How to Write a Band 9 IELTS Essay - IELTS Writing Lesson

[@vera_artist_42]

Thank you, Oli! This is super helpful! This real-time practice gives us a good example of how to manage our time well during the composing of essays.

[@MinhThanhNguyenVietNam]

We definitely need more videos like this, Oli. If possible, please make a series of "how to write a band 9 IELTS essay" videos which covers all types of questions in IELTS. Because it makes so much sense to me, the way you develop ideas regarding the questions. I don't think I found someone did it like this ever. My deep gratitude. Keep up the good work.

[@Oxfordonlineenglish1]

So glad you liked it, Thanh! We will have more like this, so keep watching the channel!

[@wlals0925]

Absolutely! I love this video this is “the video” im looking for :)

[@sapnamutneja5614]

It was really helpful Oli and useful for me too but I think I need evaluation of my essays as I don't know how to test actually so plz suggest me what to do in this matter

[@akshaybhaskare834]

I agree with you that the format will help us... But there r video call options to show your expressions(non_verbal communication). But there is a difference between looking, touch and feeling. So, I feel that is also right. This video was very helpful. Keep doing this good work... ❤❤

[@dissanayakevidura]

@@Oxfordonlineenglish1 Topic: Digital communication technology such as email, instant messaging and social media have improved connections and communication between people. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this opinion? Intro: The advent of information technology has offered numerous benefits for people to communicate since the development of many applications which are used by billions of individuals to correspond and chat via the Web. Therefore, some experts argue that such features have enhanced people's communication in several ways. In my view, such facilities can make people's daily requirements of communication more effective. Body 1: Electronic mail has revolutionized the way letters are circulated. For example, traditional 'snail mail' is less convenient and more time-consuming compared to emails. Thus many companies prefer such tools in the modern era while recruiting candidates. Emails are used more frequently to inform the job seekers of the next interview or recruitment. Moreover, these are also used to send the results of some examinations without delay. Finally, compared to the post, electric mail can be more dependable, and therefore organisations and certain advertising firms use email addresses of unknown users to target their potential clients. Body 2: Instant messaging has become immensely popular for several reasons. For instance, WhatsApp, Viber, Skype and Facebook messenger have made messaging more practical and efficient due to the low cost and convenience. Additionally, video sharing has become prevalent among users of such features, thereby enabling them to utilize those tools. Consequently, educating others on passing difficult examinations, initiating video conferencing to fill the needs of the corporate sector by negotiating with clients and providing feedback to employees have become more productive. Body 3: Social networking sites such as Facebook and Twitter have enabled users to visit such websites without expert knowledge of sharing images, videos and messages worldwide at low cost. Consequently, many people can raise their voices to support a wide variety of professionals as well as amateurs to master their skills. Furthermore, such useful advice or messages can influence the general public in case of a domestic crisis. Conclusion: To conclude, each measure, namely emails, instant messaging and social networking has contributed immensely to improving people's everyday communication requirements. In my opinion, such tools can be used to ensure that day-to-day communication needs are fulfilled in a more feasible and effective manner.

[@faysalazeem]

Best thing regarding video is, real time practice. Watching writer to struggle with framing sentences really boosts up confidence

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[@onkar7473]

Agree

[@TheNancyhd]

Exactly !

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We don’t want to jump.. we are so loving watching you struggling like us.. Thanks & Regards from Bangladesh 🇧🇩

[@mightiestdvip1836]

U just stand as a epitome for motivating student who are giving ielts examination and your essay patten is looking pretty good and i found this very helpful

[@oladunjoyekazeemolamilekan3649]

Thanks, i used this strategy & my band improved from 6.0 to 7.0 in Writing...

[@nhivuong6593]

I love this way of teaching. While most of the time, IELTS teachers deliver boring and lengthy about do and don’t in Writing. But S like me, forget it immediately. And I find the step planning, before writing, is most critical step and this clip demonstrated how to make this very easy to understand. Thanks a lot.

[@PrinceKhan-yw2qv]

For variety and avoidance of monotony, you can also use words like nexus, linkage, tie-up and association instead of "connection".

[@fitha4474]

I generally don’t comment . But this is extraordinary and very real

[@zainnarb_3699]

This is incredible the approach, time management and perfection. Thanks for this

[@abdulcader888]

We need more real time essay writing like this. This helped a lot. I haven't seen any videos explaining essay writing in this channel other than this.

[@MUmer-fn9yk]

Amazing technique : Think of conclusion first then based on conclusion write your essay

[@stringsaction]

Undoubtedly conclusion first and then the rest of the essay based on conclusion is an expert technique.

[@nidaali1637]

Unique way of teaching. Wonderful video. thanks

[@ketchey2629]

Very helpful and useful. Thanks Oli

[@dudelee1181]

Oh man, this guys is amazing!!! This is truly an Out Of The World experience! This can be a 9 Band essay.

