"I could roll a joi-I could roll a bAlL oF cRumBs" lmao I love this, thank you so much for being so open about the whole college process :)
@JillianGoldberg4 жыл бұрын
hi! if ur struggling with your college essays, i just made a video called “how to write the first draft of your college essay” with tons of tips that might help you out! i also edit essays, and i have a giveaway where you can get your essay edited for free (details in this video!!) kzbin.info/www/bejne/q36whoRsp8mkapY
@viennamsp59264 жыл бұрын
LMFAOO I WAS LOOKING FOR A COMMENT ADDRESSING THIS RIGHT AFTER I HEARD HIM
@nathanware99164 жыл бұрын
when he said this i literally fell over laughing
@clickprofileimage4 жыл бұрын
Hey, is homework stressing you up? Would you like help writing or editing your essays? Send me an email, and I will help you out. (maryjoykimmy@gmail.com). Don't worry; this is 100% safe, and the quality is excellent. You'll never regret reaching out to me. Please don't be iffy about this. Send me an email, and you'll never have to worry about good grades or deadlines ever again. (maryjoykimmy@gmail.com). 💜💜💜
@widlyneadassa10413 жыл бұрын
😭😭😭😭
@katarinaesquivel70164 жыл бұрын
Bruh he’s so naturally funny wtf
@randomthings83763 жыл бұрын
yes🤣🤣🤣
@emilycarter89222 жыл бұрын
You might want to check this out kzbin.info/www/bejne/nX-lo5d7lKiFbpI
@ashleyxiao40154 жыл бұрын
bruh "i work better under anxiety" i subbed lmfaooo
@JillianGoldberg4 жыл бұрын
hi ashley! if ur struggling with your college essays, i just made a video called “how to write the first draft of your college essay” with tons of tips that might help you out! i also edit essays, and i have a giveaway where you can get your essay edited for free (details in this video!!) kzbin.info/www/bejne/q36whoRsp8mkapY
@clickprofileimage3 жыл бұрын
Hi guys. Are you struggling with college assignments or online classes? Send me an email (maryjoykimmy@gmail.com), and I will help you out. I do both academic writing and editing, in addition to handling online classes. Send me an email and you needn't worry about good grades or deadlines ever again.
@junno7774 жыл бұрын
This guy is someone I would REALLY want to be friends with. Not because he got into these elite school, but because he seems SO chill and is willing to go out of his way to help people.
@user-fx8px1lk9e Жыл бұрын
Indeed!!!!
@victoriaruan15794 жыл бұрын
“I CAN ROLL A JOINT”
@diaries54193 жыл бұрын
LMFAO
@theRMYdaily4 жыл бұрын
will be a senior in highschool august and am currently stressed abt the essays..this helped sooo much
@JillianGoldberg4 жыл бұрын
hi! if ur struggling with your college essays, i just made a video called “how to write the first draft of your college essay” with tons of tips that might help you out! i also edit essays, and i have a giveaway where you can get your essay edited for free (details in this video!!) kzbin.info/www/bejne/q36whoRsp8mkapY
@theRMYdaily4 жыл бұрын
@@JillianGoldberg thank u!
@andyynu4 жыл бұрын
same🥺
@thefallen30064 жыл бұрын
Haha it’s already November😎
@theRMYdaily4 жыл бұрын
@@thefallen3006 lol yesss i'm done!! its so relieving lol
@camilavalladares9433 жыл бұрын
1. Find an idea 2. Brainstorming aka: timeline of your life & what things changed you and made you who you are. DON'T search for petty If you're going to talk about your difficulties talk HOW you overcame them. They want to see your resilience and how you developed as a person. Don't talk way too much about sports, hobby, mission trip, bad parents, etc. It's overdone 3. Make your essay interesting, something people wants to read Talk about yourself, like a mini chapter of you and put it all together. 4. Don't waste your word count! 5. Write over the word limit and start cutting it down about stuff that's not important. (Go approx. 100 words over your word count to narrow it down later)
@neeza6694 жыл бұрын
don't be shy read your eraser essay :)
@QuonHowery024 жыл бұрын
once i hit 1k subs i promise i'll read it
@jessicajeremiah18304 жыл бұрын
Quon Howery where it at tho??
