How to Figure out Everything You Want Colleges to Know About You

[@Collegeessayguy]

What are some things you want colleges to know about you? Share below! Here are mine: I moved around a lot as a kid and lived in several different countries. I’m a theater nerd and have won some awards for doing theater. Have also won some speech and debate awards. (I basically see speech and debate as a chance to do more theater.) I would love to travel at some point while I’m in college (study abroad, maybe). I’m looking for a school that will allow me to produce my own theatrical works. I’m excited to be in an environment that has other motivated people who love words (I feel like I don’t know too many of those people in my high school-most of my friends who love poetry I’ve met online). I’m excited for changing seasons (in Miami it’s basically just hot and humid). I’m excited to be able to make my own schedule in college. I’m excited to say up late talking with other people about Big Ideas. I’m excited to live in a dorm. I’m not sure what I want to do when I grow up, but I think it has something to do with writing and/or performing. My grades were impacted by my switching schools (didn’t have access to certain Honors and AP courses), so I don’t feel like they are an accurate reflection of my potential. I’ve worked on some student films in college and am currently working on my first feature-length screenplay (to be filmed this summer). I love films and consider myself a (kind of) aficionado on 90s films (mostly because I work at a video store). I love being inspired and inspiring others. I’ve had a few leadership roles in high school, but the most meaningful has been in Theater. I’m a huge chess fan and often will play on my free time (at lunch, after school), and sometimes in class once I’ve finished all my work. I attended a private missionary kid school in 9th grade, a private Christian school in Miami for 10th grade, then moved to public school in 11th grade for more opportunities (gifted program, more opportunities to do theater), but also just to meet more people. I love helping people-usually this means teaching my younger siblings things-but also through community service (Special Olympics, volunteering through church, etc.). I love reading and writing poetry. I also love creative writing and won an award from my English teacher for my essays. I’m excited to go out of state for college. My parents have been cool, but I’m looking forward to the adventure.

[@madelineshirk]

were you ever in East Africa?

[@Barkiiii_]

this is my list :D -I love to play video games -I have ADHD and I have overcome these challenges by doing harder classes and overcoming these disabilities -I love to collaborate with others and take charge in those situations -I am a hard worker and have been taught to always do my best no matter what challenges I face -I have always been somewhat quiet but I have not let that define who I am as a person -I was adopted when I was 4 years old and have learned a lot from my parents who have been supportive of me all the way through school -I have tried almost every sport and have never enjoyed it as much as other people. I love to be on my computer more than anything.

[@Collegeessayguy]

Thanks for sharing!

[@sarahogawa7035]

Showing yourself doing the work in real time is wonderful. Please keep making these great videos!

[@Collegeessayguy]

More to come!

[@lonelyshine8200]

1. I play the double bass (I've taken it since 6th Grade, currently a senior but since I've only taken basic and intermediate classes I'm not really skilled, plan on continue playing in college if I can find one) 2. I create music online 3. Third-culture kid 4. I grew up with a Christian family and spent my teenage years with a Muslium family 5. I want to learn more about my roots 5. 4.08 GPA 6. Being SGA Vice President, 10th Grade President allowed me to learn how to plan events 7. About to make a speech in front of all my county's principals and district leaders (I'll give the name in the official one) 8. I've held various county and school-level student positions 9. Won 2 history awards in the district level 10. I want to teach for secondary and postsecondary levels 11. Constantly trying to better myself for others+ Have been there to help counsel my friends 12. First Generation Student with older brother in college 13. Made my own merged religious belief using Islam, Christianity and Science together 14. Took Dual Enrollment, AP and helped the creation of new school music and arts class pathways 15. Thrilled to live in a dorm 16. Scared because I'm very lazy with work 17. Love writing poetry and scripts introductions but never seem to get to the endings. 18. Second in my entire Ethiopian family to be born in America 19. Not a high SAT score (1160) because didn't have time to prepare

[@Collegeessayguy]

Thanks for sharing!

[@marcusnoberto2678]

One of the most important things that I would like to college to know would be why my grades were not so good.

[@calvincho]

Not me. I’d have to let them know I was a lazy student and never did the homework.

[@Collegeessayguy]

Thanks for sharing!

[@mahamadoumoudjahidmahamado2312]

I raised $4000 to organize an event for 1500 kids about the security issues in my country and how tech can help with the solutions

[@moniruzzamanmahadi3384]

Bangladeshi bro?

[@Collegeessayguy]

That's amazing. Thanks for sharing!

[@connorcc]

I'm drowning :( Glad to have these guides though. Thank you!

[@Collegeessayguy]

You got this! Thanks for watching. :)

[@itninvestigate]

• I’m a first-generation Nigerian American. • I’m a budding philosopher. • I think a lot of ideas. • I wrote three published books. • I create my own booklets about various topics. • I want to study computer science. • I want to blend computer science & writing together. • I want to build games. • I value self-education. • I’ve taken Hillsdale College online courses. • I have a high score in the SAT. • I use my imagination in strategic ways. • I create sketches to keep my focused on the future I want. • I frequently think about the relationship between the material world & spirituality. • I wonder if bugs & animals are aware of themselves. • I’m interested in rapid evolution. • I built a medical database in my senior year.

[@Collegeessayguy]

Very cool. Thanks for sharing.

[@royalekelly8921]

Hi!! Are you me 😅?!? I hope the college admissions process went very well for you. We're very alike though I'm a completely Nigerian international student currently in the process.