[@Oxfordonlineenglish1]

So glad you enjoyed this, Zakir! Thanks for watching.

[@deepuk1705]

I really like this method of planning and writing. After each para, just take a minute to check your work for any changes. And the best part, plan your essay from the conclusion..superb tips and tricks...hope this works for me this time...Thank you for sharing with us

[@abdikadirahmed5892]

A clear step of writing Email. A full guide to every one . I don't know how much i Appreciate your efforts.

[@ssensambaabdulkarim9697]

i would like to get more examples , this has really helped me improve the way i paraphrase and write my body in a two paragraph way and conclude with main reason

[@NamHoang-el1kk]

Thank you very much OXFORD ONLINE ENGLISH. Very helpful lessons. Thank you Sir Oli. I enjoy your lessons a lot.

[@nutrition_with_ines560]

Thank you oli this video helped me a lot

[@madruga7777]

Thanks for sharing this with us!

[@drbismashakeel]

Awesomely written

[@kastureemulay31]

This is a really good video. How to connect the paras and how to make the flow is very well explained.

[@mukeshjaswal4061]

Thanks its helpful

[@rattanlalsharma3565]

Very informative 👍

[@stephenmichael3055]

It is a very good lesson on developing an IELTS essay topic while addressing all the marking criteria perfectly. Thanks for the video.

[@Oxfordonlineenglish1]

Thanks for watching, Stephen! Glad you enjoyed it!

[@jacinthafernandes2562]

Awesome technique of writing

[@sssooo1743]

please make more videos like this

[@ahmadshohaib7589]

Nice job, Pal.

[@quynhngadothi382]

I love to hear your voice and your way you teach

[@MHasan-sx1vr]

Dear Oli If u upload more task 2 writing on different aspects like agree or disagree, give opinion, advantage or disadvantage etc, then it will be a great pleasure to us.

[@TrangNguyen-pz9ht]

Can you do more of this?

[@purabshah1558]

It’s really helpful..thnx oli

[@edu-notchdr.tameralmekky977]

Really to the point. Really appreciated!

[@maryanndelacruz5987]

nice. thanks

[@diegomariano1011]

Commendable Oli!

[@АлинаАлгебраистова]

it was extremely useful! thank you for your work and time!

[@yasser.elsewesy.8266]

Thanks you so much

[@sidsandegratia7144]

Well explained....Thank you

[@sofiaalonso2682]

Thank you so much! This was extremely helpful for those lost souls studying for ielts (like me).

[@Oxfordonlineenglish1]

Glad you found it useful, Sofia! Thanks for watching!

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[@rociofrassi5074]

Thanks a lot!! you crafted a really useful resource. Invest the time to practicing a good essay technic is whole crucial. I stumbled upon it!!

[@abuahadbd]

After watching several videos on similar topics, definitely it is one of the best, many thanks to Oli, this video will help me a lot, regards.

[@amirmoezi8316]

Thanks a million

[@zafarzubair2743]

Dear boy..... this video is quite helpful for acdemic students. Tank you.

[@pkkkk91]

to be really honest...i just saw this video..its really wonderful......and the moment i saw the question i paused it and started writing myself to it...i wrote about 332 words explaining the benefits and pitfalls of the digital technology with some made up personal examples ...also i laid a little emphasis on the huge impact it has on today's young generation....did i do good or not?......

[@Oxfordonlineenglish1]

That sounds like some great practice, Pratik!

[@pavitra.35]

Its very clear and a strategy that is easy to adapt on the day of the test. Thanks much.

[@afroozshahana4651]

Thank you Oli.. Well explained essay. You increased my confidence. Hoping to see more essay types.

[@Oxfordonlineenglish1]

Glad we could help! Thanks for watching.

[@aruntms]

Awesome video. Thank you

[@raviYT1980]

Good video and amazing work done. Thanks

[@thilenapham140]

Very useful. Hope u will make more videos about this

[@yancnaky4926]

I think this video is a great help. Thank you! Though I have a question. As a matter of fact, you can see people's body language and facial expressions through video chat. The essay doesn't say why video chat is no substitute for face-to-face communication.

[@Oxfordonlineenglish1]

We're glad you found the lesson helpful, Yan. While you can see some body language and facial expressions through video chat, I think the position of this essay was to explain that it is no substitute for the true communication through the body language and facial expression signals that we can experience in-person. Hope this helps you!

[@lakshayarun5630]

Thanks Oli....this video is really helpful....pls do some more videos of same kind with other topics.

[@smritikarki9489]

Thanks for your help

[@sharafaltruistic7155]

Better task response, supporting details and examples. The way of answering question, structuring and communicating with examiner is brilliant. Thanks for your video👍🏻

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I found it very useful....thank you so much ❤️

[@ol1136]

Oli, you just proved me one more time that pay for "real ielts teacher " it is wasting money. I think your KZbin Chanel is more than enough. Thank you so much! Waiting for this kinda lessons!