@aliar24004 жыл бұрын
Quon Howery ur at 1k now 😤😤 do it
@QuonHowery024 жыл бұрын
@@jessicajeremiah1830 bet bet we gon do it
@QuonHowery024 жыл бұрын
@@aliar2400 OK SHEESH OMLL
@marystretcher92864 жыл бұрын
" Start early, start now..." I haven't started and it's due today, lmao.
@KB-mq9hb4 жыл бұрын
How'd it go?
@marystretcher92864 жыл бұрын
@@KB-mq9hb Literally just finished...But not too bad, hopefully.
@clickprofileimage3 жыл бұрын
Hi. Are you struggling with college assignments or online classes? Send me an email (maryjoykimmy@gmail.com), and I will help you out. I do both academic writing and editing, in addition to handling online classes. Send me an email and you needn't worry about good grades or deadlines ever again.
@jackic61923 жыл бұрын
@@marystretcher9286 what college did you end up going to? 😂😂
@rubenmendez60653 жыл бұрын
Mine is due in 4 days and I’ve got two essays to write since where I’m applying has a required essay for engineering majors
@pinponpin22444 жыл бұрын
Thank u so much there is nobody who broke down these details like u
@JillianGoldberg4 жыл бұрын
hi! if ur struggling with your college essays, i just made a video called “how to write the first draft of your college essay” with tons of tips that might help you out! i also edit essays, and i have a giveaway where you can get your essay edited for free (details in this video!!) kzbin.info/www/bejne/q36whoRsp8mkapY
@emmaclarksonperez56004 жыл бұрын
bruh i’ve been watching videos of people reading their essays & people giving suggestions for a week & i couldn’t think of topics to write about. it took me halfway through your video to think of a good topic so thank you, you are elite.
@QuonHowery024 жыл бұрын
Ayy we hit 1k! I'll be reading my essay soon but probably gonna upload sometime in June, after APs and the school year is over.
@nbreezii12413 жыл бұрын
"Start early,plan years ahead" my essay is due in about 19 hours and I just now titled it and thought of a topic
@jheelpari1Ай бұрын
oh boy! how did it go?
@gracemike1184 жыл бұрын
Me writing my essay 11 hours before I have to turn it in, but i like doing my work at night
@clickprofileimage3 жыл бұрын
Hi guys. Are you struggling with college assignments or online classes? Send me an email (maryjoykimmy@gmail.com), and I will help you out. I do both academic writing and editing, in addition to handling online classes. Send me an email and you needn't worry about good grades or deadlines ever again.
@caden83263 жыл бұрын
^ I I Bots
@christophercolumbus3333 жыл бұрын
@@caden8326 more of like self-promotion
@kennyk00k4 жыл бұрын
I’m done with my essay but I still watched the full video. This is some fire content bro, a lot of students will benefit from your tips. Also post some more if you can you’re hella entertaining
@omarestevez80744 жыл бұрын
wow I cannot tell you how much this helped me with my essay I am far from an Ivy league applicant with a terrible gpa and a semi decent sat score really appreciate you taking the time to make this video!
@bonbons43472 жыл бұрын
update? :0
@kirafrench53984 жыл бұрын
I'm a rising sophomore in high school and have been thinking more about college, your videos are so fun to watch and you give great advice! Saving these videos for later :)
@emilycarter89222 жыл бұрын
You might want to check this out kzbin.info/www/bejne/Y3Slp5SCg7CYiNk
@BoredSudoku Жыл бұрын
Aren’t you a freshman now?!
@annieson10414 жыл бұрын
My gosh, I'd completely forgotten about those hand-made (rather inefficient) erasers! Such golden elementary school memories. Thanks so much for your video; as a junior, I found it very helpful. One question: In your other video, you mentioned something about being careful with QuestBridge, and I was wondering if you could make a video on your experience with the program. I've gone on their website several times, but the whole thing is still a bit confusing. Again, thanks a lot!
