Hey Jerry, possible improvement on my last pro/con with some word play: Pro: In football, Tom Brady is a really good quarterback Con: In jail, Tom Brady is a really wide receiver
@yokenspokes8 жыл бұрын
Jerry, I have gotten your "late night writing " course and I freaking love it!!!! Man this has open my eyes up.... I'm having a ball. I can listen to this in my car or with earphones . Thank you so much for putting the course together !! I enjoy writing now more then ever!!! Thank you !!,!
@josephbarclayross62166 жыл бұрын
Jerry, your mom here is really getting on my nerves.
@markrogers67025 жыл бұрын
Thank you so much for this. I'm a workshopper who hasn't open mic'ed yet. My issue is organizing my writing and this really helps.
@605gbird4 жыл бұрын
Mark Rogers did you open mic yet?
@markrogers67024 жыл бұрын
@@605gbird No, life got in the way. I'm looking to start this year. Two months tops.
@605gbird4 жыл бұрын
Mark Rogers You can do it! It'll be fun!
@markrogers67024 жыл бұрын
@@605gbird Thanks! I really want to but I've got to sort out my issues with the VA right now. I'm so grateful when working comics give us newbies encouragement. It really means a lot.
@jasonbidwell12214 жыл бұрын
Jerry, your recognition inspired me to write two more Pros/Cons: Pro: In football, if Tom Brady slips one finger offside he'll get a yellow flag and a foul. Con: In jail, if Tom Brady slips one finger inside he'll get a rainbow flag and smell foul. Pro: In football, without protection Tom Brady may get a sack. Con: In jail Tom Brady may get a sack... without protection. Pro: In football Tom Brady was always a good quarterback. Con: In jail, he'll start off as a tight end but end up as a wide receiver.
@TheLoneComic2 жыл бұрын
Always learn powerful and useful things to apply to my comedy build from your offerings, Jerry.
@GloriaReyesUrKrazzyMom5 жыл бұрын
the UNIVERSE bless you with health and happines. Thanks, for your kindness to teach us all here the science of laughter. Loveu
@timawayan58674 күн бұрын
Great stuff. Your structures and techniques really simplify this stuff to a beginner like myself. Thank you
@guicosta5829 Жыл бұрын
You are a legend of hard work, Jerry. Bought your book and I'm loving it. Comedy is much more clear to me, now. And I'm starting to enjoy it so much more!
@naterusscomedy2 жыл бұрын
Good stuff Jerry. Just discovered you yesterday on the hot breath podcast. Watched a few of your videos and it’s got me motivated to write new jokes.
@davidemiable Жыл бұрын
thank you so much. This is so well explained.
@artyedmond89728 жыл бұрын
This was incredibly helpful. I'm not much of a comedian/writing yet, but I've been working on it. Thank you for sharing
@yamnehroncero42388 жыл бұрын
Tom Brady's suspension is like a friend going to jail. It would be pretty good news for the inmates because Tom Brady really knows how to deflate balls.
@5065ca7 жыл бұрын
Y Roncero 😂
@cameronharris58847 жыл бұрын
Thank you very much fir sharing! I started doing stand up comedy about a year ago, and now I'm diving into the world of comedy writing to tv.This video was very helpful.
@BrandonCarr238 жыл бұрын
Your content is top quality. Thank you, Jerry.
@dannycomedy18 жыл бұрын
Jerry, you're the man. I'm a better comedian and writer because of your videos. I like that you explain different ways to get ideas/punchlines. Thanks!
@PrincessofBuckhead7 жыл бұрын
Jerry, great video and what an excellent Pro/Con list. Thanks for the wonderful tips!
@theguyfromberlin3 жыл бұрын
This is just brillant Jerry. Thanks. Will get the DNA book soon.
@5065ca7 жыл бұрын
pro : on the field Tom throws the ball . con: in jail he'll be catching. 😔
@YouN00bTV Жыл бұрын
super helpful. i appreciate the insight.
@krissythewhimsy2 жыл бұрын
Thanks Jerry!! Amazing breakdown
@JerryCorley2 жыл бұрын
Thank you Krissy!
@shawnsmith18654 жыл бұрын
This video is LOADED with helpful tips and info. Thanks.!!
