How to Start Writing Your Common App Essay

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[@JillianGoldberg]

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Haha it’s already November😎

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[@diaries5419]

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[@camilavalladares943]

1. Find an idea 2. Brainstorming aka: timeline of your life & what things changed you and made you who you are. DON'T search for petty If you're going to talk about your difficulties talk HOW you overcame them. They want to see your resilience and how you developed as a person. Don't talk way too much about sports, hobby, mission trip, bad parents, etc. It's overdone 3. Make your essay interesting, something people wants to read Talk about yourself, like a mini chapter of you and put it all together. 4. Don't waste your word count! 5. Write over the word limit and start cutting it down about stuff that's not important. (Go approx. 100 words over your word count to narrow it down later)

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don't be shy read your eraser essay :)

[@QuonHowery02]

once i hit 1k subs i promise i'll read it

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[@QuonHowery02]

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[@QuonHowery02]

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[@marystretcher9286]

" Start early, start now..." I haven't started and it's due today, lmao.

[@KB-mq9hb]

How'd it go?

[@marystretcher9286]

@@KB-mq9hb Literally just finished...But not too bad, hopefully.

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[@jackic6192]

@@marystretcher9286 what college did you end up going to? 😂😂

[@rubenmendez6065]

Mine is due in 4 days and I’ve got two essays to write since where I’m applying has a required essay for engineering majors

[@pinponpin2244]

Thank u so much there is nobody who broke down these details like u

[@JillianGoldberg]

hi! if ur struggling with your college essays, i just made a video called “how to write the first draft of your college essay” with tons of tips that might help you out! i also edit essays, and i have a giveaway where you can get your essay edited for free (details in this video!!) kzbin.info/www/bejne/q36whoRsp8mkapY

[@emmaclarksonperez5600]

bruh i’ve been watching videos of people reading their essays & people giving suggestions for a week & i couldn’t think of topics to write about. it took me halfway through your video to think of a good topic so thank you, you are elite.

[@nbreezii1241]

"Start early,plan years ahead" my essay is due in about 19 hours and I just now titled it and thought of a topic

[@gracemike118]

Me writing my essay 11 hours before I have to turn it in, but i like doing my work at night

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@@caden8326 more of like self-promotion

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me looking this up when deadline is tmrw rip

[@kennyk00k]

I’m done with my essay but I still watched the full video. This is some fire content bro, a lot of students will benefit from your tips. Also post some more if you can you’re hella entertaining

[@QuonHowery02]

Ayy we hit 1k! I'll be reading my essay soon but probably gonna upload sometime in June, after APs and the school year is over.

[@omarestevez8074]

wow I cannot tell you how much this helped me with my essay I am far from an Ivy league applicant with a terrible gpa and a semi decent sat score really appreciate you taking the time to make this video!

[@bonbons4347]

update? :0

[@hurleyhaney358]

I watched your essay video when it came out months ago and when I sat down and started writing mine yours was what really inspired me to write mine and honestly I wouldn’t have thought of my prompt without inspiration from you so thank you

[@annieson1041]

My gosh, I'd completely forgotten about those hand-made (rather inefficient) erasers! Such golden elementary school memories. Thanks so much for your video; as a junior, I found it very helpful. One question: In your other video, you mentioned something about being careful with QuestBridge, and I was wondering if you could make a video on your experience with the program. I've gone on their website several times, but the whole thing is still a bit confusing. Again, thanks a lot!

[@QuonHowery02]

Living the same lives out here lol. And yep, I've gotten a few requests to do a Questbridge video so I'll try to make one!

[@JillianGoldberg]

hi! if ur struggling with your college essays, i just made a video called “how to write the first draft of your college essay” with tons of tips that might help you out! i also edit essays, and i have a giveaway where you can get your essay edited for free (details in this video!!) kzbin.info/www/bejne/q36whoRsp8mkapY

[@platosfavoritestudent6509]

Thank you so much for this. This video does a great job of not brushing over the obvious and saying "great now write the essay" like no shit i need to write about something that will make me stand out, but this video gives leads on HOW you can start (like narrow down a few events that changed your life). 10/10

[@taylorhall2018]

im dead the humor in this video is iconic i died at you reading the georgia lebedev from the department of bio science and WHY DID I LAUGH WHEN YOU SAID YOU WORK BEST AT NIGHT UNDER PRESSURE but thank you for this video it is really helpful as i am now here in september still struggling to outline my essay :')

[@kayleiwong3944]

love how its Oct. 24 and my essay topics are one of the ones he said not to write about!!