@QuonHowery024 жыл бұрын
Living the same lives out here lol. And yep, I've gotten a few requests to do a Questbridge video so I'll try to make one!
@JillianGoldberg4 жыл бұрын
hi! if ur struggling with your college essays, i just made a video called “how to write the first draft of your college essay” with tons of tips that might help you out! i also edit essays, and i have a giveaway where you can get your essay edited for free (details in this video!!) kzbin.info/www/bejne/q36whoRsp8mkapY
@kayleiwong39444 жыл бұрын
love how its Oct. 24 and my essay topics are one of the ones he said not to write about!!
@hurleyhaney3584 жыл бұрын
I watched your essay video when it came out months ago and when I sat down and started writing mine yours was what really inspired me to write mine and honestly I wouldn’t have thought of my prompt without inspiration from you so thank you
@platosfavoritestudent65092 жыл бұрын
Thank you so much for this. This video does a great job of not brushing over the obvious and saying "great now write the essay" like no shit i need to write about something that will make me stand out, but this video gives leads on HOW you can start (like narrow down a few events that changed your life). 10/10
@taylorhall20184 жыл бұрын
im dead the humor in this video is iconic i died at you reading the georgia lebedev from the department of bio science and WHY DID I LAUGH WHEN YOU SAID YOU WORK BEST AT NIGHT UNDER PRESSURE but thank you for this video it is really helpful as i am now here in september still struggling to outline my essay :')
@albumsco64984 жыл бұрын
My school has only started telling me about common app six days before it is due for my school of choice.
@cerinacapone79454 жыл бұрын
Same
@Teemo10K4 жыл бұрын
This actually helped a lot it was so genuine
@seymakilic7752 жыл бұрын
Such a nice and chill guy! Thank you for your videos :)
@umugwanezaalice3 Жыл бұрын
I was so confused about writing my essay before this video, now I feel like I am ready, Thank you.
@asaiahr20274 жыл бұрын
damn the parents divorce part... ok this was a wake up call should have realized lots of people do that thanks bro
@harinder51462 жыл бұрын
starting my college process rn, thank you!
@kate33424 жыл бұрын
it was the ghetto clay for me
@JillianGoldberg4 жыл бұрын
hi! if ur struggling with your college essays, i just made a video called “how to write the first draft of your college essay” with tons of tips that might help you out! i also edit essays, and i have a giveaway where you can get your essay edited for free (details in this video!!) kzbin.info/www/bejne/q36whoRsp8mkapY
@Benginafantaisie3 жыл бұрын
@@JillianGoldberg thaanksss. I’m gonna watch rn
@chloes13084 жыл бұрын
I hope you read your essay! it sounded very interesting. this video really helped and I'm currently at the end of my junior year, starting to think of essay topics lollll
@QuonHowery024 жыл бұрын
For sure! I'm planning it out but I'm just super unmotivated rn lol sorry, promise I'll try making it soon
@dunemae2 жыл бұрын
how’d you do?
@elizabethcifuentes88584 жыл бұрын
Ahh, i hope you see this cuz I’m late late. But I know you said not to write about divorced parents. My parents weren’t divorced, but they separated. My mom had left us without saying anything for a couple months. I remember the whole day that she left. All the times, once she told us where she was, when my sister and I had to drop off my baby sister to her. She would ball her eyes out calling for her mom when we would take her back to my dads. It was a whole messed up story because my whole family knew she wanted divorce, but told her kids instead and asked us to keep it a secret. We tried but he found out and it was the worst day of my life. It’s been going on for three years now, this mess, but there’s some illegal stuff behind it which I won’t speak of. But would this still be a bad idea to write about. You can be completely honest! Thank you for this video
@cynicalcitrus3 жыл бұрын
applications are over in a week... just starting my essay. cant wait for my gap year!
@yogi-wl1zs4 жыл бұрын
unfortunately im just now coming up with ideas abt my essay, but you were a very great help THANK YOU!!!!
