IELTS Writing Task 1: Bar chart (4) | Accommodation | Cambridge 13 - Sample Answer

Welcome to another episode of the IELTS Writing Task 1 series! In this video, I analyze another bar chart from IELTS Academic 13. Learn how to analyze the graph, structure your response, and use appropriate vocabulary with a model answer.
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0:00 introduction
0:16 understand the statement
1:28 understand the data and plan
3:28 overview
4:08 paraphrase
5:09 sample
9:14 vocabulary (lexis)
11:53 structure

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"I find writing tasks quite difficult. I aim to get a 6 band score in my real test. On KZbin, I mostly find videos about 9 band writing structures, which are too advanced for me. Can you please upload some videos aimed at 6 band score learners? I'm not very good at IELTS or English, if you will upload upload videos focusing to the basic learnes then this would really helpful for me also other basic students

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I know what you mean. The most important thing for you is to understand the test format and structure. It's crucial to know how to write a discussion or opinion essay, including the dos and don'ts, and how to answer the question effectively. Remember, vocabulary is only 25% of the total score. One tip is to copy and paste some of the sample essays into ChatGPT and ask it to simplify the language for you. This can help make the content more accessible and easier to understand. I'll also work on creating videos focused on learners aiming for a 6-band score. Thank you for your feedback!

[@shaxlomakhmadjanova1106]

Sir, could we write apartment instead of accommodation?

[@ieltstimeZ]

No, we cannot. In this context, 'accommodation' is a broader term that includes any place where people live, such as houses and apartments. Using 'apartment' instead of 'accommodation' would narrow the meaning to specifically refer to apartment living, which does not accurately reflect the data.

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