

This shows that not every horror story involves ghosts. There are other dark stories on the rails. Some of which are meant to be kept away.

[@thekaibacorpexpress4043]

An excellent story!

[@Thehalfpariah]

I wouldn't mess with those guys, they're more than a threat that meets the eye.

[@shawanderson5747]

Forgot to mention the premier sadly happened a week ago so fortunately it's already out I'm sorry I forgot to mention

[@TSK_27]

This was very good, I loved it!

[@REBProductions]

I guess that's why they went to sodor They were both found out and were both planned to be scrapped Not just Douglas as we thought

[@xandardorf6365]

Well, Diesel 10 was defeated when falling off the collapsing viaduct while chasing Thomas and Lady. (He survived, but he was defeated) And Diesel 5 was left to fall off a collapsing bridge by Donald and Douglas as punishment. So I would assume that similar fates have befallen Diesel 1, Diesel 2, Diesel 3, Diesel 4, Diesel 6, Diesel 7, Diesel 8, and Diesel 9.

[@urtooslow4415]

Jesus.... This story was cool

[@CC-Cobalt-1043]

My God this is brilliant

[@shawanderson5747]

great job with this audio if its ok I like to do a remake adaption of the story

[@narrowgauge9717]

Sure. Go ahead.

[@shawanderson5747]

Thanks

[@Peiceofpapertapedtowall]

Cmon you could’ve said that was the final straw, not the last straw, but I don’t mind I like the twist you put on that

[@ScrapyardStudios]

That scream.... is horrific

[@andrewboyd8073]

Yet another question: Shouldn't Donald have mentioned D5 being in the shed when explaining how the twins knew what he did?

[@narrowgauge9717]

Sorry for the late reply. To answer your question, the twins were simply more focused on getting rid of him, rather than telling him how they knew what he did.

[@sonictailsx4690]

Damn, that was dark, never f*** with the Scottish Twins.....

[@EntertainmentMan132]

Really cool video. Was that Grand Admiral Thrawn's theme from Star Wars Rebels in the middle?

[@Larynx_the_Changeling]

Yep!

[@danthebluetank6636]

I feel bad about the victims

[@doncasterworkshops-tf3490]

Looks like Donald and Douglas have a dark backstory.

[@evanrichmon4994]

Thankfully this is the only dark part of their history

[@yorkshirestation]

Donald and Douglas don’t play that way when you screw with them

[@thenewjerseyrailfan9460]

I don’t know why but i keep thinking i see a LMS Coronation steam locomotive in that photo

[@trackmaster388]

DONT MESS WITH DA TWINS THEY COULD PUSH YA OFF THE CLIFF

[@michaelfries9200]

13:37 music?

[@OddHunter5504]

10:53 Frank Castle makes a cameo appearance

[@gwr_autotank1529]

There’s nothing quite like it!

[@trainfanjpt6056]

And what type of tank engine that went into the sea?

[@zoombini1831]

@@XavierAndFriendsOfficalChannel hasn’t been confirmed

[@TheRoyalScotsman6100]

This story is indeed a good one. The only thing that disappointed me is nothing more than a nitpick, but it would’ve been nice if you included Donald and Douglas' classic theme at some point in the video. All the same this is indeed a good story, especially the part where Donald and Douglas pointed out to Diesel 5 that murder isn’t murder if the victim themselves committed murder.

[@spectra2864]

how long would donald and Douglas be in railgate for?

[@resurrectedbard]

I'm just thinking that if a number is added to diesel 5 every time he murders, maybe he survived the fall (and his parts were faked or smth), and murdered more engines until he became diesel 10? His design is roughly the same too, minus the claw.

[@johnreynolds4377]

😲

[@evanclarke5561]

What happened to Diesel 8? And how did the diesel dislike this when he's dead?

[@skystriker4459]

Some of these give me shivers this didn't this is one of the least creepy

[@trainfanjpt6056]

And what types of the 4 other steam engine that diesel 5 murdered?

[@steamzilla95]

I believe one of the tank engines was the same class as Rosie

[@andrewboyd8073]

@@steamzilla95 That's only in one of the visual adaptations.

[@michaelfries9200]

I think one was a 57xx auto tank

[@danthebluetank6636]

Dude soon i might do a remake! But 20/100 chance

[@thomaspilz6836]

9:50: What's the d5 death music?

[@tommycerda1689]

What’s the music at 11:21 called?

[@trainfanjpt6056]

Do have the comments for the music sounds from the beginning,the middle, and to the end of the video?

[@digitaltoaster4956]

my fav story

[@Axxelbar]

Horror audio, my ass. you turned donald and douglas into the punisher!

[@Somerandompokemon]

They did right. But not in the right way

[@Jetthehawk1994]

Are we allowed to adapt this?

[@narrowgauge9717]

Yes. Some people have adapted this before.

[@evanrichmon4994]

Um narrow gauge what is the name of the music that plays when Donald douglas pushes diesel five on the bridge and let him fall

[@andrewboyd8073]

Do you plan to do more of these kinds of stories next Halloween season?

[@narrowgauge9717]

I definitely thinking about it as I really enjoyed putting this together.

[@andrewboyd8073]

@@narrowgauge9717 Nice. In that case may I suggest some ideas if you do it next year?

[@narrowgauge9717]

Sure. What are they?

[@andrewboyd8073]

@@narrowgauge9717 One idea is had is possibly one about Albert on the Mid Sodor and his demise. Or perhaps a retelling of Haunted Henry/

[@narrowgauge9717]

I've already done a retelling of Haunted Henry in a mini-series called 'Sodor In 1967', but the idea about Albert is one I'll keep in mind.

[@safraj51]

This is deep

[@igorspolishproductions8107]

Douglas: help meeeee *brakes screech* *SIGH* stoped at last 😫

[@fanofeverything30465]

*Douglas

[@andrewboyd8073]

Another question. How were D5 and his driver not found out before the Twins killed the former?

[@narrowgauge9717]

Truthfully, this was something I didn't really think about when writing the story, even though it's something I should have. If I had to give an answer, they only strike when the victims they targeted were alone, or so they thought. Though the eye witnesses mentioned near the end either didn't say anything at the time, or weren't believed as they had no evidence. It wouldn't be until Diesel 5's death and an investigation into his life that they would be taken seriously. Perhaps during that time, the bodies of the past five victims were found and after finding out Diesel 5 worked in the same areas of where they were, the puzzle of the truth would come together.

[@andrewboyd8073]

​@@narrowgauge9717 Why wouldn't they eyewitnesses say anything at the if they didn't do so? Were they too traumatized, or did they fear reprisal if D5 simply got a slap on the wrist?

[@narrowgauge9717]

Most likely traumatized.

[@evanclarke5561]

Well done! Don't you do Scottish accents Joe?

[@narrowgauge9717]

I have before, but Victor does a better job at Scottish accents than me.

[@adamtain7627]

WOW!!! 😨😱😨😱 if they did that to that diesel (who deserved it) I wonder what they’d do to me if I gave both of them the middle fingers