This is a re-upload of a previous video that I wasn't happy with. Music: Home for the Holidays by TrackTribe ℗ KZbin Audio Library
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@lonellfletcher9 ай бұрын
The unnecessary flashbacks in the Aeronauts would’ve worked as part of the linear story easy. Don’t know why they thought flashbacks were better.
@katelynbrown989 ай бұрын
Yeah, I can get wanting to be original by keeping things in the current by not starting at the end and then telling the whole story as a flashback. But it seems to have been choppy.
@r3dr4te9639 ай бұрын
Probably to make the plot conflicts/ the "threat" feels longer. Like this: 1. "OMG, we're freezing" 2. Flashback on how they secure the funding 3. "OMG, were keep going up" 4. Flashback on Amelia agreed to pilot the balloon Basically if they do it linear way, it feels dragging
@Nethseaar9 ай бұрын
My writing group likes to argue about flashbacks, and I think you make a great case for them as a useful tool that isn't always the right one for the job. Expect more views from them when I send your video their way!
@davescripted37969 ай бұрын
You're in a writing group! That's awesome!!!
@WhimslyАй бұрын
Stumbled upon this channel by accident and I'm glad I did. Informative, concise, well-edited stuff
@Mehis9 ай бұрын
Still waiting for this channel to explode in popularity. Solid work!
@user-ts8lw4bt8h7 күн бұрын
its too deep for mainstream unfortunately
@lenaxxx1859 ай бұрын
Holy s, I just stumbled upon your channel. You are criminally underrated, I really enjoyed this video. Consider me your newest Subscriber.
@davescripted37969 ай бұрын
🙏🙏😃😃!!
@C00T477 ай бұрын
I really hope vince creates another story. I havent finished better call saul and i am biding my time and enjoying it. His cinematography and storytelling is unmatched. Wish hank got better or at least left some money for his granddaughter Love the piano. Keep it up
@emre_d_luffy9 ай бұрын
i came here pre 1k? damn! I've saved my seat in the subscribers scene!
@Raymando5 ай бұрын
Great video essay. Can't wait for this channel to get bigger. Keep making videos.
@midknight06939 ай бұрын
this is a pretty high quality video. good job 👍
@nont184119 ай бұрын
The Korean show “Moving” is like a special case about how to and how not to use the flashbacks at the same time. I could elaborate but it’s quite long.
@urhorrifying19629 ай бұрын
YOU HAVE TO ELABORATE
@Mysticlxl9 ай бұрын
This video will take you places, Jennifers Body was popular but didn't get the consistent following, this video will get that for you 100%, keep up the videos and you'll be bigger than ever
@Martinmd12-zt7vu2 ай бұрын
Harakiri could also be a good example of how to use flashbacks, if you can even call them that.
@davescripted37962 ай бұрын
Good reference to an awesome classic I love
@12thDecember3 ай бұрын
I read a lot of novels and pay close attention to how flashbacks are woven into the story. If they're done right, it's a seamless transition. If not, it can be somewhat jarring, like, "How did I get here?" I haven't watched El Camino (too violent for my tastes), and The Aeronauts was so bad I barely made it through 10 minutes. Looks like I didn't miss anything worthwhile.
@nathanwatkins10053 ай бұрын
You missed a great movie by being a baby. Good luck with TV
@anaximeno4 ай бұрын
Can you talk about Bojack Horseman someday in the future? It's a nice show with many small details as well.
@davescripted37964 ай бұрын
Good idea! I loved the first season then I kinda lost track. I'll have to catch up on it
@anaximeno2 ай бұрын
@@davescripted3796 yeah, I recommend watching the following seasons it gets even better. I remember wrongfully thinking it wasn't good after the first few episodes, but as it continues you see how good and detailed it is. There are episodes that are just amazing (you will notice when you reach them).
@stevendecker68779 ай бұрын
W vid bro
@Jerry_Fried4 ай бұрын
1:15 “In the thinning air, the balloon is expanding and rising ever higher.” Does that make any sense? The thinner the air is, the less buoyant the balloon would be. If you put a balloon under water, whose pressure is much greater than the air’s, it pops to the surface, but it doesn’t suddenly keep expanding and rising into the air. If it were less dense than the air at ground level, it would rise until the pressures equalized, then it would bob at that height. What nineteenth century material was elastic enough to keep expanding?
@davescripted37964 ай бұрын
You're totally right, but that's the reason they give in the movie. Like I said, 'based on a true story' is very alleged here
@IIIlIIIIlIIIII3 ай бұрын
I assume this plot point was based on modern experimental balloons (which do expand as they rise, until they eventually pop)
@xcelestialdemon82459 ай бұрын
Great video, but a flashback essay without mentioning Lost? 😢😢😢
@davescripted37969 ай бұрын
You got me there ;-)
@suyang45052 ай бұрын
❤❤
@davescripted37962 ай бұрын
🙏😃
@jrdunn50524 ай бұрын
Sorry Dave, but the "flashbacks" in "The Aeronauts" aren't flashbacks at all, but a counternarrative, a secondary storyline intended to both contrast and illuminate the central storyline. The rules with these are a little different. Haven't seen it, so I don't know if it works or not.
@davescripted37963 ай бұрын
Maybe your definition of flashback is different from mine, but bits of the past revealed in short segments are flashbacks. And of course they can contrast or illuminate the main story. What would be the point otherwise?
@IIIlIIIIlIIIII3 ай бұрын
If the film "starts with a flashback", and half of the runtime is "flashbacks", then you could equivalently say the balloon segments were flash forwards. I think counternarrative is more accurate at that point.
@YourLocalCopiumDealer4 ай бұрын
Flashbacks can also do wonders as plottwist delivery system. The anime "Taisho Otome Fairy Tale" has a flashback that completely recontextualizes a character and almost everything they said and did. The genius of it, is that nothing actually changed and yet everything did. Spoiler; Ha! No spoiler here. If you're tempted to watch it, just watch it. It's 12 episodes of interesting drama with a satisfying ending.