@johnferguson63214 жыл бұрын
I ain't even started 😭
@yogi-wl1zs4 жыл бұрын
@@johnferguson6321 ..... me
@froskonic18544 жыл бұрын
I have never panicked harder in my life
@telmabraz89784 жыл бұрын
Just wanna say that your video help me sooo much. I’m actually in my last year of high school in France and I wasn’t hopping a lot about this kind of videos. BUT in fact after watching you video all the ideas came to me(lmao) and actually I’m writing my essay for my (maybe) futur university 🎓🤭! So THANK YOU SO MUCH ;)!!
@dora24974 жыл бұрын
This is by far the best college essay video out there that actually gives good advice
@JillianGoldberg4 жыл бұрын
hi! if ur struggling with your college essays, i just made a video called “how to write the first draft of your college essay” with tons of tips that might help you out! i also edit essays, and i have a giveaway where you can get your essay edited for free (details in this video!!) kzbin.info/www/bejne/q36whoRsp8mkapY :)
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@user-ho3uu4sn4p3 жыл бұрын
not me giving myself ten days to submit my regular decision application 🥴 but thank you, this was so helpful !
@nassimaidja67174 жыл бұрын
You should do an AP score reaction video when they come out
@QuonHowery024 жыл бұрын
literally my exact thought thank you for reminding me
@kittywilliams17804 жыл бұрын
I’m on my third video from you right now, and I’ve been watching because of the content (I’m curious; though I’m going into 9th grade), but mostly because of your personality. You are so funny and the way you edit your face in videos makes me laugh so much. I wish we were the same age because I would definitely want to be friends in school with you lmaoooo
@vandermonke41782 жыл бұрын
me looking this up when deadline is tmrw rip
@jheelpari1Ай бұрын
DID YOU GET IN?
@arie-is-bored3 жыл бұрын
Just finished junior year I really don’t wanna procrastinate so here I am
@soccerandy36594 жыл бұрын
I kinda miss the pictures now that I'm getting them everyday. Feel free to send them whenever! ;)
@JillianGoldberg4 жыл бұрын
hi! if ur struggling with your college essays, i just made a video called “how to write the first draft of your college essay” with tons of tips that might help you out! i also edit essays, and i have a giveaway where you can get your essay edited for free (details in this video!!) kzbin.info/www/bejne/q36whoRsp8mkapY
@hiyashah23354 жыл бұрын
this was insanely helpful! thank you so much! please make more essay related videosss
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@vi-tamins4 жыл бұрын
the clay thing blew my mind ngl
@jdDeclan4 жыл бұрын
That timer idea is fire
@sujikim8354 жыл бұрын
I don’t think you know this, but you are so extremely funny. Like seriously I was laughing the whole time. I think it’s something about the chaotic? nature idk but I loved it.
@TrashyIsGone3 жыл бұрын
I messed up because I didn’t know I needed all of this shit until a month before deadlines and now I wanna die 🤪
@clickprofileimage3 жыл бұрын
Hi. Are you struggling with college assignments or online classes? Send me an email (maryjoykimmy@gmail.com), and I will help you out. I do both academic writing and editing, in addition to handling online classes. Send me an email and you needn't worry about good grades or deadlines ever again.
@sophiasuerth19642 жыл бұрын
I’ve watched a lot of these videos & this is the best I’ve seen so far. Very helpful!
@evrim29924 жыл бұрын
Loved the video! :) can you please make a “reading my QuestBridge App” video
@QuonHowery024 жыл бұрын
subscribe and you got yourself a deal ;)
@willglou48824 жыл бұрын
1:30 haha laughs nervously in Oct. 19th
@hhahh4 жыл бұрын
laughs in Oct 29th
@stephanielarios53844 жыл бұрын
@@hhahh pls me too
@Epicgamer-xs7ln4 жыл бұрын
@@hhahh mee
@hhahh4 жыл бұрын
@@Epicgamer-xs7ln I see youuu. We see each othaaaa~~!