[@suchindamuongmee3993]

clear explanation. Thanks.

[@aim2975]

Thanks for your efforts.

[@mindspaceinvader2606]

Thank you very much..I never let my students start an introduction sentence with the word "It". Very smart of you to noticed this

[@srikanths3342]

awesome... nailed it!!

[@KamalAsasi]

An effective method for boosting score in the writing module. Thanks for your remarkable work. I am looking forward to watching more videos about IELTS. Best.

[@Oxfordonlineenglish1]

So glad you liked the lesson, Kamal! We have other IELTS lessons on our website which might also hep you: www.oxfordonlineenglish.com/free-ielts-preparation-lessons.

[@sohaelsharabasy9497]

well done, thank you

[@jijiprakash6726]

I feel it is better to use a pencil for writing the essay and also leave a little more space between words because otherwise we will not be able to make changes and insert some words in between. Thank you for explaining how to go about writing the essay.

[@Oxfordonlineenglish1]

Thanks for watching, Jiji!

[@chinzanasweat]

thank you ^)) because I was wondering how to delete in rewrite on paper :)))

[@sharftube2012]

Absolutely it is a very good essay. Much appreciated your work. Please keep going.

[@sabiankitty3663]

Writing in real time. Very helpful~ Thanks

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This is really helpful

[@mangamanga2557]

Thank u very much for this .Ineed more videos

[@Oxfordonlineenglish1]

We have more here: www.oxfordonlineenglish.com/free-ielts-preparation-lessons.

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Awsm video.... Great efforts , well explained nd vry hlpfl

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Thnku sir its very useful for perons like mee 😍😍

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Thanks for sharing. It’s extremely useful for us to prepare IELTS exam.

[@form76]

Thank you for this fabulous approach 🙏👌

[@spiderlinux]

Starting from an abstract idea making a ordered concept of the understanding, however I have clear when sometimes you have so limited time so improvise is needed, so breaking down the initial topic to get a correct answer, pretty awesome guys, thanks a lot and hi from México.

[@Oxfordonlineenglish1]

Thanks for watching, Omar! Glad it helped you.

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Effective esssy writing📝

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It is really very helpful please make more videos sir😊

[@dhritikadeka2870]

Hello sir, your IELTS videos are helping for preparing TOEFL, as both the exams are quite similar. Thank you.

[@Oxfordonlineenglish1]

So glad they're helpful for you, Dhritika!

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Oli you are the best man, I really love your videos. they are very useful and helpful ♥.

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Thank you for teaching that !

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Very helpful. Thank you 😊

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Loved it perfect to the point thank u my dear friend

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i found it very helpful

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Will look forward for such vedioes god bless u have a wonderful day

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thanks oli.very effective.

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Thank you

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very helpful

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[@911mirza]

Great channel .....please upload a discussion essay too. thanks in advance.

[@twrsnp5719]

Thanks for nice video. It help and guide me to write the essay : )

[@ilambel5713]

First , thank you so much for your all great lessons. Please, could you tell me how many major supporting details you have used in each paragraph, I 'm having a hard time to distinguish between a major supporting detail and a minor supporting details in a written paragraph

[@Oxfordonlineenglish1]

Thanks for watching, Ilam. There doesn't have to be a specific number of major and minor supporting details, as long as you have both. Major supporting details are the most important, and they have the essential information that directly relates to the main idea. Minor supporting details expand on this information and provide more detailed points. The minor supporting details are extra and not required for the reader to understand the main idea.

[@ilambel5713]

Oxford Online English You are welcome . Thank you so much , it is more clear now 😃

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nice explanation...

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Starting from conclusion, good strategy!

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Thank you Sir.

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[@sherifshawky8239]

We need more videos to learn the techniques and Know how.

[@ajayjosan4057]

task is on improving of connection , not on made up of new connection, but way of training is best

[@Oxfordonlineenglish1]

This is great attention to detail, and exactly the kind of nuance you need to pick up on to get higher bands. That said, the idea of 'improving connection(s)' could be interpreted as making it easier to form new connections with others, also.

[@indianmystic12]

Great ! Thankyou so much !

[@soniamahey7203]

Please make more videos on IELTS writing task-II 🙏

[@Oxfordonlineenglish1]

We will try to do more in the future. Sonia. We also have more on our site, have you seen them yet? www.oxfordonlineenglish.com/ielts-writing-task-2-essay, www.oxfordonlineenglish.com/ielts-writing-improve-grammar-score, www.oxfordonlineenglish.com/ielts-writing-linking-words-phrases, www.oxfordonlineenglish.com/ielts-writing-vocabulary-score, and more! You can browse our website.