[@kirafrench5398]

I'm a rising sophomore in high school and have been thinking more about college, your videos are so fun to watch and you give great advice! Saving these videos for later :)

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[@BoredSudoku]

Aren’t you a freshman now?!

[@albumsco6498]

My school has only started telling me about common app six days before it is due for my school of choice.

[@cerinacapone7945]

Same

[@willglou4882]

1:30 haha laughs nervously in Oct. 19th

[@sarahpollard6892]

You can do this! Stay calm and get it done

[@hhahh]

laughs in Oct 29th

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[@umugwanezaalice3]

I was so confused about writing my essay before this video, now I feel like I am ready, Thank you.

[@Teemo10K]

This actually helped a lot it was so genuine

[@kate3342]

it was the ghetto clay for me

[@JillianGoldberg]

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[@Benginafantaisie]

@@JillianGoldberg thaanksss. I’m gonna watch rn

[@yogi-wl1zs]

unfortunately im just now coming up with ideas abt my essay, but you were a very great help THANK YOU!!!!

[@johnferguson6321]

I ain't even started 😭

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@@johnferguson6321 ..... me

[@froskonic1854]

I have never panicked harder in my life

[@karma_luvic8981]

HE WAS ABOUT TO SAY JOINT LMAO

[@chloes1308]

I hope you read your essay! it sounded very interesting. this video really helped and I'm currently at the end of my junior year, starting to think of essay topics lollll

[@QuonHowery02]

For sure! I'm planning it out but I'm just super unmotivated rn lol sorry, promise I'll try making it soon

[@dunemae]

how’d you do?

[@asaiahr2027]

damn the parents divorce part... ok this was a wake up call should have realized lots of people do that thanks bro

[@sujikim835]

I don’t think you know this, but you are so extremely funny. Like seriously I was laughing the whole time. I think it’s something about the chaotic? nature idk but I loved it.

[@dora2497]

This is by far the best college essay video out there that actually gives good advice

[@JillianGoldberg]

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the clay thing blew my mind ngl

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not me giving myself ten days to submit my regular decision application 🥴 but thank you, this was so helpful !

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Such a nice and chill guy! Thank you for your videos :)

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I’m on my third video from you right now, and I’ve been watching because of the content (I’m curious; though I’m going into 9th grade), but mostly because of your personality. You are so funny and the way you edit your face in videos makes me laugh so much. I wish we were the same age because I would definitely want to be friends in school with you lmaoooo

[@telmabraz8978]

Just wanna say that your video help me sooo much. I’m actually in my last year of high school in France and I wasn’t hopping a lot about this kind of videos. BUT in fact after watching you video all the ideas came to me(lmao) and actually I’m writing my essay for my (maybe) futur university 🎓🤭! So THANK YOU SO MUCH ;)!!

[@cynicalcitrus]

applications are over in a week... just starting my essay. cant wait for my gap year!

[@TrashyIsGone]

I messed up because I didn’t know I needed all of this shit until a month before deadlines and now I wanna die 🤪

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You should do an AP score reaction video when they come out

[@QuonHowery02]

literally my exact thought thank you for reminding me

[@elizabethcifuentes8858]

Ahh, i hope you see this cuz I’m late late. But I know you said not to write about divorced parents. My parents weren’t divorced, but they separated. My mom had left us without saying anything for a couple months. I remember the whole day that she left. All the times, once she told us where she was, when my sister and I had to drop off my baby sister to her. She would ball her eyes out calling for her mom when we would take her back to my dads. It was a whole messed up story because my whole family knew she wanted divorce, but told her kids instead and asked us to keep it a secret. We tried but he found out and it was the worst day of my life. It’s been going on for three years now, this mess, but there’s some illegal stuff behind it which I won’t speak of. But would this still be a bad idea to write about. You can be completely honest! Thank you for this video

[@hiyashah2335]

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[@JillianGoldberg]

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[@exoticcats6119]

I feel like I have a really generic life lol

[@JillianGoldberg]

hi! if ur struggling with your college essays, i just made a video called “how to write the first draft of your college essay” with tons of tips that might help you out! i also edit essays, and i have a giveaway where you can get your essay edited for free (details in this video!!) kzbin.info/www/bejne/q36whoRsp8mkapY

[@harinder5146]

starting my college process rn, thank you!

