How to Write a Compelling First Chapter

[@michelleduncan9728]

I just came across your page for the first time. I am a first time writer who has been working on my first novel for quite some time (4 years). I am looking forward to diving into your other videos :)

[@hernarrative]

Thank you so much for checking out my page! It’s amazing that you’ve been working on your novel for 4 years-that dedication is inspiring! I’d love to hear more about your writing journey. If you ever have any questions or want feedback, feel free to reach out. Looking forward to seeing where your writing takes you!

[@curtisjones6162]

Hi thank you for advice, I self published a book called Banished To Earth, in 2001 through PublishAmerica. It was in dire need of deep edit so I’m re writing it. It’s about a young man with tortured childhood who grew up seeing things no one else could see which brought nothing but misery and rejection. Any way book is a sci fi romantic adventure in which the main character suffering from trauma induced amnesia slowly discovers things about himself he does not want know. He’s a changeling from another Galaxy with terrible secret, newly discovered and alien vampire wife a mother who hates him and a mission he refuses to complete. Is this premise too vague?😊

[@hernarrative]

@@curtisjones6162 Sounds like a fun project! Lots of action. Consider who the main character is at the beginning and who they will become at the end to help keep readers engaged. Have fun editing!

[@curtisjones6162]

Thanks o