how *NOT* to report every single piece of data in an ielts task 1 bar graph (part 2)

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Do you tend to report all the numbers in a chart in IELTS Writing Task 1? In this video, I will use a bar graph to show you a useful method that allows you to report less important data in just one sentence!
The bar chart below shows the top ten countries for the production and consumption of electricity in 2014.
▬ Contents of this video ▬▬▬▬▬▬▬▬▬▬
0:00 Intro
0:20 4 ways to report the biggest numbers
02:39 Identify differences and similarities
05:23 Put less important data in a range
06:31 Overview paragraph
07:36 Introductory paragraph
08:51 Whole essay
08:54 Key takeaways

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After Googling, I found out that i can use "produce" and "output" as a verb and a noun at the same time is it right? If it is, it's going to be a little confusing since they are repeated so many times in this essay

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While the disparity between the two energy levels was rather insignificant in most of these territories, such gap was more apparent in India, Canada, France and Brazil. Do you think i should also cover this in the answer ?

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why in the overview you wrote 'output and use' without "s" is that because both?

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In the overview, 'output', 'use', 'generation' and 'consumption' are used uncountably.

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