How to Write a PERSONAL STATEMENT for TOP UK UNIVERSITIES // template + tips

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Fatima Naimi

Fatima Naimi

Күн бұрын

Hello everybody! In today's video, I reveal my top 10 tips for personal statement writing and walk you through the perfect structure to follow if you are stuck! Make sure to share this video with anyone who is currently completing the UCAS process so they can also benefit!
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@enrico7305
@enrico7305 3 жыл бұрын
I’m applying at the age of 31. I’ll leave my career behind and begin a new journey… Thanks for your precious advices! Wish me luck🙏🏻
@FatimaNaimi
@FatimaNaimi 3 жыл бұрын
This comment made my day, I wish you all the luck in the world x
@enrico7305
@enrico7305 3 жыл бұрын
@@FatimaNaimi thank you Fatima💪🏻
@Rinee_96
@Rinee_96 10 ай бұрын
Me doing the same at 29
@itsmekarima
@itsmekarima 3 жыл бұрын
I’m 1000% sure I’m getting into my dream school with these tips. I just know it lol THANK YOU!
@FatimaNaimi
@FatimaNaimi 3 жыл бұрын
Thank you Karima, I know you can do it x
@itsmekarima
@itsmekarima 2 жыл бұрын
Didn’t get my target but I got into school 😂🤷🏿‍♀️ thanks again!
@enaaxoxo
@enaaxoxo 2 жыл бұрын
@@itsmekarima Yay! Congrats
@trapccountant
@trapccountant 2 жыл бұрын
this video saved my personal statement and i managed to lock in all 5 offers. thank you!!
@FatimaNaimi
@FatimaNaimi 2 жыл бұрын
You are most welcome, super happy for you!
@hudaababneh3071
@hudaababneh3071 2 жыл бұрын
Thanks so much, especially for the google format, that was very considerate and nice of you.
@penglill4004
@penglill4004 4 жыл бұрын
How convenient, will be sending off my UCAS application in a few months. Thank you gorgeous! 💕
@FatimaNaimi
@FatimaNaimi 4 жыл бұрын
I hope it helps! You are most welcome ❤️
@Jayllybean
@Jayllybean 3 жыл бұрын
i really hope i get into my dream college with these tips! Thank you so much
@FatimaNaimi
@FatimaNaimi 3 жыл бұрын
Glad you found it useful ❤️
@fq470
@fq470 4 жыл бұрын
applying to UCL for masters next year and this video helped me so much!!! thank you
@FatimaNaimi
@FatimaNaimi 4 жыл бұрын
Ah I'm so glad it helped! Good luck with your application! x
@soggychip3784
@soggychip3784 2 жыл бұрын
thanks. this was actually very useful. usually people just read out their personal statements but you template and advise allowed me to tailor it towards my own personal statement about myself and the subject I want to study. thanks again :)
@jordi_zapata
@jordi_zapata 2 жыл бұрын
Best top tips video I’ve seen on this topic by far. Succinct, helpful, and easy to understand. 10/10
@FatimaNaimi
@FatimaNaimi 2 жыл бұрын
Thank you so much Jordi!
@claudiariccio8051
@claudiariccio8051 Жыл бұрын
Thank you for your tips. Having some working experience in the field is also important especially for Masters. I really like the UCL, and submit an application for the next academic year. I will certainly follow your tips for the personal statement. Thank you!
@FfionGrant
@FfionGrant Жыл бұрын
this was so helpful especially the part about procrastination cause I'm starting now even though I don't need to apply for 2024 entry until September because Politics & IR at UCL is my dream so all these tips are so helpful
@imbored7790
@imbored7790 2 жыл бұрын
Thank you so much for these tips/advice lol I live in London, UK and would like to go to UCL in the future. And these tips really helped out a lot thank you so much! I literally jotted everything you said (not-exaggerating) lol. It honestly means a lot, with this I can definitely get into UCL (god-willing!)
@Jeanniawood
@Jeanniawood Жыл бұрын
I have to say your tips are so nice and useful
@vldn5198
@vldn5198 3 жыл бұрын
I love your template I used it and my teacher was very impressed. Could you make one for doing a first cv pls?
@kingsleyjones4369
@kingsleyjones4369 3 жыл бұрын
This is really good, thank you.
@FatimaNaimi
@FatimaNaimi 3 жыл бұрын
You’re welcome!
@Pist3l
@Pist3l 2 жыл бұрын
Alhamdullilah, thank you for the advice it really helps.
@MridulaMadan
@MridulaMadan 28 күн бұрын
Hi!! do you have any specific tips for writing a law personal statement? thank you!!