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😂 wish i had this video when i was starting my uni essays

[@jdDeclan]

That timer idea is fire

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I’ve watched a lot of these videos & this is the best I’ve seen so far. Very helpful!

[@joannaxuan4265]

Start early, start now- oh em... (I am currently 5 days away from the application deadline.)

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Loved the video! :) can you please make a “reading my QuestBridge App” video

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you a legend for dis one fam 🙏🏽 nah but for real THANK YOU SO MUCH THIS REALLY HELPED

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HAHAHA MY DEADLINE IS IN A FEW DAYS

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Just finished junior year I really don’t wanna procrastinate so here I am

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Your video really helped me get my thoughts organized! Thanks :)

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lmao is it just me or like when you have the whole day to do the thing you must do but you wait for the night so you can cram 😭💀

[@JillianGoldberg]

hi! if ur struggling with your college essays, i just made a video called “how to write the first draft of your college essay” with tons of tips that might help you out! i also edit essays, and i have a giveaway where you can get your essay edited for free (details in this video!!) kzbin.info/www/bejne/q36whoRsp8mkapY

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Jillian Goldberg oh oki oki! Well haha I’m still a sophomore student ! thank you very much! ;33

[@nathanc9866]

I literally can not think of any major changing point in my life, I have a boring life, what do I do? I have passions/hobbies, but I can’t think of any character changing moments in my life

[@lexa1034]

"Personally, I like to let myself inch closer to chronic high blood pressure. That's why I simulate myself into an APUSH writing exam. The energyyyyy" Just found this hilarious yet very interesting at the same time lol

[@jessiejayray__7427]

Thanks for the awesome video im sitting on my couch stressing out how to write my college essay right now 😭 and tbh i still need help but this helped a little im writting my essay and I start 12 grade and college admissions soon

[@kimjonghyun4098]

Can u write about sports if it’s not about how u improved after a loss? I had an idea to talk about my experience switching from basketball to cross country and track after finding I was naturally good at it. I talked bout after being happy with the switch at first, but then the drop in my school popularity happened since does not have the “clout” that basketball caused me to lose pride and love for running. I then proceeded to talk bout how the memories and bonds made me overcome these feelings and ended it with me being satisfied at our pep rally when we weren’t clapped as loudly as other teams despite having the best record since I loved what I was doing. I discussed my changing emotions throughout the stories by metaphorically using my habit of writing overly optimistic running goals on loose pieces of paper. I’d describe the aging dull faded graphite marks of time goals on old pieces of loose paper I would when I lost pride in running and stopped writing my goals and then the fine dark sharp lines on new pieces of paper when I initially had or regained my love for running.

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Good concept

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"let your parents watch you"

[@QuonHowery02]

👀

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[@sammyd06019]

Dude. As you were literally starting the "don't do" essay topic i legit started jotting down my parents nasty divorce. Lmaoooo i frickn crossed that out with the quickness!!!! hahaha

[@yuliagu9383]

i used to make eraser clay too haha

[@linda_9248]

Thank you so much, you just helped me so much 😭

[@JillianGoldberg]

hi! if ur struggling with your college essays, i just made a video called “how to write the first draft of your college essay” with tons of tips that might help you out! i also edit essays, and i have a giveaway where you can get your essay edited for free (details in this video!!) kzbin.info/www/bejne/q36whoRsp8mkapY :)

[@radarada2069]

You prob right about don’t write about getting good at a sport but I don’t have time to not write that😭

[@el_monke4048]

bruh this videos both helpful and hilarious I love it

[@FloRiDaNication]

Thank you for your video! Very helpful tips.

[@JillianGoldberg]

hi! if ur struggling with your college essays, i just made a video called “how to write the first draft of your college essay” with tons of tips that might help you out! i also edit essays, and i have a giveaway where you can get your essay edited for free (details in this video!!) kzbin.info/www/bejne/q36whoRsp8mkapY :)

[@Th3legend27]

Me here a few days before my deadline hearing him say don’t do that 😮

[@clickprofileimage]

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[@harrisondixon4039]

Yo. I did the same thing with the eraser crumbs. Its oddly satisfying-- especially when you put them under your fingernails.