@claiirvcyant23474 жыл бұрын
sadly humps the floor in Nov 1st
@inithepoo3 жыл бұрын
you a legend for dis one fam 🙏🏽 nah but for real THANK YOU SO MUCH THIS REALLY HELPED
@maerizk83424 жыл бұрын
this was so helpful and you have such good vibes
@el_monke40483 жыл бұрын
bruh this videos both helpful and hilarious I love it
@amnahasni48234 жыл бұрын
Your video really helped me get my thoughts organized! Thanks :)
@martinonyango59234 жыл бұрын
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@lazeggu4 жыл бұрын
😂 wish i had this video when i was starting my uni essays
@eyitbada79424 жыл бұрын
0 dislikes, we love to see it.. you always spit fax 👏🏽
@Melinda-xx8oe4 жыл бұрын
"let your parents watch you"
@QuonHowery024 жыл бұрын
👀
@alexpyo5543 жыл бұрын
@@JillianGoldberg self advertising yikes
@jessiejayray__74272 жыл бұрын
Thanks for the awesome video im sitting on my couch stressing out how to write my college essay right now 😭 and tbh i still need help but this helped a little im writting my essay and I start 12 grade and college admissions soon
@yuliagu93834 жыл бұрын
i used to make eraser clay too haha
@linda_92484 жыл бұрын
Thank you so much, you just helped me so much 😭
@JillianGoldberg4 жыл бұрын
hi! if ur struggling with your college essays, i just made a video called “how to write the first draft of your college essay” with tons of tips that might help you out! i also edit essays, and i have a giveaway where you can get your essay edited for free (details in this video!!) kzbin.info/www/bejne/q36whoRsp8mkapY :)
@lexa10342 жыл бұрын
"Personally, I like to let myself inch closer to chronic high blood pressure. That's why I simulate myself into an APUSH writing exam. The energyyyyy" Just found this hilarious yet very interesting at the same time lol
@perda01124 жыл бұрын
Heck, love your videos. I'm a high school freshman preparing for US colleges. How do you find that many competitions and events that you can apply to your stats?
@FloRiDaNication4 жыл бұрын
Thank you for your video! Very helpful tips.
@JillianGoldberg4 жыл бұрын
hi! if ur struggling with your college essays, i just made a video called “how to write the first draft of your college essay” with tons of tips that might help you out! i also edit essays, and i have a giveaway where you can get your essay edited for free (details in this video!!) kzbin.info/www/bejne/q36whoRsp8mkapY :)
@exoticcats61194 жыл бұрын
I feel like I have a really generic life lol
@JillianGoldberg4 жыл бұрын
hi! if ur struggling with your college essays, i just made a video called “how to write the first draft of your college essay” with tons of tips that might help you out! i also edit essays, and i have a giveaway where you can get your essay edited for free (details in this video!!) kzbin.info/www/bejne/q36whoRsp8mkapY
@kimjonghyun40984 жыл бұрын
Can u write about sports if it’s not about how u improved after a loss? I had an idea to talk about my experience switching from basketball to cross country and track after finding I was naturally good at it. I talked bout after being happy with the switch at first, but then the drop in my school popularity happened since does not have the “clout” that basketball caused me to lose pride and love for running. I then proceeded to talk bout how the memories and bonds made me overcome these feelings and ended it with me being satisfied at our pep rally when we weren’t clapped as loudly as other teams despite having the best record since I loved what I was doing. I discussed my changing emotions throughout the stories by metaphorically using my habit of writing overly optimistic running goals on loose pieces of paper. I’d describe the aging dull faded graphite marks of time goals on old pieces of loose paper I would when I lost pride in running and stopped writing my goals and then the fine dark sharp lines on new pieces of paper when I initially had or regained my love for running.
@laylagarcia31644 жыл бұрын
Good concept
@harrisondixon40394 жыл бұрын
Yo. I did the same thing with the eraser crumbs. Its oddly satisfying-- especially when you put them under your fingernails.
@amandanguyen37754 жыл бұрын
That was helpful! Thanks!