@mardocheraden308
@mardocheraden308 2 жыл бұрын
tremendous tips
@debbiebezalel5271
@debbiebezalel5271 3 жыл бұрын
Hello! Im currently applying for International Relations and Politics, I was wondering if you have any recommendation on where or what can I start reading and or listening about the subject to talk about it better on my PS
@theofanpage1115
@theofanpage1115 2 жыл бұрын
Thank you so much for this. it helps a lot
@namazov1998
@namazov1998 3 жыл бұрын
Thank you for the tips and the template!
@therehansayyed
@therehansayyed Жыл бұрын
As a Marketing student I know how important the hook and storytelling is Ps with this things can Impress the admission officers
@kinzzi2794
@kinzzi2794 Жыл бұрын
How is the marketing course? I been thinking of taking marketing myself
@JAMESNOTWELL
@JAMESNOTWELL Жыл бұрын
All the people on the structure document before the final deadline 😭😭😭 true procrastinator’s
@maameoseiantwi7459
@maameoseiantwi7459 2 жыл бұрын
Lifesaver!
@donnashreeingti1597
@donnashreeingti1597 3 жыл бұрын
Thankyou so much for giving such excellent advice. I'm an international applicant, I applied to the UK unis last yr fir my bachelors but my results came out late this year and this delayed everything and have some financial problems due to the pandemic. I was searching for some affordable options/where I can get more scholarship and yet have the opportunity to study in some world leading unis cuz imo research and practical experience is very important to me to gain during my course.I deferred my entry in the UK unis and decided to apply to Hong Kong. Last time I didn't consider money much while applying for the UK unis but I do care that Hong Kong unis are the only ones who are giving much scholarships for bachelors than any other place. I think that I should explain that why I had to take a gap yr, do u think I should mention applying to the UK unis in my Hong Kong' personal statement? I'm worried that it might come off as that I'm taking them as backup and they're my 2nd choice.
@alisiyasimeonova4088
@alisiyasimeonova4088 3 жыл бұрын
This is a very far shot, but could you recommend any reading for the extra research section when applying for east europian politics and sociology? 😅
@FatimaNaimi
@FatimaNaimi 3 жыл бұрын
Sorry I can’t! But I would advise searching those key words in Google Scholar or JStor because I’m sure there are interesting journal articles on those topics that can direct you to further reading. Also, research the names of the professors in the faculties of the unis you’re applying to because I’m sure they will have published work on their own subject areas :)
@englishlessons462
@englishlessons462 2 жыл бұрын
Good work.
@nadiramirrakhimova5564
@nadiramirrakhimova5564 3 жыл бұрын
Thank you for such a useful video. May I ask you a question? If I submit the same motivation (changing the names of the institution) letter to the same course but different universities, will it be considered as plagiarism? Or should it be paraphrased anyway? Thank you!
@FatimaNaimi
@FatimaNaimi 3 жыл бұрын
Hi my lovely, I’m not sure what you mean by a motivation letter? Do you mean submit the same personal statement?
@kalyanipawar6547
@kalyanipawar6547 2 жыл бұрын
Hey yes she probably means the same personal statement with. Is that considered as plagiarism? Or should it be paraphrased? Thankyou
@bunnybunbun0707
@bunnybunbun0707 2 жыл бұрын
Hello! do you provide coaching when it comes to writing personal statement?? it looks like you're a teacher as well, teaching aspiring scholars to write their personal statement in the best way. Hope you notice my question ☺️
@maqdasbutt6720
@maqdasbutt6720 4 жыл бұрын
Me watching this despite going into my third year of uni like: 👁👄👁
@FatimaNaimi
@FatimaNaimi 4 жыл бұрын
Maqdas Butt the support 🥺😩❤️
@michaeladenawoola8286
@michaeladenawoola8286 3 жыл бұрын
Please I want to know if using American spellings in an SOP prepared for a British school matters. E.g spelling Programme - British as Program - American
@Edrees_Alizai
@Edrees_Alizai Жыл бұрын
Love from Afghanistan sis
@aisha4979
@aisha4979 3 жыл бұрын
hi i just found this video it helped me a lot but i have a question i dont know what research to do like what am i researching for i want to do midwifery so like what research do i need to do for that ?
@Abilouise
@Abilouise 2 жыл бұрын
how do you write a personal statement for a combined course - I want to do film studies and history
@abdolhamidebrahimi1446
@abdolhamidebrahimi1446 3 жыл бұрын
Useful!
@BiancaLim
@BiancaLim 3 жыл бұрын
Hello! I hope you'll see this someday. I'm about to apply for universities in the Uk, and I wanted to ask, do universities there tend to look for a more standard-based personal statement or would taking the narrative approach throughout the entire personal statement work better? Thank you for the tips as well
@nwannahchibuikem5641
@nwannahchibuikem5641 2 жыл бұрын
I hope you did get admitted? Goodluck
@humairaraisa2568
@humairaraisa2568 3 жыл бұрын
Hey can you name some of the best law schools in london? Except Oxbridge, Ucl, kings!