[@theworldforgot4857]

I'm gonna be a senior next year, so I'm trying to at least get my essays done before September when I'll start applying. Please pray for me!🙏🏽🤲🏽❤️

[@zhibekkubatova5884]

Im starting my common app essay now, my deadline tomorrow )))))

[@biscuitmonsta9702]

I used to do the same thing with my eraser dust! Also, thanks a lot for the tips

[@NLZ3]

eraser crumbs was creative

[@amandanguyen3775]

That was helpful! Thanks!

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@@JillianGoldberg self advertising yikes

[@Sherrine2468]

Sophomore in high school now and I want to start practicing 😭😭😭😭

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Gurllll don't worry

[@TencupsGaming]

4:55

[@QuonHowery02]

🤫

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@@JillianGoldberg self advertising yikes

[@Tigerwolf70]

Wait I just started my college essay and I wanted to talk about my scripting journey which Impact me the most. Does that consider as a gaming essay since I’m gonna talk about making a game in roblox?

[@paulag2566]

I recommend The College Counseling Specialist for Admissions/Scholarships. He really can help. His office is in Orange County but maybe he could help with the process online too if you live somewhere else.

[@saniasy8967]

Loved the video! Are you going to make a college decision video soon?

[@QuonHowery02]

Yep! Probably sometime soon

[@ethanngo7778]

"I could roll a joint" 😭

[@perda0112]

Heck, love your videos. I'm a high school freshman preparing for US colleges. How do you find that many competitions and events that you can apply to your stats?

[@lmaf132]

Lol i said “‘night” out loud the same time you did. the tip about the timer is really helpful though! and that harvard student has to be a legacy because no wayyy-💀

[@Shadiczx14]

"I work best at night and under pressure" 😂 ME TOO

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0 dislikes, we love to see it.. you always spit fax 👏🏽

[@user-hh1rl4tj8u]

Came across with ur vid ! Love it !! Pls upload more videos about the essays!

[@QuonHowery02]

Thank you! Will do!

[@JillianGoldberg]

hi! if ur struggling with your college essays, i just made a video called “how to write the first draft of your college essay” with tons of tips that might help you out! i also edit essays, and i have a giveaway where you can get your essay edited for free (details in this video!!) kzbin.info/www/bejne/q36whoRsp8mkapY :)

[@user-hh1rl4tj8u]

Jillian Goldberg Thank you so much !!!

[@cynthiak.527]

Heyy soo to shortly explain an idea I have for my essay: I want to write about how I overcame welcoming from a pretty broken family with my only biological brother (this is the basic idea but there are other aspects involved)

[@zainabfarhan5823]

That sounds great!!

[@Lily-yf6wn]

Really useful!!!! Thank you Hope to see your SAT studying tips video~~~~ Feeling jubilant when I watch all your videos

[@Cindynga03]

those tips are really helpful thank you

[@cosmonaut7019]

The sole person who disliked this only did it to be quirky. I literally love this video what the hecko! This youtuber is so helpful! Thank you so much :)

[@JillianGoldberg]

hi! if ur struggling with your college essays, i just made a video called “how to write the first draft of your college essay” with tons of tips that might help you out! i also edit essays, and i have a giveaway where you can get your essay edited for free (details in this video!!) kzbin.info/www/bejne/q36whoRsp8mkapY

[@neecs01]

great video! how bout do a follow-up video to this since you've mentioned creating some specific tips.

[@wspikew2849]

I could roll a joint-... I could roll a ball of crumbs. 😂4:50

[@u8jlxx405]

What would you say is the best way to writing a strong essay about your struggles w/o it being cheesy?

[@QuonHowery02]

i think being able to say what you want naturally, as if you were having a conversation. too many people try to make it super romantic and over the top like a novel, so i think it helps if you can almost make it simpler and more conversational, and it also helps to write less.

[@davidshim6970]

3:29 "don't try to write about like how your hamster died and it just changed your life" XD

[@sameepasaini190]

Hi! We love your videos and advices. I was wondering if you can work with my twin girls on essay starting their sophomore year?

[@ibrahimugokturk]

Bro thank you so much! I’m gonna lyk if I get into somewhere decent.

[@kiaraha3041]

you're so helpful omg

[@heyhi7762]

Me writing the essay 3 days before it’s due 👁👄👁

[@clickprofileimage]

Hi there. Are you struggling with college assignments or online classes? Send me an email ([e-mail]), and I will help you out. I do both academic writing and editing, in addition to handling online classes. Send me an email and you needn't worry about good grades or deadlines ever again.

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