@jasonbidwell12214 жыл бұрын
Pro: On the field you get into a three point stance before the balls in play Con: In prison it's called doggystyle then you play with the balls Pro: In football Tom Brady is a pro Con: In jail, Tom Brady is a con Pro: In football, Tom Brady is a quarterback Con: In jail, he's a wide receiver
@coldgunztv90724 жыл бұрын
😂😂😂
@Eyelewzz3 жыл бұрын
Thanks for all the info I'm going for my first open mic later this week
@alghanekar3138 жыл бұрын
I love your videos. You walk the walk. I have learned a lot and continue to learn about joke construction.
@mdougf Жыл бұрын
Great stuff!
@ChannelOfDiscord3 жыл бұрын
"It's like one of your buddies going to jail." So, Edelman's feeling deflated again ... however Brady says he looks forward to playing receiver for a bit. (4 years later)
@Blueodonata Жыл бұрын
Thanks Jerry.
@rounak.rsakhare59462 жыл бұрын
thanks for the great video.
@robertrodriguez55537 жыл бұрын
Incredible, and vital information for the starting or toying with the idea of becoming a comedian
@MegaKarume7 жыл бұрын
That's cool stuff well explained. Thank you Jerry.
@boodro21225 жыл бұрын
So technical, so methodical and scientific. You've got this broken down into a science. I'm just starting out and I operate differently, but no doubt you've nailed down the formula. My next open mic is April, 3rd 2019. It'll be my second. I'm still trying to become comfortable onstage. It's coming to me quickly. So many variables, but I am an enthusiast. I will pursue this harder with every fiber in my being. Right now, my local comedy club is 5 to 7 mins on stage. And after my next act you'll understand my perception of it! :-) I'm having a lot of fun at this point and just currently delving into your videos, but they are certainly helpful. Much love from Kansas. Hope to see you later on down the track!
@boodro21225 жыл бұрын
Very smart. I like it.
@ChrisTurnerLand6 жыл бұрын
The Fallon pros con stuff was great!
@deborahklein7777 Жыл бұрын
Excellent...how do I pitch my jokes
@ShutUpFootball Жыл бұрын
In football, the ball carrier is called the running back. In jail, it's called your mouth. ...Okay, dirtier than I mean to be but thanks for making this video! Very informative. Great stuff.
@Chris-bc4hb4 жыл бұрын
Amazing! I wish I found this a long time ago!
@Opochtli4 жыл бұрын
Loved it!
@PROTOPROTOMMXXIV Жыл бұрын
thanks jerry
@SirBamBam4042 жыл бұрын
Lol oh wow you killed it on the jokes
@josephhernandez30673 жыл бұрын
How did you learn this?
@squirrelattackspidy4 жыл бұрын
That was amazing.
8 жыл бұрын
you're a bad ass JC! thx man
@angelodcollazo8 жыл бұрын
That was amazing!
@DhavalDatarcomedian8 жыл бұрын
hey I watched your videos and they really helpful.. so I have a show in different city and some of my joke are local to my home town so how can I work them in another city. I want to do them because they give a really good response .. :) please help. thank you
@josephhernandez30673 жыл бұрын
Nice video
@andyllocomotive32538 жыл бұрын
I'm only 15 but I was wondering how do I get into writing comedy once my high school years are over? Like where do I start?
@zhaus32988 жыл бұрын
Tom Brady's suspension is a lot like a friend going to Jail...you see him on the 6 0'clock news, and you think what an idiot (Meh, I tried)
@hairbiopi12407 жыл бұрын
Brother Hamish lmfao
@CraigGilman2 жыл бұрын
Helpful but as I'm not really knowledgeable about your post colonial hand egg game.. a bit like Rugby in body armour. I was a bit lost. The technique was useful. But the reference went way over my head
@freddieevans78765 жыл бұрын
great example for a comic who needs advice
@tonysmilemusic77143 жыл бұрын
2:00 events cliches people place things
@felicity47116 жыл бұрын
Football = pros, jail = cons!
@violenceisfun9915 жыл бұрын
There's way more tattoos... In the NFL
@josephbarclayross62166 жыл бұрын
Anal rape is a really cheap way to get laughs ... in football.