how *NOT* to report every single piece of data in an ielts task 1 bar graph

[@ebenkwakye646]

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[@LilieIELTS]

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I can't recall the exact thing but it read something like this: "it is thought that encouraging reading of story books in children is better than they having to spend much time watching television or playing video games." To what extent do u agree or disagree?

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[@LilieIELTS]

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[@LilieIELTS]

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[@saichaitanya2329]

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[@LilieIELTS]

@@saichaitanya2329 Congratulations! Those are amazing scores! Wish you a bright future ahead!

[@ds.aliwerxanova5983]

Girl,you just did my day. thats a real great idea to write bodyies and then overview. Cuz i really struggled when i was done with overall i couldnt really come up with 2 bodies as i gave all info in overall. THX

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[@LilieIELTS]

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So I have my exam in few weeks and I have been so worried about bar graphs but after watching this video I understand everything. I can’t believe it’s this simple. God bless you🙏

[@LilieIELTS]

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You are the first KZbinr that let me have the desire to comment, your video is so helpful, basically answered all the questions I have for task 1 for now. Thank you for the kindly sharing!🌟

[@LilieIELTS]

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[@namsu8853]

Please reply (exam in 3 days) Can we say the number of residents opting for a Cafe were the highest And, can we say outpaced instead of outraced??outpaced??? In this graph you've not compared each other. So, it's OK not to compare???? Please reply please

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I have a problem with how to understand the graph.. When I see that question I become confused what should I write about this 😢😢😢

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[@LilieIELTS]

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[@Arshsingh99999]

Mam Thankyou very much actually I suffed from same kind like I describe all the figure in detail but when I watch this video regarding my mistake Now I feel really good again thank you Mam for giving good solution.

[@LilieIELTS]

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[@Arshsingh99999]

​@@LilieIELTSmam just I have one doubt about introduction like in introduction line" in five cities in Australia" is it correct line OR" in five cities of Australia" is correct line I am so confuse please let me know about this enquiry

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[@mohammedfuzailfz]

Overview: Overall, it is evident that in four out of the five cities (Sydney, Melbourne, Brisbane, and Hobart), visiting a café for coffee or tea was the most popular activity among residents. Adelaide is the exception, where buying instant coffee was slightly more popular than visiting cafés. In contrast, buying fresh coffee was the least popular option across all the cities.

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That 's all i need!!! So helpful

[@NusratBemasha]

Can’t we use last month instead of last for weeks? because we know that a month usually consist 4 week.

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[@mohammedfuzailfz]

Can we use approximately with the numbers such 64, 62 and 55 respectively????

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[@LilieIELTS]

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[@nhatanhphan9005]

Do we use present simple if the chart doesn t mention year or time?😢

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This was one of my biggest problems! Thanks so much

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It used to be one of my biggest problems. 😊

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thank you soo much its my starting of writing task 1.... i found this video very informative nd easy

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[@LilieIELTS]

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[@sanduniperera126]

Could I know we can use only past tense for describing?

[@LilieIELTS]

Yes, that's exactly what I did.

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[@LilieIELTS]

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That was helpful. Thank you!

[@LilieIELTS]

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[@koushikmajumder8870]

First of all, thank you so much for such informative videos, they are just excellent. What i am struggling to find is standard sample. Can you kindly suggest me a book where i can find all the samples (let's say for bar chart at least 5) for all types of criteria's of writing task 1?

[@LilieIELTS]

You can read sample essays on my site 😊 ieltsessaybank.com

[@realman849]

My basics English is not so good its my humble request please provide general structures for every type of chart in easy words

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Hi lilie❤, you saved me as i watched your all task 1 related videos just 2 days before my exam and i got 6.5 in writing . Thnx💞

[@LilieIELTS]

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[@LilieIELTS]

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[@macykwok1453]

In the overview, can we say the two main features are 1)having tea or coffee in a cafe is the most popular + 2)buying fresh coffee is a less significant habit in all cities? May i know if the second observation is ok?