@alexpyo5543 жыл бұрын
@@JillianGoldberg self advertising yikes
@biscuitmonsta97024 жыл бұрын
I used to do the same thing with my eraser dust! Also, thanks a lot for the tips
@Lily-yf6wn4 жыл бұрын
Really useful!!!! Thank you Hope to see your SAT studying tips video~~~~ Feeling jubilant when I watch all your videos
@joannaxuan42653 жыл бұрын
Start early, start now- oh em... (I am currently 5 days away from the application deadline.)
@theworldforgot4857 Жыл бұрын
I'm gonna be a senior next year, so I'm trying to at least get my essays done before September when I'll start applying. Please pray for me!🙏🏽🤲🏽❤️
@Tigerwolf704 жыл бұрын
Wait I just started my college essay and I wanted to talk about my scripting journey which Impact me the most. Does that consider as a gaming essay since I’m gonna talk about making a game in roblox?
@nathanc98664 жыл бұрын
I literally can not think of any major changing point in my life, I have a boring life, what do I do? I have passions/hobbies, but I can’t think of any character changing moments in my life
@saniasy89674 жыл бұрын
Loved the video! Are you going to make a college decision video soon?
@QuonHowery024 жыл бұрын
Yep! Probably sometime soon
@karma_luvic89814 жыл бұрын
HE WAS ABOUT TO SAY JOINT LMAO
@Th3legend273 жыл бұрын
Me here a few days before my deadline hearing him say don’t do that 😮
@clickprofileimage3 жыл бұрын
Hi. Are you struggling with college assignments or online classes? Send me an email (maryjoykimmy@gmail.com), and I will help you out. I do both academic writing and editing, in addition to handling online classes. Send me an email and you needn't worry about good grades or deadlines ever again.
@lmaf1324 жыл бұрын
Lol i said “‘night” out loud the same time you did. the tip about the timer is really helpful though! and that harvard student has to be a legacy because no wayyy-💀
@neecs014 жыл бұрын
great video! how bout do a follow-up video to this since you've mentioned creating some specific tips.
@NLZ34 жыл бұрын
eraser crumbs was creative
@ehanfayaaz55734 жыл бұрын
Yo man, please don't stop uploading.
@Sherrine24684 жыл бұрын
Sophomore in high school now and I want to start practicing 😭😭😭😭
@hunnysmores15224 жыл бұрын
Gurllll don't worry
@paulag25662 жыл бұрын
I recommend The College Counseling Specialist for Admissions/Scholarships. He really can help. His office is in Orange County but maybe he could help with the process online too if you live somewhere else.
@zhibekkubatova58842 жыл бұрын
Im starting my common app essay now, my deadline tomorrow )))))
@selatsera28754 жыл бұрын
lmao is it just me or like when you have the whole day to do the thing you must do but you wait for the night so you can cram 😭💀
@JillianGoldberg4 жыл бұрын
hi! if ur struggling with your college essays, i just made a video called “how to write the first draft of your college essay” with tons of tips that might help you out! i also edit essays, and i have a giveaway where you can get your essay edited for free (details in this video!!) kzbin.info/www/bejne/q36whoRsp8mkapY
@selatsera28754 жыл бұрын
Jillian Goldberg oh oki oki! Well haha I’m still a sophomore student ! thank you very much! ;33
@Cindynga034 жыл бұрын
those tips are really helpful thank you
@radarada20694 жыл бұрын
You prob right about don’t write about getting good at a sport but I don’t have time to not write that😭
@sameepasaini1904 жыл бұрын
Hi! We love your videos and advices. I was wondering if you can work with my twin girls on essay starting their sophomore year?
@cosmonaut70194 жыл бұрын
The sole person who disliked this only did it to be quirky. I literally love this video what the hecko! This youtuber is so helpful! Thank you so much :)
@JillianGoldberg4 жыл бұрын
hi! if ur struggling with your college essays, i just made a video called “how to write the first draft of your college essay” with tons of tips that might help you out! i also edit essays, and i have a giveaway where you can get your essay edited for free (details in this video!!) kzbin.info/www/bejne/q36whoRsp8mkapY
@수민-r2q4 жыл бұрын
Came across with ur vid ! Love it !! Pls upload more videos about the essays!
