how *NOT* to report every single piece of data in an ielts task 1 bar graph

Sample essay ➡ www.ieltsessaybank.com/coffee...
Do you tend to report all the data in a chart in Writing Task 1? In this video, I will use the bar graph in Cambridge IELTS 15 Test 1 to show you a magic method that allows you NOT to report every single piece of data in a graph.
The chart below shows the results of a survey about people’s coffee and tea buying and drinking habits in five Australian cities.
▬ Contents of this video ▬▬▬▬▬▬▬▬▬▬
0:00 Intro
0:36 Identify important data
02:34 Make broad comments
05:06 Overview paragraph
06:00 Last 4 weeks
07:25 Paraphrase chart description
09:18 Whole essay
09:24 Key takeaways
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Please reply (exam in 3 days) Can we say the number of residents opting for a Cafe were the highest And, can we say outpaced instead of outraced??outpaced??? In this graph you've not compared each other. So, it's OK not to compare???? Please reply please

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can we use (less likely than )in task 1 ?or is it less than more appropriate?? ---------fresh coffee section...

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Can we use the word fluctuated between ... to.... for this bar graph? Eg: the coffee intake for three cities (Brisbane, Adelaide, Hobo) fluctuated between 20% and 40%. I'm freaking out. PLEASE Reply

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Hi, I don't think you can. To fluctuate means to change continually. However, those percentages don't change. They're just different from each other.

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Please reply (exam in 3 days) Can we say the number of residents opting for a Cafe were the highest And, can we say outpaced instead of outraced??outpaced??? In this graph you've not compared each other. So, it's OK not to compare???? Please reply please

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In the overview, can we say the two main features are 1)having tea or coffee in a cafe is the most popular + 2)buying fresh coffee is a less significant habit in all cities? May i know if the second observation is ok?

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But I can argue that buying instance coffee is a less common habit, can't I? I think it's more accurate to say that buying fresh coffee is the least common habit in all five cities.

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I know that you've mentioned the difference between Adelaide and the other five cities in the overall but shouldn't I mention it again in the detail paragraph 1?and can I say that "in Adelaide both going to a cafe and buying instant coffee leveled off at nearly 50%? Can I say that the percentages of people who bought instant coffee fluctuated

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Dear Madam, "with those in Brisbane and Adelaide, both at nearly 35%, less likely than those in the other three cities to do so." I have not understood properly. Could please write those sentences in actual form. That means that you have written it in short form by reducing the large one. I would like to see it actual sentence get better, please. Thank you.

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Please reply (exam in 3 days) Can we say the number of residents opting for a Cafe were the highest And, can we say outpaced instead of outraced??outpaced??? In this graph you've not compared each other. So, it's OK not to compare???? Please reply please reply

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Notes : 📌When answering bar graph like the sample in the video , make broad comments & report important data . 📌Numbers under 10 , needs to be spelled out in the essay 📌You don’t need to repeat the ‘last 4 weeks’ in every paragraph when u have already established the context in the introduction. 📌Paragraph section : intro, paragraph 1,2,3 & overview

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