[@LilieIELTS]

But I can argue that buying instance coffee is a less common habit, can't I? I think it's more accurate to say that buying fresh coffee is the least common habit in all five cities.

[@macykwok1453]

@@LilieIELTS yep, your latter sentence is what I wanna say--- 'least common' :) thanks for your reply 🙏

[@nhannguyen9618]

I do really love your content as it helps me a lot. But Do you have any books or blogs that have some sources of vocabulary for presenting the ideas in writing?? because i dont have much high-level academic structure

[@LilieIELTS]

Check out my site: www.ieltsessaybank.com/

[@nerdguy1061]

can we use (less likely than )in task 1 ?or is it less than more appropriate?? ---------fresh coffee section...

[@LilieIELTS]

"Less likely than" is a type of language used in statistics, so it's actually very good for task 1.

[@johnwinjoby544]

Should we use connecting word more often . Is it necessary ???

[@LilieIELTS]

using linking words is not the only way to create flow.

[@johnwinjoby544]

@@LilieIELTS ok

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[@aishaomarovaa]

Hi Lilie, i have a question, can i replace result(s) with outcome? And of course, THANK YOU for your helpful videos!!!

[@LilieIELTS]

Yes, 'outcomes' works.

[@TaraGamal-y9z]

Mam i don't know how to present data like at 23% by 50% and exam is comming please help

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[@LilieIELTS]

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Haha, I wish I could.😊

[@Fedroy90]

thanks for the wonderful explanation.

[@LilieIELTS]

Glad you liked it

[@gurkaran9871]

5:02...shouldn't we add comma before respectively?

[@LilieIELTS]

Hi, the comma before "respectively" is optional.

[@gurkaran9871]

@@LilieIELTS thanks...tomorrow is my exam...i hope i'll get atleast 7 but i haven't practiced much rather i used to read your essays on ur website

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@@gurkaran9871 Best of luck ✊and don't forget to come back and share your score here.

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@@LilieIELTS sure

[@saturatedk9674]

Hiii. Id have a question. Should we also spell out the number in percentage under 10? Thank you.

[@LilieIELTS]

No, we don't need to.

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[@LilieIELTS]

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thanks...nicely explained

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[@omjwad2661]

I know that you've mentioned the difference between Adelaide and the other five cities in the overall but shouldn't I mention it again in the detail paragraph 1?and can I say that "in Adelaide both going to a cafe and buying instant coffee leveled off at nearly 50%? Can I say that the percentages of people who bought instant coffee fluctuated

[@LilieIELTS]

I was busy with the challenge. The first sentence in the third paragraph compares Adelaide to the other four cities: www.ieltsessaybank.com/coffee-buying-habits/ No, you shouldn't use 'level off' and 'fluctuate' for a chart that doesn't show trends. dictionary.cambridge.org/dictionary/english/level-off

[@omjwad2661]

​@@LilieIELTSi just saw your reply thanks a lot and waiting for the next challenge since it was impossible for me to participate in the first one

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[@JahedHassanKhan]

Please Score it. "The given bar chart illustrates a survey report from the last four weeks that reveals the proportion of city residents who have buying and drinking habits of coffee and tea in Sydney, Melbourne, Brisbane, Adelaide, and Hobart in Australia. Overall, this survey occurred under three categories, where fresh coffee buyers were in the last place in all cities. Instant coffee buyers were in the second position, and the first category includes the personnel who went to a café in all areas except in Adelaide. Firstly, it is essential to note that the majority of people (from 55% to 64%) were likely to take coffee and tea by going to a café in four cities. Only almost 50% of residents of Adelaide used to go to cafés in the last four weeks. On the other hand, only 34% to 44% of personnel went to buy fresh coffee, whereas city-wise proportions were 44% in Sydney, 42.5% in Melbourne, almost 35% in both Brisbane and Adelaide, and last but not least 38% in Hobart. The remaining category who bought instant coffee were high in Hobart (near about 55%). In Adelaide, it occupied 50% of residents and took over the other two categories. In other cities, it remained in the second position in the last month, and the proportion was between 45% and 52.5%."