@QuonHowery024 жыл бұрын
Thank you! Will do!
@JillianGoldberg4 жыл бұрын
hi! if ur struggling with your college essays, i just made a video called “how to write the first draft of your college essay” with tons of tips that might help you out! i also edit essays, and i have a giveaway where you can get your essay edited for free (details in this video!!) kzbin.info/www/bejne/q36whoRsp8mkapY :)
@수민-r2q4 жыл бұрын
Jillian Goldberg Thank you so much !!!
@raghadal-kandari51184 жыл бұрын
HAHAHA MY DEADLINE IS IN A FEW DAYS
@heyhi77623 жыл бұрын
Me writing the essay 3 days before it’s due 👁👄👁
@clickprofileimage3 жыл бұрын
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@sammyd060194 жыл бұрын
Dude. As you were literally starting the "don't do" essay topic i legit started jotting down my parents nasty divorce. Lmaoooo i frickn crossed that out with the quickness!!!! hahaha
@cynthiak.5274 жыл бұрын
Heyy soo to shortly explain an idea I have for my essay: I want to write about how I overcame welcoming from a pretty broken family with my only biological brother (this is the basic idea but there are other aspects involved)
@zainabfarhan58234 жыл бұрын
That sounds great!!
@kiaraha30412 жыл бұрын
you're so helpful omg
@jessicaperez36523 жыл бұрын
I have an idea for a video can you talk about how sophomores can apply to scholarships. I noticed in the other video it was more directed to seniors 🥺
@aishwaryathadiparthi47984 жыл бұрын
LOL SAME i would make eraser clay whenever i was bored in class in elementary. i thought i was the only one this whole time.
@u8jlxx4054 жыл бұрын
What would you say is the best way to writing a strong essay about your struggles w/o it being cheesy?
@QuonHowery024 жыл бұрын
i think being able to say what you want naturally, as if you were having a conversation. too many people try to make it super romantic and over the top like a novel, so i think it helps if you can almost make it simpler and more conversational, and it also helps to write less.
@tesiemarie89423 жыл бұрын
Omg! I used to roll the rubber from the eraser!!! Lol
@samirchowdhury6934 жыл бұрын
Do you have an email we can send our essays to for you to maybe look at them? Your advice was extremely insightful for me and as a current junior, I was wondering if you could take a look at my draft.
@QuonHowery024 жыл бұрын
sure! qhowery02@gmail.com
@samirchowdhury6934 жыл бұрын
WSHS Community Service Club i just have a draft of my common app essay since the common app prompt is released!
@JillianGoldberg4 жыл бұрын
hi! if ur struggling with your college essays, i just made a video called “how to write the first draft of your college essay” with tons of tips that might help you out! i also edit essays, and i have a giveaway where you can get your essay edited for free (details in this video!!) kzbin.info/www/bejne/q36whoRsp8mkapY
@ashtastiic3 жыл бұрын
is it okay to write about how my experience with type 2 diabetes in grade 8, 9, and 10 essentially made me a better person and have a greater outlook on life? Cause during this time, I also joined the volleyball team and my high school and I worked extremely hard to become the captain (which I evidently did!) and I wanted to connect these experiences to how they not only made me want to pursue a career in the medical field but as well to help other students who have diabetes?
@mr.cobuelo14053 жыл бұрын
It's been 6 months, did the essay work???
@ashtastiic3 жыл бұрын
@@mr.cobuelo1405 unfortunately, not! Due to my fault though for writing my essay all late. Definitely get ahead or practice writing your essays before the deadline cause I wasn’t certain what to do, and whether I had to time to revise it. Overall, I would’ve done a lot more to change my essay and strategy for it!
@mr.cobuelo14053 жыл бұрын
@@ashtastiic Thank you so much for the advice! I'll definitely start early before the deadline.