[@nurasylbarzhaksiev3688]

Mine isn't big, but I guess it's still able to depict me as an individual: 1) Positivity, Positive attitude towards the task 2) Kindness, the desire to improve the world as a whole 3) Open to new opportunities 4) Idea creation, try something new every once in a while Also I asked some of my friends about these qualities that they think is worth mentioning, I hope it's not cheating

[@Collegeessayguy]

Love this.

[@dlordamax232]

Well I wrote about my love for sporting activities and how I love learning

[@Collegeessayguy]

Cool! Thanks for sharing.

[@oo.772]

I'm passionate about the environment, I always thought the world was tiny until I had the opportunity to attend the climate change summit at Scotland and boom, the world became much bigger to me and so did my need to make greater impact.

[@Collegeessayguy]

Thanks for sharing!

[@justagirlfromtheprojects6608]

The fact that you're from NC and I currently live here......I'm already a fan.

[@Collegeessayguy]

Yay!

[@bext9680]

1. Still growing from and struggling with mental health issues 2. I value personal development and vulnerability for every individual 3. I am trans-nonbinary 4. I switched between my mom’s and dad’s house for 7 years until dad moved to North Dakota 5. My 4-quad personality chart is almost completely equal (can’t remember what its called, but the yellow, blue, red, and green one) 6. Working on my poor time management skills 7. I have ADD 8. I have been doing color guard for 5 years 9. Many friends feel safe opening up to me on a personal level 10. I am an optimist and appreciate a lot of what day-to-day life has to offer 11. I am in my school’s GSA 12. I have a lot to say but struggle speaking up 13. Creative design is something I love 14. My essays are thorough and teachers love them

[@Collegeessayguy]

Thanks for sharing!

[@Love4MVP10]

how can you be trans non binary what does that even mean

[@solereclipce6737]

@@Love4MVP10transgender more specifically non-binary

[@pmapmapm]

I can absorb new information like a sponge I prefer to make everything in a one night Mostly i will try to do everything in my own way My ideas might be abnormal I can lead a group to an improvement I never felt really happy about winning like the most people do I love to take a leader role My dream is to change world economy in a new way Breaking is the most working strategy to make new Egoism of every member is a key to a victory Abuse don't really affecting me Emotions doesn't control me I can turn off my humanism if is needed to Everyone is a main heroes of their life Creativity and uniqueness are important If there is no fun, what the point of work Material benefits aren't always the most important one Utopia for humanity is equality of everyone Human is humans main enemy Love is a rebirth

[@Collegeessayguy]

Awesome, thanks for sharing.

[@HAD1444]

how helpful Mr. Ethan! now fellas, take a look at what I wrote (you asked for it): I'm a singular entity with a relatively unusual mindset I've been through experiences that somehow shaped me I'm OK with missing opportunities I'm academically better on 'my peers' scale, or larger I'm creative in many ways I dream without sleeping Gahh I didn't get more ':] hope it would mean something Best

[@Collegeessayguy]

Thanks for sharing!

[@faalugram]

I always put an eye on people's body language and their behavior, so I can say that I am an observant person.

[@Collegeessayguy]

Sure!

[@jazlynlang735]

1. I love learning new things 2. I'm smart, but I second guess myself 3. I challenge myself, sometimes too hard 4. I have a very strong sense of justice and am passionate about my beliefs 5. I love to help people and teach them new things 6. I encourage my loved ones to try new things 7. I take AP courses and score well on the tests, and I am in the National Honors Society 8. I have studied French for six years and I am a member of La Société Honoraire de Français 9. I can understand both sides of an issue and want to learn how people I may disagree with think 10. I'm a performer, in theatre and in music 11. I've studied flute for seven years and take on a leadership position in my section 12. I've been in theatre since 4th grade 13. I am a peer mentor for the freshmen at my high school 14. I strive for perfection, and if I can't get that, I want to do as well as I can, even if it's not "perfect"

[@Collegeessayguy]

Thanks for sharing!

[@ifeanyianyoku8650]

1. I once had an obsession with being tall.

[@Collegeessayguy]

Thanks for sharing!

[@jakeleeampong733]

In my free time i like to solve world hunger just thought they should know

[@Collegeessayguy]

Thanks for chiming in.

[@karigarza2728]

I’m here soon:)

[@Collegeessayguy]

You got this.

[@scikittycat]

@College Essay Guy, any constructive criticism? 1. I moved around alot (3rd culture kid) 2. Always knew I wanted to go into a STEM field, but didn't know which 3. I discovered my fav science career, bioinformatics, in 9th grade 4. It's important to me to bring my voice into spaces (participate/engage) 5. It's important to me to encourage others to speak 6. I love applying the metaphor of mycorrhizae to the world 7. I once felt like I could taste words on my tongue in colors 8. I love reading; I funnel all my senses into it 9. It is important to me to use powerful language to shape my world 10. I like when people care for me and I care for other people 11. I want to be honest with other people and never stop trying to reach someone else even when we misunderstand each other 12. I like organizing (stats, items, notes) 13. I value critical thinking 14. I really like exploring the nooks and crannies of study spaces on campus (where I can recognize others cared to make a space for students) and then settling into a routine (that one spot you just love sitting at) and then changing it up 16. I would love to go to a uni near home so I can live with family 17. I dream of helping add to a workplace that reminds each other why we love our work and the tangible difference its making, help each other with struggles, if someone has life struggles doing extra work to help, encourage each other to be people of integrity with creating/meeting goals, bring each other up

[@Collegeessayguy]

Love it! Thanks for sharing.

[@albertzhu2227]

I love your 8th point! Also, what is your mycorrhizae metaphor?