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Happy to hear that!😊

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[@AliHashime]

What about instant coffee you did not mention

[@LilieIELTS]

I believe I mentioned it.

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[@LilieIELTS]

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[@namsu8853]

Can we use the word fluctuated between ... to.... for this bar graph? Eg: the coffee intake for three cities (Brisbane, Adelaide, Hobo) fluctuated between 20% and 40%. I'm freaking out. PLEASE Reply

[@LilieIELTS]

Hi, I don't think you can. To fluctuate means to change continually. However, those percentages don't change. They're just different from each other.

[@namsu8853]

Please reply (exam in 3 days) Can we say the number of residents opting for a Cafe were the highest And, can we say outpaced instead of outraced??outpaced??? In this graph you've not compared each other. So, it's OK not to compare???? Please reply please

[@malikarazakova]

do you teach writing task 2 as well?

[@LilieIELTS]

Yes I do. Check it out: www.skool.com/ieltsessaybank-vip-membership/about

[@bishabmagar6461]

Mam but it's still less than 150 words how to write more than that

[@LilieIELTS]

Hi, the essay is 167 words long. You can read it here: www.ieltsessaybank.com/coffee-buying-habits/

[@FithriyaaniRashidi]

Notes : 📌When answering bar graph like the sample in the video , make broad comments & report important data . 📌Numbers under 10 , needs to be spelled out in the essay 📌You don’t need to repeat the ‘last 4 weeks’ in every paragraph when u have already established the context in the introduction. 📌Paragraph section : intro, paragraph 1,2,3 & overview

[@LilieIELTS]

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Can we use reserach instead survey?

[@LilieIELTS]

No.

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[@LilieIELTS]

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[@devurru]

Amazing lecture but the minimum word limit is 150 words and this is short by 20-30 words. Anyways quality is excellent.🔥

[@LilieIELTS]

Hi, it's 167 words. You can read the essay here: www.ieltsessaybank.com/coffee-buying-habits/

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[@LilieIELTS]

Sorry, I don't sell anything yet. You may find my writing blog helpful: www.ieltsessaybank.com/

[@jazz3646]

@@LilieIELTS okay... Then could you do me a favour, or evaluate my writing or discuss graphs with me? I am a good learner and would not take much of your tym.. If you could do a friendly favour or a favour for sake of humanity? 😔

[@LilieIELTS]

Sorry, I don't proofread essays. But if you have any *specific* questions about writing, you can leave a comment on KZbin or on my blog. I'll do my best to answer. 😊

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Thank you mam for your help

[@LilieIELTS]

It's my pleasure😊

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how much band for this report essay ?

[@LilieIELTS]

Hi, this essay was improved by native speakers. I think it deserves at least an 8. Do you agree?😊

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Very helpful

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Glad you think so!😊

[@kirandeepkaur9937]

Mam how we can use connectors and synonymous in writing

[@LilieIELTS]

I'll try to explain a little bit the use of connectors in the next video.

[@kirandeepkaur9937]

Thanks

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[@LilieIELTS]

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[@khairulalamgir3885]

Dear Madam, "with those in Brisbane and Adelaide, both at nearly 35%, less likely than those in the other three cities to do so." I have not understood properly. Could please write those sentences in actual form. That means that you have written it in short form by reducing the large one. I would like to see it actual sentence get better, please. Thank you.

[@namsu8853]

Please reply (exam in 3 days) Can we say the number of residents opting for a Cafe were the highest And, can we say outpaced instead of outraced??outpaced??? In this graph you've not compared each other. So, it's OK not to compare???? Please reply please reply

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[@LilieIELTS]

Awww, thank you for the kind remarks.💙