@flavianacraznic6564
@flavianacraznic6564 3 жыл бұрын
This was so useful!! I have been working on my personal statement for a few months now and I really need some feedback. Could you help me please?
@nahomwondwossen4328
@nahomwondwossen4328 2 жыл бұрын
I want to apply for electrical and electronics engineering, but I have no background in either Physics or Chemistry. However, I though I might still have a chance, because the universities offer an integrated foundation year. Can anyone give me advice?
@me1998j
@me1998j 2 жыл бұрын
I really need help with my personal statement if anyone can please i haven't been in uni or almost 3 years and really want to get back in but am struggling
@emilycarter8922
@emilycarter8922 2 жыл бұрын
You might wanna check this out kzbin.info/www/bejne/a4u4mIdrmMyHnZI
@HelloHi-ni1mx
@HelloHi-ni1mx 4 жыл бұрын
Hii, I repeated year 12 because I failed chemistry in the first year which made me realise medicine is not the career path for me . I’m currently going into year 13 with psychology, philosophy and french . In my personal statement should I mention that I repeated year 12 with different subjects ? Because I don’t think a lot of unis would be happy to hear it and they would be reluctant to give me a position in unis like UCL OR QUEEN MARY OR KINGS . What is your advice ? Because on the contrary it could show how I learn from my failures and I come back . But again I wouldn’t get any unconditional offers by saying I failed . Can you help me pls
@FatimaNaimi
@FatimaNaimi 4 жыл бұрын
Hello! It's okay that you repeated year 12, it's nothing to feel bad about, in fact you're lucky you realised medicine is not for you early on and not at the end of your exams! There is no reason why you would have to mention this on your personal statement or your teacher's reference. It's irrelevant information so write your personal statement as if you haven't repeated year 12 at all, focus on your best qualities and you will be fine! Best of luck! :)
@HelloHi-ni1mx
@HelloHi-ni1mx 4 жыл бұрын
Fatima Naimi thank you so muchhh this helps a lot !!! X
@bassmamani611
@bassmamani611 Жыл бұрын
Name of the song at the beggining of the video pls?
@DeArmesClara
@DeArmesClara Жыл бұрын
UCL or London school of Economic? wot's called ? so confused. LOL. I am watching NO TIME TO DIE.
@MrYoyo374
@MrYoyo374 3 жыл бұрын
Who can help me writing my personal statement please Fatima can you?
@FatimaNaimi
@FatimaNaimi 3 жыл бұрын
I wish I had the time to read individual personal statements but unfortunately I’m unable to do that!! Using the structure/template I’ve linked in the description box can get you on your way!
@jhjahedislam7154
@jhjahedislam7154 Жыл бұрын
I love you mis Fatima
@ghofsmontana
@ghofsmontana 4 жыл бұрын
Hello
@FatimaNaimi
@FatimaNaimi 4 жыл бұрын
Hey my lil penguin 🐧
@aisha5491
@aisha5491 3 жыл бұрын
Do you still possess the personal statement for law?
@l4167
@l4167 3 жыл бұрын
is there any maths in this specific course at UCL?? x
@Imacutebanygirl
@Imacutebanygirl 2 жыл бұрын
You are so pretty and babyface🥺😍
@Imacutebanygirl
@Imacutebanygirl 2 жыл бұрын
you are sooo beautiful😍 you are Afghani, aren't you? I'm from Iran, we are neighbors 😇 I love Afghani people sooo much especially your language which is so cute 😄
@deja957
@deja957 3 жыл бұрын
What do you mean by one course I’m in yr11 I want to do midwifery in uni
@gabriellemia6660
@gabriellemia6660 3 жыл бұрын
If you apply for midwifery at 5 different unis, you're still only applying for one course (different unis will offer somewhat different modules, however if the course is labelled as midwifery it's still classed as applying for one course) :) x
@Imacutebanygirl
@Imacutebanygirl 2 жыл бұрын
I’m curious where are you from?
@hannahfrancis2902
@hannahfrancis2902 4 жыл бұрын
Do UCL do interviews?
@FatimaNaimi
@FatimaNaimi 4 жыл бұрын
Hey hun, it depends on your course so you should have a look on the UCL website or call the department you're applying to :)
@hannahfrancis2902
@hannahfrancis2902 4 жыл бұрын
Fatima Naimi what about for PIR? x
@UnderstoodAdeel
@UnderstoodAdeel 4 жыл бұрын
noice vid
@FatimaNaimi
@FatimaNaimi 4 жыл бұрын
Adeel Sayed thank you my munchkin 💕
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